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Acadian
Wow! This was delicious! I thoroughly enjoyed basking in Maxical’s ruminations.

’I tried to imagine how she might have looked with the buffy thick fur of a kit,’
Hee! By buffy, I guess you mean blond. wink.gif

Beautifully painted images and emotions, ranging from Maxical’s selective memories of the orphanage to the dreamy portrayal of Akatosh.

’even with Philida pushing hard for the adoption to be approved.’
I laughed at this, imagining how much Philida wanted to be rid of our troublesome kit!

What a magnificently crafted dream sequence and awakening from it.

And the pervasive mystery of the girls, cave, vampires? I’m no plot follower, but Jak’s reappearance near the end tickles a memory of him mentioning how he ‘farmed’ girls. I sort of feel as if many things are coming together into mALXishly clever clarity here.

Gosh, this was some beautiful writing. In mALX-speak, it simply rocks with awesome sauce! (Um, not to be confused with vampire juice) biggrin.gif
D.Foxy
It's official. My jaw is now on the floor.

YOU BETTER UPDATE THIS SOON OR I SHALL KIDNAP ALIX AND FEED HIM ONLY BREAD AND WATER!!!
King Coin
Oh that’s sad! I hope Maxical can recover those memories. Nisaba probably felt terrible that she was forgotten. But I’d like to know why she lied too.

It was like chapters in a book whose pages blew free from their binding once the moments were passed.
Fantastic imagery!
I wonder if this difficulty with memories is going to play a role in what’s coming. Is it a sign?

Nisaba is an example of why Aravi has felt some sympathy for some of the Bandits she encounters. Not enough to not kill them, but a little twinge of regret.

Maxical is maturing in the cave going through her memories. And a dream of Akatosh.
All of them singing the song? How do they know who He is? Have they all been attacked before? Have they all been put under some sort of vampire spell? Ah! You leave me on the edge of my seat wanting more!
Thomas Kaira
Caught up again.

I see your bombshell-dropping skills are sharp as ever, mALXie! biggrin.gif

Vicente just can't keep his hands off of them women now, can he? Race, wealth, it doesn't matter to him. Once the bosom and hips come sidling through, the fangs poke through, seeping their sweet, sweet juices....

No, Bad TK! It's all your fault D (for Dhertee) Foxy! rollinglaugh.gif

Hieronymus Lex…his face a raging mask in that split second as he rose from the bed, still peeing from the bowl of warm water I’d dipped his hand in while he slept.

I guess Maxical didn't get the memo from Mythbusters, but this one got busted. wink.gif

I wonder what plans Akatosh has in store... knowing Uriel's pronouncement, it might be something far bigger than a few vampires who need to cut down on the Skooma. tongue.gif
Jacki Dice
You know you're a great writer when I'm ignoring a horror movie to read your latest chapter biggrin.gif And when I'm bursting out laughing one moment, then gasping in shock moments later.

I knew there was something fishy about those "juices!"

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So... did the other Khajiit drink them...directly? After all bottles aren't always there when you need them.
treydog
See all that has been said above to get a taste of my reactions (hmm- perhaps not the BEST metaphor under the circumstances).

Humorous- heartbreaking- beautifully imagined. And most of all- BACK!

Dachshund dance is almost certain to follow; those with heart conditions or weak constitutions are warned that they should avert their eyes.

Welcome back Maxical and mALX!
Grits
ohmy.gif You have done it again! Grits’ jaw is among those hitting the floor! The images in the episode were especially haunting. The part where Maxical wakes up from the dream is masterfully done! All of the Khajiit women softly singing… blink.gif Even more mysteries about Maxical’s background, her mother, and even S’Jirra. And there’s still a war going on. !!Holding my breath!!
McBadgere
Oh my...Oh...Oh my...

*Tries to figure out some sort of "Give Brock some more time to read" spell*...

Dammit, you're all so amazing!!...

*Will return with some truly stunning insights such as "Whoa dude, you rock!"*...
Athynae
I'm still trying to figure out what in the heck jumping over a candlestick has to do with khajit, vampires, and a god. ........

Sorry I get stuck sometimes, I have trouble with the whole "over-thinking" thing.

And like the others I am captivated by Maxical's story, but I have been since the first word I read so.....

KEEP IT COMING mALX!!!!!!
treydog
My prior comments were lacking in substance- (bad word choice again). But- there was much to... digest (doggone it). Enough- let me get to the comments before I dig myself any deeper.

The running thread of sweetrolls is priceless- and also makes me hungry.

Falanu becomes another of your unforgettable characters.

And- for entirely different reasons- so is Nisaba. You do such a WONDERFUL job of bringing her to life, causing us to reflect- along with Maxical- what could have happened.

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then draw her hand back quickly when the mouse started squeaking loudly.


Alix makes his appearance!

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“I want…home…”


Wow- just… wow.

And then- as we are reeling from that one, you follow with this:

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Something about that moment tugged at a long buried memory, a glimpse so fragile it was gone in a trice, and trying to bring it back was like trying to catch a feather in a windstorm.


Then, showing us that no matter the circumstances- Maxical is still Maxical- and mALX is still mALX:

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and I could swear I felt the mouse kick me before laying down against my feet.


And Maxical’s missing memories are an interesting mystery…

Not going to talk about “vampire juices.” Just--- not. Nope. Nope. Uh-uh.
Feralikazam
Only 4 chapters in but I love that mischievious Khajiit you call Maxical. Definitely my favorite fanfic so far. I'll keep reading.
mALX
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@ EVERYONE - I had to take a trip last week, between preparing for it and several emergency puppy issues since - I have gotten behind in my reading. I appreciate you all being patient, and I am catching up A.S.A.P. - hopefully this weekend !! Thank you all !!!



@ Acadian - Thank you so very much Acadian !!! And your plot decoding was exactly on target, these are some Khajiit that Jakben Imbel has "farmed." As usual, Maxical has the target's name wrong, lol.

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@ Foxy - Your jaw! My jaw has been completely in shock from your story - where I thought it was reality it was the plot !! I had to go back and reread and soak it all back up again !! I would have sent you an updated comment on it, but haven't had time due to the trip/puppy/etc. issues here !! You ROCK'd that story, Foxy - I could never have foreseen that plot taking those turns - except one, somehow I knew (or rather I should say I hoped) they would meet in Geneva the minute it was mentioned. That is a thriller and a half !!! I can't wait to see more !!!!!!!!! Thank you for sharing it (before the publishing, but I'd still buy a copy !!!) Thank you so much Foxy !!!

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@ King Coin - Thank you so much KC !!! I so appreciate that you caught that one line and quoted it, that was my favorite line in that chapter - and the line the chapter was written around.

Acadian guessed it, but a lot more details will come out in this upcoming chapter. Whatever promise Maxical made to Nisaba in the orphanage will come out eventually. Thank you again, KC !!!

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@ Thomas Kiara - ROFL !!! Thank you so much TK !!! Foxy's Dhertee legacy lives on in our comments even when he is AWOL creating his masterpiece, lol. I love it !!!

Uh, that "Mythbusters" on the internet...they've set it up to look like they are connected with that legitimate TV show, but those are just regular people like you and me, anyone can write in to that site and say they tried something and it didn't work.

More importantly, if you read their description of everything they did wrong and improvised in their ONE time try, you'll know right away it wasn't a valid testing of it.

You can test it yourself on a "friend" (quotations, because they won't be friends long after you make them wet the bed, lol) ** You may want to make sure it is someone you run faster than too, I've found that is an important factor. (Or just call up every girl that was in summer camp with me growing up, lol). It works, believe me, lol.

It was great to see you stopping by !!! AND AWESOME to see that Eclair recipe !!! My favorite dessert !! WOO HOO !!! I'll let you know how mine come out (look for it around Valentines day, lol). Thanks again, Master Chef TK !! - OH! And I'm sorry for getting behind on your story - this trip and new pup have blown my whole week - I def plan to catch up ASAP - trying to get a bunch of reading caught up this weekend !!

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@ Jacki Dice - ... .... ..... SPEW !!!! (Choke ... gasp ... choke ... SPEW !!! ) ROFL !!! I can't tell you how long I was rolling over that - Now if you see it in the story you'll have only yourself to blame, ROFL !!! Thank you so much Jacki, you totally ROCK !!!!!!!!! - I have had a tight schedule, so if I've missed any chapters I will be catching up this weekend !! (barring puppy emergency, lol).

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@ Treydoggie - Thank you so much, Treydog !! (especially for the second comment !!!) That line you quoted about the fragile memory - that was the one line that particular chapter was written around, I am so glad you liked that. It means a lot when you stop by, your support means a lot (and as you know - you are always appreciated !! )

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@ Grits - Thank you so very much Grits !!! I pictured that scene so clearly, knew how I wanted it to come across - but trying to get that vision down in readable form was like ... "urk!" It means a lot that you picked up on it exactly how I wanted it portrayed !!! Thank you so much Grits !!!

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@ McBadgere - Thank you so much McBadgere !!! And welcome to the forums !! I so appreciate you stopping here, and am loving your story as well !!

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@ Athynae - Thank you so much Athynae !!! You aren't overthinking it at all, it has just been so long since the key factors were posted in chapters that they are absolutely hard to rememember months later, lol. A few others have asked as well, so I hope you don't mind if I bold these? :

The three key factors connecting that chapter with previous ones were :

1. Jakben Imbel's farming of young girls in that cave below his house.

2. Vicente's attack on Maxical was interrupted by Jakben Imbel. Jak then wiped Maxical's memory of himself only, (which is why she thinks of Vicente as being behind that song).

3. Jakben told his minion (during the fiasco at the Arena) that he planted a post-hypnotic suggestion in Maxical so she would obey him - which is why she is now getting that "Jack be nimble" song in her mind when he is near.

Jak always plants a connection into every girl whenever he wipes their memories - just in case he needs them in the future for something. With Maxical the reason is so he can get her hooked up with Janus Hassildor, his only hope for an army of immortals so he can rule Cyrodiil (then Tamriel).

Janus Hassildor is the only Immortal vampire. If he gets together with a "chosen" spouse, he will be driven to pass his Immortal line on to her so she can't die. Once Janus does that, (Jak has that mind control over Maxical and can forcibly make her help him build his armies).

Jak could have used any woman that Janus would pass his line onto, (which is why he is grooming Malvulis just in case Maxical doesn't work out) but so far Janus refused to allow his vampire nature - refused to pass his immortal line onto anyone - or even feed on anyone till now.


I so appreciate you Athynae !!! Uh oh, I feel an Athynae poem coming on, lol.

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@ Feralikazam - GAAAAH !!! You made my day !!! Thank you so much Feralikazam !!!! And welcome to the Forums with "Skor's Revenge" - I am loving it too !!! (just haven't had time to read for a week, away on a trip then trying to juggle a new puppy in a houseful of dogs, lol. - but I vow to try and catch up on everyone this weekend barring any further canine complications, lol). Thank you again !!!

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mALX
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Me and Nisaba walking to the Refuge Camp:


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****** With his permission, this chapter has a cameo appearance of King Coin's character "Aravi" in it. Thanks KC, for allowing me to share my page with Aravi, and for making such an inspiring character !!




Chapter 116: The Imperial City



With the daylight came a quieting to the battle in the Imperial City, but not a cessation. The vampires would have to go into hiding to keep from being burned up in the sunlight. My guess was that they had gone into the sewers, where the battles continued but the sounds were now subdued rumbles and occasional vibrations in this upper portion of the cave.

The bird Jak perched on the rim of the shaft above me, his piercing eyes peering down at the gathering of Khajiit faces cramming together to stare up at him.

“He’s staying! He’s never done that before!” One Khajiit gasped.

“Nisaba, what does the bird have to do with that song?”

“Whenever the song comes to our minds, He is near.” Nisaba’s voice sounded awed.

I glanced around at the other’s faces, the look of awed wonder was universal. Did they think Jak was…a god?

“But what does it mean? Does the bird bring you something? Like food or medicine?”

“He brings the moonsugar to our tongues, and the song. We all belong to him.”

The moonsugar would only come to their tongues when the one that started them was near. Obviously the bird didn’t start them!

“I don’t understand, he’s a bird! He couldn’t have…er…mated with you. How could the moonsugar come by the bird’s presence?”

“He uses magic to become a man.” The older Khajiit spoke. “I saw him in his man form once. It was in a garden. The song came, and I saw a man with laughing eyes.”

“This one saw him turned into a man.” One of the women said, sticking her thumb into her chest to indicate herself. “His eyes danced like stars in the night sky and the moonsugar was sweet on my tongue. Twas at the music festival. He were talking to you.” Her dirty fingernail nearly touched me.

“Me?” I remembered Vicente talking to me in the line as I gave out rings. That was all the proof I needed that Vicente was the owner of the bird. And if the moonsugar was on all their tongues right now…it meant Vicente was very near, close enough to cause it.






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“Nisaba, I have to know how you ended up in a cave, why weren‘t you in the orphanage?”

Nisaba’s expression went totally blank. “I don’t know. I remember being at the orphanage in the Compound, then one day I woke up…and I was in the cave. I was there…years. Then one day I woke up…and I was standing in front of the dragon statue.”

“It was the same for this one.” An older Khajiit barely glanced at me before reverting her awestruck gaze back on Jak. “Twas the celebration of the Emperor’s birthday. My brother let go of my hand to climb a tree…see the Emperor better. Then I woke in the cave. Years passed. Then one day I woke to see the dragon statue.”

“You were all together in the cave?”

The older Khajiit that had forced the potion down my throat answered. “We all shared the same cave, but in different years. When our time came, all of us awoke in front of the dragon statue.”

“Different years? But…how did you all meet?“

“The pain of Azura’s seal…that same cry you gave last night. We hear it and know. We go to the statue to find the new sister.”

“Were you alone in the cave for years? Or were there others in there with you?”

Nisaba turned and looked at me, confused. “I was the only Khajiit in the cave. The rest were humans.”

A few of the women nodded. “The others were human.”

A younger Khajiit that I hadn’t heard speak before took the hand of one a little older than her. “We were together in the cave, but a man took her away. One day I woke up at the statue and she came for me.”

“Were there a lot of others…the humans? Were they all…young?”

The heads nodded in a universal show of acknowledgement, but the eyes never left the top of the shaft where Jak roosted.






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“You were all in the same cave…at different times? Where is this cave?”

Nisaba shrugged. “None of us know, the door was kept locked.”

A sickening shudder went through me and a pain that had nothing to do with the physical. I forced back the cry that would have sounded and fought the tears to keep them from falling. I wouldn’t use the word prisoner to these women, but that is what they had been.

Nisaba said she was in the cave for years…she only remembered the Compound orphanage, not the new one Fathis was supposed to have built. If she never made it to the new orphanage, then she was a child when taken and held prisoner...and before releasing her she had been bred, and remembered nothing. A rage like I’ve never known was consuming me till I thought I could kill Vicente with my bare hands.

“Nisaba, do you have the moonsugar on your tongue right now?”

All the women nodded, Nisaba included. That meant Vicente had to be near. And I had no weapon.

A quick scan of the room showed one badly dinged iron bow and a warhammer that looked like it may split if used. One Khajiit had decrepit greaves on. The rest wore street clothing…Simplicia wore better clothes.

Vicente had obviously abandoned these women. If he was here because my virgin blood was drawing him, I’d have no way to defend myself.

Azura’s Seal is primal. If he brings the moonsugar to these women’s tongues, they will defend him to their death against anyone trying to harm him…including me. There’d be no one to help me against him.

I slipped off Nisaba’s bed and moved away from the shaft. The Khajiit eagerly closed the gap I’d left behind, trying to get a better view of Jak the bird. Their purring had become so loud that an army could approach in full march and go unheard.

I slid quietly into the tunnel, but need not have bothered using stealth. The purring cats could be heard well down the corridor itself.

The tunnel kept twisting and going up rises till I was sure I should have long since come to the room that dropped down into the lower tunnels. Instead it eventually opened into a greatroom. I’d missed a turn somewhere.

Three women were in this room, armored and armed. None wore the parchments around their neck showing their crimes. I backed into then tunnel and yanked the incriminating parchment from my own neck, stuffing it into the front of my pants before heading into the room.

“Hail!” I called before walking closer. In case they drew their weapons I wanted some running room.



The greatroom with the Dunmer women:


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“Where’d you come from?” A Dunmer woman pointed at me.

“Uh…” I started before she broke in again.

“Never mind. Just get up to the men’s camp and tell them you need armor.” She pointed at a tunnel on the far wall.

“I can’t go to the men’s camp like this!” I indicated my bare chest.

She snorted and another woman barked out a laugh. “You’ve got less to show than most of the men. Now move it, Ocato‘s orders. We‘ve all got to go.”

“Go where?”

“Lunch at the Palace, idiot! What do you think? We’ve got to help fight in the Sewers.”

“The Sewers! I…I can’t fight the vampires, I’m a virgin.”

“BWAAAHAAA! Go tell that lie to Ocato and see if he believes you. Now who else is hiding back there where you came from?”

“Er…no one. I just…er…went back there to use the bathroom.” I wasn’t giving away the Khajiit and having them sent out to fight. Without a doubt they wouldn’t give armor or weapons to beasts, and we’d be considered expendable and sent into the most dangerous places.

That I was right about that was proven as soon as I reached the men’s cave. “I was told you’d provide me with a weapon and armor…”

“We aren’t running an armory here, go out on the streets and see what you can find like we did. Then get yourself down to the sewers.” He pointed toward a makeshift door made of crisscrossed boards.




The men’s camp:


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It was humiliating to find that the Dunmer women had been right - the men didn’t even notice my nakedness.

All thoughts of my lacking body were shocked from my mind at the sight that met my eyes as I emerged from the cave. The tall grass of the field was a patternwork of bloody patches; some places trampled or burned. I tried to avert my eyes from the bodies, but every turn of my head revealed another. There seemed to be no where to look away.

Shock…it only lasts till your mind grasps the true horror, that someone you know may be among the dead…Alix. Would he have been called to fight from so far away? My knees buckled and a groan welled up from somewhere deep inside me. But I couldn’t fall, not here among the dead. And I couldn’t be the one to find Alix if he lay amongst these…I’d rather die believing he was home safe at the Faregyl.

Choking back the illness that filled my throat, I tried to run on legs that felt like jelly. The tears stung and burned at my eyes, bringing a blessed blurring to my vision...that the faces of the bodies could not be distinguished.

Stumbling into the outer wall of the City, I hugged the cold stones as if they could offer comfort…somehow they did, something familiar...untouched by the bloody massacre in the fields beyond it.

The gates into the City had been left unguarded, I’d never seen them unmanned before. All the strength I could muster would not budge the heavy wooden doors. Had they been bolted? I threw myself against the door, my pounding as ineffectual as what should have been a shout coming from my throat instead of the mewling that barely reached my own ears.

A cawing sounded above me. Without looking I knew it was Jak. But Vicente couldn’t follow in the sunlight…could he? Panic renewed my strength; this time the shout came. The sound of a bolt sliding was followed by the gate slowly swinging open. I burst through the gap as soon as it was wide enough to fit me, nearly knocking down the Legion that opened it.

His gauntleted hand grabbed my arm and jerked me around to face him, and in a growling voice he demanded, “Let me see your eyes.” With a grunt he released my arm.

“What was that about?” I looked up at him, surprised.

“You going in to fight?”

I nodded.

“Vampires what’s fed looks just like anyone, the sun don’t even bother them. Look in their eyes. Yer bones’ll chill if it’s one of ‘em. We’ve lost a buncha’ good men around ‘ta Arena and Arboretum, they’re thick in there. We men can‘t see nothin‘ fer the smoke that explosion left. Cats, though…you can see through anything. Get you some armor for ye go.“ He pointed to a pile of bodies that had obviously been picked clean of anything useful.






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The bodies:


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The thought of taking from the dead churned my stomach, but had to be more appealing than fighting vampires barehanded and nearly naked.

I passed the pile of bodies he’d indicated and tried another further up the street. It wasn’t much better, any unbroken armor had already been scavenged. I lifted one cuirass.

“Don’t you touch no Legion armor!” The guard shouted.

There was another pile of dead near the circle, something flashed green as I neared it. Glass armor! Very badly damaged…nearly useless. Still…even though it obviously wasn’t my armor that Fathis had given me…somehow I hoped the familiarity of it would give me inner strength in spite of its condition.

The streets were still of movement, sickeningly quiet as if in tribute to the fallen that lay scattered like so much litter on every section of the bloodsoaked road. I moved across the circle and slid onto a crate in the center to dress. It just felt safer having a good view if anyone approached.

As I was pulling on the cuirass a cawing sound made me jump and spin around. The statue blocked my view of the bird, but I was sure it was Jak. I moved around the circle, buckling the cuirass quickly as I tried to scan the sky to see him…and then froze. The statue was a dragon. It was the dragon statue all the Khajiit women had found themselves at when freed.

The bird Jak had landed next to an open dome window ontop one of the corner mansions, but paused suddenly and turned to stare at me. I ran shrieking for the nearest gate. That had to be Vicente’s lair! Right here in the Talos Plaza!

Running in that armor was nearly impossible. It was made for a man, and much too large for me. Not only was it awkward, it was clanking and loud…but too late to change now. I saw a nearly broken iron longsword and snatched it up, still at a clunky run.




The Dragon Statue:


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The gate into the Palace district swung open to a scene of chaos. Bodies lay everywhere, too many to count. A swirl of magic blew by me and exploded against a headstone. Destruction magic, was it an Arcane Mage? It took me a few seconds to realize it hadn’t been aimed at me, but at another Khajiit. She was covered in blood, and less than half the size of the man she was fighting…and incredibly lithe and light on her feet in spite of being fully armored. She dodged his magic attacks with ease. Vampires were fast…I wished the guard had been more specific about the eyes, what should I look for?

The man’s magic faltered. The Khajiit leaped forward, her legs like taut springs under her. She landed balancing on toes…dear gods, she was barefoot! In full armor! Was that something vampires did?

Her sword arm flashed in a blur of movement that was all leopard, not the rigid formal blade training of the humans...better. All her movements were smooth and fluid…catlike. Or was it vampire-like?

In seconds the man had an enchanted blade in his hand. He moved like he was on Skooma…dear gods, which one should I help?

The Khajiit’s shield came up to block with what looked like all the power of her body concentrated in the movement…dear gods what a block!

Mesmerized, I slid closer. She was fully a leopard in battle…but using man’s weapons. I wanted to help her even without knowing if she was the vampire…but couldn’t if she was killing an innocent.

Watching the swordplay as I moved forward, I didn’t see the body till I was crashing down loudly onto the bloody street. My blunder distracted the Khajiit. She saw the man‘s sword coming just before it struck. Her blade parried his too late. Just as the blade would have thrust through her she dodged and threw a force block that sounded like it cracked his jawbone. The sword pierced her side.

I started to scramble up, looking up at the man…dear gods he was huge! A giant…Malan‘s? His eyes darted toward me, and in the split second they met mine I felt the blood turning to ice in my veins. Dear gods, he was the vampire, and I may have just cost that Khajiit her life!

I tried to raise the iron sword and it slid from my hands, clattering loudly on the street.




The Khajiit:


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Acadian
The bits of story told by the Khajiit women were tantalizing, filled with hints and puzzle pieces.

’The tall grass of the field was a patternwork of bloody patches; some places trampled or burned. I tried to avert my eyes from the bodies, but every turn of my head revealed another. There seemed to be no where to look away.’
Your description and Maxical’s ruminations as she emerged onto the bloody grass field were absolute mALX at her best. Just full of raw emotion.

All the carnage in The Imperial City! Nice tip from that guard to look at their eyes and how the vampires could endure sunlight.

And Aravi! That was indeed our scrapper tearing into that vampire! Magnificent screen and description of her in action. Now you must hurry with the next episode so we can find out how seriously Aravi was injured. Oh my! And Maxical is healing-impaired.
Athynae
Thank you for your clarification, sometimes my forgetter works better than my rememberer, actually most of the time. Anyway....

Maxical at her best, and this is another glimpse into the depth of her. The scene with the Khajiit women was fabulous. And the dawning of what had happened sent chills down my spine as I am sure it did for Max.

I have always been awed by your imagery and the scene when she left the cave is yet another piece of prose that left me aghast, poor Max.

Ready and waiting for the next, on the edge of my seat.

Wonderful write, my dear, just wonderful
King Coin
Argh! Those poor Khajiit! I just get more and more angry at Jak. Maxical’s confusion is both understandable, but funny because we know about Jak’s abilities.

I thought Maxical had a shirt! I guess the dunmer woman doesn’t think much of the men laugh.gif

The Imperial City is just haunting. This line really drove it home for me: The streets were still of movement, sickeningly quiet as if in tribute to the fallen…

And my favorite part!!! I love what you did with my Khajiit! Your description of her in action is just perfect! I love your distinction between her movements and the vampire’s. You even worked in her preference to go barefoot!

Fantastic chapter mALX! It’s a unique pleasure to see Aravi from another perspective. I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Thomas Kaira
Actually mALXie, the real Mythbusters really did test that myth out using cutting-edge sleep sensors in a lab to see when their victim entered REM (fully asleep), the ideal time to plant the bowl (any other time, you'll just wake the victim up). And they ended up having a lot of trouble keeping the subjects (themselves, as usual) from waking up anyways while planting the bowl. And when they finally managed it, the water on the bed was from the bowl simply spilling over.

However, I do not doubt that it works. Just that it's a bit more difficult to pull off than it is made out to be. Anyways, enough prank talk, let's get back to your story!

A very interesting predicament for those Khajiit, as you have found the perfect way to make that lore you developed about Khajiit romance and love become the perfect curse. Now Vicente has turned Maxical's own kin against her, and she finds herself in a catch-22. Killing Vicente (if he was the starter, at least) will mean Azura's chain will be severed for each and every kitty down there. As you described previously, there is no experience more traumatic to Khajiit than for their soul mates to die. Often they follow just to make the horrible pain of the severing of Azura's chain end. But, to save them, Vicente must live. Live so he may continue to accost and devour the innocence of young girls as he does.

He is a man who must die... but to kill him would potentially kill and certainly torture so many others I cannot find either decision to be a good one. Let a pedophile and rapist continue his desecration, or kill him and doom every Khajiit whose innocence he stole.

We are in gray territory here. Morals can have no part to play in such a situation. You must simply take one and live with the fallout. I sincerely hope I never have to make such a choice in my life.
McBadgere
Loved it!!...Fantastic...

While I'm not sure saying I loved the description of dead bodies and massacare and whatnot is really done...

I loved it!!...

Love the screenshots...Almost makes me want to buy it for the PC and...*Winces*...Get some mods...*Runs of to shower, feeling so unclean*...

Nice one!!...

(Must read more of KCs story...Excellent Khajiit...)
treydog
The Khajiiti’s description of their enslavement is some of the most powerful writing you have ever done- and that is saying something.

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My knees buckled and a groan welled up from somewhere deep inside me. But I couldn’t fall, not here among the dead. And I couldn’t be the one to find Alix if he lay amongst these…I’d rather die believing he was home safe at the Faregyl.


Did I say “powerful” above?

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She was fully a leopard in battle…but using man’s weapons. I wanted to help her even without knowing if she was the vampire…but couldn’t if she was killing an innocent.


And Maxical finds another "sister"- one who fights as she never even realized she wishes she could. And then to leave her- and US(!)- hanging, not knowing if her sword-sister is live of dead....

I am shaking after this one.

Grits
“He brings the moonsugar to our tongues, and the song. We all belong to him.”

Oh my gosh, that is horrifying!!


“The pain of Azura’s seal…that same cry you gave last night. We hear it and know. We go to the statue to find the new sister.”

And that is even more horrifying, and heartbreaking, and rampage-provoking!! But now Maxical will have to worry about all of these Khajiit women if she kills their um, starter, unless she can find some vampire juice fountain for all of them. ohmy.gif


She snorted and another woman barked out a laugh. “You’ve got less to show than most of the men. Now move it, Ocato‘s orders. We‘ve all got to go.”

OK, now that was just mean!


“The Sewers! I…I can’t fight the vampires, I’m a virgin.”

biggrin.gif Says the topless Khajiit. Even in the middle of all this drama, she is so endearing.


The whole part where she was running through the bodies was very powerful. Even thoughts of home can’t comfort her, since now she’s also worried about Alix.

And then, ARAVI!! Oh my goodness, she is awesome! I was mesmerized too, it is so great to see her in your story! But with a stab wound?! Argh! Cliffhanger! This is a fantastic chapter. Filled with raw emotion but still action-packed as Maxical pushes herself forward, far beyond what such a charming prankster should have to endure.

The screenshots were great! It's so sad to see the IC that way. It looks just as weirdly quiet as you describe it.
mALX
@ Acadian - I know this is a special day for you, one that is precious in your memory - so Happy Birthday !!! I baked you a cake and will put it on the Birthday thread. Thank you so very much for your kind words !!!!

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@ Athynae - Thank you so much Athynae !!! And starting up again after a three month delay - it was my fault everyone had trouble remembering it, I really should have posted an update first, lol. <3

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@ King Coin - I can't thank you enough, not just for your kind words - but for the loan of your beautiful Khajiit Aravi for my story !!! Thank you again, KC !!!

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@ Master Chef TK - Thank you so much TK !!! Your insight into the problems of killing the one responsible for farming those girls is dead on. If Maxical kills the vampire, those women will become her enemy, not to mention the unendurable pain for them. Thanks again, TK !!!!

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@ McBadgere - Thank you so much, McBadgere !!! KC's Khajiit has her story in videos, here is a link to his thread - the story begins a couple vids in, and is well worth watching !!


http://chorrol.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=4695


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@ Treydog - Thank you so much, Treydoggie !!! You always manage to find the line that fueled the chapter, in this one it was the line about preferring to die believing Alix was home safe - Thank you so much Treydog, that meant a lot to hear from you !!!

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@ Grits - Thank you, Thank you, Thank You !!!!!! Your kind words mean tons to me, and you caught every nuance I'd hoped would be picked up on - You ROCK Grits !!!
mALX
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Chapter 117: While the Cats Play



*** D. Foxy has graciously agreed to the use of his characters Damien "Foxy" Reynard and Sneakers in this episode.

There is also a cameo appearance of King Coin's character "Aravi" in it. Thanks KC, for allowing me to share my page with Aravi, and for making such an inspiring character !!



******* Emperor Uriel Septim


Uriel himself opened the door of his Royal Chambers, startling the young man scrubbing the corridor floor. The little Bosmer’s eyes bulged as he took in the full regalia of the Emperor and he scrambled up from the floor, tugging the grubby cap from his head.

“I must speak with your boss immediately.“ Uriel was barely finished speaking before he had returned to his chambers, closing the door on the gibbered, “Yes Sire.”

Despite the fact Uriel must remain isolated in the Palace, he had dressed out fully in the new Dragon armor Fathis Aren had given him not a week past. At his side was strapped a ceremonial silver shortsword in an overly ornate sheath. It was no wonder the Bosmer had goggled, Uriel thought.

Other than the excess of decoration the sword was an excellent weapon…had he been going into the battle. With that thought came a heightening of frustration. He burned to drive the vileness from this city with his own sword, be where a warrior should be…not suffocating in the security of this tower watching his city destroyed.

The full lengths of glass that lined the dome of his Royal Chambers had always been a source of pleasure…now a sour taste rose in his mouth as he couldn’t turn from the scene below. A birdseye view of the battlegrounds in the streets…what he had sought to preserve them from with his law.

“Uriel’s Law.“ The vain pride of his youth…thinking he could strike fear into the hearts of creatures that possessed none. Only Traven had foreseen this war.

If Traven hadn’t already published that rant about necromancers amassing to take power in Cyrodiil he may have been heeded rather than being dubbed paranoid. He did seem to see conspiracy everywhere, but he‘d been right in this prediction.






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The Crimson Scars had vanished with the rising sun, but Malan’s giants continued to materialize like vaporous ghosts emerging from the air itself. What secret had they to brave the light? This many could not all be sated by feeding…

In rage he watched another soldier fall to them, this one wearing the armor of his own Imperial Army. His fists clenched in frustration. "My guards are strong and true, but their might can’t prevail with an enemy they cannot see."

Too many decades had passed since he‘d seen war, his mind and heart had lost their immunity to the abomination of it. "Men are but flesh and blood." He reminded himself of his father’s admonitions that had brought him through the horrors of his first battle.

Akatosh had warned there would be blood and death before the end, but if the Khajiit lacked three years to be of age…why had the sign come so soon? Once again the feeling niggled within that time was of the essence. If his calculations were in error…

Uriel turned slightly from the window as a light cadenced knock sounded. “Sir Damien Reynard! Enter, please.”

One eyebrow raised as Arch Mage Traven proceeded in behind Damien. He gave Traven a brief enigmatic glance before addressing Damien.

“What news have you, Foxy? Have you learned the Immortal’s reason for being here?”

“I have. It is not something as easily resolved as I had hoped. He has come seeking his chosen.” Damien paused, retrieving the officially sealed document from Fathis and handing it to Uriel.

“All these dead, the city destroyed…if that is all he wants, let him have her and put an end to the bloodshed. This war cannot continue to save one, we are losing hundreds of fine men in opposing him.”

“His chosen is the white Khajiit, Sire.” Damien’s soft voice was barely audible. His eyes registered the irony of his words through the slits in his full face mask. He waited for Uriel’s signal before continuing.






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The weight of that pronouncement had no impact. Uriel had guessed that would be it…known it would be. The dark lords were already lining up, taking their positions for the real battle ahead…he could feel it, see it in his dreams. Once again the nagging thought returned…if the Khajiit lacked three years to be of age…why now? Uriel signaled for Damien to continue.

“Dagoth-Malan is here in the Imperial City, as we suspected he came once the Immortal left his lair. Malan is using a powerful illusion magic you will recognize…the same Jagar Tharn used to impersonate yourself. He witnessed the trap being set for the Immortal and called his army.”

“Yes, I witnessed the illusion myself. He came to the Palace just as we planned… but in the guise of Fathis Aren. Had I not been forewarned of the imposture…the young Dunmer Gils forced his way into my chambers to warn me. Ocato received a black eye in the scuffle, but…oddly liked the lad in spite of it.“

Damien’s lips twitched slightly before responding. “Ahem. Yes. So then, how was he able to escape the trap?”

“The Battlemages trusted their eyes instead of orders. They hesitated to kill what they saw as Fathis Aren, a Court Official. Malan broke the window and leaped from that great a height. One would assume the fall would have killed him.” Uriel tapped his fingers rapidly on the table before signaling Damien to continue.

“It didn’t kill him, he returned to the Arena. Malan has Fathis Aren. If he is impersonating him, he‘ll have to keep Fathis alive…”

Damien acknowledged the relief in Uriel’s eyes with a nod before continuing. “Just as Tharn had to keep you alive. But where is he being held, that is the question.”

“How were you able to detect the imposture? Fathis has been my friend and advisor since he was a lad, and I found it hard to believe it wasn’t him…till he was unable to give credentials. The likeness was uncanny.”

“Just as I had trouble discerning Tharn’s imposture of yourself. In my profession one must notice the usually…unnoticeable things. A person’s posture, mannerisms, speech patterns. But that was you, someone I knew well. I didn’t have that luxury with Fathis Aren. I was also lucky enough to be forewarned it was not him.”






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“Forewarned? By whom?”

“The Khajiit. It seems she sensed the subtle differences. She crawled across the top of the Arena to alert us, nearly fell off in the explosion. I had no choice but to release the Immortal to save her.”

Uriel nodded and waved his hand for Damien to continue.

“Traven saw through the illusion as well as the Immortal. When he learned Malan’s identity he would have killed him had he been free at that time. Malan was injured in the explosion, but escaped…if I am not mistaken, as a large bird.”

Uriel glanced up quickly. “The Battlemages said they saw a large bird as well.“

Damien nodded and made a quick note on a small pad of parchment.

Uriel rapped his knuckles on the desk as if he‘d come to a decision. “We have no choice, the Khajiit must be protected. He cannot be allowed to get her into his lair, this has to be stopped now. I want her brought here immediately. She will have to be housed with the Battlemages for protection…”

“Er…Sire?” Hannibal faltered to a stop, obviously shocked he had interrupted the Emperor.

“What is it Traven?”

“I’m afraid if she is housed with Ocato, she may not be able to contain herself from killing him.”

“You exaggerate…”

“That’s no exaggeration, Sire.” Damien’s eyes glittered briefly with humor through the slits in the full face mask. “Although that would resolve the other issue.”

Uriel’s face relaxed its tension just as briefly in acknowledgement of the joke. “Then we must house her in the Royal Quarters. You’ll have to increase your security here.”

Damien nodded, but Hannibal’s face paled visibly.








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“What is it, Traven? You‘ve gone positively ashen.”

“Sire, I…don’t think you realize what you may be exposing yourself to, housing in the same quarters with Maxical. She is never injured in her…accidents, but those around her can rarely say the same.”

Uriel exhaled slowly, irritation at these interruptions beginning to build. “That discussion must wait. It is urgent we discover the exact date of birth for the Khajiit. What news have you, Foxy?”

Damien pulled a small dossier from his inner pocket and stretched the parchment out so Uriel could read the coded notes as they discussed them.

“The Legion report said the bodies of her parents bore slave tattoos. Notice the coloring marked for the male was black. Very unusual. Only one black Khajiit was mentioned crossing the Shadowgate Pass checkpoint to Cyrodiil, but it was almost five years prior to her parent's death. Here is the report."


"Crossing on foot to Cyrodiil: Four Khajiit freed slaves traveling together, coupled. Proofs shown, travel documents in order. Blackest cat I’ve ever seen, big. One female ready to pop and drop. Other two nondescript. One newborn without travel papers; no man's land birth. Father registering it in Cyrodiil."


“Three years before Maxical's birth. No sibling was found with the bodies, that is odd. Why would they undertake such a trek on foot, and with child?“ Uriel looked perplexedly at the date listed as Damien’s gloved finger indicated it.

“That was immediately after you outlawed the use of Recall Scrolls in Cyrodiil and banned the use of magic to travel between borders.”

“That law was created to secure the borders from threat, not make pregnant women walk the most dangerous pass in Tamriel. It was imperative then…even more so now. What could have been important enough to undertake such a journey in that condition?”

Damien shrugged. "No travel papers were found on the parents, it was assumed they were destroyed in the attack. Consider this, Sire. The age on Maxical's records was an estimate made by the Legion based on her size, which even now is considered small for Khajiit."

"We must know! That three years is crucial!" Uriel turned the parchment and began scanning the next coded page, reading aloud.

“Confirmed both couples also crossed the Septim’s Gate Pass from Morrowind together. All showed ‘Freed Slave’ identifications from Hlormaren, Bitter Coast. Names given were S'Vandra and spouse Shivani, S'Renji with spouse Nisaba..." Uriel glanced at Damien. “Which are her parents?”






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“I don’t have that information yet. I have a man in Balmora investigating Hlormaren's records, another in Cheydinhal. An albino infant may have caused a stir that would be remembered. We haven’t found any information on where the other couple settled.”

“On foot and greatly with child entering the pass, this other female would have delivered while crossing.” Uriel mused aloud. He had crossed that pass on horseback many years back, it had been a long and dangerous trek.

Uriel went back and scanned the first page quickly. “This Shadowgate record is at the entrance to the pass, where is the information from the checkpoint as they left the pass in Cyrodiil?”

“There are no records of them entering Cyrodiil. The guard at the entry point said that the Cyrodiil gate has never been manned that he knows of.”

Uriel’s brows snapped down, unable to believe what he’d just heard. “I want all borders secured immediately, and a report on which ones have not been.”

His cheeks burned with the rage he was feeling. This would explain how the Crimson Scar returned to Cyrodiil. How many other orders were not being carried out? Had Ocato become so lax…or had he deliberately left the borders unmanned to make his plots fall more easily into place?

Damien was scribbling rapidly on the pad in front of him. Traven was looking like an owl that smelled a rabbit. Uriel turned to the window to regain control.

On the street below him a battle was raging between a very adept Khajiit and what appeared to be a mage. As Uriel watched, the inter-district gate pushed open and as if conjured by his thoughts…there was the white Khajiit, clumsily stumbling toward the Palace.






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Of all the champions Akatosh could pick, why her? For possibly the thousandth time he silently pled Akatosh for some miracle that would change that bumbling girl into a champion worthy of Cyrodiil…or offer another.

“Foxy.“ Uriel pointed toward the window. “The white Khajiit is below in the street. Send your man to fetch her up.”

Uriel continued watching the one valiant Khajiit battling for the safety of his city…while his champion hid behind a tombstone and watched, not even trying to help.

His mouth swirled with mucous he had to force himself not to release in disgust. As Damien slid from the room, Hannibal moved to the window.

“Why is she not helping? She is a wonderful sight to see with a sword…” Hannibal’s chatter sounded nervous and defensive.

Uriel’s teeth gnashed together and his hands tightened into fists as he watched the girl trip over a body and fall flat on her face, costing the other Khajiit an injury.

“He must have struck her with a spell!” Hannibal lurched forward, pressing his face to the glass to see better.

Uriel silently fumed. He was entrusting Cyrodiil to that clumsy spoiled child, when that other Khajiit was what was needed.

Hannibal was watching him closely, and reading his stance accurately by his words. “She is not what you may think, Sire.” Hannibal turned back to the window.






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The other Khajiit had killed the mage and was now healing Maxical. Uriel glanced at Hannibal before turning back to the window. Foxy and Fathis had both voiced concern that Traven had grown too attached to the Immortal to be objective. Uriel had no doubt that they were correct.

“Traven, I think you should see this ‘document’ that Fathis carried with my seal on it.“ Uriel pulled the folded parchment back out and opened it so Traven could see. It was totally blank.

“It’s blank? Fathis…lied?”

“At my command and Sir Damien Reynard‘s suggestion. Your loyalty to the Immortal…explain yourself.”

Hannibal’s cheeks purpled.


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Grits
I am amazed by the many facets of Uriel Septim in this chapter. I love the way you portray him. I admire his urge to get out there and defend his people with his own sword. I have to respect the way he recognizes and regrets his own role in the war. Plus if Damien shares a joke with him, then he must be all right. Then I was fuming over Uriel’s assessment of dear Maxical as he watched his champion watch awesome Aravi kill the vampire, even though I can see where he’s coming from. He couldn’t have known what she was thinking from all the way up in his tower. I was quite relieved that Aravi was not only fine after the battle, but able to give some Mara’s Mercy to Maxical. Hannibal did not help his case with Uriel by speaking up for Maxical, but I wanted to hug him for it.

Akatosh had warned there would be blood and death before the end, but if the Khajiit lacked three years to be of age…why had the sign come so soon? Once again the feeling niggled within that time was of the essence. If his calculations were in error…

Oh crap, now I really feel bad because of what’s eventually coming…


Uriel’s face relaxed its tension just as briefly in acknowledgement of the joke. “Then we must house her in the Royal Quarters. You’ll have to increase your security here.”

Damien nodded, but Hannibal’s face paled visibly.


rollinglaugh.gif It just gets better and better when the three of them are interacting.

The Khajiit couples crossing into Cyrodiil from Morrowind was welcome information, especially the date. It seems that Nisaba and Maxical were connected even before the orphanage. I'm so curious about their past.

But the biggest thing for me in this chapter was the beautifully complex portrayal of Uriel. I’m in awe!
Acadian
“Then we must house her in the Royal Quarters. You’ll have to increase your security here.”
Damien nodded, but Hannibal’s face paled visibly.’

Uh-oh. This is gonna be trouble! There goes the palace!

’Of all the champions Akatosh could pick, why her?’ laugh.gif

I’m so glad that Aravi survived, and what an interesting way to portray it – from Uriel’s perspective.

I wonder if they’ll figure out that Shivani is Maxical’s mother?

And Hannibal looks to be in a Septim pickle now. ohmy.gif

This was great fun!

King Coin
Heh, the emperor knows who is in his employ and who is in someone else’s employ. Lol.
Foxy’s turning out to be a vry complex character as well. Not the assassin I first thought at all.

Hmmm… Is Hannibal nervous about the emperor seeing Maxical? laugh.gif I would be!

I really like that this whole chapter is from Uriel’s perspective. I’m with Grits though, I was feeling defensive for Maxical when he compared Maxical to Aravi. He must be under a lot of stress though. It’s not everyday you get to sit high in tower and watch the people you are sworn to protect get slaughtered. sad.gif

Oh, Traven has some tough questions to answer now.

Great chapter mALX!!
treydog
And Uriel makes an appearance! Woo Hoo!

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Too many decades had passed since he‘d seen war, his mind and heart had lost their immunity to the abomination of it. "Men are but flesh and blood." He reminded himself of his father’s admonitions that had brought him through the horrors of his first battle.


Excellent insight into Uriel’s past- and what the years have taken…

The weaving of the lore of the Imperial Simulacrum into your story is simply brilliant.

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Names given were S'Vandra and spouse Shivani, S'Renji with spouse Nisaba..." Uriel glanced at Damien. “Which are her parents?”


Oh wow!

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Traven was looking like an owl that smelled a rabbit.


“Yoo Hoo! Chancellor Long-Ears? I have a present for you….”

And poor Uriel wondering how Akatosh could have made poor Maxical the Champion. Yet- we know her heart, as he does not- yet.
Zalphon
I like the Screen-Shots, they help me imagine what you're going for (a picture kind of does that, huh?)

And...

When the Emperor gets involved, we know something's going down!
McBadgere
*Robert is ashamed*...I missed this...Damn...

URIEL bleedin' SEPTIM!!...Oh-ho-hooo yes!!!...

I'm really enjoying this...Believe it or not... tongue.gif laugh.gif ...

Looking forward to more...Will keep up...Promise... huh.gif ...

Nice one... biggrin.gif ...

Fair dues...Everyone rocks around here!!...
Athynae
Caught up with Max again....and it just continues to get better and better. Getting perspective from Uriel's point of view was wonderful although he shouldn't judge Max until he knows her better.

Great write mALX, thank you for sharing.
Destri Melarg
I just knew you were going to be up to page seventy by now! laugh.gif I guess real life and Skyrim has us all by the, um, hair. I can't begin to tell you how much I have missed Maxical. I will re-aquaint myself as soon as I can.
mALX
@ Grits - Thank you so much for your kind words, Grits! I can't take credit for a lot of Uriel Septim's lines, I used the game dialogue for him whenever possible (so someone playing the game could actually hear him say them, lol). Hannibal's reactions were my favorite part of the story, lol. I'm so glad you caught them and liked them as well <3 Thank you again !!

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@ Acadian - Thank you so much Acadian !! Having Aravi modeling a real warrior for Maxical was inspired by watching KC's gameplay (as you know, lol) She and KC are pretty amazing in battle !!! Thank you again, Acadian (and for pointing out my fave parts, too !!)

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@ King Coin - I am so glad you caught that Uriel knew who were spies in his castle !!! That meant a lot to me !! Thank you so very much for letting Aravi join in Maxical's story and for making her such an Awesome fighter !!!!

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@ Treydog - Woo Hoo !! You are caught up !! Thank you so much for the things you pointed out. Almost all Septim's lines were from the game itself, lol. He is really hard to do since we see so little of him in the game itself it is hard to get a bead on dialogue for him, lol. As always you caught my personal favorite line in the chapter. Thank you so much Treydog !!!

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@ Zalphon - I'm really big on liking screenshots with a story too - I can never remember to snap them, and when I do end up with 50 that look to be all exactly the same scene, ROFL !! King Coin took all those screenshots for me with his Aravi's help. He did an Awesome job, too !!! Thanks so much Zalphon !!!

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@ McBadgere - Thank you so much McBadgere !! It is no wonder you missed this, it came out the day before Skyrim was released, ROFL !! Thank you so much McB !!!

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@ Athynae - WOO HOO !! You're back from your galivanting !!! Thank you so much Athynae !!!

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@ Destri - Well Maxical has missed you too, it was so good to see you coming around Chorrol again !! You are so missed when you are gone such long gaps !!! Thank you for popping in, Destri !!!

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@ EVERYONE - Happy Holidays !!! My wish for all of you is "Food, Fun, and Laughter !!! "
mALX
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*** D. Foxy has graciously agreed to the use of his characters Damien "Foxy" Reynard and Sneakers in this episode.

There is also a cameo appearance of King Coin's character "Aravi" in it. Thanks KC, for allowing me to share my page with Aravi, and for making such an inspiring character !!


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Chapter 118: The Fates Of Three


The sound of labored breathing and restoration magic being cast filtered through the numbness freezing my brain. The charged air of it flowed in cooling waves over me, washing the paralysis in its wake. The vampire sure wasn’t healing me, the Khajiit must have killed him...that was a relief.

It was confirmed when I was able to open my eyes, the blurry shape of a Khajiit head was leaned over me. When my neck was able to turn I found myself looking into the grotesquely formed face of the vampire she had been fighting, the icy eyes still open and staring blankly.

“That is one ugly vampire!” The vampire’s body was too close for comfort, I tried to pull myself awkwardly up, it wasn’t easy with that huge armor. It had to have belonged to an Orc before.

The Khajiit had turned from me and began healing herself next. It was my clumsiness had cost her that injury. The numbness in my brain slowly eased away and was replaced by humiliation.

“I’m sorry…it was my fault you were hurt.”

She just shook her head and continued healing herself.

“Er…thanks. You know, for healing me. My name is Maxical.

“I’m Aravi.” Her soft accent was very familiar, Fathis’s was the same.

“You’re from Morrowind, are you not? I know the accent. Please, who taught you to fight that way? I’ve never seen anything like it!"

She gave me an odd look, then her mouth widened into a slow smile. “Azura.”

“Huh?”

She never answered, but seemed to be looking past me instead. Before I could turn my head to look a man’s falsetto voice shrilled loudly in my ear.

“Hey! You! Maxical, right? You need to come with me, Uriel Septim hisself wants to talk to you.“

I spun as quickly as the oversized armor would let me and found myself eye to eye with an overly short Bosmer. “You scared me!” He had. The high-pitch to his voice was remarkably close to Ocato’s whine.

Instead of being apologetic his face split into an ugly leer that revealed a mangle of corn colored teeth. “My orders was to bring you back directly.”

Dear gods, that must mean it was time for me to begin my service to Akatosh. “Wait…” I turned back to the Khajiit, but she was gone. Drat!

“Listen, er…mister. I have to find the Arch Mage from the University, it is really important. I promise I’ll come back as soon as…”

“He’s up with Boss now, I was told not to come back without you.“

“Boss!” I’d never heard anyone refer so offhandedly to the Emperor, he could be jailed for that! My mouth opened to say as much and then snapped shut again. Was it possible this snaggletoothed cretin was one of Uriel Septim’s bastards? Who else would have the audacity to speak in such a way about him?

Trying to imagine Uriel Septim breeding with any female that could possibly have produced that face was mindboggling…then I remembered that shrill voice and it hit me. He wasn’t Uriel’s, but Ocato’s!

My lip curled involuntarily in disgust. I tried unsuccessfully not to glower at him, but he caught the look. His grin widened into even further, revealing a brown rot clinging to his grinding teeth in the back. Dear gods, you would think since Ocato brought his by-blow into the Palace he would give him access to a toothbrush.







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The sight of Hannibal’s familiar face nearly overset me. So much had happened since I’d seen him fall in Jack’s box. His head gave an almost imperceptible shake and I gathered enough self control not to run to him.

What was the correct protocol for entering the Emperor’s private chambers? I stood frozen in the doorway, not knowing if I should kneel here or approach him first.

I glanced at Hannibal hoping he’d cue me like Fathis always did in these situations, but instead his eyes were riveted on the Emperor. Hannibal could always be read easily by his expression, and right now it looked like he was in deep trouble. I had no doubt it was over his defense of the Immortal, especially after noticing that man Damien standing next to a desk on the other side of the room.

Well, when in doubt err to the side of caution. I tried to lower one leg, but the knee of the oversized armor was well above my own. My leg couldn’t bend, and the clumsy attempt to kneel by sliding the leg straight back caused me to lose my balance.

The clanking of the armor that had sounded so loud in the street was deafening in the quiet of the Emperor’s chambers. I caught myself from falling by grabbing at a nearby table, oversetting it enough that the bottle of wine and candelabra resting on it pitched off and onto the thick rug beneath.

My prayer to Akatosh that the cork would be in the bottle was rewarded by a loud chuggling sound and the sight of a crimson stain painting an ever increasing pattern of trails through the pure whiteness of the expensive looking carpet.

The spilled wax lit quickly and was spreading toward a heavy velvet banner showing the family crest of the Septims. Dear gods.

My first reaction was to throw myself down on the flames and wallow on them, trying to extinguish the spread before it reached the banner. The ugly Bosmer reacted quickly, leaping across the room with an incredible speed for one that gave the impression of being rotund. He sped into the entry hall behind me, returning in seconds with a mop bucket which he doused over me. The flames sizzled out, leaving behind the heavy stench of smoking wax.

He didn’t offer his meaty hand to help me up, instead grabbed my arm in a surprisingly strong grip and hauled me to my feet.

“Mitts off, you lecherous filth,” hissed under my breath. His leering grin appeared…he’d heard me.

While staring down at that mess an even worse one caught my eye, if that was possible. I had come to the Emperor’s chambers without cleaning the blood from my armor, and not just any blood…possibly vampire blood.

I prayed again, this time for the floor to open up and swallow me whole. Once again Akatosh failed to answer my pleas, but it was apparent why this time. The Emperor had his ear, calling to Akatosh in an enraged shout, the paleness of his cheeks now flaming red.

“Dear Akatosh I beseech you! This cannot be the one!”







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Thank goodness Hannibal’s head shake had saved me from ignoring the Emperor entirely in a headlong dash to Hannibal’s side, at least I hadn‘t made a complete fool of myself.

Failing Cyrodiilic Speechcraft in school may not be noticeable in the Bloodworks, but here it could not help but be apparent. Polite Khajiit (which I can speak well) is very formal and respectful. My best hope would be to think in polite Khajiit but speak in the Cyrodiilic tongue.

“Sire, please forgive me for entering your chambers unwashed, but High Chancellor Ocato‘s…er…‘child by nature’ brought me directly to you.” I glared in the direction of the cocky Bosmer who was now gaping at me in a stunned manner.

I had obviously stunned Hannibal as well, his jaw dropped and hung there in the folds of his robe. The man Damien began making a choking sound.

“Forgive me Sire, is this something of which I must not be speaking? I just thought it must be openly known and spoken of…since he lives here at the Palace and all.”

The man Damien appeared to be having some form of fit, choking and clutching his stomach. Had he miss-swallowed something? His hand shook as he drew out a handkerchief and began dabbing at his eyes through the slits in his velvet face mask.

“Mayhaps you should send her in Ocato’s care to another province for training.“ Damien gasped out before throwing his head back in a peal of laughter. I blanched, feeling faint at the thought.

“I find no humor in this, Foxy. All of Cyrodiil must rely on this…child, who cannot even enter a room without disaster.” The anger was apparent in Uriel Septim’s voice, he sounded overwrought and…stressed. That I was the cause of it was obvious.

“I tried to warn you…” Hannibal bleated, shooting me an apologetic glance.

“Sire, please. I am clumsy, it’s true. The ill-fitting armor…but Sire, I came back into the city seeking Hannibal…er, Arch Mage Traven… on a matter of utmost importance. I’ve found the vampire Vicente’s lair right here in the Talos Plaza District. He has been kidnapping children, keeping them prisoner in caves somewhere and…raping them when they are of a certain age.”

The man Damien’s humor ended abruptly. In a few cat-like steps he was at Uriel’s side. “Farming girls for virgin blood, Sire. Talos Plaza, that‘s not Vicente.“

“But…it has to be Vicente, his pet bird was there. I saw it going into an open window in the dome.”

Damien’s eyes glittered intensely through the slits in the mask. “The same bird that you were stroking at the Arena?”

“Er…I was just petting it." I nodded.

“Sire, I think we just found Malan’s lair.”







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“Malan!” I gasped. “It can‘t be his bird…“ Janus said the bird belonged to a friend, he wouldn‘t be friends with Malan…couldn’t be. “Malan has Fathis!” Was all I could blurt out. What had I done?

“Where is the Immortal now, Maxical? Why is he not with you?” Hannibal was looking stricken too.

“I sent him to save Fathis. He gave his vow to do it.”

“The Immortal made a vow with you?” Hannibal looked relieved. “He was raised as a gentleman, Sire. From what I know of him he’ll keep his word.“

My own breath released in relief at Hannibal’s words. Hannibal knew Janus over fifty years, but Fathis was his best friend. His seeming betrayal of Fathis at the Arena…that may have been naught but trust that Janus’s innate character would take precedence over the vampire nature.

Uriel exchanged glances with Damien before the latter spoke. “Why would he make a vow with you? What promise did you make to him?”

“Er…that I would be his sworn enemy in this life and the next if he didn’t save Fathis. I don‘t know why it mattered to him, but it seemed to.”

Uriel slumped slightly, his face an unreadable mask. “Your information confirmed, Foxy.”

“Sire, one of these kidnapped girls was in the orphanage with me, a Khajiit named Nisaba…”

BAM! Damien’s hand slammed on the desk. I broke off mid sentence gaping. Uriel Septim was leaning forward his interest was so great. Even Hannibal was looking owlishly interested.

“…Sire?”

He waved his arm in a sweeping gesture I took to mean keep talking.

“When I was adopted, Fathis Aren approached the Elder Council for the removal of all orphans from the Imperial Prison Compound. He donated the funds himself for new orphanages to be built in each city, in better locations for children. But Nisaba was only a child when she found herself in that cave, and she only remembers being at the Prison Compound Orphanage before that. There were others, many others; all taken as children and raised in these same caves till breeding age. It’s been going on for years, too. Some of these women are…old now.”

I turned directly to Hannibal. “You know Fathis, he would have put someone he trusted in charge of those funds. He must have told you who he entrusted, Hannibal. You are his best friend.”

“There must be another explanation, Maxical. The man in charge of those funds is a high ranking member of the Imperial Watch, above even Itius Hayn. You can’t accuse the man without proof, Maxical.”

“What more proof do you need, Hannibal? You know Fathis well, he would have checked up on the progress of the orphanage and seen the orphans were in good hands. Someone has to have been lying to him all this time, and misusing his funds.“







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“Maxical, with your temper it may be best to let the authorities look into this.”

“Is that the authorities that work below him or above?” I made my tone edgy and sarcastic, rolling my eyes rudely. Hannibal had never seen that ploy, so it worked much better than any attempt at trying to look innocent would have.

“There is no one above him…well, other than High Commander Adamus Phillida.”

“Thank you, Hannibal. I know it is Audens Avidius now.”

Hannibal blanched. “Maxical, you can’t take the law into your own hands.”

Damien held his hand up and Hannibal’s expression showed a marked relief. “Traven, give me any details you have about this transaction. We already have Avidius under surveillance in another matter, we’ll handle the investigation. The Elder Council should have detailed records on the new orphanages.”

“There was a donation fund also, the accounting was to be done here for all the counties to draw from equally. Fathis made a very large donation to get it started.” I added, trying to school an innocent look.

Hannibal pointed at me. “She’s plotting! Maxical, this is a legal matter, stay out of it.”

“Hannibal, any orphans that were imprisoned in caves and assaulted while under the protection of an orphanage Fathis founded are his legitimate concern. As his wife it is my duty to act on his behalf in his absence.”

“Foxy was hired by Fathis, paid to handle his affairs. Leave it in his capable hands.” Hannibal pointed to the man calling himself Damien.

I wondered if all Emperors had assassins on staff as their right hand man. “Sire, it is my right and duty to challenge the man responsible. Although I’m no trained assassin,” I indicated the man Damien, bringing a shocked gasp from the ugly Bosmer beside him. “I have two legitimate causes for revenge on this man. This is my fight, may I have your seal on it?”

“What is the second cause you spoke of?”

“The Khajiit girl, Nisaba. I clearly remember swearing a vow with her when we were children, but I can’t remember what I swore to. Whatever that vow was, I…didn’t keep it. I can’t help but feel her situation rests at my door twice. I have to do this for her, in amends.”

Uriel nodded. “I agree. Sir Damien will carry the signed Writ of Execution until his investigation reveals the responsible party. At that time he will pass it to you to be carried out. This will be no assassination, but an execution for crimes against the citizens of Cyrodiil. Because you will be acting for the Palace you must be trained accordingly first. I trust you will see to that, Foxy? Get back with me as soon as you can with the information regarding this child Nisaba as well.” Uriel’s tone was dismissive.

“I see. And so the baton of fire is passed. I did see this coming, by the way.” Damien’s smile to Uriel was genuine, it was clear there was a close bond between the two men.

“Baton of fire? You mean me, right? It was an accident…Ow!” Hannibal pinched the back of my arm. I closed my mouth abruptly.

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Athynae
Yippee Merry Christmas to me, not only do I wake this morning to more Max (we will discuss your procrastination later) but I also am using my youngest daughters gift to do so... She has no idea she got a tablet hehe.

Great write, I love Max! I thought the interaction with Foxy was great, as was the rest. More story is needed! Have to have something good to read on my daughters thingy while I sit. (Note: Will only use the tablet to read next time,trying to type on this thing sucks)

As I said, typing on that thing sucks....had to use the pc to edit as all of my eyes lost their self esteem and ducked their heads!!
McBadgere
Oh yes!!...Fantastic!!...

Most excellent exchanges and plotting...

This story rocks!!...

Oh how I laughed at all that with the table...So brilliant...

Nice one... biggrin.gif ...*Applauds*...
Grits
I loved seeing Aravi again, and I love the way you portray her! Of course she would heal Maxical first, perfect!

Oh my gosh, Sneakers with a mangle of corn-colored teeth… and Maxical’s thoughts about him… Then the disastrous entrance into the Emperor’s company had me weeping with laughter. I had to stop and compose myself before I could continue.

I prayed again, this time for the floor to open up and swallow me whole. Once again Akatosh failed to answer my pleas, but it was apparent why this time. The Emperor had his ear, calling to Akatosh in an enraged shout, the paleness of his cheeks now flaming red.

“Dear Akatosh I beseech you! This cannot be the one!”


Quoted for pure awesome. Even Damien couldn’t keep a straight face with dear Maxical’s blundering. She sure does stir up a room. And then it got serious in a heartbeat. I cannot wait to see what Damien does with Maxical's training.

What a delight to have this to read on Christmas!! smile.gif
King Coin
Aravi! happy.gif I really liked that you noted that she isn’t from Cyrodiil originally.

Poor Maxical! She certainly didn’t enter the emperor's chambers with any grace!

“Dear Akatosh I beseech you! This cannot be the one!”
The emperor! laugh.gif Perfect reaction to that mess Maxical made! She sets his room on fire just by walking in!
Can’t wait to see her training either. This is going to be great!
Acadian
“Baton of fire? You mean me, right? It was an accident…Ow!” Hannibal pinched the back of my arm. I closed my mouth abruptly.’
A perfect ending to a perfect episode that was so very Maxical! Dear Maxical can get into trouble just walking into a room! tongue.gif

What a delightful mixture of cunning and clumsiness she is!

And wonderful to see Aravi again!
Jacki Dice
The clanking of the armor that had sounded so loud in the street was deafening in the quiet of the Emperor’s chambers. I caught myself from falling by grabbing at a nearby table, oversetting it enough that the bottle of wine and candelabra resting on it pitched off and onto the thick rug beneath.

huh.gif Oh my.

My prayer to Akatosh that the cork would be in the bottle was rewarded by a loud chuggling sound and the sight of a crimson stain painting an ever increasing pattern of trails through the pure whiteness of the expensive looking carpet.

mellow.gif Uh-oh...

The spilled wax lit quickly and was spreading toward a heavy velvet banner showing the family crest of the Septims. Dear gods.

indifferent.gif Dear gods indeed.

My first reaction was to throw myself down on the flames and wallow on them, trying to extinguish the spread before it reached the banner. The ugly Bosmer reacted quickly, leaping across the room with an incredible speed for one that gave the impression of being rotund. He sped into the entry hall behind me, returning in seconds with a mop bucket which he doused over me. The flames sizzled out, leaving behind the heavy stench of smoking wax.

ohmy.gif Poor Maxical!

I imagine I sound similar when suddenly having to switch to Spanish at work sad.gif Food and clothes, I handle. Insurance...not so much indifferent.gif
D.Foxy
First, well and truly approved! In all senses!

Next, I nearly got arrested at the airport. All because of YOU you malx minx.

I shall never read her in airports, or indeed any pubic place, again.
mALX
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@ Athynae - Thank you so much Athynae !! Your threats worked, I scrambled to eke out another chapter, lol.

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@ McBadgere - Lol, I am so glad you enjoyed that table tipping, my Khajiit is not known for being graceful !! Thank you so much McB !!!!

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@ Grits - Thank you so much, Grits !!! I sure hope you are okay, you kind of disappeared after getting food poisoning, I hope you are well now !! Thank you so much for your kind words !!

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@ KC - Thank you !! And thank you so much for sharing Aravi with us for those chapters, she is Awesome !!!

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@ Acadian - Thank you so much Acadian !!! (finally someone that can get her to be quiet you mean? ROFL !!) You ROCK !!!

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@ Jacki Dice - WOO HOO !!! Thank you so much for stopping by !!! Lol, I've done pretty good with the Spanish, but we got a French customer once and I was the only one who had flunked ... er... taken it in high school, lol.

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@ Foxy - Yeah Foxy !!! Finally dropped in to see what I'm doing to your spys, assassins, and agents? ROFL !! Thank you so very much Foxy, you are so missed when you are away - and you know it always makes me happy when I have caused you to get arrested in airports or buy new monitors !!! You ROCK !!!

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*** D. Foxy has graciously agreed to the use of his characters Damien "Foxy" Reynard and Sneakers in this episode.



Chapter 119: The Service To Akatosh Begins


While Uriel and Sir Damien were talking Hannibal turned to me with an apologetic look. I waved it off. “It’s not the first time I’ve been pinched to shut me up. Hannibal, I don’t understand. The bird has to be Vicente’s pet, so how can it be going into Malan’s lair? I thought you said Vicente was Crimson Scar?”

“He is. You must be wrong about it being Vicente’s pet, Maxical. Vicente lives in Cheydinhal and hasn‘t left his lair in years. He came here just before the music festival began.“

“That can’t be, these women have been being dumped at the statue of Akatosh in the Talos Plaza for years. The cave can‘t have been far from there or someone would have seen them being brought to it. Is it possible he would be working with Malan somehow?”

“I don’t see how, not from Cheydinhal. Surely these women have seen their captor and could identify him to the authorities…”

I cut him off blurting, “No!”

Uriel’s conversation with Damien stopped abruptly and he turned toward me, eyebrows raised. “Why would they protect him?”

“It doesn’t matter whether the breeding was by choice or not, Azura has sealed them to this man. That is primal, they will defend him with their lives against anyone or anything because that seal cannot be broken.”

“According to research they suffer tremendous physical pain on separation from their mates.” Hannibal nodded.

“That is the belief. Scientifically, Traven. Isn’t this actually a form of psychological phenomenon manifesting itself in a physical form?” Uriel questioned Hannibal, but then his gaze rested on me so I answered.

“No, Sire. The seal is an actual binding mark placed on Khajiit by Azura herself that ties us for life to one mate. When our mate is near it gives us Azura’s Blessing, a highly addictive sweet taste in our mouth that brings tremendous pleasure. When the mate is separated from us it burns agonizingly. Should the seal be broken by death the pain becomes excruciating and unbearable. Many Khajiit women in Cyrodiil follow their bound mate to the grave because there is no way to live with the pain of the broken seal.”






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“Why do you say, ‘in Cyrodiil‘? Wouldn’t Khajiit in other provinces suffer the same?” Uriel's eyes were boring through me.

I glanced nervously at Hannibal and was relieved when he took the hint, though he was obviously reluctant to.

“Statistically the other provinces have a lower incidence of suicide among the female Khajiit. Elsweyr has the lowest number, and has the highest population of Khajiit. They attribute this to the high presence of ancient vampires there.”

“You can’t seriously believe that, Traven. This is superstition, a placebo effect.” The disbelief in Uriel’s voice was obvious and tangible.

“It is truth, Sire. That is how I realized the man impersonating Fathis was an ancient vampire. Their presence interferes with Azura’s mark.”

Hannibal gaped at me like he may burst of curiosity. I’m surprised he didn’t lift my bangs to view the now purple flag there. I'm sure he would have, had Uriel Septim not been there.

“How does it do that?” Uriel’s tone was still skeptical.

“I don’t know, but it does. No one ever discussed with me what I should experience, Hannibal will confirm the Arcane gives no such lessons and my mother would choke to death before discussing such things. But I sat next to the Immortal for hours with no pain, and didn’t receive Azura’s blessing as I should have when Gi…when my mate was there. Later, when I was in the center of the Arena away from all the ancients…and especially last night, the suffering was beyond terrible.”

Damien leaned forward, glancing at the bangs covering my forehead. I lifted them briefly and was not surprised to see Hannibal dive in for a look. Damien began scribbling something on a small parchment pad. When he spoke it was almost as if he was thinking aloud. “Had we known about this before, we could have hired Khajiit woman to browse the cities and determine the size of Malan’s army for us.“

Was he mocking Khajiit? I gave him a fierce look, but his expression was serious so I responded with honesty.

“I’m sure these women could use the income. They were pushed out to the streets once their purpose was fulfilled with nothing but the rags they wore, and I’ve seen Simplicia wear better. Growing from childhood in caves there is a tendency to revert to the feral, survival is their main law. They have no training in proper hygiene, speech or a skill to earn a living. Who would hire them? Most have ended up filling your prisons simply from hunger. They can’t survive without food, and with no way to earn it they have to steal it.“






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“Fathis mentioned a similar problem with the orphans that were pushed out at eighteen with no skills and usually ended up in prison within days for the theft of bread to survive. Many of them opt for the Arena where they are just as unskilled in combat and end up dying as Pits. Many of the women become prostitutes…I have heard.” Hannibal agreed.

“That’s why Fathis pushed for a reform in how unadoptables were treated. His orphanages were supposed to train them in skills so they would have a chance make an honest living. If a corruption in the Imperial Legion robbed them of this then they caused their situation and are responsible for its correction.” I watched Uriel’s expression for concern, but only read exhaustion there.

“This will have to be taken up at another time, there is nothing that can be done about it with this war on.”

“Yes Sire, but as I was leaving they were sending these women out to fight the vampires with no weapons or armor. Beasts are considered expendable, they are sent into combat unequipped, and usually where no humans will go. Everything I own is at the Arena, I had to take this armor from a body. As you can see it is broken and ill-fitting, I can barely walk in it and I am trained in combat.”

Hannibal spoke up. “She speaks the truth. We passed the Arcane’s healing tent on the way here, the Legion has ordered the humans be treated before Khajiit or Argonians. Those I saw were unarmored, and kept getting bumped to the back of the line as more humans were being carried in.”

Damien nodded. “Traven and I healed them ourselves. We saw several unarmed citizens scavenging bodies as well, but none of the armor or weapons left was in any condition for battle.”

“I wasn’t allowed to use Legion armor off the dead, even though it was the only viable equipment in the heap of bodies.” I added.






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Uriel’s expression was of one smothering rage with a massive amount of self-control. His fist clasped and unclasped the hilt of his sword as if he wanted to whip it from the scabbard and charge with it raised in the air and a battlecry on his lips. I’d seen Alix and Fathis both do that when they were frustrated.

“A defender’s measure is their heart. Race, even rank have no place in battle. Have your man Sneakers gather any armor and weapons from the dead, the Palace smithy can repair it and return it to the field for use. The troops must be properly equipped. Also, I want my orders carried to the healers. Triage the wounded to determine the most critical for healing first regardless of race or rank.”

It suddenly hit me that Uriel was a decorated warrior…one of the few lessons I did stay awake for, although it was because I was drawing a moustache on the image of him in the textbook. What was he doing in the Palace? To stand in safety while his men and citizens died must be eating him alive.

“Sire…Fathis told me the men you led into battle loved you, that they would follow you into Oblivion for the honor to have served under you. My father says an army is a reflection of their leader. Without your voice before them they have only Ocato’s to hear.”

Whether the image of Ocato’s whiney voice and air of supremacy was the last straw on Uriel’s frustration to act, I don’t know. I would never have followed Ocato into battle. Alix said all real warriors love the sting of battle. Maybe it’s true, because once the decision was made Uriel came to life.

“Foxy, stop your man. When he talks to the smithy tell him to have my horse saddled.”

“I’m going with you.” Damien sprang to his feet as lightly as any Khajiit.

“I’ll need at least a light cuirass…or a shirt.” I started unbuckling the oversized glass greaves to shed them. I’d do much better in just the pants.






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Damien turned from Uriel to me, his eyes glittering with the anticipation of battle.

“Maxical, why are you so sure the bird was Vicente’s pet?”

“Vicente attacked me at the music festival…he drank my blood. When I woke from the attack, a childhood song was stuck in my head.”

“Jack-be-nimble.” Hannibal broke in, then went back to lining up his spells. I nodded.

Damien leaned forward. “Go on.”

“This morning his pet bird was flying over the cave at the refugee camp, and the song came back to me…but not just to me. All the women that he had held prisoner in the caves were singing it too. They said that song comes to them when the bird is near…and then told me they get the blessing of Azura’s seal every time the bird is near. They could only get that when the one that started them is near, and a bird can‘t have started them…so it had to be Vicente.”

Damien banged his fist down on the desk and began writing furiously on a small parchment pad in front of him, then tucked it in his pocket. He hurried to Uriel’s side and caught him by the shoulder, grinning like a cat below the mask.

“We have Malan, Sire. I know exactly who he’s been impersonating these many years and why we couldn’t find him.”

“Wait for me!” I kicked the glass greaves the rest of the way off and caught up with Hannibal. “Conjure me a shirt or cuirass that fits me, Hannibal.”






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Uriel turned to face us, his eyes shining as if he’d already won the battle. I felt my breath intake from the beauty of the man and the power and courage emanating from him. A shiver went down my spine and suddenly I knew what Fathis had meant about following him into Oblivion.

"It is fatal to enter a war without the will to win it. Who stands with me?”

I pounded my chest and raised my hand to him with the rest, a devotion like I’ve never felt pounding in my chest. He was my Emperor, and I was swearing my sword to his service. Fathis had said meeting Uriel was an experience to carry through your lifetime and share with children and grandchildren, and at this moment suddenly I knew what he meant.

He went to each in turn to clasp the raised hand, first Damien then Hannibal. Each said something to him as they clasped and kissed cheeks. When he got to me and clasped my hand I didn’t know what to say.

“My sword is sworn to your defense, Sire.” It was all I could think to say. Uriel shook his head.

"Strength lies not in defense but in attack."

Tears of pride for my Emperor were stinging my eyes. This was a moment I would never forget as long as I lived. I felt deeply shamed that I had hesitated to serve him when he first asked for my vow.

Uriel turned to lead the way. Damien moved up to walk beside him and they began reciting the words of the poem Uriel had given me the day Fathis brought me to meet him…the one I promised to keep with me at all times. It was with all my things at the Arena. I strained to hear the words.


Out of the night that covers me,
Black as the Pit from pole to pole,
I thank whatever gods may be
For my unconquerable soul.

In the fell clutch of circumstance
I have not winced nor cried aloud.
Under the bludgeonings of chance
My head is bloody, but unbowed.

Beyond this place of wrath and tears
Looms but the Horror of the shade,
And yet the menace of the years
Finds, and shall find, me unafraid.

It matters not how strait the gate,
How charged with punishments the scroll,
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.


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Uriel Septim's Lines:
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"It is fatal to enter a war without the will to win it" - General Douglas MacArthur

"Strength lies not in defense but in attack."
- Marquis de Acerba

** The poem Uriel and Damien are saying at the end (and is also posted on Chapter 67) is "Invictus," by William Ernest Henley


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McBadgere
Holy funster mALXie... huh.gif ...

Wow...

Seriously, that last section with the oaths and the poem...

This is nothing but a question btw...Is that poem yours?...It's just that I know some things get lifted from game books I haven't read... biggrin.gif ...Aaamywho, that's just brilliant that is...

(I say it's just a question because offence may be taken because simply by asking the question is to suggest it's too good to be yours and therefore may be someone else's and I'm not, AT ALL...I just want to know who's it is...*Breathes in*...)

Oh hell yeah!!...

Nice one... biggrin.gif ...

Excellent story...
Athynae
I agree with McB all the way. FANTASTIC!!!!!! The entire post was some of your best and that last part had ME ready to grab my battle gear!!! Where did I put my boots???? Heck of a tale mALX, keep rockin'.

And if the threat of baldness had ANYTHING to do with it then, well, GOOD!!! Sometimes you have to threaten your friends to get them to do what is RIGHT! and NECESSARY! Your story was just hanging there like an old pair of granny panties on the clothesline. And we all know that your story is MUCH MUCH MUCH more than that!!

So let's keep this going shall we? biggrin.gif

Oh, yea, the poem....PHENOMENAL!!!!!!!!
mALX
QUOTE(McBadgere @ Dec 30 2011, 08:30 AM) *

Holy funster mALXie... huh.gif ...

Wow...

Seriously, that last section with the oaths and the poem...

This is nothing but a question btw...Is that poem yours?...It's just that I know some things get lifted from game books I haven't read... biggrin.gif ...Aaamywho, that's just brilliant that is...

(I say it's just a question because offence may be taken because simply by asking the question is to suggest it's too good to be yours and therefore may be someone else's and I'm not, AT ALL...I just want to know who's it is...*Breathes in*...)

Oh hell yeah!!...

Nice one... biggrin.gif ...

Excellent story...



That is the same poem from Chapter 67 where Uriel first gave it to her, so I didn't bother (at like 4:30 am when I finished writing the chapter, lol) to cite it, but here it is - also, I'm adding cites for two other lines of Uriel Septim (that are also quotes) to the OP - (sorry) :

** The poem Uriel and Damien are saying at the end (and is also posted on Chapter 67) is "Invictus," by William Ernest Henley
Athynae
Somewhere in the back of my not yet sufficiently caffeinated head I remembered that.
mALX
QUOTE(Athynae @ Dec 30 2011, 09:22 AM) *

Somewhere in the back of my not yet sufficiently caffeinated head I remembered that.



Me too (lack of caffiene and sleep brain), lol.


There is a story behind the poem Invictus - my father gave it to me when I was age 14. I was almost 21 years old before I realized the meaning behind it. I have carried it with me since, and given it to my children in hopes one day it will mean as much to them as it does to me.


** also, sorry if there are places in these last two chapters that give the feel of "info dumping" - since it had been like a two month gap between chapters prior, rather than expecting everyone to hunt for info to refresh their mind on where the story was - I kind of pumped some things into these two chapters to refresh people's minds on a few key things that had passed in prior chapters.

If it sounds too much like one of those stupid pill commercials where woman go back and forth talking about the side effects of some med while trying to sound like they are having a conversation - let me know and I'll drink a pot of coffee and edit it, lol.
treydog
Where to begin? How about with the most important point? WELCOME BACK!

Chapter 118

LOVED the bit where Aravi explains she was taught how to fight by Azura.

Maxical mistaking Sneakers for one of Uriel's- and then Ocato's(!) "natural children" had me snortling uproariously. And then the bit about the toothbrush.... Recovery was touch and go for a moment there.

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The clanking of the armor that had sounded so loud in the street was deafening in the quiet of the Emperor’s chambers. I caught myself from falling by grabbing at a nearby table, oversetting it enough that the bottle of wine and candelabra resting on it pitched off and onto the thick rug beneath.


Poor Maxical! Rico seems to have similar moments of "if I just land THERE- it will all work out."

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Thank goodness Hannibal’s head shake had saved me from ignoring the Emperor entirely in a headlong dash to Hannibal’s side, at least I hadn‘t made a complete fool of myself.


Um- is she SURE of that?

Going to quote a long bit next- but it is all significant, and shows that having a reputation for not paying attention can come in handy sometimes.

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“Is that the authorities that work below him or above?” I made my tone edgy and sarcastic, rolling my eyes rudely. Hannibal had never seen that ploy, so it worked much better than any attempt at trying to look innocent would have.

“There is no one above him…well, other than High Commander Adamus Phillida.”

“Thank you, Hannibal. I know it is Audens Avidius now.”

Hannibal blanched. “Maxical, you can’t take the law into your own hands.”


Chapter 119

The discussion of the systematic exploitation and oppression of the tailed folk- as well as the other orphans- was incredibly well-done and quite powerful.

And then, the perfect moment of lightness, Maxical's memory of drawing a moustache on the Emperor's picture.

Finally, we are given a vision of Uriel as a WARRIOR, not just a "commander" but a LEADER. And yes- I was looking for my shield and sword too.
Grits
The title alone put my heart in my mouth.

Uriel turned to face us, his eyes shining as if he’d already won the battle. I felt my breath intake from the beauty of the man and the power and courage emanating from him. A shiver went down my spine and suddenly I knew what Fathis had meant about following him into Oblivion.

"It is fatal to enter a war without the will to win it. Who stands with me?”


*Grits jumps up and down waving* What a powerful call to arms. That poem has so much meaning here, since we know what Uriel knows about what is coming. I love your portrayal of the Emperor!

I didn’t feel any info dump, just a welcome sense of knowing what is going on. I think you worked your recap in beautifully. This might be my favorite Maxical chapter ever!!
Acadian
So, part of Maxical’s destiny is fulfilled, as she pledges her service to the Emperor. This was moving, well-written and easy to follow. I, for one, appreciate the review of so many things that you wonderfully wove in. A great review of the complexities involved with Khajiit mating, and how intricately you have tied it to the vampires.

And Damien with that little pocket pad taking notes. Methinks he is actually an undercover agent for the Black Horse Courier. laugh.gif

It was distressing to hear of the treatment suffered by the tailed folk. At least the Emperor took steps to ameliorate it once it came to his attention. That segment showcased Uriel’s isolation as well as his underlying goodness.

Now, let’s get that cat some decent armor and turn her loose!

mALX
@ McBadgere - Thank you so much, McB !!! Although I didn’t write it, that poem means a lot to me - really glad you like that !!!

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@ Athynae - ROFL !!! Granny panties !!! SPEW !!! Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement, Athynae !!!

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@ Treydog - Ha! You caught some of my favorite places too, lol. Thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot. I was very concerned about being able to portray Uriel (which is why I’ve resorted to using his game dialogue and quotes from other famous generals, lol). It means a lot that you saw the chapter as I hoped it would come out.

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@ Grits - This meant so much to me to hear from you, Thank you, Thank You !!! Your own scenes from the Battle of Kvatch were so inspiring to read and impossible to forget, so your kind words mean tons to me. Thank you.

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@ Acadian - Thank you so much Acadian !! Whew, you know how hard that chapter and the upcomings are for me, I do not like doing battles, lol. I so appreciate your support, you have no idea !! Thank you !!
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