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Acadian
It makes sense that Stormcrow – being a magical melee fighter – would exercise or flex both her body and magicks to keep them up to snuff.

Very neat how, as Silverlight approached, both mages could sense each other.

How best to advise Xochitl. Good advice from Silverlight that it really needs to be the girl’s decision.
”It's so damned hard to tell. Punching giant spiders is so much easier."
- - Minsc could not have said it better, Jan! Well, he might have said, “You point, I punch!” or perhaps, ‘The bigger they are, the harder I hit!” Okay, sorry. It’s all your D&D / gamernerd references in this episode that got me going. tongue.gif

Hopefully, Silverlight will be able to shed some light on the Dogman/flail mystery. At the end here, we did confirm that the flail indeed is the problem and that Bill has only been dogging out since picking it up recently. That’s a start.


Nit: "It was my life after all, and it is was not like she could really stop me from telling anyone if I was determined to.’ - - Drop the 'is' I think?
WellTemperedClavier
I can see how Shadowrun would help with that. Last time I played Shadowrun, I was still in middle school, and I don't think we paid much attention to those particular details. But I do know surveillance is a big thing there.

I remember hearing about the Rampart scandal as it happened. I'm not familiar with the others however, though I'm not exactly surprised by them, sadly.

Good to see Silverlight again!

Sad that Silverlight still has to keep her activities a secret from her family. That's got to be exhausting after a while. I was too young to know about the Satanic Panic as it happened, but I later read how awful it got (and saw a few of the aftereffects lingering in popular discourse).

What exactly is the difference between Wicca and real magic here?

You know, I could see how gaming manuals might help prime people for this sort of thing.

Okay, so Bill's normal again. Obviously pretty traumatized, but at least being cared for. So is he out of the woods? Or might he still transform?
SubRosa
Renee: I am sure there are plenty of meta-humans who do hire themselves out as bodyguards, assassins, and the like. I am also sure there are plenty who join the CIA or FBI or Army. But those are people quite different from January, Blood Raven, Gadget, and the like, who value their personal freedom, and pick and choose who they fight for, and against.

Calypso is a marine biologist, and creates/stars in documentaries about the oceans. Like a super-powered Jacques Cousteau.

Xochitl might be an ubermensch wizard someday. Or not. Even I do not know!

Posting once a week means the story moves slowly, so it is easy for forget things that were posted months ago. Even if they were just a few days previously in story time. When he recently explained how he tracked down the Dogman's secret identity, Cray said that the first Dogman appearance was at the Big Tire, just a few days after the Battle of Belle Isle.


Acadian: January and Minsc would get along very well! "Make way Villainy, Hero coming through!"

Honestly, the decision to leave telling her parents soley in Xochitl's hands did not come to me until I wrote that scene with Silverlight and January talking about it. January is receiving conflicting advice about it, with Calypso saying that her parents knew the entire time that Blood Raven was teaching her, and both Silverlight and Riven saying the exact opposite. It all comes down to exactly who you are dealing with, whether it is a good idea or not.

If Silverlight is good for anything, it is shedding light. Plenty of radiance coming up this post.

And as ever, thank you for spotting those editorial nits for me to fix.


WellTemperedClavier: We used to spend a lot of time plotting and planning our break-ins when we played Shadowrun. In one case we had to get through an electrified fence. To make sure we had deactivated it, my street samurai (who was a real stone cold bastard) brought along an alley cat. He proceeded to throw the cat against the fence. Thankfully it really had been turned off. He and his roommate (the other street sam on the team), adopted the cat and named it Lucky.

As Blood Raven has said before, there is no shame in not wearing the cape. It wears people down. Fighting villains is the easy part, living the double life is the hard thing.

Xochitl is a great example of Wicca in the Crow-verse. It sort of primes people to become magic-users. But in the end it is just a religion. When you are doing Wiccan/Witchcraft/Neo-Pagan rituals, you are still just performing religious celebrations. You are not turning invisible, or flying, or shooting lightning bolts from your rear. That takes another step.

Xochitl just took that first baby step when January and Blood Raven first discovered her, thanks to her finding the notes left behind by the Hierophant. By following his instructions she was able to create a spell that summoned... well nothing. It only got the attention of the January and Blood Raven. And the amulet with the monster trapped inside it did the rest.

There are doubtlessly hundreds of thousands of people in the US with a tiny sliver of magical power thanks to them following Wicca, or Chaos Magic, or Thelema, or Druidism, or Asatru, etc... Again, not so much people flying or shooting energy beams. But people with just a little bit of ability, and using it in their religious celebrations, or even just to make themselves a little bit luckier in ordinary life. Like a +1 on their d20 roll. More likely to get that job, or attract that girl, or pass that test, and so on, assuming they are directing their will upon such things. (Come to think of it, there is a D&D spell called Guidance that does exactly that).

Much more on Bill and his state coming right up. It's not over yet!





Lighthouse Portable Libraries

Zakariya al-Qazwīnī and his book Ajā’ib Al-Makhlūqāt are real

Dr. John Dee and the Monas Hieroglyphica are real. The sequel Multus Hieroglyphica is entirely fictional, of my own invention.



Book 11.31 - Raven Sisters

"With the grace of Selene, we are here to help you," Silverlight declared. She pronounced the moon goddess' name in a manner that sounded odd to January's ears. It was more like "Say Lay Nee" rather than "Sah-Lene", as she was more accustomed to hearing. That made her wonder if Silverlight was using a modern Greek pronunciation, or perhaps an ancient one.

The Greek-American magician strode up to the pair, and went down to one knee so that she was eye to eye with them. Her eyes glowed bright silver against the already pale background of her white marble skin. January could feel magic rise within the other woman, and intuited that she was studying Bill's aura.

January shifted her own senses to the astral as well. She closed her eyes. It still helped her to shut out her as much as her mundane senses as possible, when adding in the extra information from the astral plane. Now she could plainly see that Silverlight was magically sensing the pair, as her power was clearly resonating across the higher magical realm.

"Yes, I can see it," Silverlight nodded. "You my friend, are under the effects of a curse. I can see its chains upon you."

"I don't sense anything," January frowned. She stepped closer, and studied the man's aura more intently. But it was just a jumble of sensations: light, and power, and emotion. She could not tell what most of it - really any of it - meant.

"It is subtle, but it is there," Silverlight insisted.

"Unlock the next rank in your astral sensing skill tree," Gadget murmured, "you'll get it then."

"That is an apt explanation," Silverlight agreed. January sensed the other woman draw back her power, and she allowed her own senses to fall from the astral as well. She opened her eyes, and saw Silverlight rise to her feet and step to the nearest table. "It takes practice, but you can learn a great deal from aetherial sensing. Maybe sometime we can set up a training session or two with you, our youngest sister, and some of the others. I have a great deal of experience in the higher realm."

She paused to reach into the folds of the loose gray and white robes that she wore. From here she produced a wooden box or crate, several feet high and wide, but narrow in depth. A pair of cabinet-style doors filled its front face. Upon this were stenciled the words "U.S.L.H. Library." At this point January did not even remark upon the fact that she had apparently stored such a large container upon her person. It was just magic. January could similarly summon her armor, and Blood Raven her swords.

Silverlight opened the doors of the crate, to reveal that it was in fact a miniature bookcase. Its interior was divided into two sides, and further bisected by a shelf that ran horizontally along its length. Its interior was crammed with books. They had faded leather or even wooden faces, washed out titles upon worn spines, and weathered pages within. She had seen their kind before. They were the type of tomes that Blood Raven's ancient occult library had been filled with. Likewise, they were the same kind that she had taken from the Hierophant's sanctum, and now filled several shelves back in the Witch House's den.

Silverlight reached into this miniature library and drew forth a book. It was a giant affair, bound in cracked brown leather, and locked shut with a silver hasp. In fact, the tome was too large to fit within the crate. But January did not even consider questioning that, no more than she did the magician's ability to carry around such a container within her super suit.

"That is pretty dope," Gadget whistled, and gestured to the small crate. "What is it?"

"It's a portable library," Silverlight remarked offhandedly. "They used to make them for lighthouse keepers back in the 1800s. This one is from an old lighthouse off Point Lookout."

"Oh yeah, I know the place," Gadget mused fondly. "Mirelurks, mutants, killer robots, and a pre-war brain in a jar. I got my gatling laser there."

When Silverlight looked at him quizzically, January explained.

"It's in a video game."

The lunar heroine shook her head and set the tome down gently upon one of the long, narrow tables that stretched out before the control panels. She unlocked its hasp and carefully turned it open. Then she began to thumb through its pages, turning each with care. January looked over her shoulder, and recognized the writing on the faded yellow pages as Arabic, but could make nothing more of them.

"Is that the Necronomicon?" Gadget whistled.

"No, I've got that at home," January murmured, thinking of the Scripta Mortis.

"This is the 'Aja'ib al-Makhluqat wa Ghara'ib al-Mawjudat - the Wonders of the Creation and Oddities of Existence." Silverlight explained. "It was written by Zakariya al-Qazwīnī in the 13th Century."

"You said the flail's name was 'Alsaahiq' correct?" Silverlight looked around for Ôkami. But as was his wont, the samurai/ninja was nowhere to be found.

"Yes," his voice issued from a dark spot along one wall. A moment later the Japanese-American's body resolved itself into view. It seemed as if he had stepped from the shadows. Even though there had not really been any shadows there to begin with.

Silverlight whistled. "You're good at the stealth thing brother..." she murmured under her breath.

January privately agreed. Given how everyone else nearly jumped out of their skins at the young man's sudden appearance, she did not doubt that they felt the same way.

"Alsaahiq? That means Pulverizer." Sunita was the first to speak afterward, "or Crusher?"

"Exactly," Silverlight nodded along with the other woman. "It is as I thought. Al-Qazwīnī speaks of a tribe of people in North Africa called the al-Ḍabyūn - the 'Hyena People'. They created the Alsaahiq to defend themselves from enemies who sought to destroy them. According to this, it was either a weapon, or a champion, or perhaps both. They poured their rage, their hate, their ferocity into its creation. It was the magical epitome of those things."

"However, they soon found that the Alsaahiq could not be controlled. It destroyed them, before their enemies could even reach them. From there it fades from history. It became a legend - a myth whispered around campfires. It was said that the Alsaahiq would come from the darkness and murder entire encampments in a fit of mindless rage. Then it would vanish into the desert sands afterward, its boundless rage and thirst for destruction never sated."

"So their technology destroyed them," Gadget murmured. "Well, good thing we all learned our lesson, and nothing like that has ever happened again..."

"Wait a minute," January lifted a finger to her chin in thought. "I read something like that just a few days ago! But it was Dr. John Dee I think, in one of his runic books. I've been looking through them a lot lately, so I can help our newest sister."

January lifted Sága to her face, and furiously tapped at her screen until she brought up the works of Queen Elizabeth I's court wizard in her book reader. She flipped through his Monas Hieroglyphica for a moment, then moved on to the much larger and more expansive sequel: the Multus Hieroglyphica of 1567.

"Here it is," January insisted. "There's a Hermetic rune that is said to contain the al-Ḍabyūn spirit. He doesn't go into details about how it works. But it does say that the bone-crushing bite of the hyena is required to break the spirit's hold upon its victim."

"So he's not a Dogman, but a Hyenaman?" Gadget spun in his chair to look back at Bill.

"Well, there is a precedent for hyenas in the Mediterranean world," Silverlight pointed out. "Al-Damīrī wrote that striped hyenas were vampiric creatures that attacked at night and sucked people's blood from the neck. In a similar vein, until the end of the 19th Century the Greeks believed that the bodies of werewolves - if not destroyed - would haunt battlefields as vampiric hyenas. They would suck the blood of dying soldiers. On the other hand, Pliny the Elder also suggested that placing the right foot of a hyena on a woman in childbirth would speed the delivery of the baby. It's folklore. So take all of this with a grain of salt."

"Wait, I'm the Hyenaman?" Bill's eyes widened. "Please don't tell me that's my supervillain name."

"You aren't a villain dear," Sunita insisted. She laid a comforting hand on his wrist to reinforce her words.

"She's right, he's not," Silverlight agreed. "You my friend, have fallen prey to an ancient threat."

"Besides, the Michigan Dogman still sounds a lot better." Gadget murmured.

"It does," January nodded.

"Why did you have to pick that flail up?" Sunita sighed. "If only you had just left it alone..."

"I didn't know it was an ancient Hyena People curse!" Bill cried. "I saw it after the battle, and I thought it was, you know, a trophy to bring back home. I was going to put up on the living room wall. Maybe then the kids wouldn't think their old man was basic."

"Oh the boys," Sunita fretted. "Thank goodness Aisha is there to keep an eye on them."

"We'll try to get you both home to your family as soon as we can," Cray's voice came over the comm. January noted that one of the screens within the control room had glowed to life. She saw the pages of the same book by Dr. Dee pop up on its face, and turn to the glyph in question.

"So... runes," Ôkami said pointedly. "Who do we know that is good with runes?"

"Are you sure about that?" Silverlight looked from the others to the Nadeems. "I don't know if she is ready for this."

"He's got a point though," January said. "She's our rune mage. Besides, she needs practice. It will be good for her."

"I will keep her safe," Gadget insisted, "no matter what happens."

"Wait a minute, who do you mean?" Sunita stood up and waved a hand in the air. "Who needs practice? Are you bringing in a... student to fix my husband?"

"We are all students," Silverlight assured. "None of us know everything. Don't worry, I think they are right. It will be fine."

"So that just leaves the bite of a hyena," Gadget observed. "Anyone happen to have one of those lying around?"

"I think the zoo might have one," January thought aloud. "I do have a contact there, thanks to my little adventure with Tigris."

"Tigris?" Bill wondered. "Is that a supervillain you fought?"

"No, she's a tiger," January said. "I helped wrangle her from a trap house. You didn't see it on the news?"

"I guess I was busy that day," Bill shrugged.

"So even if we get the zoo to loan us a hyena - and I don't believe I just said that - how do we get it to bite this... thing?" Cray said over the link. "I mean, hyenas are not exactly trainable. It's just as likely to take a chomp out of any of you."

"Perhaps we only need a hyena tooth?" Ôkami reasoned. "We could use it like a dagger, or a hammer, to crush the magical link between the spirit and Mr. Nadeem."

"Just Bill is fine," the Coney Island owner insisted. "I mean, we've got history now, given that I've tried to kill you a few times."

"That might work," Silverlight mused, one hand cupping her marble chin. "Magic is rarely meant to be literal. It is more the emotion and intent that counts."

"We are not going to be pulling out some poor animal's tooth!" January insisted, hands upon her hips. "That's just... no."

"So maybe we can drug the hyena?" Gadget suggested. "Then we can hold its jaws, and you know, make it bite the spirit."

"Are you people listening to yourselves?" Sunita cried. "This is all crazy."

"First time eh?" January smiled. "Welcome to the super life."

"What is it that Lighthammer always says: 'my life has gotten a lot weirder since I met you'?" Gadget laughed.

"Our lives have always been weird," Ôkami insisted with a dismissive wave of one hand. "We need to call in our alchemical sister for this. She will know how to safely drug the hyena."

"Right, let's get to it then," January nodded.

* * *
Renee
Xochitl might be an ubermensch wizard someday. Or not. Even I do not know!

Wicked!

Whoa, Bill is suffering a curse. Doggone curses, I tell ya.

Now that i know where Silverlight is from, I can hear a slight Bawl'mer accent. Even the most white-collar, educated inhabitants from Baltimore possess this accent, no matter how hard they try to get rid of it. Bethesda devs missed an opportunity to add some NPCs into Fallout 3 who speak in such a way, instead going with the Jersey accent found amongst raiders, or Moira Brown's flat, Midwest accent. Such a shame. Maryland, never properly represented in various forms of media.

Good gosh, sounds like Silverlight's got a Box of Holding under her robes. redwizardsmile.gif Am I reading that right? Yep, underneath her robe was a crate or a box. In a way this is way cooler than any smartphone.

Silverlight shakes her head at the Fallout references! Videogames. I wonder if she's internally rolling her eyes, as well.

That's cool how Sunita is able to help by translating a word. Hey, how are you able to create all the alphabetic enhancements that go along with some non-English words, like Al-Qazwīnī? Do you have a special keyboard or something? Or is it some special way of tapping those keys? I used to have a keyboard that, if I held down a particular button, it would access all those umlauts and other symbols. Maybe my current keyboard can also do this as well. If so, I have no idea how.

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"Why did you have to pick that flail up?" Sunita sighed. "If only you had just left it alone..."

"I didn't know it was an ancient Hyena People curse!" Bill cried


That's so classic. One of those highlights you'd see on next week's episode! as last week's Raven Sisters chapter came to a close.

I wonder who they're talking about, who is good with runes. Blood Raven is, but she's out of the picture. Hmm. The high school student, I'll assume. Because they're like "is she ready for this?"
Acadian
A fascinating exposition regarding the history and ‘fix’ for the cursed flail. And I love the humorous super banter you infused throughout. Jan needs to level up her astral sensing.

I’m thinking Silverlight can summon her library – the animation simply looks like she is pulling it from her robes it seems. Very handy!

What a hoot the way this is developing! All we need to do is borrow a hyena, get our alchemy sister to make a hyena drug potion, get our young rune sister to conjure up the right rune, and coax the drugged hyena into biting the evil spirit within. What could go wrong? ohmy.gif tongue.gif
WellTemperedClavier
Well, Shadowrun does reflect a pretty Darwinian mindset, so your samurai did get the job done. Cute story about the cat getting adopted.

Got it, thanks for the clarification.

Not surprising that Bill's under a curse.

That summoned storage space sure does sound handy. Though now I'm thinking I'd pack so much stuff in it that it'd become an impossible-to-untangle mess.

Neat reference to the book.

Ha! I liked Bill's reaction to all this. Hyenaman is indeed a pretty awkward super name. Though there is this guy:

https://www.nationalgeographic.com/photogra...ves-with-hyenas

Huh. Yeah, don't think an enormous demonic flail is a good idea for a decoration. Bill needs to watch more horror movies; he'd know this if he did.

Interesting problem-solving here. How exactly do you get a hyena to bite what you want it to bite?

Well, they haven't yet figured out exactly how to do it. But they do know they need a hyena, so that's probably the best next step for them.
SubRosa
Renee: Silverlight does have a bookcase of holding as it were. Both she and Kaelin have specialized versions of bags of holding, to suit their personalities. For Silverlight it is books, for Kaelin it is potions.

I did the Arabic letters in words like Al-Qazwīnī the easy way, I copied and pasted them. They usually keep their formatting when you do that, even in Notepad.


Acadian: I was not originally intending this to be a comedy episode. But as things began to gravitate in that direction, I did deliberately lean into it. We are coming off of the very high stakes conclusion of Season One with the Battle of Belle Isle. I think that rather than trying to up the stakes from there, it would work better to have sort of a light-hearted palette cleanser. A lot of TV shows do this. So I am taking a cue from them.

Honestly, I am not sure if Silverlight can just secrete that library on her person in some shrunk down version, or fits it into a dimensional pocket, or just summons it. For now at least it does not matter. It just looks cool when she pulls it out. That is what really does matter! biggrin.gif


WellTemperedClavier: I can't find things in purse, and I have hardly anything in there at all. I don't know what I would do with a bag of holding.

I am sure Sunita would have put her foot down if Bill had actually tried to put a (even non-cursed) flail up on the living room wall. He probably would have instead put it his a man-cave, along with that old guitar and his football helmet from high school, and his other Man-Artifacts.

The hyena is definitely a sticking point in all this. But the Alliance have faced worse problems. They will find a way to deal with this one too.








Book 11.32 - Raven Sisters

Bringing Xochitl to the bunker was as simple as flipping through the pages of the waypoint network. Concealing her identity from the Nadeems was another matter however. Thankfully January still had her old Stormcrow suit. It was a little big on the younger woman. But the belt cinched up tightly enough around Xochitl's waist to keep the pants from falling down. Still, the helmet was clearly too big, and kept falling over her face. Then the teen immediately dispensed with the gloves in order to free her fingers to draw.

"Do I get a super name now?" Xochitl practically gushed once she was in the suit. "I know, I could be Rune Girl, or Glyph Maiden!"

"Sigil," Ôkami declared laconically, and that was that, at least for the moment.

Bill and Sunita did not say a word as the newly christened Sigil went to work drawing upon a bare stretch of floor with colored chalk. But January could see that they were less than impressed. She was not worried though. She had faith in her apprentice. Xochitl - now Sigil - would come through. Besides, she was probably the only one of them who could draw more than a stick figure.

In any case, Silverlight knelt down beside the teen and once again produced her portable library. From this she produced a physical copy of the Multus Hieroglyphica. January could feel magic radiating from the book the instant that she drew it forth. It was a beacon in the astral. She could not help but to stop and walk back over to look over their shoulders at the book.

She immediately saw the source of the energy. It was the runes. They were not simply drawn in the musty old wizardly tome. They were enchanted there. Each and every one of them brimmed with magical power, ready to be activated. The book itself was a literal library of spells, each waiting to be turned on.

"Where did you get that?" January marveled.

"It's the original, written by Dr. Dee himself." Silverlight murmured. "I had to fight a dozen skeletons, a wraith, and a necromancer to get it. It is priceless. With it, one can not only see the runes, but feel the actual enchantments within them and study them in the astral."

"So can't we just use the book to do the ritual?" Gadget asked.

"It is too small." Silverlight frowned and shook her head. "Besides, I do not want to risk damaging the book. Like I said, it's priceless. In any case, the whole idea behind it was to demonstrate the runes to others. Ultimately it is always up to us to make our own magic."

"Wow, I thought learning magic was going to be all stuffy, like memorizing books and taking quizzes," Xochitl breathed and looked to January. "This slaps! You are way more dope a teacher than Blood Raven was!"

"I'll make sure not to mention that to her," January shook her head and smiled. Granted, she had to agree with some of it. Field trips always were the most fun part of school.

With that Silverlight turned back to Sigil and began to speak quietly with her. She laid out the open book beside them, so that the young mage could both see and feel the rune in question. January could not catch what they said, but given her gestures toward the rune that Xochitl slowly reproduced upon the floor, January imagined she was offering some pointers. She hoped so. It was clear that Silverlight knew a lot more about magic than anyone else there did.

They worked in the wide open space of the main chamber, as no one wanted to perform the ritual around the delicate equipment within the control room. They were just off to the side from the teleportation rune, which January used a moment later.

Once again she allowed the rune to fold space around her, and deposit her in the parking garage beside the Raven's Nest. Like most of the other waypoints, this was an out of the way place. In fact, it was at the base of a concrete stairwell at the very bottom of the structure. The only thing else there was a fire hose and extinguisher.

While January waited she brought up Sága. She opened her phone interface and put through a call. A woman's voice rang out in her ear a moment later as the receiver picked up.

"Dr. Amanda Duncan, Director of Animal Health."

"Hi!" January practically gushed. Her perky phone voice was once more taking matters into its own hands. Only with an effort of will was she able to restrain it, and continue on in a more sober tone. "This is Stormcrow. I was hoping you might be able to do a favor for me."

"Wow, well anything," the Detroit Zoo's chief veterinarian instantly replied. "Whatever you need, I can do it."

"Well, hear me out first, this is going to sound strange," January admitted. Now that she had to explain it herself, the idea sounded more harebrained than ever. But if an idea was dumb, and it worked, well then it was not dumb after all.

"I'd like to borrow a hyena," she declared. "Just for a little while. We need one to help break a curse on someone."

"Wait, you want to do what with a hyena?" the other woman's voice sounded incredulous. "Who is this? Is this a joke?"

"It's no joke," January insisted. "This is Stormcrow, and I'm totally serious."

She went on to explain the whole story of the Michigan Dogman - who had actually turned out to be a Hyenaman - and how they needed a hyena to free him from the curse of the evil artifact Alsaahiq. The doctor stopped her halfway through however.

"Okay, okay, okay," she agreed. "A month ago I would have said you were crazy. But since we were invaded by magical monsters from outside of reality, and we now have a glowing dragon looming over Belle Isle, let's just say I believe you. No, scratch that. I trust you. That's good enough for me. Just promise me that the hyena won't be harmed in any way."

"I promise, we will do everything in our power to keep the hyena safe for the entire time." January insisted.

Kaelin came down the steps even as she finished her sentence. The goth-punk had swung more to the punk end of the spectrum this time, dressed in a red plaid mini skirt, ripped stockings, a white halter top, and a torn leather jacket. With her was Harper, who was clad in a pair of black tights and boots. Over that they wore a long black sport coat, and a white shirt with a high, ruffled collar.

"Yes, let's definitely keep the hyena safe," the androgynous magician declared. The look in their eyes revealed a palpable amount of incredulity.

January smiled at the two, and wrapped up her conversation with the zoo's head veterinarian. Once off the phone, she turned to the new arrivals. She had not expected Harper to come. But given the circumstances, the more were the merrier.

January repeated herself once more, and explained their admittedly vague and unorthodox plan for ending the curse on Bill Nadeem. Kaelin nodded along the entire time, while Harper looked more and more amazed.

"You know, I can tell this is real," they said, "because if this was fiction, no one would believe it."

"Welcome to the Sisterhood of the Traveling Raven," Kaelin laughed. She turned from her lover back to January. "Knocking out a hyena is no problem at all. I can do more complicated things with alchemy before breakfast."

"Okay, we do have civilians present, so you'll both need to be on the down low," January warned the pair.

"Got it covered." Kaelin reached into her alchemical satchel. It was slung across her torso, with its strap nestled above one shoulder, and its wide pouch hanging against her opposite hip. If it were not for the magic that January could clearly feel within the black bag she would have thought it was an ordinary purse. From this the alchemist drew forth a jar of bright body paint, and began slathering it all over Harper's features, and then her own.

"Good thing you still have leftovers from Belle Isle," Harper mused.

"You two are going to have to get regular suits, if you're going to start doing this more often," January suggested. "I can give you Blackwood's number."

"Oh no!" Harper held their hands up in protest. "Belle Isle was a one-off, end of the world special. You can keep this sort of craziness to yourself."

"Yeah," Kaelin nodded. "I couldn't stop shaking for week after that. It took a forest of Mary Jane to settle my nerves. It's still giving me nightmares."

"Not all of us are made for this thing you do," Harper said more soberly. They slid one arm around Kaelin's waist, and held her close. "I honestly don't know how you do it, day in and out."

January shrugged. She honestly had no answer to that. She just did... what she did, and that was that. It certainly did not surprise her that others were not suited to the super life. It was honestly terrifying at times. She imagined that it took a certain sort of insanity for someone to enter the life, and stay in it.

She had nightmares herself. But that was normal after all. Who would not, after being kidnapped by a mad wizard and nearly sacrificed to a lich king from beyond time and space? She was sure the bad dreams about the Hierophant's horrific demise would fade however. She just needed to give it time was all.

It was the same with Hannah. She was so totally over her. It was not like she just had thoughts of the other woman out of nowhere. Soon enough, she would put the aftermath of Belle Isle in the rear view mirror just the same.

January could feel the enchantment upon the body paint. It was indeed the same concoction they had both worn the night of the Battle of Belle Isle. As then, she could sense that it had something to do with providing physical and magical protection, a sort of SPF 100 bullet and spell block.

Once they were ready January used the waypoint network to teleport the pair back to the Raven Bunker. She could see that Xochitl and Silverlight had made progress on the entrapment rune. They both looked up with smiles to see the newcomers. The teen looked at the alchemical satchel which Kaelin began to rummage through, and then said something that made everyone stop what they were doing.

"You're an alchemist right?" she asked. "Why do we need a hyena? Can't you make a potion to turn one of us into one? I mean, shape-changing is in plenty of books and movies."

January did a facepalm in synchronization with Kaelin.

"Why didn't I think of that?" the alchemist wondered.

"Probably because I presented you with a specific problem, and all you could think of was how to solve that alone." January mused. Then she turned back to her apprentice. "Good Gordian Knot moment Xochitl."

"This is going to be greater alchemy, so I will need some reagents." Kaelin held a finger up to her lips in a thoughtful pose. "I've got the basics right here in my satchel. But you will still need to get me one specific agent. I'll need some part of a hyena: hairs, or blood, or saliva. Really any portion of its body will do."

"Got that covered," January insisted. "That should make Dr. Duncan a lot happier as well."
Renee
ohmy.gif You copy-pasted those letters!! biggrin.gif So there isn't a super-easy solution, dang. Like I said, I used to have a keyboard. If the typist held down the FN button (FN meaning 'foreign', I've always assumed) and tapped the letter A for instance, it would cycle through all the different A-enhancements, like à ... á .... â .... ã ... ä ... å, and so on, and that was with a simple WebTV device. I know there's a way to get those accents with my current PC/Logitech keyboard, but it's not as simple.

Heh, they're disguising Xochitl. Probably don't have to worry about this so much, probably the Nadeems are too freaked about their current predicament. Then again, maybe the supers don't want them to realize they're about to get assistance from a high school student.

Glyph Maiden! Rune Warrior! Sultan of Symbols!

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"This slaps! You are way more dope a teacher than Blood Raven was!"


Phew... easy there!

Do not restrain the Perky Phone Voice, dear. It shall become thy hallmark, someday. Wow. Borrow a hyena. But then when she explains "this is Stormcrow", the request then becomes sort of plausible. Fortunately, the zookeeper gets it.

Anyway, interesting how much effort it takes to set up this magic. I'm sure Branwen and even The Hierophant had to spend days, months, maybe even years and decades of research into these matters. While the current team needs to come up with a solution NOW, and on the spot. 🔣

That's cute, the part when she suggests Harper and Kaelin are going to need to dress more obviously as supers! "You two need to start being more professional!" almost.

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It was the same with Hannah. She was so totally over her.


Hmm, are we sure about that, hon?

What's a Gordian Knot? Never mind, I'll just Google. But nice, what a moment of insight there, Xochitl. Does this mean they won't need the hyena? 🐕


Acadian
‘Sigil’ – good call Okami! Ever so much more pronounceable than ‘X-7’.

I don’t think Jan will ever drop the perky phone voice – and that’s a nice thing. smile.gif

And yup, she is so over Hannah. . . .

What a brilliant twist having Sigil make such a simple suggestion! Now, who’s gonna volunteer to be a hyena? Bill has experience for sure, but he may not be the best choice. Hopefully whoever takes the task on will be able to retain their ability to focus on their mission instead of starting to eat bystanders.


Nits:
’They were not simply drawn in musty old wizardly tome.’ - - Not sure but did you leave out a ‘the’ before musty?
’Now that she had to explain it herself, the idea sounded more harebrained that ever.’ - - ‘Than’ instead of ‘that’ of course.
WellTemperedClavier
Hmm, I dunno. Man-cave still seems like a bad location for a cursed flail (is there a good location for one?).

Sigil's a good name. And carries a lot of weight for the old 2nd Edition fans...

Ooh, the Dr. Dee copy. This one's been around for a while.

Ha! I like Sigil's reaction to January's teaching style. Blood Raven is an expert, but she is kind of remote. Not that it's bad for a teacher to be remote necessarily, but some students just gel better with someone who feels more down-to-earth.

"I'd like to borrow a hyena." I laughed out loud at this line.

Hm, if I were the vet I might ask for some video evidence of all this. I don't think I'd be much fun as a side-character in a superhero story.

So Harper and Kaelin are kind of like... part timers? Which is an interesting spin for a superhero.

Huh, Xochitl has a really good point.
SubRosa
Renee: I have learned how to use keyboard shortcuts to write a few special characters, like the á in Sága. But mostly I just copy and paste them. It is simpler, and saves me time.

Xochitl is a high schooler, so naturally she went for more youthful-sounding names. It reminds me of DC Comic's Legion of Superheroes. They are all teens who have names like Lightning Lad, Element Lass, Saturn Girl, Cosmo Boy, and so on.

The Hierophant did spend years, an entire lifetime really, learning to summon Abyssals. And it still killed him in the end. Likewise, Blood Raven has spent centuries learning magic.

Jan is totally over Hannah. She just said so after all! biggrin.gif

The Gordian Knot is an old Greek legend of a super-complex knot in the city of Gordium, that was supposed to be impossible to untangle. Until Alexander the Great came along. He took one look at it, pulled out his sword, and cut it in half. Problem solved. So a Gordian Knot moment is facing a complex problem and solving it with a direct and unconventional manner. Like Xochitl realizing that they really did not need an actual hyena, just someone shapechanged into one.


Acadian: X-7 sounds like it would be a good radio call signal though...

I came up with Sigil as quickly as Ryo did. I spent more time working out Xochitl's more juvenile names. Then Ryo's more serious name just popped into my head.

I think Bill has the worst kind of experience at becoming a hyenea! laugh.gif So it won't be him. Besides, they would not possibly endanger civilians like that. It will have to be one of the supes who takes the drink.

As always, thanks for finding those nits for me.


WellTemperedClavier: Rest assured, the team will come up with a suitable place to put the flail when all is said and done.

I don't remember the term Sigil in D&D 2nd Edition. Was it one of the class titles they had for magicians?

Depending on how you look at it, Dr. Dee is a relative newcomer. January's copy of the Scripta Mortis is 2,000 years old. My first inclination was to put an emphasis on really old books like that. But then I realized that being written so long ago, means they would not have information on newer developments, like the Hyena People in this case. So I have also been tempering the ancient magic tomes with newer magic ones, from sources like Dr. Dee and James Frazer. And of course Silverlight's annotated Scripta Mortis.

I am glad the humor in the last few parts came through. I wanted to impart some light-hearted fun into the proceedings, after the grim events surrounding the near end of the world that so recently took place.

We have often heard Blood Raven and January herself telling others that there is no shame in having powers and not being a superhero. I wanted to show people doing just that in Harper and Kaelin. They are mages to be sure, and do what they can to help. But they don't have the mindset to wear a cape, and they know it. So they only get drawn into things from the periphery, not directly such as January and company.









The Detroit Zoo is on the Stormcrow Map

The Spotted Hyena



Book 11.33 - Raven Sisters

With that January pulled up the waypoint network once more. Then she realized that there were no nodes within it nearer to the zoo than she already was. So she went out the old-fashioned way, via the same hidden entrance that Blackhawk and Lighthammer had so recently used. From there she rose up into the city skies, and winged her way north.

She was surprised that it was still day time. It had seemed like hours had passed. But really, very little time had gone by after all. The evening had just begun, so most people were off work. But given that it was midsummer, there was still plenty of daylight left. So below her people were making their way around on the streets, mowing their lawns, swimming in pools, running or biking along paths, and just going about ordinary life.

She followed Woodward Avenue directly to the zoo. The wide, divided thoroughfare was an easy landmark to use, as it was one of the major arteries that cut through the city and suburbs. That took her past her old battleground in Ferndale, where she had her first encounter with an Abyssal at Ferndale pride. It felt like ages had passed since then, even though in reality she knew it had been less than two months. Time certainly flew when one was battling monsters!

Just a mile later January soared over the massive water tower that belonged to the Detroit Zoo. It was painted to show a sunset of mouthwatering purples that faded to blue, with black silhouettes of various animals encircling its girth. Immediately beside it was an upraised parking structure. Both sat in one corner in the intersection of the wide, divided boulevard of Woodward Avenue and the sunken concrete of Interstate 696.

The entrance of the park itself lay just beyond. In a moment January winged over that as well, and into the zoo proper. Below her stretched out wide picnic areas, clusters of animal habitats, and large buildings such as the new penguin house and the giant glass dome of the old aviary. Then she winged her way over the wide walkways that led through the center of the zoo. She came upon a massive bronze fountain there, held up ten feet high in the air by a pair of sculpted bears. There she turned sharply to the left.

From here she flew over the cluster of buildings that made up the education center, along with a few open air restaurants and bathroom facilities. Then she was beyond the public areas, and into the administrative section of the complex. Walled off from the rest of the park, the buildings here were plain and utilitarian. They were a stark contrast to the often nature-themed kiosks, Beaux-Arts classical structures, and postmodern fantasies such as the new iceberg-inspired penguin house that filled the public spaces.

January feathered back on her wings to slow her descent, and dropped lightly to the ground outside of a plain, windowless structure here. She referred to Sága on her wrist. She had Dr. Duncan's phone number. That was all she needed to track the veterinarian. Thanks to the GPS in the doctor's phone, Sága could pinpoint her exact location. She used this to go inside, walk past several startled zoo employees, and go straight to the doctor's office.

"Stormcrow!" she looked up with surprise. "I wasn't expecting you quite so soon. The hyena is still in her enclosure. We haven't even begun to prep her for transport."

"I've got good news Doc," January held up a conciliatory hand. "We won't need the entire hyena after all. All I need is a few hairs."

"Oh, well, that's a lot easier," the doctor breathed an audible sigh of relief. "I'll be honest with you, I was more than a little worried about all of this. I mean, I am responsible for the well being of these animals."

"I understand completely," January nodded. "The last thing we want to do is hurt any animal. That's why we came up with a work-around."

"A work-around?" the older woman led January from the building, and back into the public area of the zoo. Soon enough people were staring. But there was no time to pause. They made their way directly to the African section via an electric golf cart. But given that it was across half the zoo from them, they had time to talk along the way.

"We are going to create a polymorph potion," January declared. "That way one of us can turn into a hyena instead. So we get all the laughter, and none of the possible tragedy."

"You just made a hyena joke, didn't you," the doctor said.

"Humor always works best when you have to explain it..." January mused somberly.

"So this is about that Hyenaman in the news then?" the doctor asked. "The one at the art fair today, and the Big Tire last week?"

"That's the one," January agreed. "The Hyenaman is really not working for me as a name though. I like the Michigan Dogman."

"But he's not a dog," Dr. Duncan insisted. "I saw the videos of him. He's a hyena, and a man, so... a Hyenaman."

"I know," January sighed, "but it just doesn't... land right. Sometimes the Rule of Cool is more important than actual science."

By then they had skirted past the arctic enclosures, and had entered into the space devoted to African animals. January marveled at the heads of several giraffes as they waved high up in the sky. Closer to her were several zebra, who meandered around this way and that within a nearer enclosure.

"How is Tigris by the way?" January wondered.

"Oh she is doing great!" the veterinarian piped up with clear enthusiasm. "As you know, she was badly malnourished when she came here. She also had a minor infection. But she responded well to antibiotics, and we cleared that up. She's eating healthy food now, and looking better every day. We will try to integrate her with the other tigers soon. Hopefully that will work out. Otherwise we might have to find another zoo to take her, or an animal sanctuary."

"Let me know when you do, I'd like to be here," January said. "If things don't work out... Well having a crow around might be helpful in breaking up a tiger fight."

"That sounds great," the doctor said. "It would be a huge relief to have you and your friends there when we do that. Sometimes animals don't get along, and that can go really badly when they are predators. Do you want to stop by and see Tigris now? We don't have her out in public yet, but I can take you to where she is."

"I wish I could," January mused. "But everyone is waiting on me. Once I get these hairs, I've got to get back so we can do our de-cursing."

"Yeah, right, sorry. We don't get superheroes here every day. To be honest, it's kind of exciting." Dr. Duncan breathed. "It would really suck for that poor guy to be stuck as the Hyenaman forever."

"You just aren't going to let that one go, are you?" January smiled.

"It's the most accurate terminology," the veterinarian insisted. "In fact we could call him Homo Hyaena..."

By then they were at the hyena enclosure. Two of the spotted carnivores prowled within. January noted how their thick, powerful shoulder muscles trailed to narrow hindquarters, and immediately recalled how the Dogman - or Hyenaman - had possessed the same top-heavy body shape. Other than that they looked like wolves or dogs in general, but with rounded ears that stood straight up, and short, small tails.

So far neither paid any attention to January, nor anyone else. They simply ambled slowly about the grassy hill within their glassed-off pen.

"We can go around back," Dr. Duncan said. "I'm sure there are some hairs they shed in the-."

But before the other woman could complete her sentence, January had leaped over the tall glass that separated the hyenas from the crowd of people that now looked on. Many of those people held up phones and even a few old-fashioned cameras. Clearly, this was going to end up on the internet.

January made it quick. She came down behind the two animals with barely a sound. She reached into her first aid belt pouch, and pulled out a pair of blunt-nosed safety scissors. Then she made a final, shorter leap to the nearer of the two predators. It had just begun to swing around to snarl at her, when she snapped out with the scissors.

A puff of hairs fell like snow as the hyena darted around in a circle. January reached out with her free hand to snatch them up before they could waft down to the earth. Then her legs propelled her directly skyward. A pair of hyena jaws snapped shut just beneath her toes as she did so. Then January's wings swept out and held her up in the sky, out of reach of the animal's fangs.

She stuffed her scissors back into her first aid pouch, and the hairs into another. She paused to give both the hyenas and people below a smile and wave. Then she turned her eyes to the south, and winged her way back to the Raven's Nest.

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macole
Wasn't Sigil the name of the D&D Planescape crossroad city? Those books are packed away somewhere in my basement, that's why I thought of it.

The Hyenaman, took some getting used to. Hangman kept getting in the way.

I do like the way you can take real-life location and mold it into your story world. Loved the way January gets away at the end. I could feel the wind as her wings beat the air to send her upward.
Renee
Mm hmm, yep, exactly. The shortcuts used to make accents aren't really so short, hence the need for copy-paste to make a word like naive have an umlaut over the I, and so on. I once tried to learn how to make accents so I could impress Lopov while we typed our messages, but the process was so convoluted.

Lightning Lad!

Yes, thank you, I did look up Gordian Knot last week. Sometimes getting an answer from a friend is better than from search engines, just because of that more-personal set of nuances we can give one another. Gordian Knot is also like that scene in Raiders of the Lost Ark, when the guy with the sword is swinging it back and forth all fancy, the idea being that Indiana Jones is supposed to be so entranced how skilled the sword-swinger is is while his demise is about to befall, and *blam* goes the gun.

It is quite daunting how little time has passed, that is true. Not a whole lot of time, yet so much has happened. It's like most of our game characters: all of this action (main quest, side quests, etc.) is packed into just a few short months of their lives.

Stormcrow finds the doc through GPS pinging of her doc's phone. indifferent.gif Eesh, that's so scary. True, though. Even my cheapie flip phone is not immune.

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Soon enough people were staring


I bet they were!

And me too.. I like Michigan Dogman better, too. Bet that must drive the zoologists crazy: But that's a hyena, not a common dog!

Yikes, don't get nipped by hyenas, hon! 🐕
Acadian
"We won't need the entire hyena after all. All I need is a few hairs."
- - Whew, after the first sentence, I had visions of needing the animal’s heart. . . not that Stormcrow would have gone along with the plan if that is what it entailed. A few hairs is much happier for the hyena. tongue.gif

Mission completed! Though now I have visions of the Stormcrow’s daring hyena hair grab going viral and producing the newest Twit Tok challenge, with plenty of potential Darwin awardees to attempt it. ohmy.gif

Seriously though, a fun episode and I’m looking forward now to who the lucky potion drinker will be.
WellTemperedClavier
Macole beat me to it, but Sigil's a city from the Planescape campaign setting, and probably the closest thing an infinite multiverse can have to a center.

Incidentally, WotC's apparently brought it back for 5th edition! Glad to see it return, in one form or another. I hear they brought back the factions, which I have mixed feelings about. 2nd Ed culminated in the factions losing their power, which I disliked at the time but came to believe was the correct decision, since they're kind of limiting in a lot of ways.

https://dungeonsanddragonsfan.com/planescape-5e-dnd-2023/

Makes sense. The magical world changes just as surely as any world, and that means you need to keep up-to-date. Getting the latest grimoire is like downloading the latest software update.

Ooh, I like the water tower description. Your writing really brings a feeling for Detroit's landmarks.

I'd be relieved if I were the doctor, too. Don't even want to think about the liability issues of hyena transport...

Heh, I laughed at the joke.

That is a good point. Hyenas aren't even related to dogs, i don't think?

Good to hear Tigris is doing all right.

All right, sounds like she got what she came for.
SubRosa
macole: I had no idea about Sigil being a city in the Planescape setting. I only knew Planescape was a video game back in the day, but I never played it. I did not even know it was a campaign setting for regular D&D. It does sound like a really interesting, if really weird, setting for a game though.

Hyenaman does not really roll off the tongue, not like Dogman does.

Setting this in the Real World - or at least a very close cousin to it in the multiverse - has had some bonuses and drawbacks. On one hand it makes things a lot simpler for me, as I can use the setting that already exists. For example, I don't have to invent how downtown looks, I can just look at pictures of how it really looks like.

On the other hand, it can sometimes be constraining to be stuck in the setting that already exists. I have found that using the real world as a base level and then adding in new locations and organizations on top of that has worked well. That also helps me reinforce that this is not exactly the same world the readers live in. Besides superheros being real, so are Worldwide Network News, Burger Baron, Fae Cola, the Technocracy, and the like.


Renee: Phone security, and tracking people through it, will become important in later Books this season. It is literally so simple that anyone can do it, but so many people are utterly oblivious to that fact. Granted, there is no reason to track someone like you or me. If the FBI wants to track me, they are going to be mighty bored following me walking from the couch to the bathroom to the kitchen every day. But if you were say, committing acts of terrorism, that would become very important.

January would definitely not want to get bit by the hyenas. That might damage their teeth!


Acadian: January would absolutely not sign off on cutting out any hearts! ohmy.gif OTOH, this will not be the last time we see Kaelin's polymorph potions put to use. January will find a clever use for them in the future.

Thankfully hyenas are rare enough that not many people would have the opportunity to replicate January's feat. Though granted, doing it to dogs, or other people, is a different story...


WellTemperedClavier: I looked up Sigil after you mentioned it last week. It is a neat setting. I had no idea it was a thing in D&D. While I was at it I discovered that D&D has wereravens, which are Lawful Good. Sounds like something January might play as a character, in addition to her dwarf Dora the Kneecapper in Shadowrun and her Kenku monk Harmony in D&D.

I added that water tower description in my final edit to the piece. I realized that I was really breezing over the description of the zoo, and went back to add in a little more detail. I am glad that both you and macole appreciated it. It does help the world feel more alive.

At least someone laughed at January's hyena joke. It was not great of course, but the hyena does laugh last after all...

I thought hyenas were canines until I read up on them for this story. Turns out they are completely unrelated.

I do plan to bring Tigris back for one more scene in a future Book, when the zoo tries to integrate her with the other tigers. I am still not sure how that is going to work out.








Alchemical Symbol for Mercury

Spotted Hyena Sounds

Harper's Hand is inspired by the numerous D&D Bigby's Hand spells.


Book 11.34 - Raven Sisters

Once back inside, January handed over the hyena hairs to Kaelin. The alchemist reached into the satchel at her hip once more. It was black, and emblazoned with what January had recently learned was the alchemical symbol for Mercury. It was the common Venus symbol for women: a circle with an equidistant cross that descended from its underside. But in addition this glyph also bore the added feature of a semicircle that rose up from its top. This reminded January of a pair of small horns, and added a touch of the masculine to the otherwise traditionally feminine symbol.

January noted that the interior of the satchel was divided into multiple folds, which her Raven Sister flipped through with ease. Each held vials and bottles tucked into little leather loops. There seemed to be no end of them. In fact, there were far more than could ever fit into such a small bag, and January was sure that she was only seeing a fraction of the interior.

Like Silverlight's portable library, this was clearly another version of a bag of holding. Only this was specialized to Kaelin's needs as an alchemist.

The punk potion maker produced a mortar and pestle made of green, veined marble. Then she poured in a few drops of liquid from one vial, and some powder from another bottle. Finally she added in the hyena hairs. She ground them all together into a brown liquid. The color reminded January of the hides of the hyenas she had seen at the zoo.

Through it all January felt magic rise within the other woman. A tiny thread of this flowed from her and linked with the concoction she was creating. She felt much greater magic there rise up and take the shape of a specific enchantment. Clearly, Kaelin was using her magic to unlock the power within the reagents. Even as the alchemist physically ground and mixed them together with her pestle, she was doing the same in astral space with their magical properties.

When she was finished, Kaelin swished the fluid around in the basin of the mortar, and held it up for all to see. January could feel the power that radiated from the draught. It smelled of hyenas - a musky scent that January was now personally familiar with - and its threads of energy spoke of transformation.

"Okay, who does the honors?" the alchemist asked.

"Oooh, can I drink it!" Sigil instantly volunteered. The teenager even held her hand up, as if she was in class.

"No." It was not just January, but practically everyone in the room that instantly replied.

"This will probably be dangerous," January explained. "Not the potion, but what comes next. I'll do it."

"That's why you can't be the one who drinks it," Kaelin reasoned. "I doubt the hyena spirit is going to go quietly into that good night. We are going to need you when it fights back."

"Then give it to me," Ôkami reached out his hand for the potion.

"No, we need you even more. You are the rescue man. You can walk through walls, and spirit people safety if things go sideways." Harper explained. Then she nodded to the katana at his hip. "Besides, you've got the magic sword."

"She's right," Silverlight agreed, and hefted her lunar staff in one hand. "Those of us with magical weapons and attacks will likely be needed for the confrontation that may arise here."

"Okay, me then." Gadget stepped up. "It sounds like my powered armor won't be much help anyway."

"But you can make force fields," January pointed out. "I don't know if they can keep out a hyena spirit, but it might be just the thing we need to keep the noncombatants safe."

"Well then, bottoms up!" Without another word, Kaelin lifted the mortar to her lips and upended the vessel. Harper tried to reach out to stop their partner, but they were too slow. By the time their fingers wrapped around the green marble basin, the alchemist had already imbibed all of its contents.

The transformation that came next was a little disappointing. January was expecting all sorts of dramatic body horror, with the other woman's skull cracking apart and elongating, shoulders widening, back hunching over, and so on. Instead her body just seemed to blur for a few moments. When it finally resolved back into clarity Kaelin was gone, and a waist-high hyena stood in her place. Even her clothing had vanished, apparently absorbed into the magic of the transformation.

She looked like the hyena that January taken the fur from at the zoo. Even the pattern of dark spots on her light brown fur seemed the same. With overly developed forequarters, a smaller hind end and short tail, she looked like a wolf or dog that had been stretched out of shape. If she had been placed beside the real hyena, January honestly could not have told the difference between them.

Kaelin the hyena raised her head and made a series of long whoops, each starting out in a low tone, only to transition to a higher note at the end. Harper shook their head and sighed. But they could not remain upset for long, as a moment later Kaelin leaped up on her back feet, planted her forefeet on the magician's shoulders, and began to lick their face.

"Alright, alright, save it for the after party," Silverlight laughed. "We have the rune finished. I think it is right.

"You think?" Gadget asked.

"We shall see soon enough," Silverlight replied coolly. "Magic is not a science, but an art. It cannot be copied and reproduced exactly. It comes from the spirit, and as everyone's spirit is different, everyone's magic is as well."

January looked over at the rune. Painted across at least ten feet of the concrete floor, it was brushed out in multiple colors. It was bordered by a huge yellow circle. Within this were curving flower petals in orange, what looked like a hexagram in blue, and other shapes drawn out in red and green. To say that it was complex would be an understatement.

She felt power radiating from the design. Unlike most spells, she could not sense links to bind it to its creators: Sigil and Silverlight. Instead it stood entirely alone, separate from any other entity. It was exactly as January had read about runes. Like one of Kaelin's potions, or Blood Raven's own waypoint network, or even a magic sword like Chujitsu at Ôkami's hip, it was its own individual magical being.

Now January understood why Blood Raven had once described magic items have having a life of their own. They did indeed exist beyond the power and will of their creators. They were the nearest to technology that magic ever got. Once created, anyone could use them, or at least nearly anyone. After all, Blood Raven's waypoints could only be activated by her blood. So it was clearly possible for an enchanter to place some authentication procedures upon their use.

"Right, let's do this thing." Gadget declared. "Sigil, Sunita, come back with me to the control room. I'll stand just outside, and be ready with a force field if need be."

"I can fight!" Sigil declared with youthful zeal. She looked from January to the powered armor hero. "Tell him Stormcrow!"

January stepped up to the teen, and laid a comforting arm around her shoulder. She leaned down, and whispered quietly into her ear, so that no one else could hear.

"I need you to keep Sunita safe," January reasoned. "She is your responsibility. Gadget's force fields might not work on a spirit. But you're a mage. I trust you to do this, you understand? Her safety is up to you now."

"You're just trying to get me out of the way, because you're afraid I'll get hurt." Sigil groused.

"Of course I am afraid you will get hurt!" January declared. "I'd be a pretty cold bitch if I didn't. We can talk more about this later. Right now, this is what being part of a team means. We all protect one another. Nobody dies."

"Right," Gadget said as the young woman finally relented and walked back with him and Sunita. The older woman paused at the door, and stared back toward her husband with a look of trepidation clearly etched upon her features. But she did go within. Once they were safely ensconced behind the armored glass of the control room, Gadget stepped back outside, and gave the thumbs up.

"Okay Mr. Nadeem, come and step into the circle," Silverlight motioned for the Coney Island co-owner and operator to join them at the glyph. "This won't hurt. At least I don't think so. Once we draw out the spirit, your part will be done. Then I want you go back to the control room as well. Gadget will be ready to help you with that."

Again, the powered armor hero nodded in assent. In the meantime January and the others spread out around the massive rune. She deployed her wings and separated them from her arms. She was not expecting to need precision, or speed right now. But the extra limbs might just help. Ôkami likewise drew his sword Chujitsu, and Silverlight readied her staff Mene. Even Harper took a moment and cast a spell upon themself. January could not tell exactly what it was for, aside from giving her the feeling it would provide the other magician with good luck. Finally Kaelin sat back on her furred haunches, and a nervous-sounding giggle escaped from her bestial throat.

Bill moved tentatively into the rune. It instantly glowed to life at his first step within its bounds. All of the colors that created the glyph - yellow, orange, blue, and green - now shone brighter and brighter from its inscribed lines. The National Guardsman paused at this, but continued on when Silverlight motioned him to continue forward.

A hum began to grow in January's awareness. It took her a moment to realize that it was not with her physical ears, but rather her astral ones. It was a sound that washed through astral space, like that of an oncoming wave. It grew louder and louder, causing January to turn her head this way and that to seek out the source. She was about to close her eyes and shift her senses fully into the magical realm, when the origin of the noise became clear.

That massive flail appeared in Bill's hand. The long haft looked like it was made of wood, capped with iron at either end. Three metal chains descended from the top, ending with those spiked rods. They now reminded January of iron rolling pins festooned with spikes. None of that struck her as amusing however. After all, she had seen them kill a truck recently.

Bill dropped to his knees only halfway to the center of the rune. Then he fell farther down onto his hands as well. It reminded January of when the Technocrat had altered gravity near the end of the Battle of Belle Isle. Like the Abyssals then, Bill seemed to be crushed down against the rune, as if he weighed ten times his normal amount.

With him went that terrible flail. Alsaahiq - its name was now clear to January in astral space - was pinned to the magical glyph as well, as if by glue. It began to shake in Bill's hand, as if some unseen force was attempting to pry it from his fingers. January could see Bill's knuckles turn white as he clutched the weapon ever tighter. At the same time as his eyes bulged, and his face constricted into a look of pure horror.

Then Alsaahiq was torn free from his grip. It skittered across the rune, and slipped down one line in its surface after another. Bill took in a deep gasp of air, as if it was the first breath he had taken since entering the circle. He rose to unsteady feet, and lurched away, only to fall unceremoniously onto his butt. Gadget raced forward to meet him. But before he could reach the circle Harper intervened in a most dramatic fashion.

The magician did something with their hands, and a moment later a blue light issued from one of their fists. It swept out in an expanding cone, only to solidify into a giant, transparent hand. It had to be at least five feet across, larger when it opened its fingers. This great hand folded around Bill and lifted him from the concrete floor. It swept him across the room, and set him down in front of Gadget. There it released him, and turned back to the rune.

Harper's Hand, January mused. Now that was a neat spell.
Acadian
Kaelin has a magic satchel of holding! Cool!

And a heated debate about who takes the potion. Well, a potion in the hand is worth all the debate in world and Kaelin ended the debate by upending the vial herself.

Jan was wise to try and convince Sigil that her mission was to protect Sunita. Sigil didin’t fall for it of course. tongue.gif

With all safety precautions in place, Bill take his place, only to be soon joined by that pesky flail. Heh, the rune seems to act like flypaper sort of. Separating Bill from the flail and getting Bill to safety is a good start, right?

Nice of Harper to lend a hand (groan). laugh.gif
Renee
Exactly, if the FBI or some other acronym organization wants to look at me, go right ahead. You'll be mighty bored while doing so. But this is why landlines still have validity, right? Some criminals refuse to talk too much over their cellphones due to this very reason.

My mom told me a story from the 1970s. My family traveled to Europe several times in my youth, using the fabulous book Europe on Five Dollars a Day. Somehow, the FBI or somebody began wondering how a mixed-race couple not long out of college could afford to to travel every summer. My dad worked for the government as well, so I think someone got concerned. Like, maybe someone thought he was really traveling over there because he was a spy. emot-ninja1.gif

My mom by then somehow knew that someone was eavesdropping. She could hear this *click-clunk* noise every time she used the phone. laugh.gif Knowing this, she began joking over the phone when gabbing to one of the other local housefraus, literally going out of her way to discuss discuss the latest coupons at Giant and other boring topics.


Anyway, yes, the symbol for Mercury (in astrology) is the same one for Venus, plus a couple of added 'horns', I guess. Pluto had a similar symbol originally, but us Scorpios aren't supposed to consider Pluto an actual planet anymore. mad.gif

Silverlight and Kaelin have the best Bags of Holding kits!! It really impresses me how they're doing all of this on the spot. Will it even work, this cure to return the Michigan Dogdude to just a dude? 🐶 Wow, that's crazy. So they're even using multiple planes of existence to brew up whatever they're mixing.

Whoa, the teen wants to drink the potion, but NO that'd be a bad idea. Too inexperienced. So Okami's wants to drink the potion. Brave. But again, no. They're having to make this concoction testing on the spot. Normally there'd be all kinds of test subjects in such a case, even for arcane, magical work, the equivalent of EARN CA$H for MEDICAL TE$TING we sometimes see in the Classified sections of newspapers, probably on Craigslist nowadays. But nope, there isn't time for any of that.

Kaelin drinks it, uh oh.

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"This won't hurt. At least I don't think so.


Ha that's a great line! .. Another this week! preview on the CW. I'm laughing but this is all sort of creepy in a way. Even though the Flail has been forcibly removed from Bill, nobody really knows what's going to happen in the long run. Guess we'll find out.
SubRosa
Acadian: A potion in the hand is worth a two in the stomach, or something like that. Kaelin just decided to skip straight to where she thought the debate was eventually going to go in the end. She may have learned that direct approach from January. Or Blood Raven.

I also enjoyed the obligatory lie to convince Sigil to get herself out of harm's way. Of course she had to see right through it. She has seen the same movies January has where someone tries to do that!

Flypaper is a really apt analogy for how I decided to make the rune work. It pulled out the Hyena spirit. Now it is up to the heroes to do something about it.

You might say that Harper is quite handy to have around. More than anyone else, they are the classic D&D Wizard. Even more so than Silverlight, who has some overlap in the Cleric areas. If I had to describe Harper in one word it would be: Fluid. They are always changing, always adapting. So they are a jack of all trades when it comes to spells. They are not the best there is at what they do, but they can do a little of everything. From make a gateway, summon Bigby's hand, ice up the floor, shoot magic missiles, or make tentacles rise up to entrap people.


Renee: Traveling Europe on just $5 a day sounds fun. I imagine there is a lot of hiking, camping, staying at hostels, and using public transit in there.

I had fun customizing bags of holding to fit the specific needs of both Kaelin and Silverlight in this book. It was nice, because I was able to make each fit their unique personalities.








Book 11.35 - Raven Sisters

However, January could still sense a link between Alsaahiq and Bill. It was invisible in the physical world, but in the astral it was an iron chain that bound the hapless restaurateur to the artifact. It did not bear the clean scent that most magic did. Rather this link felt foul, corrupt, like an addiction that one could not escape.

Clearly she was not the only one to sense it. For Ôkami leaped forward with a loud shout. His sword Chujitsu flashed under the lights, and howled like a wolf in the magical realm. He brought it roaring down in an overhand chop, straight into the magical link. But the samurai and his enchanted steel were both thrown back, as if they had struck some inviolable wall.

"I had to try," he sheepishly remarked a moment later.

With that Kaelin came forward. A series of loud, high-pitched giggles erupted from the hyena-woman's inhuman throat as she charged. A similar noise seemed to erupt from the flail itself, just a few feet away. Then Kaelin's jaws clamped shut upon the magical link between it and Bill Nadeem. Her teeth ground down upon the threads of magical energy. Harder and harder they pressed, crushing the power beneath them, just as a mundane hyena crushed bones within its jaws.

A loud screech rose from Alsaahiq, and there came a flash of brilliant energy through the astral. January found herself reeling, holding up her hands in front of her face by reflex. But she held her ground, as did the others around her. Once that magical shockwave abated it became clear that the link between artifact and man had not only been severed, it had ceased to exist entirely.

But that was not the end of it. No, January could see that it was just the beginning. The flail seemed to dissolve before her eyes. She felt the power within it rise up into the air, and form a great dark cloud within the astral. This cloud coalesced and solidified, even as the physical weapon on the floor faded away into nothingness. In mere moments the flail was completely gone.

In its place loomed a shadowy figure painted in dark earth tones. It hissed and wavered within the air, as if it was made up of numerous streamers of cloth blown taut by a strong wind. These ribbons or streams of power mixed together to form a general outline however.

It was much like the form of the Dogman that January had encountered at the Big Tire, and most recently at the art fair. It was humanoid in outline, but bore the massive, hunched shoulders and arms of a hyena, along with its nearly atrophied waist and hindquarters. Its head was canine in shape as well, with a long muzzle that sprouted fangs. Green eyes shone malevolently within the elongated skull, and stared at the assembled magicians.

Harper was the first to act, and engulfed the larger creature with their magical hand. But the claws which sprouted from the monster's fists ripped their arcane construct to shreds, and caused it to vanish entirely a moment later.

A brilliant, magical laser blossomed from the horned moon diadem that rode Silverlight's brow. This radiant energy lanced straight through the creature's body, and left a visible hole behind in its wake. The monster recoiled for a moment, then lurched after the wizard. But January intervened. She threw up her wings in time to meet the monster's claws. They skittered off her feathers, but only after cutting long furrows through their near-impregnable surfaces. That caused January to wince a moment, before she pushed down the pain in order to carry on.

Chujitsu howled in the astral, and struck at the hyena spirit. But the monster whirled and caught up the enchanted steel in its paws. It pressed both of its hands against the sides of the blade, sandwiching the steel between them. Ôkami pushed down hard with the edge, trying to slice the creature's paws apart. But its arcane flesh stood strong under the assault, and instead it shoved the samurai back.

January was about to lunge forward with her wings, in an effort to cut the monster in half. But another laser from Silverlight sent it dodging sideways. That sent it right toward Kaelin, who was still in hyena form.

January beat her wings down to give her velocity, even as she pushed off the ground with her feet. She soared through the air past Alsaahiq and scooped up Kaelin's canine form in her arms. The hyena-alchemist was heavier than January would have imagined. But she could lift trucks. At the end of the day, a big hyena was nothing to her. January flew away with the alchemist, and looped around toward the control room. A moment later she dropped her friend off near its entrance, even as Gadget was helping Bill through the door to the relative safety inside.

January looped back around through the air to rejoin the fight. Ôkami kept the monster occupied in melee by constantly putting himself right in front of its face. It struck at him with claws and fangs, but he either dodged aside or parried with his katana. At the same time Silverlight lanced one burning laser after another through its body, slowly but surely annihilating it.

Harper mixed things up with a spell that January had no idea existed. In an instant she created a field of ghostly tentacles that sprang up from the floor, and tried to snare the creature in their grasp. But Alsaahiq sliced through them with its claws, and what little remained of them vanished a moment later.

"Let's give it the Zerg Rush," January said through gritted teeth. She slammed directly into the creature, and sent it staggering backward. Silverlight joined in, wielding her staff at close quarters now. She pressed it against Alsaahiq's body, and used it to push the spirit down. Harper's Hand once more appeared out of thin air, and grabbed the creature by the head. Together the three of them shoved the monster to the cement floor.

That gave Ôkami the opportunity he needed. He held his sword with one hand on the hilt, and other half way down the blade, as if it was a spear. Half-swording thusly, he drove the weapon directly down into the spirit's heart. Darkness spilled out across the astral under the blow, like blood from the magical wound. Ôkami pressed harder and harder, shoving the katana deeper into the monster's aura. Even Gadget came up in the end. He leaped onto the samurai's back and literally lent the weight of his powered armor to other man's attack.

That was the final straw. With a terrific howl through the astral, the monster collapsed in upon itself, like a black hole. Those streamers of power fell into themselves, becoming denser and denser, smaller and smaller. They quickly grew so small that the allies had nothing to hold on to, and they found themselves sprawled out on the empty concrete floor. There was a final groan, and then Alsaahiq vanished entirely.

Well, not quite, January noted when she rose back to her feet with the others. That flail, that terrible artifact, once again lay upon the concrete floor. It was completely unscratched by the affair. In fact, it looked exactly as it had when they had started. If she had not known better, she might have thought it was a museum piece, or part of a cosplayer's outfit. But given what she did know of the artifact, she felt her skin crawl from looking at it.

Except of course, its link to Bill Nadeem was now severed forever. If nothing else, they had succeeded in freeing him from the spirit's dark grasp.

"Is there no destroying this thing?" Harper said what they all were thinking.

"If it were so easily vanquished, it would not still be here after nearly a thousand years," Silverlight pointed out.

"So what do we do with it, fire it into the sun?" Gadget wondered.

"Or perhaps drop it to the lowest depths of the sea," Silverlight looked to January. "We have a sister who could arrange that."

"Just so long as no one touches it, it's alright though?" Harper questioned.

"I saw a bunch of crates back in those storerooms, and some bags of concrete mix..." January mused. "I think that in the very least, we can insure that no one ever gets their hands on it again."

Kaelin yipped in agreement. The alchemist was still a hyena. She ran back from the control room to where January and the others all stood around the flail. Behind her, Bill, Sunita, and Sigil followed more cautiously. The two restaurateurs clearly had no desire to get too close to the cursed artifact again.

January stared at Kaelin, and wondered how long her potion would last? Then she realized that she looked exactly like the hyena that she had taken the hairs from at the zoo. She did not have photos to compare them, but she was pretty sure that her alchemist friend was now a duplicate of that same animal. Perhaps even down to the DNA?

She wondered if Kaelin could do the same, but with her own hair instead? If she could duplicate January, and then wear the Stormcrow suit, couldn't she and January Ryan be filmed in the same place, at the same time? If it worked with her, it would with the other members of the Alliance as well. This might be a solution to her secret identity problem. In the very least it was one more tactic to employ. She would have to talk to the alchemist about it, once her friend could do more than giggle and slobber.

In the meantime, Silverlight looked down at the rune around them.

"Once we get this thing safely concreted up, I'll take it to Calypso. She can bury it at sea." The wizard declared. "Then I'm going to tell her about this rune. If it worked this well at drawing out the spirit, imagine what a modified version might do to the plastics she is hoping to pull from the oceans? With a little tinkering, we might be able to put this on ships. Then they could safely gather it all up without harming any wildlife with nets, or nanobots, or even elemental spirits."

"A garbage glyph?" January thought out loud.

"Well then, let's get trashed," Gadget laughed.

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Renee
Ach, so the process is not done, yet? Poor Billy. I bet he'll never again pick up any sort of utensil or tool the rest of his life without double-thinking it. 🍴

Nice. Good job KAELIN! Oops, spoke too soon. Man, this flail is really got some power embedded within it. Not just within it, but all around and down and under. Good Gosh it is taking ALL of them, thinking creatively, again doing all of this on the spot. I bet this demon ... uh... Chujitsu, thought he'd just show up and mop the floor. Nope, he's getting his hindquarters kicked.

Yikes, Alsaahiq is still here! Is it even possible for any of them to simply pick it up and just drop it into a trashcan? I suppose not. Picking it up is how this whole mess started in the beginning.

Yeah, drop it into the sea, there you go. I guess. And there's also that one superhero who's flown to another planet, if I recall correct. Maybe he can take it to Pluto!

Acadian
Kaelin’s teeth did their job and freed Bill from that spirit. Quite a fight after that to destroy the spirit though. Once again, teamwork for the win.

Now what to do with the flail itself? Gadget’s idea of launching it toward the sun is a good one, albeit rather logistically demanding. Bottom of the sea encased in concrete sounds like it will work also and seems well within the means of the Alliance of Mages.

I wonder if Kaelin’s furry form will wear off naturally in time for if some sort of acrcane intervention is required to undo the transformation. That’ll be handy to know since January’s identity-managing wheels are already turning.
WellTemperedClavier
Apologies for running a bit behind. Time to catch up.

Yeah, the old Monstrous Manual had a bunch of were-creatures, by my recollection (I actually do have it somewhere, but I don't want to dig it out right this moment).

Didn't know that about the symbol for Mercury. Interesting.

Interesting conundrum. They have to figure out who they can spare for this... and it looks like Kaelin up and volunteered.

Ha ha! Well it looks like Kaelin's personality is intact.

Magic having a life of its own feels real. We don't have much control over what we create, and we lose whatever control we have once we let it out.

I like the descriptions of the colors.

Okay, so Harper's Hand got Alsaahiq. That means it's neutralized? Guess we'll see.

Nope, there's still a link. Figured that'd be too easy.

Hmm, not much luck for Okami here. Try, try again (with a different tactic).

Ah, good thinking on Kaelin's part. Since there's already a connection between the hyena spirit and the weapon, that might be the opening they need. And it seems like it is!

All right, something big is coming up here.

Zerg Rushes can be pretty effective. But it does seem like that whatever this animating force is, it's quite powerful.

Hm, putting the Alsaahiq in a crate gives me definite Raiders of the Lost Ark, vibes. But it might work if they bury it deep enough.

Huh, this is an interesting idea January has. Though I have to wonder if it'd be as simple as she thinks...

SubRosa
Renee: It felt anticlimactic to just end it with putting Bill in the rune and severing the connection between him and the flail with a hyena bite. So I added in the fight with the Hyena Spirit afterward to spice things up.

The Technocrat - Janos Heisen - has been to other planets, like Jupiter. So theoretically he could drop it in the Sun. Though it is a big ask. The bottom of the sea is an easier do.


Acadian: As always, it is a group effort to find success, hyenas and all. Janos Heisen could theoretically take the flail to the Sun. But I do imagine that would still be quite the road trip, even for him. Calypso can drop it in some ocean trench much easier.

I don't see the potion lasting too long. I was thinking about an hour or so. In the next book I will address it after January puts her super doppleganger operation in action.


WellTemperedClavier: I remember the old Neverwinter Nights 1 game had were rats. It was good pick, as they were all pirates and gangsters.

I decided to have Okami try and fail to sever the link with his magic sword, in order to show that it really did require something as specific as the bone-crushing bite of a hyena to break the curse.

A warehouse filled with other magical artifacts would be a fun place to lose the cursed flail. Hide it amid thousands of other crates. I always loved the ending of Raiders of the Lost Ark because of that. They dug up the ark from a lost city, and then buried it again in a mountain of minutia in some bland warehouse.





The blade that cut the Ring from Sauron's hand


Book 11.36 - Raven Sisters

July 18th

January stood within the Raven's Nest. She was clad in her Stormcrow suit. The rest of the Alliance was there as well, also suited up. So too was Xochitl, who was back in civilian clothes once more. In this case a pair of strategically ripped jeans and a tee emblazoned with a giant sunflower. Finally Cray was there, in the flesh rather than a voice in their ears. While he too was clad in ordinary attire, he was the polar opposite of Xochitl. Instead the middle-aged man wore a pair of razor-creased slacks, a dress shirt and tie, and a thin sleeveless sweater.

Just a few days ago the penthouse had felt empty, thanks to the negative space left behind after Blood Raven's departure. Now things had changed. They all stood in the quadrant of the three story loft that lay before the freight elevator. To one side was an iron staircase that curled up into the floor high above. To the left lay Cray's computer domain, which hummed with electronics and glowed with numerous blinking lights. To the right the formerly empty space now boasted a pool table, a dart board on one wall, and a pair of arcade games. Several photos from various past missions graced the walls here, such as January and Blood Raven at Ferndale Pride. The entire space had yet to be fully reclaimed, but the new furnishings were definitely a start.

Straight ahead of them was the black marble block that took up the center of the entire penthouse. Set against it now was a tall display case. Ensconced within was the original Stormcrow armor made by Gadget. Beside it was a low, wide case. All of the Abyssal-detection poppets had been laid out within this. These had of course been collected by January, disenchanted, and rendered down to nothing more than keepsakes of their hunt for the Hierophant. Above this was a large team photo of the founding members of the Great Lakes Alliance: Blood Raven, January, Lighthammer, Blackhawk, Gadget, Ôkami, and Cray.

Cray himself stood in front of another case that sat in the center of the marble wall. It was slightly taller than he was. Its interior was filled with velvet padding, with the distinctive outline of a longsword sunk into it. Cray leaned forward and set the hilt of a sword into the depression made for it. Then he stepped back and swung the face of the glass case shut.

The shards of Y Ddraig Aur now stood within the tall, narrow cabinet. Its blade had broken into three pieces, with long segments at top and bottom, and a narrow band in the center. The steel was gleaming black in color, polished to a high sheen. At one time the double-edged blade had been emblazoned with golden runes. But now the metal lay bare.

January had only to glance behind her shoulder to see where those runes had gone. Through the windows that lined the Raven's Nest's walls she could clearly see Belle Isle. Even two miles distant there was no mistaking the great golden light that now shone there, in the form of a dragon.

Those golden runes had been the blood of a dragon. The sword had been forged with it. That blood had called the astonishing being across time and space and universes to Belle Isle. The memory of that blood still remained there on Belle Isle, a beacon for the entire world.

The sword no longer roared as it once did in astral space. That draconic presence was now gone, transplanted to the island miles away. Yet even broken, the weapon still emanated magical power. January could smell it, without even deliberately sensing into astral space. Unlike the poppets, its enchantments were evidently not so easily snuffed out. Even with the essence of the dragon removed from it, and the matrix of its creation shattered, it still remained potent and powerful.

January wondered if breaking the sword and removing its former enchantment had bestowed it with a new one? The Scripta Mortis had spoken of this. Most magic items were deliberately enchanted. They were forged by mages such as Blood Raven or herself, who poured their energy into them, set it into a specific pattern, and then willed it into permanence. But sometimes artifacts were associated with great events. They absorbed some of essence of those experiences, and took up a life of their own. They were enchanted by the emotions and wills of the people around them, even without anyone intending to do so.

"The blade that cut the Ring from Sauron's hand..." Gadget murmured. Along with the others, he stared at the shards of the once - and still - mighty sword. January wondered if like that fictional sword her best friend referred to, Y Ddraig Aur might also be someday reforged and placed into the hands of a hero. Perhaps not by an elven king, but by a witch queen instead?

Would that queen be Blood Raven? Or would it be January herself? Or might it be Xochitl? Only time would tell.

"So she really is gone then." Lighthammer said solemnly. "I mean Blood Raven. She really isn't coming back if she left this here."

"She was a real pain the ass," Blackhawk sighed. "But I'm still sad to see her go. It feels like some of the magic is gone from the world."

"We make our own magic now," Ôkami insisted. The certainty in his voice was absolute. "She showed us our power. Now we use it."

"Alliance!" January declared. She put her hand out toward the others, palm downward. Gadget was the first to respond, and reach out to place his hand over hers. All the while he echoed the word. Ôkami, joined him, and Lighthammer, and Blackhawk, and Cray, and finally Xochitl. In the end they all stacked their hands atop one another in the circle.

"Alliance!" they announced in unison.

"So do I get my own suit now?" Xochitl asked.

"No!" all the others answered, again in unison.

"When you're a legal adult, we'll talk about it," January breathed.

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This is Gilda Gadfly of Worldwide Network News, and I am bringing you both an action update - and a super fashion alert - all in one. But who has had a glow up you ask? Well none other than our beloved Crowgirl and her pals from the Great Lakes Alliance. Yes, everyone's favorite Allies are now sporting a brand new logo.

If you look closely at the footage of today's dust-up with the heinous Hyenaman, you will note that gracing the left shoulder of each is now a golden dragon. Clearly this is an homage to the now world famous Detroit Dragon - Y Ddraig Aur. In an interview that Stormcrow gave with a local reporter, she explained that this is not their official team livery. Rather this is a show of solidarity with all the people from different walks of life who came together to defend the planet. In support of this Puerto Rican superheroine Viuda has also been recently spotted wearing the same logo. It remains to be seen if other capes will adopt the badge as well.

Of course we all saw this new fashion upgrade in the Allies' latest public outing - their second and final encounter with the new supervillain Hyenaman. As you may recall, their first battle with this Laughing Hyena was at the Big Tire, located near Detroit's Metro Airport. The crafty carnivore escaped that encounter as the heroes were obliged to save the landmark from destruction. This time however, the Allies were victorious, and were able to capture the horrific hyena in the middle of the Ann Arbor Art Fair.

They whisked the villain off to their secret headquarters, only to reappear a few hours later to give the full story to local news reporter Priya O'Neill. As it turns out, the Hyenaman was the victim of a magical curse, placed upon him by an enchanted flail known as Alsaahiq. This is what caused him to turn into the Hyenaman and go on his berserk rampages. I could not make this up myself folks. With the assistance of some magical super friends who wish to remain anonymous, the Allies were able to break the cruel curse, and free the man from the hyena.

Michigan Attorney General Dana Essen has announced that no charges will be pressed against the Hyenaman, and his identity is being kept under wraps. As I am sure we all know, this is in accordance with the Shepherd Act of 1925. It states that individuals cannot be held liable for actions taken while under meta-human influence. It's the same law that makes testimony compelled by meta-human power inadmissible in a court of law. It was of course named after a supervillain calling himself the Shepherd, who mind-controlled his victims into committing crimes and then perjuring themselves in court after being arrested.

In related news, there was no sign of Blood Raven during either this final battle with the Hyenaman, nor the original encounter days before at the Big Tire. In fact, she has not been seen in more than week. Her last public appearance was at the press conference that she, Stormcrow, and Michigan Governor Gretchen Whitaker gave after the Battle of Belle Isle. This has led some to speculate that the Raven may have retired, or at least taken a well-deserved vacation. If that is the case, then have a Mai-Tai on me Raven, you've certainly earned it!"
Acadian
A welcome respite from the recent combat escapades.

I’m glad you spent some time describing the changes made to the Alliance’s nest since Blood Raven’s departure. And with a circle of hands, all for one and one for all! But no capes for minors – Sigil will just have to be content with a cool callsign for now.

Gilda’s report was great. It is very clear that, even if she doesn’t realize it, Stormcrow is getting quite adept at actively shaping her public story instead of just leaving the media types to ignorantly try to fill in the gaps like they historically did with Blood Raven due to her eschewing them. They’re going to tell a story, so might as well have a hand in shaping it. A nice bit of depth and worldbuilding you worked in regarding the Shepherd Act of 1925.
Renee
Interesting that she's keeping the poppets. They make good references, I suppose.

The magic within the Flail is also similar to Y Ddraig Aur, in the sense that it's not possilbe to just make its spellbound essences go away. bluewizardsmile.gif

Wow, listen to Blackhawk rant for a moment against her mentor! Even if it is true Raven is a pain.... whistling.gif that's pretty bold.

Xochtil wants a superhero suit!

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The crafty carnivore escaped that encounter as the heroes were obliged to save the landmark from destruction. This time however, the Allies were victorious, and were able to capture the horrific hyena in the middle of the Ann Arbor Art Fair.


Notice that journalistic pattern: CC EE HH AAA. I forget what that's called, it's a certain type of literary device. Motel Money Murder Madness. Crafty Carnivore Escaped that Encouter... Horrific Hyena.... Maybe she's doing this subconsciously, or maybe she wrote it that way.

Then again, maybe I'm overthinking. tongue.gif But I notice patterns like this.

Ah, the Shepherd Act. So this alludes to all that legal-speak we were discussing a few chapters ago. Those under the influence of meta-fantastic influences aren't responsible for their actions, at least in this case. Looks like Billy might be off the hook, at least Criminally.


SubRosa
Acadian: The final scene in the Raven's Nest was a late entry. It was only after the entire book was finished I realized that I needed to start filling up that empty space left behind by Blood Raven's departure. That is what the entire book is about really. So I had to figure out how to do that, and I finally came upon the idea of using trophies, mementos, and the like. Team photos will be added soon as well, probably with one from the aftermath of every battle from now on. Given how the Allies tend to ally with others outside the official team, that will likely include a lot of others. I might go back and add some in now that I think about it.

Definitely no capes for minors! Child Soldiers is not the route anyone in the Allies wants to go down.

January is definitely stepping into the role of super influencer. Or at least making a conscious decision to shape the narrative. The media is going to become a battle ground in the future in fact.


Renee: The poppets are items of past quests. So they make good display pieces.

Blood Raven was never Blackhawk's mentor. Blackhawk is the Canadian super with magnetism/metal powers. She's not a magician.

Xochtil is kind of like Luz from the Owl House. Very quick to act, a little slower on thinking about what she is doing. Thankfully for her, she has a lot of other, old people around her to curb her reckless impulses, and give her a chance to just grow up.

I do have a specific pattern of speech that I go for with Gilda. I don't know if there is a name for it. It is just something I associate with tabloid reporting, with a desire to punch of everything to make it seem more lurid. So there is usually an adjective before every noun to pump it up, like a canny canine, or a heinous hyena. Gilda is not so much reporting the facts, as she is using them for entertainment.

The Shepherd Act was a law that I knew had to be around for a long time. I just never had the need or opportunity to include it directly until now. Given how mind control is a part of any super universe, it stands to reason that the law would have adjusted to account for that fact that people can be forced to commit crimes, and lie, and the like. Likewise, it also protects people from someone reading their minds and attempting to use that in court. Because a telepath might be lying about what they actually read in someone's mind.

So Bill is off the hook for criminal charges. He was quite literally not in control of himself when he was the Dogman/Hyenaman.









This Book's story was inspired by a real world Broken Arrow incident

B-52G Pic

Mk 39 Nuclear Bomb


B-52 interior walkthrough - starting at the bomb bay

Same video - starting at the cockpit's lower hatch


B-52 Cockpit layout




Book 12.1 - Broken Arrow

January 24th, 1961

Rook slid the Ravenwing behind the B-52. The bomber was gigantic compared to his tiny craft, especially since he currently had its stealth mode engaged. Normally the size of a small plane, now the corvid-shaped flier was the literal size of an ordinary bird. While it would be completely visible to the naked eye or electronics, it was naturally quite unlikely to elicit any undue attention. To the outside observer it was just a bird after all, the same as millions of others that filled the skies every day.

With just a thought Rook banked hard. That sent the Ravenwing into a loop up and over the tail of the massive bomber ahead. This avoided the quartet of machine guns that sprouted from the rear of the plane. Even though the crew was not likely to pay attention to him, there was no reason to tempt fate after all. With another telepathic command relayed from his command helmet to the ravencraft, Rook's vessel evened out its flight, and slid its belly down toward the top the bomber's fuselage.

It was all going according to plan. That ground crewman he had bribed at the Air Force base had been right on the numbers with the flight schedule of this particular plane - call sign Keep 19. Now here he was, just a few feet away from a pair of nuclear bombs, and his destiny. They were well-guarded back at the airbase, and everywhere else the military stored them. But they would never imagine anyone would be capable of stealing one in mid-air!

All he would have to deal with would be the flight crew. But they weren't real soldiers. Not like his father had been - God rest his soul. No, these were pilots, button-pushers and switch jockeys. Like those smug bastards with their clipboards and glasses who had declared him unfit for service.

Rook would show them who was fit. He had built the Ravenwing with his own two hands. Never mind that man who had provided the titanium and aircraft aluminum, and actually did all the cutting and welding. That was just to build the airframe. The real work had been the enchanting that he had done. His power, his will, bent to remake reality in his own image.

It had taken him years. Recovering the primordial air from the top of Pikes Peak had been an adventure all on its own. Not to mention the bank robberies he had to make to fund the physical construction. But after all the trials and tribulations with the neural interface and the shrinking system - especially the one that had left him stuck the size of a bird for an entire week - the actual enchantment of the craft had been easy.

Weaving the primordial air into the hull of the craft had gone exactly as the Scripta Mortis had explained. The same had been true of James Frazier's notes on using sympathetic magic to infuse it with the bones and feathers of living rooks. Well, crows too, and magpies, and even a few common ravens. There was no need be too picky when it came to corvids after all, they were all pretty much the same in the end.

It had taken him years, but the Ravenwing finally flew high in the sky. At 31,000 feet, it was higher than he had ever soared on his own, twice the height of Pikes Peak in fact. And at over 500 miles per hour, it was much faster than he could ever even think of doing by himself.

His creation was born from the sky. It was a literal part of it in fact, thanks to that primordial air. It was the very building block of the element of air, its very essence in purest form. It was no wonder that alchemists had sought after the primordial elements since time immemorial. He still could barely believe the power it had infused within his bird-shaped plane.

Rook pushed a thought to deploy the landing gear. The Ravenwing responded by lowering its two clawed bird's feet from the underside of the craft. He eased down closer and closer to the fuselage of the gigantic bomber underneath him. He was about to make contact, when he realized that he was still miniature sized.

That would not do. He would automatically return to full size once he exited the craft. But he was going to have to get those bombs into the cargo hold of the Ravenwing. That was not going to happen if it was the size of an ordinary corvid.

He concentrated on changing the size of the craft. He had manual controls. Straight ahead of him in the cockpit were the standard six pack of flight instruments, such as airspeed indicator, altimeter, and so on. One of his hands gripped the control stick that rose up from the floor between his feet. His other hand rested near the manual throttle knob on the left side of the cockpit. More switches and levers lay at either side of his pilot's seat, and along a panel over his head. But they were just a backup, in case something went wrong with the telepathic interface.

But so far, the mind meld he had created with his craft was flawless. He was the plane, and it was him. He could feel the air flowing across its wings, just as if he was standing outside himself. He could see from the plane's eyes, again just as if they were his own. The roar of the B-52's eight jet engines filled his ears, competing with the buffeting of the wind at this terrific speed.

The Ravenwing responded to his telepathic command and sprang up to full size. The wind rocked the expanding airframe, and Rook had to fight to keep his flight path steady. He nearly slammed into the fuselage of the bomber underneath him. But he was able to trim his flight just before a wingtip sliced through the metal roof of the B-52, and soon enough he had his full size plane once more in a steady flight path.

Even with the Ravenwing at full size, the bomber under him was still massive in comparison. The B-52's wingspan was nearly twice that of the Ravenwing, and its length was over three times that of the corvid-shaped craft. Rook could not even guess at the mass of the big BUFF, except to be sure that it easily dwarfed his own nimble ravencraft.

But he was the predator, the raptor in the skies. Keep 19 was nothing but lumbering prey. It was a sleeping elephant that was about to get a very rude awakening.

That came as the talons of the Ravenwing's feet dug into the roof of bomber's fuselage. The enchanted steel claws easily punctured the airframe of the mundane aircraft, and dug deeply into its skin. He could sense it through the neural network. He could feel the hull of the B-52 give beneath his great talons. He curled them inward in a vise-like grip, and locked the Ravenwing to the plane below. He could feel bursts of air jetting out of the cracks in the damaged fuselage, and flowing past his claws. But he paid that no mind. It was nothing compared to the turbulence that already hammered his plane.

Now he did turn his gaze to the manual controls that surrounded his one-man cockpit. To either side of his flight chair lay short rows of basic instruments. A handful of toggle switches bracketed each. He flipped a few. That locked the landing gear in place, and left the plane on a straight and steady course. Finally he hit a switch above, and heard the cargo bay door behind him slowly hum open.

Rook raised his hands and pushed the massive, corvid-shaped flight helmet up from his head. It slid up on the mount that connected it to the steel frame of his flight seat. Glossy black corvid feathers covered the now bared head-rest of the chair behind him, while leather padding sheathed the rest of the seat.

He slapped free the buckles that strapped him into the chair. Then he clambered to his feet, careful to avoid bumping his head against the flight helmet, which was now locked to the top of the chair. He stepped back, and squeezed between the two narrow seats that sat behind and to either side of the pilot's chair. Each of these hugged the walls of the fuselage, and left a narrow corridor free between them. Made for future passengers, they lacked the telepathic helmet and manual controls of the pilot's station.

Thankfully he had always been a slender man. So sliding out of the cockpit was really not that difficult. In a moment he stood at the base of the Ravenwing's head. A small round hatch led down through the hull below at his feet. A few feet beyond was a similar hatch, only this time in the ceiling overhead. Farther back in the aircraft lay the cargo bay.

The ravencraft widened out dramatically here, just as the body of a living bird would. Bare metal frames and stringers revealed the bones of the craft, as they encircled the fuselage from side to side and front to back. The floor however, was flat, but for a few inset depressions containing rings and brackets to tie down cargo. The space within was just large enough to fit a small truck, with room to spare on either side.

That should be plenty of room for the bombs. After all, how big could they be? He had never seen a nuclear bomb before. But if they could fit in planes, they couldn't be that big and heavy after all, right?

The walls of his craft were not bare. Nestled between the structural ribs were jump seats, a folding cot, and numerous lockers and storage containers. He had heard they were putting radar ovens in some ships now, for heating up food. Apparently they used microwaves. Maybe he would be able to steal one of those someday?

Wind filled the interior of the cargo bay. That forced him to take a moment to grab hold of one of the titanium stringers to hold himself steady. Several canvas straps and their attached buckles whipped past him. Before he could even think about it, they rocketed out the back of the open cargo hatch at the rear of the Ravenwing, and vanished into the sky.

Damn it! Rook silently cursed. He had been planning on using those to tie down the bombs. He fumed for several long moments. Then he pushed on. He would just have to improvise. After all, no plan survived contact with the enemy. That was what his father had always said after all.

He would know, given how he had died.

Rook took a moment to check his suit, and make sure his helmet was firmly set around his head. This was not the flying helmet built into the Ravenwing. This was the smaller, form-fitting headgear that he wore with the Rook suit he had enchanted. It covered his face and protected his identity. But right now - and more importantly - its enchantments provided him with a never-ending supply of air to breathe, even at this high altitude.

The black fabric was interspersed with leather padding, and real rook feathers fringed his neck and were sewn into the wing-shaped cape that hung down his back. Well, normally the cape hung there. Now the wind inside the cargo bay whipped it around his torso, and threatened to pin his arms to his chest.

Not that he needed wings to fly. He could do that with magic. But sometimes you just had to look the part. He was the Rook after all, master of the air, and greatest supervillain of all time. Or at least that was what everyone would say after he pulled off this heist.

Two nuclear bombs, that would make him famous. He didn't even know who he would sell them to. The Chinese? Israel? India? It did not really matter in the end. The money would make him rich beyond his wildest dreams. But more importantly, he would go down in history as the man who seized two hydrogen bombs in mid-air.

He walked carefully down the length of the cargo bay. The metal ramp had swung down to meet the fuselage of the B-52 below. Above him stretched out the tail section of the Ravenwing, too small to contain anything but some basic control systems and a pair of small storage tanks for drinking water.

He clambered down the ramp and into the open air. He did not fly. He had a suspicion that hitting the air at this speed might just fling him right off the plane. Instead he willed his feet to lock to the metal skin the airplane under him. His magic flowed through his body, and made his desire reality. Now no matter how forcefully the wind plucked at him, he remained firmly set upon the plane.

He took a few steps along the fuselage. Once good and clear of the Ravenwing's cargo hatch he called up the magic he had invested within his suit. This time it manifested as a single, long claw that stretched out from his forearm. It was black as onyx, and its serrated edge gleamed in the sunlight. He dropped to one knee, and plunged the arcane weapon into the roof of the B-52.

Metal screamed in torment, and the enchanted sword sliced it in twain as easily as a hot knife through butter. He sawed through the skin of the massive airplane, and created a long cut across the fuselage. Then he turned the blade, and hacked out another long slash. Twice more he cut through the hull, continuing back the way he had started, and finally across the width of the craft once more.

Finally a large, rectangle of metal peeled free of the fuselage. Rook had to dodge aside to avoid being struck by the door-sized hunk of plane. It went pin-wheeling away through the air, only to clip the high vertical stabilizer of the B-52 an instant later. Metal disintegrated under the hurtling plate of debris, and the entire tail fin was sheared off in an instant. The hull plate went flying on and vanished into the sky, taking with it the entirety of the vertical stabilizer and rudder of the massive airplane. Left in its wake was nothing but a jagged stump, which revealed the frames and stingers that poked up from the damaged skin of the craft like broken bones.

The B-52 lurched beneath Rook. Only the magic that locked his feet to the fuselage kept him from being thrown off the plane and out into the open sky. He rocked there as the wind buffeted him, and the bomber began to roll to one side. Then something bright and shiny came flying out of the hole he had just created. He recognized it as a clipboard as it struck him in the face with the force of a charging rhinoceros.

Stars filled his eyes, and the world spun around him. He shook his head in an effort to regain his bearings. Soon the world began to come back into focus, and he realized that the B-52 had evened out from its roll. But now it gradually pitched downward as it dropped to a lower altitude. Whether that was intentional, or because it was slowly crashing, Rook could not guess.

His head throbbed from the force of that clipboard. It felt like Mickey Mantle had hit a home run right into his face. But he did not have time to think about that. He had to move. He leaned down and dropped through the hole he had created within the B-52. Once inside, the gale-force winds that had constantly buffeted him above vanished. Now it was merely a roar in his ears that emanated from the hole overhead, that fought with the noise of the eight jet engines nearby to block out all other sound.

He was on a narrow catwalk that stretched along the right side of the fuselage. It ran back toward the stern of the plane. There the compartment he was in ended at a bulkhead, with a yellow hatch that lead into the now broken tail section of the plane. At the other end of the bomb bay the catwalk likewise ended at another bulkhead, with a similar door that lead forward to the cockpit.

Rook ignored all that, for immediately beside him hung his prizes. Two massive bombs were slung there in the belly of the airplane. His eyes goggled at the size of the things. Over ten feet long apiece, and about three feet around, each bomb was a plain cylinder with a rounded nose. Four short tail fins sprouted from their widened rears, seemingly too small to be of much use. Each bomb was painted olive green, with several lines of writing in bright yellow paint near the nose that listed out their specs. The part that said Mark 39 was the only thing that made any sense to Rook. The rest was all just gibberish to him.

How was he going to get these up into the Ravenwing? Cutting them free from their bomb cradles would be simple. His claw would handle that. But they were far, far larger than he had expected. They had to weigh tons, literal tons, not figurative ones. Even with magic, he could never lift that much.

Maybe he could rig up a winch to pull them up one at a time? He stared up at the hole he had created in the fuselage overhead. He would have to make that a lot bigger as well.

That was when the forward hatch swung open. If it had made any sound, Rook could not hear it over the roar of the wind overhead. A man wearing a flight suit came into the bomb bay, with the name "McCown" stenciled over one breast. He was young, probably Rook's own age. A flight helmet covered his head, with the visor pushed up to reveal his dark eyes. An oxygen mask covered his mouth and nose, with a hose that led to a metal bottle that was slung at his waist.

The crewman's eyes boggled at the sight of Rook. It was the same as when he had robbed those banks. People saw the suit, and it terrified them. They knew that they were dealing with a real live super, not just some ordinary thief. That was all it ever took for them to fold up and do whatever he wanted.

This man - named McCown apparently - was no different. He took one look at Rook and turned around to flee through the hatch. Without thinking Rook went after him, and plunged into the compartment beyond. But McCown was too quick, and Rook found himself bogged down in the tunnel that led past the now-retracted landing gear of the B-52. Hoses, pipes, conduits, and all manner of components protruded out into the passageway, making it a tight fit. Even worse was the searing heat. Even though they were insulated, the thick pipes that ran about the space radiated scorching temperatures, and turned the entire chamber into a blast furnace.

But he got through it, even if not as adeptly as the bomber crewman had. Once he was past it he leaped out into a small compartment. A square hatch was set in the floor at his feet, and Rook guessed that was the normal way into and out of the aircraft. To one side was a plastic cup stuck into a pipe that ran down the side of the fuselage, and it took a moment for him to realize that this was an ersatz urinal. Behind it was a metal ladder that led up to another level of the crew compartment overhead.

Beyond the ladder a pair of ejection seats faced away from him, toward the nose of the B-52. They sat before a confusing array of control panels that ran clear across the compartment from one side to the other, from the ceiling to waist level. Rook had no idea what all the screens, dials, switches, and readouts were for. But they certainly looked complicated.

Two more crewmen rose from those chairs as Rook entered. They each had .38 revolvers in their hands. They looked like the ones the cops who had pursued him after his bank robberies had carried. They may have even been the exact same model for all that Rook knew. He had never really cared much for guns. He was a mage after all, and above such mundane contrivances.

McCown - the first one he had seen - stopped at the ladder going up and also produced a sidearm. He was shouting something through the open hatch to the compartment above. But Rook could not make out the words. His ears were filled with the rushing of his own blood, and the pounding of his own heart, much less the all-pervasive drone of the plane's eight massive jet engines.

Then McCown awkwardly jerked his gun forward. Rook acted on reflex, and threw out his left hand. From it an arcane shield sprang in front of him. It was an oval disc that covered him from head to toe, and gently curved back toward his sides. The gun sounded like thunder in the confined space. But the golden light of the arcane shield stopped the bullet with no difficulty.

Rook felt it impact the shield, and send a shiver through his hand. He heard the bullet ricochet off the barrier, and an instant later one of the crewmen from the two electronics stations clutched at his chest. Blood sprouted from where his fingers splayed against his flight suit, and he lurched forward.

That sent him directly into McCown's back. The force of his body pushed the airman off balance and sent him forward as well. It was like a bizarre game of dominoes. McCown fell directly onto Rook, and the supervillain had to brace himself to avoid likewise falling back from the impact of the airman's body.

He felt something hot and wet on his right hand. He looked down and saw that his sword had buried itself in McCown's belly. Blood now gushed down the length of the claw, and washed over Rook's hand and forearm. He stared down in horror. It was so incredibly bright, and red, and hot.

Rook heard screaming as McCown fell to the floor, hands clutched about his stomach. Rook was not sure which one of them was making the sound. The act of falling down pulled the claw from the crewman's body. More blood erupted from the now-opened wound. It washed the deck now, and splashed Rook's legs crimson.

Rook stared in horror at the sight. He had not meant to do that. He had not come here to kill anyone. They were supposed to run away, and do what he said. Why were they fighting back? They weren't supposed to do that. Didn't they know? He had never killed anyone. He had never even stabbed anyone with the claw before. It was for cutting through walls and vault doors and the like. Not people.

But here he was, two men writhing on the floor, covered in blood. It wasn't his fault! None of this was his fault!

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Acadian
I think Renee may have been referring to alliteration, where one intentionally runs words together that begin with the same letter like canny canine, heinous hyena, Gilda Gadfly or blond Bravilian bowgirl (hee!). And it does seem Gilda tries to incorporate quite a bit of that.

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Alternate history! This Rook supervillain certainly has some magical talent, but his intended heist exceeds his ability to both plan and execute. Admittedly his concept is stunningly ambitious. Much more research and preparation may have improved his chances but it certainly seems like this is not going to turn out well for anyone.

You’ve shown us a great deal about this Rook fellow while moving his action sequence along at a good clip. Nicely done!
Renee
I see Xochtil as pretty balanced in this way: probably an introvert in school where maybe some students don't 'get' her because she's "that weirdo". Maybe she gets teased. BUT... she's also more extroverted when she's around those she trusts. So she's very eager to do stuff, but also maybe too impulsive sometimes. But overall, I'm trying to imagine how her life would've been if she hadn't met the capes. Like, maybe sort of lost. She's got this talent, but wouldn't know what to do with it 100%.

There is a name for whatever that is with the repeating-pattern words; I remember studying it in English class. Maybe it's a poetry thing, I dunno.

Acadian says alliteration.

alliteration
[ uh-lit-uh-rey-shuhn ]SHOW IPA

noun
the commencement of two or more stressed syllables of a word group either with the same consonant sound or sound group (consonantal alliteration ), as in from stem to stern,


Yeah that sounds about right. Does Gilda write her own reports? Or does somebody else?

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Rook is controlling an invisible plane with his thoughts??? Crazyness. I bet that takes a lot of discipline. You know, think the wrong thought, like a fear which crosses anyone's mind just occurs to Rook (what really happened to Amelia Earheart?), and then the plane would be doing something he doesn't want. Or... maybe it's got software to ignore such thoughts.

That's something to think about though. With voice-activated devices, we have to be pretty deliberate about what we say to make the device follow our commands. But our actual thoughts are all over the place. You'd be considering everything you want the plane to do but ALSO the pilot would have to consider what could go wrong. huh.gif How would the plane know the difference?

Alright, I see. Not software, but magic. Still, though. The mental landscape is quite a tumultuous one. Even going to the store in a car, it might cross a driver's mind how she would just love to smash into the driver in front of her (who just cut her off without a blinker). This doesn't happen of course, but what I'm saying is what if we had to not think about such things, otherwise they'd occur?

Ah, he's stealing a bomb. Wicked. This Book is already quite different from the others in a way.

Wait, he shrunk himself? What the.. Ah ha. He seems to be a Master at Alteration.

This guy Rook comes across as diabolical. laugh.gif So EVIL he's almost a charicature. Wouldn't surprise me if he laughs like Muu-huu-ha ha ha ha!!!

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But he was the predator, the raptor in the skies. Keep 19 was nothing but lumbering prey. It was a sleeping elephant that was about to get a very rude awakening.


My gosh, the arrogance! ... It is pretty cool how he feels everything the plane does, though. 🦅

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But sometimes you just had to look the part. He was the Rook after all, master of the air, and greatest supervillain of all time.


Omg, really dude?

He's doing this for money, yet he hasn't got a buyer yet. He's doing this for fame, which he assumes will come to him. I have a feeling about this guy Rook. Like he's ultimately another Hierophant. Very talented, sure, yet doom to fail in the end because he's too blinded by his ambitions. I dunno. Just a feeling. It's obvious he hasn't really thought this through. There's a lot of assumptions going on.

Whoa, he's walking on the plane. This is like that Twilight Zone episode. That passenger kept swearing somebody was out there walking on the plane's wing as the plane was flying.

Uh oh. Did he just break the plane?

These bombs are much heavier than expected. Sounds like Rook didn't do any research. laugh.gif

Really fascinating, the way you describe the interior of the B52. It's like you've been inside of one, Florens. That story's also fascinating.

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Rook stared in horror at the sight. He had not meant to do that. He had not come here to kill anyone. They were supposed to run away, and do what he said. Why were they fighting back?


Well, duh, they're military! Of course they're gonna at least try to fight back. This ain't no bank robbery.

So it seems like Rook is sort of naive. His entire idea concerning military grunts (whatever the non-soldiers are called) is what his father told him. "They're all a bunch of pussies, those involved in flight personnel..." // So this is what he expects.

SubRosa this chapter's got me hooked. cake.gif Love the cliffhanger at the end. Now... time to find out what happened with Jeval and Treads.
SubRosa
Acadian: Rook is one of those people I am seeing a lot of as I dig more into both history and current events. He is good at one thing, and that makes him think he is good at everything. That leads him to interject himself into situations that he is completely unsuited and unprepared for, with predictably disastrous results. Since he was good at that one thing, it means he has the resources to make that disaster really spectacular as well. Where someone who never had that initial success would never be in the position to really screw things up in a bigger fashion later.

Rook gets very little screen time in the book overall. In fact, today's episode will be pretty much the end of him (in more ways that one). So I needed to convey the contents of his character in little pieces, even as the story progressed around him. I am glad it worked out.


Renee: Xochtil is definitely that weirdo at school. She's a Mexican-American trans kid. So right off the bat she's got a lot of hurdles. I have not spent a lot of time developing her off-screen time. But your impression does sound very likely. Meeting Blood Raven and Stormcrow and being initiated into the Sisterhood of the Traveling Raven has certainly done wonders to her self-esteem, and probably given her a lot more confidence than she would have in other circumstances. So around the heroes she is a lot more active and outgoing than she would be at school or home.

Gilda definitely writes her own material. Though I imagine she does a lot of it off the cuff. She has a real talk radio, "Fuck it we'll do it live!" energy to her. Though without all the anger and toxicity of the guy who made that quote famous.

I know what you mean about the telepathic interface and the danger of mis-controlling it with errant thoughts. But the link is deeper than that. He is completely linked with the plane, so controlling it is the same as us controlling our bodies. We might consciously think "time to get up off the couch and go to the kitchen". But that does not make our bodies get up and do that. It takes more. He has the same control over the plane, as he does over the movements of his body. It is a common trope in cyberpunk and some sci-fi: a Rigger jacking into a vehicle and directly connecting their nervous system to it, making it a literal extension of their physical body.

I think you have the right feeling. As you noted, Rook is really full of himself. Big on ideas, short on actual prep or effort to make those ideas reality.

Those links I posted in the last and today's episode are for video walkthroughs of B-52s. So you can see exactly what they look like inside. I did a whole lot of research like that to get the details of the plane right. Thankfully we also know someone who used to drive a jet plane for the Marine Corps, who had some wisdom to impart as well... whistling.gif




B-52 Cockpit layout again

More than you ever wanted to know about B-52s

A video walkthrough of an active service B-52


Book 12.2 - Broken Arrow

Major Doug Aitken was enjoying the long flight over the Atlantic. This was the best part of the mission. They were up at altitude, free of the coast below, and out over the open sea. There was nothing and no one around. All he had to do was keep an eye on his gauges, and enjoy the sensation of hurtling through space at five hundred miles an hour, free as a bird.

He had a long flight ahead of him. These airborne alert missions could last a full day in the air. His own flight would take him up the eastern shores of the US and Canada to the northernmost tip of Greenland. Then he would spend the next eight hours orbiting between that frozen island and Alaska. Once the next flight was up to replace him, he would head down to Alaska and the Bering Sea. From there he would pivot back to leg it down the western coast of North America. Finally he would return home to North Carolina. It was a grand tour of nearly the entire continent.

The reason for these missions was simple enough. If the Reds tried to make a sneak attack like the one on Pearl Harbor, he and his plane would be ready immediately to go in and bomb them into radioactive dust. Aitken had no idea what his actual target would be: Moscow, Leningrad, or some other city or base. He would only find out if and when he received the signal to attack and opened his sealed orders. He hoped he would never have to do that. But he was ready to if need be. That was what he had signed up for.

Most people found the flights boring. Twenty four hours in a cramped cockpit was not exactly a vacation. At least they had an oven. Granted, it only heated food to two temperatures: ice cold and burnt. But it was better than cold sandwiches. McCown was getting good at heating up cubes of steak in a cup. It may not have won three Michelin Stars. But then again, sitting in your ejection seat at 31,000 feet and eating steak off of your clipboard was not an experience most people would ever be able to brag about later in life.

Crapping into a plastic bag in a box was less enjoyable of course, or peeing into the cup in the wall that acted as a urinal down in the lower compartment. But camping meant roughing it. Being in a B-52 was just camping the sky. With bombs; big, big, bombs.

This early on he was not close to getting tired and needing to sack out on the single bunk that ran along the side of the fuselage directly behind his seat. Nor was he hungry enough to try McCown's fried chicken ala B-52, or steak bombador, nor would he need to use the facilities until hours after that. They would not have to refuel any time soon, nor worry about other mission details. This was the best time. He could just enjoy flying for its own sake.

He was snapped out of his reverie when the entire plane shook. At the same time the sound of a loud bang or clang rang out over the omnipresent noise of the jet engines. He distinctly heard metal tear, and glanced quickly around him. But he saw nothing amiss in the cockpit. With one hand clenched tightly on the control column, he used the other to snap his oxygen mask over his lower face. Then his eyes turned to his gauges. But everything checked out, until a beeping filled his ears and a flashing red light drew his eye.

"Loss of cabin pressure warning!" Aitken barked out over the intercom. "Everyone on oxygen."

His co-pilot - Diego Garcia - had already donned his mask. He was now likewise checking over the readouts. The kid had good instincts. He'd be an aircraft commander one day himself, given time.

"EWO, what's our status?" Aitken called out. Now his eyes scanned the horizon, looking for any sign of what had just happened.

"No radiation painting us sir," Irbey Terrel called out over the internal comms. "There is nothing on my scopes, we are not being targeted."

"Navigator, report," Aitken asked next, moving through his crew positions.

"Nothing on radar," Paul Grubb responded. "We are the only thing in the air for a hundred miles in every direction.

"What the hell is that?" Harry McCown cried out. Normally his tail gunner was unflappable, even as airmen went. But there was no mistaking the distress in the young man's voice. "Erm, something has penetrated the hull, directly above my station. It's metal, like a spike, or a claw. It's stuck right through the skin. It looks like... like it's hooked onto the airframe."

"What?" Aitken could not believe his ears. Had they collided with another plane? If so, why hadn't it been on radar? He twisted in his seat and stared back down the tunnel to the rear of the compartment. At its far end he could see exactly what his gunner had described.

Several fingers of thick, black steel had had thrust clear though the the ceiling on both sides of the plane. One set came down above the tail gunner's seat, the other over the EWO beside him. The digits of each set came from front and back, and hooked around the structural crossbeams of the airframe between them. It gave Aitken the distinct impression that the talons of a giant bird had locked onto the top of his plane. But that was ridiculous.

Aitken turned back to his controls. "Making descent to 8,000 feet," he said with a calmness that he did not truly possess. He did not know what was happening. But he knew what to do in case of cabin depressurization. He had to get the plane to a lower altitude, where pressurization would not be an issue. He knew that no one was going to get sucked out of a window. That only happened in bad movies. But it would be wise to get to an altitude where they would not require oxygen, before anything else went wrong.

"Garcia, radio base and tell them what's happening." Aitken said to his co-pilot. Then he addressed the tail gunner, who otherwise had little to do. "McCown, go back to the bomb bay and check the hull for damage."

Garcia did not respond. He just did his job, and began contacting Seymour Johnson Air Force Base. McCown acknowledged his orders, and Aitken did not have to look back to know that the man was putting on his portable oxygen mask and getting ready to leave his seat.

Aitken stared up through the windows directly over his ejection chair. Normally they were used to assist with mid-air refueling. They gave a good view straight up. But the sky above was now covered over by a blank sea of gray. They were descending through a cloud bank, and from its doomful appearance, it looked ready to dump a ton of snow onto the North Atlantic below. Aitken craned his head back, and tried to look behind them. But his position in the seat, and the narrowness of the window, were not doing him any favors.

Even still, he thought he saw something black there. It almost looked like a beak. But that was impossible. He knew that some birds could indeed fly this high. But this one would have to be the size of a small plane, given what he had seen. That was impossible. Maybe it was a jet intake?

"There's something on top of the fuselage," Aitken said over the intercom. "I can't make it out. It might be an aircraft."

"Navigator, I need a heading for the nearest base," Aitken then said firmly. "I am calling it. We are making an emergency landing."

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Rook stood there and stared as the final man in the lower compartment rushed for the ladder. He idly noted the name "Grubb" stenciled on his uniform, and wished he hadn't. That was McCown lying on the floor, clutching at his stomach and bleeding to death. It was Lacklan who had been shot by the ricochet, and now lay quiet next to him.

God, they all had names. They were all people. This was not how it was supposed to work.

Rook was shaken out of his stupor when Grubb's feet disappeared over his head. He saw the hatch drop down above. Some reflex triggered within him, and he took off in pursuit without a thought. He scrambled for the ladder, but the steel hatch clanged down overhead. He reached up with one hand and pushed, but it would not give. They must have secured it somehow.

Well, he could fix that. He thrust upward with the claw. Two feet of enchanted weapon sliced through the steel hatch and floor as easily as it had through the B-52's outer hull. He heard a scream from above, and once again the sword blade came back slick with blood. Rook did not think about that however. He was acting purely on automatic now. He hacked again and again, and severed the hatch from whatever locking mechanism had secured it down. Then he pushed up hard, and the entire thing went flying into the cabin above.

Rook sprang up after it, faster than he had ever moved in his life. He saw a man with the name Terrel fall back against the fuselage directly ahead of him. That would place him on the right side of the plane. His nose was mashed to a pulp, and his face was a mask of blood. The severed hatch lay on the floor at his feet, splashed with more blood. A revolver lay next to it.

The man he had pursued up from below - Grubb - lay sprawled between two ejection seats to Rook's right. That was in the rear of the compartment, facing the tail of the plane. The entire bulkhead there was covered with screens, scopes, and other electronics. Rook could not imagine why they would need so much of the stuff. Whatever did they use it all for?

To Rook's left was a narrow tunnel. A bed was built into the components on the left side, and a bank of instruments hung over it. The right side of the tunnel was likewise lined with circuit breakers, other electronics, and small compartments. A low white box was built into the floor there, with an axe strapped to one side.

At the far end of the tunnel lay the cockpit proper. The pilot remained in his seat there, and Rook felt the plane lurch as he angled the aircraft down even more sharply. The co-pilot was on his feet however. A portable oxygen mask was strapped to his face, connected to a bottle of air slung at his hip. Rook noted that he was Garcia, thanks to his nametag. He held a revolver in his hand.

The man with the injured legs - Grubb - reached back between the two crew stations there and pulled out a fire extinguisher. He pointed it at Rook, who reacted by throwing out his left hand and creating his arcane shield once more. A torrent of foam sprayed out an instant later, and slathered all over the face of the magical barrier.

The man with the broken nose - Terrel - now leaned down and grabbed the emergency axe. It was not as big as a fireman's axe. It was shorter - like a hatchet - and so was easily used with one hand. The airman brought it down at Rook's head, and he was obliged to swing his arcane shield over to block the attack. It bounced off as easily as the bullet had earlier. But Rook had to balance himself carefully to avoid falling back down the open hatch to the compartment below.

Then the deafening roar of a gunshot filled the small space. Rook winced as he felt someone punch him hard in the back. He twisted around to see Garcia standing closer, almost touching him. The airman had stuck his gun out to the side, far enough to get it around Rook's arcane shield. It was now pointed at his bare side and back.

Rook once again reacted without thinking. He brought his right hand around, across his body. With the claw still protruding from his forearm, he nearly took off his other hand, which still projected the shield. His anger became manifest, and blossomed in the form of an arcane bolt. It flared to life from his palm in a burst of golden light. The bolt of magical energy struck Garcia right in the chest, and burned a wide hole straight through the man's body.

It kept going, and lanced clear through the instrument panel that hung over the bunk. It exited that to slam into the rear of the pilot's ejection seat. It burned on through the man's chest an instant later. The control panel in front of the pilot was next in its path, and simply disintegrated under the blow. That left a gaping hole right through the nose of the plane, through which ice cold air now jetted into the cabin.

The dead pilot hunched forward onto what remained of his controls. With that the entire plane lurched over, nose straight down. Rook and the others - living, wounded, and dead - fell from their feet. But they did not topple down to the floor. Instead they all simply floated free, suddenly weightless.

Rook stared in horror as the gray of the clouds through the canopy transformed into a deeper blue of the sea. The waves were so dark they were almost gray as they filled the entire view out of the cockpit window. They were capped with high peaks of white froth, and looked cold and angry, as only the North Atlantic could be in winter. Worse, they grew larger and larger by the second, as the bomber plunged toward its doom.

He knew that he had only moments left. He had to get out somehow, and get back to the Ravenwing. He had to get it airborne, and fly away before it was too late. He called upon the magic he had woven into his suit, and used it to propel him through the air. He used it to fly down to the hatch at his feet. He had begun to slide through it when he glanced up.

It was just in time to see the nose of the B-52 slam into the frozen waters of the Atlantic.

How had this all gone so wrong?

* * *
Acadian
What a captivating drama as this scene unfolded – getting worse and worse each moment. We kind of knew from history that this B-52 was ultimately on its last mission. Though I have no direct experience in a B-52, this sure comes across as realistic for what I’d expect under the circumstances in a large multicrew military aircraft. You really did some good research, then clearly thought a lot about how the crew would try to react to this midair intrusion. The only scintilla of good news here is that it seems Rook did not escape – good riddance! Not that there would be any survivors from this type of mishap but kudos for mentioning how deadly the north Atlantic in winter can be for those who unexpectedly find themselves immersed in it. A fear that lives in the back of every aircraft carrier pilot’s mind.
Renee
I was also in that 'weirdo' group in high school myself, big surprise. It's how I got into the roleplaying games, which by golly, now I felt much more at home. Would've been great to have Xochtil join us around the table.

Right, some journalists merely read the teleprompter, reading whatever was pre-written. Maybe Gilda does this too, but it's good to know she's also writing her own material. Her words are way snazzy, too. It'd be hard to find a writer who writes in that exact style of presentation she expects.

Ah, I see now (in regards to how the mental part of the Ravenwing works).

That's right! Someone in our midst actually was in the Armed Forces! 🧑‍✈ Actually, Decrepit was also, although I think D was infintry, not airborne.

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It's sort of scary to think: auto-pilot. But then, from what I understand, most of the time those larger birds are flying they're on auto-pilot.

Yikes, no bathroom? Hmm, I suppose he can't just walk away from the cockpit. indifferent.gif

Uh oh, here comes Rook. Excuse me, The Rook. tongue.gif Wouldn't want to do the antihero's ego some displeasure!

Seems The Rook is learning all sorts of things today. Not just about himself as a profound villain, but also about himself and how he relates to other humankind. He's upset that things aren't going his way, but (oddly) did not want to cause anyone harm. Which is rather interesting. The guy's got feelings.

Eesh. He's killing the entire crew. Pretty soon there'll be no one to fly the plane; I doubt Rook knows how to do so. So it'll crash and there'll be a huge, HUGE explosion. Heh, yup.

Come on, man. What was you thinking?
WellTemperedClavier
Sorry I've been out for a while. My schedule's changed up a lot, but I'm going to try and stay active.

It looks like they're getting quite the nice collection at the Raven's Nest.

Good thoughts on Blood Raven here. Though she is gone, the alliance can indeed make magic of its own.

Hm, now for some attention from Gilda. Media attention can be a mixed bag, but it does show the Alliance has come into its own. And I'm glad there won't be any repercussions for the former Hyenaman. It really wasn't his fault.

Ooh, interesting. A flashback!

Okay, so is Rook new? Or was he featured earlier? Sorry if I'm forgetting something obvious. Though I know rook is also a type of bird related to crows/ravens, which tells me he's connected to January in some way.

Interesting. I'm guessing Rook is in the Air Force or some other government branch. I was going to bring up Operation Chrome Dome, but the next chapter makes it very clear you already know all about that.

Ah, never mind, he's not with the AF at all. And I'm not sure what he has planned, but it sounds a little shady.

Primordial air. I'm pretty sure I picked up some of that back in my WoW days. But it's quite an accomplishment for Rook to have (seemingly) done all this on his own.

There's a lot of tension building up here. I don't think Rook's a good guy.

Weirdly, I"m getting a slightly Rorschach vibe from Rook. Might just be because Rorschach idolized the man whom he imagined his father was.

Good old nuclear proliferation.

Oof, I can't imagine the plane would stay airborne after that damage.

I like the Micky Mantle reference. Grounds it in the '60s.

These crewmen are badly outmatched. Random thought: did you ever play Clive Barker's Undying? Rook's shield spell reminded me of it.

Hm, sounds like Rook's run into a hard law of reality. Even if you don't want to hurt anyone, breaking and entering (especially into something like a B-52) makes it very likely that you will. He seems pretty naive in this respect.

And now we switch to one of the crew.

A lot of details on Aitken's routine here, which I like. I've only ever stepped into a B-17, but even though a B-52 is bigger, I imagine it's much the same: cramped and claustrophobic. Being stuck in there for hours at a time doesn't sound fun. But pilots tend to be really into their jobs, so Aitken's okay with it.

Ah, so the crew did notice. I figured they would have to, given all the noise.

Aitken's a good pilot. Not panicking, acting on training.

Back to Rook. Interesting contrast between him and Aitken. Aitken's cool and collected, while Rook, for all his preparations, is flailing. Now he's killed another person in his panic.

Yeah, Rook really didn't know what he was getting into. Understanding the tech and the procedure is only part of training. There's also the psychological aspect, which he didn't seem to be aware of (though I guess robbing banks is one way to work yourself up).

Interesting flashback here. Rook's intriguing. I'm guessing retrieving the bomber from the Atlantic is going to tie into the present day story. Wonder if Rook's still alive somehow...

SubRosa
Acadian: The links I provided were just the tip of the iceberg of my research for the B-52 and its crew. All the airmen's names are of RL B-52 crew members. Things like the oven heating food to ice cold or burnt, or heating cubes of steak in a cup and eating it off your clipboard at your station - all that is from statements by B-52 crew.

The concept of things going from bad to worse to disastrous was my intent as I wrote it. I wanted to show a situation that went totally out of anyone's control, until it was a total catastrophe.

Rook definitely did not escape. We will eventually circle back to him and Keep 19 near the end of the book, when the story finally reaches their final resting place.

I kind of forgot about the North Atlantic in winter until my final edits, when I glanced back at the date and realized it was January. I think I first learned about North Atlantic winters watching old WW2 documentaries about the Battle of the Atlantic. Some of the pictures of ships sailing through its storms were just harrowing.


Renee: There was no official bathroom built into the plane back in 1961. The engineers who designed it had not thought of that. But a couple options were added. One was a metal or wooden box that you sat on and pooped into, with a plastic bag inside. The other was a plastic cup stuck into a tube in the wall. The current versions have an actual toilet built in now.

Rook is not a sociopath. He's egotistical, and isolated from people, but he's not completely heartless. Very few people really are actual sociopaths, something like 1 or 2% of folks. Usually you need to work people up with propaganda and hate-speech to get them to kill others. Or just put them in a situation where they panic and stop thinking. The latter is where Rook falls. He thought he could be a cool supervillain without having to get his hands dirty. Obviously it was not the only thing he did not put a great deal of thought into.


WellTemperedClavier: At first I was kind of dumbfounded when it came to thinking of how the Allies would refurnish the Raven's Nest. Then I thought of the depiction of the Bat Cave in the comics, with the giant penny, the T-Rex, and the Joker card. So I decided to go the same route, and start filling it with trophies and memorabilia. So disused super suits, the early warning poppets, the shards of Y Ddraig Aur, and the like. There will probably be lots more team photos going forward, since they often have extra allies helping out in the big battles.

Rook is completely new. The real bird is from the corvid family, just like ravens, crows, magpies, and the like. So he does share a corvid inclination. But that is his only connection to January and Blood Raven. Unless... Now I have an idea... So far at least, his father was in the military, and was a veteran of WW2 and Korea. I am thinking he died in Korea. I picture his old man as being incredibly toxic, probably because he was carrying around a lot of trauma from his war experiences.

I was originally going to name-drop Chrome Dome. But my research uncovered that it did not start until about six months after this incident. It was one of many such airborne alert missions. They all did essentially the same thing though. It is just the one that got most famous.

Primordial Air is from WoW? I did not know that. I was inspired by the True Elements from Earthdawn, which sound like the same idea. They are the magical elements in their purest forms. I just wanted to use a different name.

I did find one account of a B-52 losing its tail fin and landing safely six hours later. But I also found others where it caused them to crash and kill most of the crew.

I had to dig to find the Micky Mantle reference. I went through lists of home run kings in the 50s and 60s. My original thought was going to be Roger Maris. But I think he would be too obscure for most people to recognize. And his really big year was after this took place.

I did play Undying. I loved it! Especially when you go to the ruined monastery and read about how it was destroyed by a monster. Then you go back in time and find out that you were that monster! Good times. The arcane shield is really similar to the one in that game. Basically a personal force field that you create with one hand.

Your observations on the differences between Aitken and Rook are what I was going for. Aitken had no clue what was going on. But he was a experienced professional. Instead of panicking he fell back on his training and experience, and did the things he could to deal with each emergency as they happened. While Rook just panicked and acted on instinct and made things worse and worse.

Rook is not alive. But he will appear again near the end of the book, when January and company reach the final resting place of Keep 19.









Pic of Belle Isle and the Detroit River

Pic of Belle Isle south-western Tip (where the battle took place)


Ope!


David Bowie - Space Oddity (Ground Control to Major Tom)

The Weather Girls - It's Raining Men

Rose Royce - Car Wash


Book 12.3 - Broken Arrow

August 8, 2019

January stood upon Belle Isle once more. She had not been here since she and Blood Raven had spoken with the governor there. Afterward they had taken part in a press conference to explain what had taken place in the apocalyptic battle there the previous night. A full month had passed since then. Now January was back to rebuild what had been destroyed, at least as best as she was able.

Thankfully she was not alone. The rest of the Great Lakes Alliance was on hand, so too the Daughters of the Raven, the Sentinels from Chicago, even Isaac in his mech the Fred Hampton. These worthies had in turn reached out to others whom they knew, and brought with them even more capes from around the globe. It was not quite the Army of Light that had gathered to repel the Abyssal onslaught a month before. But it was still an awesome assemblage of might in one place and time. Only Blood Raven was conspicuous by her absence.

January and most of the others busied themselves with gathering up chunks of broken concrete and marble. It had once belonged to the streets and parking lots that had crisscrossed the south-western end of the island. Now it was nothing but shattered boulders and dust, mixed with equally damaged bricks, cinderblocks, and other materials from the buildings that had been destroyed in the fight.

There had been a few structures on the western shore that flanked the bridge to the mainland, such as the Belle Isle Boathouse, the harbormaster, and a utility building. Now they were nothing but rubble. The Flynn Pavilion on the eastern side of the island had likewise been annihilated, along with the nearby Nancy Brown Peace Carillon tower. The same fate had befallen many smaller structures such as shelters and public bathrooms scattered about the now barren landscape.

Of the Belle Isle Casino there was simply nothing left. Nátthrafn had created his gateway there, and the event space had been entirely consumed by the portal. Not even ashes or dust remained. It had vanished entirely from this world. Clearly, it had hosted the greatest event in its existence. Left behind in its wake was a deep crater gouged out by the Abyss itself. It was the largest of all the cavities that now pocked the moonscape of the island's south-western end. It looked to January like a giant ice cream scoop had simply gouged it out from the earth below.

She did not miss it. That had been the site of the Hierophant's summoning ritual. He had tried to kill her there, and unwittingly met his own end instead. It was not a place January would ever want to visit again. Just thinking about it sent her heart into overdrive, and turned her blood to ice. His screams echoed in her ears, and her nostrils were smothered in the stench his blood.

The sound of someone whistling broke her from her reverie. She looked up to find Gadget standing before her. Like all the others, he was fully caped up. In his case that meant a suit of powered armor that glowed faintly blue with ionic energy. That suit was now stained brown and gray with dirt and dust, and he held a massive chuck of marble in his hands.

"Ground Control to Major Tom," Gadget said, "you in there?"

"Ope..." January muttered in a most Michigan way. "Just wool-gathering I guess."

She lifted up another block of shattered marble and tossed it into the massive industrial dumpster nearby. The rectangular bin stretched over a hundred feet long, and was taller than January. Its dented iron walls were painted green, except where that had chipped away to reveal rusted metal beneath.

Her eyes moved away to gaze across the torn up landscape around her. It was dotted with craters and pits. Everything living had been burnt to a charred black mess. Not a single tree or blade of grass remained. She stood in what had once been a massive pond at the very south-western tip of the island. Its water had boiled away under the A-10's airstrike, not to mention all the subsequent energies that had been unleashed throughout the battle.

Nearby lay the James Scott Memorial Fountain. Rather than a single reservoir of water, it had once been a sprawling assemblage of fountains, basins, channels and steps. Now only broken white marble scattered around the tortured landscape remained to hint of its former existence.

Thankfully there were no bodies. Abyssals faded from reality when they died. Being from another universe, they could not manifest on Earth without some magical force maintaining them. They were literally made of the Outside, and obeyed Outside laws of nature that were congruent with existence in this reality. Otherwise January could not have imagined what a ghastly sight - or smell - the place would have been. Especially given the hot summer sun that blazed high in the sky overhead.

Belle Isle looked every inch the battlefield it had been. But amidst all the destruction a ray of hope shone through, bright as the sun. It was Y Ddraig Aur of course. The golden dragon rose up hundreds of feet above the ruins of the fountain. Her image radiated heat and light, like a bonfire that had been pressed into solid form. January did not have to deliberately sense into astral space to feel her power. It was so omnipresent that no magician could possibly miss it. It was like standing next to a star.

Beyond the dragon lay more fields of devastation. Then about a third of the way up the island all that stopped. Trees once more rose up into the sky, and green grass blanketed the earth. The glass walls of the Anna Scripps Whitcomb Conservancy glinted whole and unharmed under the hot summer sky. So too did the giant, wavy slide nearby it, and the historic police station. The latter looked like a fairy tale castle with its stone walls and pointed turrets. On the eastern shore of the island the Dossin Great Lakes Museum likewise still stood tall, just beyond the terminus of devastation.

January knew from the after action reports that Cray had gathered, that Blackhawk and Blood Raven had held that section of the island in the very beginning. The First Nations heroine's force fields had kept the Abyssals back, and protected it from the firepower unleashed upon the rest of the island. Then Blood Raven had used the Abyssal's own blood to annihilate them. That accounted for the clear line of demarcation between wasteland and pristine earth. They had literally drawn a line in the sand which the invaders could not cross.

Granted, the Abyssals had not been too intent upon taking this territory. There was nothing in the north-eastern section of the island but more parkland. The real prize had been the bridge. It was the only way off the island and onto the mainland beyond. The Abyssals had concentrated their efforts there, so Blackhawk had followed them to join Isaac in his mech and his sidekick Archie there. Once the odds had shifted and reinforcements had arrived, she and the other mundane members of the military and local civilians had held the crossing. In the meantime Blood Raven and the rest of the supers - January included - had struck inland to deal with the gateway itself.

"So where's the Rock of Belle Isle?" Lighthammer asked, referring to the First Nations heroine by her new nickname. Like the others, he too was gathering up rubble and depositing it within a massive 50 yard dumpster of rusty metal.

"She's with the Technocrat, they're fixing up the last of the bridge."

January turned to see Kaelin walk up. The green-haired trans woman was not pitching in directly. She was an alchemist, not an actual superheroine. But she did have a platter of cool drinks that was more than welcome. January joined the others to knock back a glass of the green, vaguely glowing liquid. She immediately felt the weariness in her limbs vanish, to be replaced by a feeling of boundless vigor and energy.

"Ahh, the old restore fatigue special," Avery said with an appreciative sigh. "That hits the spot."

"I thought there'd be beer," Lighthammer groused. "I have never fixed anything without beer."

"Come by the Aura later Lightguy, and Harper will pour you one personally," Kaelin insisted. "I just finished a batch of pale lager that would make a Bohemian brewer envious."

"Preach it sister!" Cleveland's resident superhero grinned.

Soon they had filled the massive industrial dumpster with broken marble, stone, bricks, and other rubble. Stinger from the Sentinels flew over via a pair of insect wings that sprouted from the back of her armor. She trailed a net over the entire bin, and took care so that it draped down the sides to the ground all around. Afterward she turned her head to the computer at her wrist. After a few taps on its control panel, a bright flash of energy rolled through the net and surrounded the entire dumpster with green light. It flashed brightly for a moment, and then both the entire container and net vanished.

No, not vanished entirely. They had simply shrunk down so small that January had not seen them at first. Now they were just a few inches across, and easily fit into the palm of the Chicagoan super's hand. She lifted the miniature dumpster up and gave a wave as she flew off to the Technocrat's flying wing, which hovered overhead nearby.

She passed by her husband Zero Point, who exited the futuristic craft even as she entered it. He wore a suit of white, gray, and silver powered armor. He produced a tiny dumpster in the palm of his hand. It looked like a child's toy. He tossed it down, and it instantly grew to full size in all its dented and rusted glory. It likewise was sheathed in another of those energy nets, which he proceeded to pull off and bundle up in his arms.

"So does he really have a matter convertor in there?" Gadget asked the other tech hero.

He nodded to the sleek flying wing in the sky above. Its gleaming hull possessed a lozenge shape, from which a pair of wings stretched out to either side to form a diamond. A silvery glass canopy filled its rounded nose, and a wide storage bay yawned open at its stern. It had no visible engines to hold it aloft. But the air seemed to shimmer around it like the heat-haze from a highway, as if spacetime had been altered there to maintain its presence.

"Absolutely," Zero Point replied. "It's the prototype Janos created to deal with all the plastics and other garbage that he and Calypso are pulling from the oceans. That garbage rune you guys came up with is really doing the trick from what I hear. This convertor is small. But he is going to be building a full size one on Haiti to process all of the trash from the Atlantic."

"How does it work?" Gadget asked.

"It reduces molecules down to their constituent elements. So toss a refrigerator in there, and you will get ingots of iron, aluminum, copper, and the like out of it. The shrinking tech that Stinger and I use reduces it in size for mass storage. They can later be enlarged and sold off to pay for the entire operation, and more. This ought to do good things for the economy of Haiti." Zero Point waved for Gadget to join him. "Come on, I will show you."

"I guess one man's trash really is another man's treasure," Lighthammer mused.

With that Gadget and Zero Point jetted off to disappear into the back of the flying wing. Kaelin moved on to take her refreshments to the next group of supers toiling under the sun. A quick glance showed that it was the rest of the Sentinels from Chicago, along with Harper. The magical mixologist had summoned her magic hand spell, and was using the giant appendage to scoop up massive chunks of rubble.

January's eyes drifted from them to the waters surrounding the island. While it was still closed off to the public, hundreds of boats dotted the river to the west and south. They came in all sizes, from tiny one person kayaks, to large cabin cruisers. They loitered around the shore, and their occupants watched on with curiosity and amazement as the capes went about their work. In addition news helicopters buzzed overhead. So too did occasional drones. Not the military kind that carried weapons, but the smaller civilian types that recorded video.

A coast guard cutter kept the shipping channel to the east clear for the massive freighters that occasionally meandered down the Detroit River. January recognized it as the Bristol Bay. It was the same ship that had been present at the Battle of Gull Island, and later the fight here at Belle Isle.

Or was it a boat instead of a ship? January had no idea. All she did know was that the nautically-inclined did seem to get pedantic about the difference.

In any case the vessel had taken a beating in both fights. January had fought an Abyssal in its engine rooms at Gull Island, after it had punched a hole clear though the vessel's hull. At the following battle here at Belle Isle it had been thrown up onto the Canadian shore. But Blackhawk - the Rock of Belle Isle - had repaired it with her electromagnetic powers each time.

"We need to pick things up," Lighthammer called out. "Play us a tune on that fancy wrist watch you got there."

January obliged, and punched her fingers upon the Sága's computer screen. In no time at all the Weather Girls were singing about men raining from the sky. That picked up everyone's spirits. Gadget came flying back and turned on his suit's PA system. He synced it up with Sága so that they both belted out the classic post-disco song in stereo. In moments they were all dancing as they chucked rubble into the newest dumpster.

The day passed quickly, thanks to more ebullient music and occasional refreshments provided by Kaelin. The sun stood at its zenith when January and company finally completed their task of cleaning up. So too had the other groups of heroes spread across the south-western end of the island.

By this time the MacArthur Bridge to the mainland had also been fully restored to its original state, thanks to the engineering work of Janos Heisen and Blackhawk. The Bailey Bridge that had been temporarily put up there had likewise been hauled away to the American side of the river, ready to be broken down and hauled away by the US Army.

Now January and the others looked behind them, to see that the areas they had cleared earlier had been entirely transformed. Craters and pits had vanished, to be replaced by smooth, gently rolling hills. Dirt and ash had been replaced with a carpet of green grass that blanketed the landscape. Trees that now grew all about in small copses. Flowers bloomed beneath them, and bees buzzed among the flourishing plant life.

The small stream that had flowed through the island above the old Belle Isle Casino had been restored, as was the pond it emptied into near the eastern shores of the island. The massive crater that had been left behind in the wake of the event space had been filled in with earth, and now it was an open green field.

Through all of this the Gaia Sisters worked their magic. They were quite a trio, all literally different colors and sizes. One had stony gray skin, long black hair, and a slender, almost bony frame. Another was vibrant green in color, with scarlet red hair and a plump, round frame. The last was a rich shade of umber, with yellow tresses and a curvy body.

They spread out in a line, and reminded January of an old time farmer planting seeds. They tossed small pebbles to the ground as they walked forward. She felt tremendous raw power bound up within these little stones that they were planting within Belle Isle's blasted earth. Mana flowed from the sisters and down to these mystical seeds. Their will and power awakened the prodigious energy stored within them, and turned it loose upon the landscape around them.

Everywhere the sisters walked, the broken, blasted land blossomed with life and vigor. Grass sprouted up in long green shoots, and even bushes and trees rose up to tower above the landscape. Craters and rents in the landscape smoothed over into gentle rolling hills, and flowers bloomed under the blistering August sun.

January switched her awareness into the astral to get a better sense of what they were doing. Those seeds of earth they were planting were the first thing that caught her attention. They not only radiated energy, but purity, perhaps even a certain sort of perfection. Each was a magical ideal made reality.

What archetype these particular seeds represented was clear. January could feel it as solid as stone, firm under her feet. She could smell it as rich loam in her nostrils. She could sense it as moist soil on her fingers. They were the element of earth in its purest distillation.

January recognized this from her study of the Scripta Mortis. The ancient magical tome had explained how all of the elements could be found in these primordial forms. Often they were used in enchanting to imbue an item with their unique properties. Or a magician could use them to perform extraordinary spellcraft, as the Gaia Sisters demonstrated before January's eyes.

The primordial earth did not act upon its own. It was the will of the three sisters that imbued it within the land below, and transformed it into the living, breathing landscape they left in their wake. Their mana flowed through the elemental earth, activated it, and used it to remake the world around it.

How they could maintain the pace was readily evident to January. For Silverlight walked behind them. The marble-skinned superheroine held her lunar staff aloft. As ever, its stone head was a duplicate of the moon overhead. Today that meant it showed a first quarter face, with the right half of its disc shining white, while its other side lay dark and dormant.

January focused intently upon Silverlight's staff, named Mene. She could sense that the rough and pitted white stone on its head did not just look like the moon. It was an actual rock from the moon. Even though it had been physically removed from the lunar surface, it was still part of that celestial body. That was Sympathetic Magic 101: things that had once been in contact remained so even after being separated.

As such it continued to pull raw magical power directly from the moon overhead. Silverlight drew down this endless font of energy, and poured it into the three women in front of her. This was accomplished through a ritual link that January could sense Silverlight had formed with the Gaia Sisters.

The mages in the Army of Light had done the very same thing during the Battle of Belle Isle. That was the only way they could supply Blood Raven with the power that she needed to undo the gateway to the Abyss. In today's case the energy from the statuesque wizard's staff provided the three sisters with a literally bottomless well of power to work their magic with.

"Now that is something you do not see every day," Ôkami said what January imagined everyone must have been thinking.

"The Gaia Sisters are old friends of mine," Riven said.

The San Franciscan heroine came over along with Calypso. Where the rest of them were dirty, sweaty, and disheveled, the two women were soaking wet. But clean. They looked like they had just stepped from the shower. Given that Calypso was the Mistress of the Waves, one did not have to imagine who was responsible for that.

"I'll introduce you once they're done," Riven went on. "We go way back. They live in a commune up in Oregon, and don't come down to the big city much. They aren't really capes like us. I mean, they don't go around punching bad guys. But they do have a way with nature."

In the meantime Calypso gave them all a bath, thanks to the water she was able to summon from the head of her own staff: Bagua. Gadget cued up an old song about working at the car wash. That brought a smile to January's face.

"You should try taking your armor through an actual car wash," she told him.

"Well, I could always use a wax and underbody flush..." the powered armor hero mused.

"That sounds kind of personal..." Lighthammer coughed.

Soon enough Kaelin was there with more refreshing drinks. They all relaxed in the light of Y Ddraig Aur, and just kicked back and enjoyed the moment. January had to admit, it had been a good day.

"You know, we're going to have to start calling this the Dragon City, instead of the Motor City." Riven looked up at the brilliant image of Y Ddraig Aur overhead.

"I hear some people want to rename the Lions to the Dragons," Gadget mused.

"They should try winning a game first..." January snorted.

"It would seem that the Gaia Sisters have finished their work," Calypso noted. January also saw that she stood next to Lighthammer, very right next to Lighthammer. The Lightguy himself appeared to have noticed as well, given the smile that beamed from his features.

January looked out over the newly reclaimed landscape, and saw that the Bahamian was correct. The once blasted and tortured earth was now completely healed of its scars. In fact, nothing remained to show of the battle, save for Y Ddraig Aur herself. She loomed over all like a great spectral guardian. None of the old buildings had been rebuilt, nor streets, or parking lots, or the once great fountain beneath the dragon. But the land itself had been restored, and was now green and filled with life again. It was a blank - but living - slate upon which anything might be constructed, if at all.

The three sisters came their way with Silverlight in tow. The gray cloaked wizard rested her staff on one shoulder now, and magic no longer flowed from it to the nature Witches. The faces of all four were drawn with fatigue, and Silverlight herself yawned audibly as they approached. Kaelin was quick to meet them with her party cups and refreshments, and all eyes brightened once they had a chance to sample her restorative libations.

"Just a warning, they're a little weird," Riven mouthed under her breath. "Don't stare."

"We greet you warmly," said the first sister. Her skin was stony gray, and her long hair was night black obsidian.

"We watched you all battle with the Outsiders a month past," said the second. Her skin was lush green, and her hair was copper fire.

"Our world remains due to your courage," intoned the third. Her umber tones were complemented by a soft golden mane.

Riven had been right, they were weird. Their eyes all had a distinct unblinking stare to them, as if they were gemstones. Their voices all sounded eerily similar, as if one speaker used multiple throats. But January would not have described them as unearthly. It was quite the opposite. It was almost as if the Earth itself spoke through them. Arthur Machen might say that they had seen the Great God Pan, or perhaps were the children of one who had.

January had also raised her magical theory skill enough to recognize the significance of the number three that they represented. The Norns had likewise been a triplicity of Witches, the same with Medusa and her sister Gorgons. Baba Yaga was sometimes described as three sisters. Hekate, the Greek goddess of magic and death was sometimes depicted in sculpture as literally three goddess joined at their backs. And of course the Triple Goddess was a central facet to modern Witchcraft.

"I, um, well, you're welcome," January spoke for everyone. "Thank you so much for coming out to help us. It means a lot, what you did here."

"Yeah, you chicas rock," Viuda's voice rang out from behind them. January glanced back briefly to see that the Puerto Rican superheroine had joined them, along with Harper, the Sentinels, Janos Heisen, and the rest of the supers.

"We are pleased..." said the first sister.

"...our reason for being..." intoned the second.

"...is to serve the Green," said the third.

"Well, anyone else who wants to get served can come to the Aura for another after party." Harper grinned. "Drinks are on the house!"

January found that this superhero after party was a bit less bombastic and enthusiastic than the one that had followed the Battle of Belle Isle. Everyone was a little worn out from the morning's toil under the hot sun. Even superheroes had their limits after all. But January suspected that it was mainly the fact that they had not just narrowly escaped death this time, or faced the near destruction of their world. There was a lot to be said for the adrenaline and euphoria created by nearly dying to make one appreciate life after all.

Still, it was genuinely fun to hang out with her new extended family of capes.

As before January shied away from any alcohol, even beer. Gadget and Ôkami had no qualms about doing so, though the latter nursed a single mug through the entire afternoon. Blackjack had been buying brewskies for the Knights of Nerddom for years after all. Thanks to his full beard, no one ever thought to card him at party stores.

January had never been on the best terms with alcohol however. It tasted terrible. She could never understand how other people could actually enjoy the stuff, let alone debate the tastes, and undertones, and notes, of various beers or ales or wines. It was all just... too strong for her. Not to mention she had no resistance to it at all. She knew from experience that one beer would have her half way to being completely drunk, if not all the way.

Now that she knew she possessed a vulnerability to poisons she understood why. Clearly that weakness extended to alcohol, as well as more exotic toxins such as Abyssal venom. So instead she relegated herself to Fae Cola, like a good Faegallo. Though granted, she had heard they often spiked theirs with vodka or LSD.

Still, the party was fun. There were darts to be thrown, music to dance to, both magical and scientific theories to argue, and beer cups to pong, among other things. It was refreshing just to meet, and hang out with the rest of her extended community of capes without there being some sort of battle going on at the same time. Some of them she had grown up admiring, like the Veil from the Sentinels. Others she was meeting for the first time, such as the Gaia Sisters.

Calypso introduced her to the Technocrat, whom she quietly reminded her to refer to as Janos. That was what he preferred, thank you very much. But she did not really know what to say. She felt like she knew the man backwards and forwards, thanks to the four part podcast series on him that her mother Barbara had just presented. But once you were there, in front of the man who was part hero, part villain, and one of the greatest minds and metas in the world, well, words just failed you.

"It is my distinct honor to meet you young lady," he said, ever the Avarican gentleman.

"I... uh... um... it's nice to meet you too," was about all January could force out in reply.

A note from Sága came to her rescue. She glanced down to the digital assistant at her wrist, and saw that a voice mail had been forwarded to it from her personal phone. The latter was sitting at home, as it always was when she was suited up. Even with the GPS disabled and camera and microphones locked out from apps to use, there was no point taking chances with operational security after all.

Even with the earpiece built into her helmet it was not easy to hear the message. Not with the music that blared through the club's sound system, or the dozens of voices all competing to be heard above the din. But she could tell that it was from her mother. She was just checking in to tell her that she was with her new campaign manager: Frank Wigand, and was going to his place. Of course January knew that he was actually Cray, even if her mother did not. That explained why the hacker was not at the party.

That all seemed good. It was a little weird, but good nonetheless. She had wanted to get to know Cray better. Having him in her family's life as a civilian was a good way to do that, probably better than trying to do so in her cape life. The latter was all business. Even with Blackhawk and Lighthammer, they rarely just hung out and vibed like now. Instead they usually only met on missions or training exercises on Green Island in Lake Erie.

Speaking of Lighthammer, January noted that Cleveland's finest - and only - superhero had taken his prosthetic leg off. Peggy Mark II was what he liked to call it. With Peggy gone, his left leg now abruptly ended just below the knee. He massaged the stump from the old amputation. He moved so well that January often forgot that he was in fact handicapped. January imagined that a hard day's manual labor was not easy for him, not even given that he could fly to somewhat offset his disability.

January saw that Janos Heisen had taken note of the same. For the seven foot tall master of robotics walked over and introduced himself to the former USAF pilot. They began to talk, though January could not hear their words over the rest of the background noise in the bar. Given how the Technocrat gestured to the prosthetic on the floor beside Lighthammer, she could guess it had something to do with that however.

January heard her name, and looked around to see that Silverlight had called her. She went over to speak with her about setting up a new training session with all the Raven Sisters. In the meantime January turned off Sága without hearing the ending of her mother's message,


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Acadian
What a massive cleanup operation of Belle Dragon Isle!

Love the shrinking dumpster magic. I was indeed beginning to wonder how moving and/or emptying such a massive trash bin might work.

’Or was it a boat instead of a ship? January had no idea. All she did know was that the nautically-inclined did seem to get pedantic about the difference.’
- - Spoken like a true landlubber! Or non-seagoing crow? tongue.gif

The Sisters of Terraforma fueled by the Silver Moon! By the Green that was impressive!

Finally, party time after a hard day of superwork.
Renee
Eez, no bathroom. Weird. But then, think about it: this would've been the same for tanks. Those guys were locked inside of tanks for hours and hours during battles.

So, it seems that Rook was rather similar to a rook on a chessboard. He moved forward, maybe he could've moved sideways, but last we saw, he was trying to move backwards! Back to his magical plane. Wonder if he made it. I have a feeling somehow he did.

The guy sitting down in the Ope video... he's got that Midwest accent!

The keyboard player is back. And like him, I'm also trying to decipher how Rook fits into the current story. I'm too hungover to guess. santa.gif But since that took place in 1961, Somehow that ties into Broken Arrow.

Jan is helping rebuild Belle Isle, interesting. And hardly anybody on the ground knows who she really is.
Okay, yikes. So that huge crater where the abyssals emerged is still there! Gosh.

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Of the Belle Isle Casino there was simply nothing left..... Clearly, it had hosted the greatest event in its existence.


Ha!

Kay, I see. So they're "caped up", so everyone seeing Stormcrow, not Jan. And they're using at least some of their superpowers to clear rubble, alongside earth-moving machinery?

Yah, there we go. I want one of Kaelin's drinks. 🍹 More like 10-Hour Energy than 4.

Ah. They don't even need earth-moving equipment. Instead of Action and Defense this chapter's more devoted to Reclaim and Restoration. Because that's the other side of magical powers.

Uhp, here we go: A note from Sága. Okay, phew. No one's in peril and nothing amiss, this time. But this Janos guy from the air force. He seems to be the connect to the downed aircraft.
SubRosa
Acadian: January often says that wearing the cape means more than just punching people. So I wanted to show that by having her and her pals cleaning up the mess left behind by their big battle. Something you never see in the movies or comics. It was another way I could show her being part of the community, rather than standing apart from everyone else.

Also, there are other reasons why regular folks are not doing this, which will be explored today.

I ran into a lot of trouble when it came to that coast guard cutter in its two appearances. No sources comes down to declare it is definitively a boat or a ship. It's in a weird place in between. January of course would have done any of that research, so her uncertainty would be even more pure in its confusion.




Renee: The Belle Isle Casino and the land around it was literally devoured by the Abyss. That is what would have happened to the rest of the world, and the universe, had January and company failed.

I was originally going to have the heroes simply clean up the wreckage. Then in later edits I realized I wanted more. I wanted them to restore it. So I created the Gaia Sisters to have a group of earth-mages for whom that would be natural, pun intended.

Janos is not in the Air Force, nor does he have anything to do with Rook and Keep 19. He's Janos Heisen, the former ruler of Avarica, former Nazi super, inventor of quantum mechanics, and one of the greatest scientists the world has ever known. He's simply here to help, the same as everyone else.




Cray / Frank Wigand

Barbara Ryan (January's mother)

Boxty (Irish Potato Pancakes)

Capitol Park pic

Florida's governor DeSantis wants to build golf course hotels on state parks.


Book 12.4 - Broken Arrow

Cray tried not to stare at the woman who sat across the table from him. Her pale skin had just begun to crinkle from laugh lines, and earthy green eyes looked out over her long features. Her hair was a fiery storm that spilled down past her shoulders. It was not that vivid crimson of Blood Raven's hair, that reminded one of blood spilled across the pane of reality. This was an entirely mundane shade of deep red, vibrant with color, but not overpoweringly so.

She wore a green top layered over a bright pink number that just barely peeked out around the edges. A long, flowered skirt trailed down to her ankles, where a pair of low-heeled, strappy shoes completed her outfit. She looked entirely middle of the road. Not slovenly, not formal. Not rich, nor poor.

But damn, Barbara Ryan was anything but ordinary.

Cray reminded himself that he was a professional. More than that, he was one currently doing his job, even if they had yet to discuss his reimbursement. He wasn't sixteen, this wasn't the Sadie Hawkin's dance, and she wasn't Becky O'Flannery. So why did he still feel the same as he had that night of his first real kiss on the gym floor of Theodore Roosevelt High?

Hormones, he reminded himself, what a drug. Even in his early fifties, they were still having their way with him. At least he had long outgrown the pimples and crackling voice.

He looked down at his finger. It was bare. He had not worn his wedding band in a long, long time. Not since his divorce, years ago. He glanced over at Barbara's own fingers, and noted the same empty space. He could still see the lighter skin where her wedding ring had once sat. The sun had not had nearly enough time to even that out, unlike how it had with his own skin.

"The Rooster Beak got back with me." Cray got back to business. As Barbara's campaign manager, he had plenty to go over. "We are on for our fundraiser on the 19th. So have your speech ready. I also talked with the bank, and the campaign fund is all set up as well. Which is good, because I also have our online donation page set up. I'll have the text-to-give set up for phone users tomorrow. After that I will tackle email donations and social media."

"Damn Frank, I don't know what I would do without you," Barbara looked impressed. "I don't know how you arranged all of that in the what, two and a half weeks since we met? I'll admit that I was a little uncertain about having an IT guy be my campaign manager. But you really are committed. And I haven't even paid you yet!"

"There's no rush on that," Cray insisted. "This is a labor of love on my part, just like it is with you. Besides, it's not like Blood Raven ever got paid for what she did."

"Do you think what they are saying about her is true?" Barbara asked. "That she retired? No one has seen her since Belle Isle. I never thought about it before, but she has been here since before I was born. It's strange for her to not be around, even just lurking in the shadows."

"Yeah well... we're in good hands." Cray tried to stay cool and calm. But deep inside, he could not quiet that nagging sense of guilt that had dogged him since he had started work on Barbara's senate campaign. He was lying to her. Not about everything, but about the most important thing in his life. Well, the second most important thing, after his daughter of course.

Now he had some inkling of what being in the closet must have been like for kids like January and Xochitl. He had lived a double life for some time now, ever since he had walked out of federal prison to find Blood Raven waiting for him in the parking lot. She had offered him a new life of adventure, albeit a virtual one. He had married, had a child, and gotten divorced in that span of time. He had done all of that without ever spilling the truth to the people closest to him.

It was just too dangerous. One innocent slip of the tongue and that could have been the end of all of them. He could not put them in that position. He could not take that risk. It was for everyone's protection, theirs and his, and even Blood Raven's.

But now Detroit's once and only superheroine was gone, off to Boston to clean up her father's loose ends. Cray shivered in spite of himself at the thought of what might lie under the streets of the old city. He had to admit, that nothing had ever frightened him the way that her father Nátthrafn had. That man was the end of all things, if he could even be called a man anymore.

Thank god he was back in the Abyss where he belonged, hopefully never to return.

Things were different now. The whole city of Detroit felt different. It was nothing that you could put your finger upon exactly. There was just... a new feeling in the air. It was not quite optimism. But it was a sense of new possibilities, that the old modalities of being and doing no longer held sway anymore. Anything could happen now.

The world had changed that night on Belle Isle. One only had to look at the giant shining dragon to see the proof. They were part of a multiverse. It might reach out and snuff them out of existence at any moment. But as Y Ddraig Aur showed, it would also fight for them at the same time. It was both terrifying and exhilarating all at once.

So much for the end of history. They now lived in interesting times.

"The Alliance is here now, and I've got faith in them," Cray insisted. He had to believe it was true. Otherwise the thought of what lurked out there in the darkness beyond reality might be too much bear. But he knew it was true. He had been there with them, in electrons if not in body. He knew what they were made of. Even Blood Raven had been proud of them, and that spoke volumes.

"Thank goodness," Barbara breathed. She took a moment to take a bite from her reuben boxty. The crisp exterior of the potato pancake crackled under her teeth, as she took in a mouthful of the corned beef, kraut, and cheese within. Cray took a moment to follow suit, and take a bite of his own grilled chicken boxty. His arteries were probably not thrilled with the fried outer shell. But at least there was chicken inside. That was healthy, right?

"They are a good bunch of kids," Barbara murmured. "Well, Blackhawk and Lighthammer aren't kids. They must in their late twenties or early thirties. But the other ones, they're so young. They could be my daughter's age. I think back to myself at that time, and can't imagine carrying the responsibilities they take for granted every day."

"Believe me, they don't take any of it for granted," Cray said, not really thinking about the measure of authority he had place in his voice.

"It's a good thing they are here," Barbara looked up from their table. Around them the Irish Pub - that was its actual name - spread out. The walls were painted green, but the floor was checkered black and white, and the bar was a lustrous shade of dark brown wood. Like all the others, the small table where they sat was made of chipped and scratched wood, but was polished to a high sheen.

A dartboard sat against the back wall, along with a pool table. Several large, flat screen TVs hung up around the walls. Black and white pictures of the old country hung up all around them, featuring lighthouses, farms, homes, and people in all manner of old-timey dress lined up to pose for the camera.

The TVs all showed the same thing: the Great Lakes Alliance had taken it upon themselves to clean up Belle Isle, along with dozens of their caped friends from around the world. They had not been around very long, but the team certainly lived up to their name. They made alliances.

"They shouldn't have to be doing this though," Barbara continued in a low tone, nearly a growl. "It still pisses me off that the president turned down the governor's request for disaster relief. It's a literal war zone! All because his fragile little ego cannot take 'those women from Michigan' standing up to him."

"He's nothing but the Grifter-in-Chief, a conman famous for never paying his bills, who bragged about sexually assaulting women before he got elected. He's nothing but a selfish, greedy, cowardly, bigoted, bully. I still cannot believe anyone would vote for someone like that."

"I'm pretty sure those are the reasons they did vote for him," Cray pointed out.

"He even deliberately misgendered Stormcrow online," Barbara continued. "You know, some people are mad that he never even called to congratulate her and the others for you know, saving the world. Never mind invite them to the White House. But I guess that's just for sports teams. I'm glad he didn't. It saves them the trouble of telling him to get stuffed."

Cray nodded. He knew from personal experience that the Alliance would have used much stronger language than that. He had heard it with his own ears after all.

"Then on top of that his party in the state legislature has blocked every proposal to fix the damage," Barbara continued to fume. "They want to sell off the land to developers, so they can build condos and hotels around the dragon. And guess who half those developers are? The members of the legislature of course. It's like corruption is not a dirty word, but an aspiration to them."

"It's a State Park, but all they can think about is how to cash in on it," Cray noted. "I can see on my phone that they're already crying that the clean-up is a massive overreach. The same ones still want to charge Stormcrow with killing the Hierophant. Never mind that she saved the world in the process. They do nothing but complain that government is broken, while at the same time they obstruct and sabotage everything they can in order to break it."

"At least we have a sane governor and attorney general," Barbara mused. "Otherwise I can't imagine how badly this would have turned out. Can you imagine them trying to arrest the Allies for saving the world?

"This is why we need you in Congress." Cray insisted. "It's why I don't care about getting paid. We need to change this. The world can't keep going on the way it has been."

Cray thought about those words, even as Barbara nodded, and took another bite from her fried potato pancake. How long could he keep going on the way he had been? How long could he go on living a double life, keeping the people nearest to him in the dark about half of who he was?

"There's something I've been meaning to tell you." Cray sighed. "I didn't mean to at first. But I think what we have here is special... professionally of course... I... don't want to keep important parts of who I am secret."

Now Barbara looked serious. Her features changed. They became intent, set upon him, and him alone. The rest of the world seemed to vanish, as if the two of them were the only people in existence. Some analytical part of his brain reminded him that this was one of her greatest assets. It was her serious face. It made you feel like you were the only one who mattered in the world, and you had her absolute, complete attention. He made a mental note to tell her later to practice that for her public appearances and promotional photos. If she even knew she was doing it at all.

"You already told me about your time in the Army, and how you went to prison for whistle-blowing. If you're gay, or you're trans, I don't care." Her earnest tone broke, and she scrambled for words after that. "I mean, you have my full support if you are! My daughter is both, and I love her to bits! You need to be true to yourself. She taught me that."

"It's not that!" Cray's eyes almost bugged out at the thought that she might think he was gay. That would be the absolute wrong idea to put in her head, given how looking at her made him feel. The last thing he wanted was to be put in the friend-zone. Even though he knew that if she did not do that... well... that was a whole other giant can of worms as well.

"I told you how I am an IT professional," he slowed down, and thought about his words. "I didn't tell you what I've really been working on since I got out. I'm not an engineer at some faceless corporation. I'm a white hat hacker. A hacktivist is what the kids call it today. And I've spent the last fifteen years working with Blood Raven. Now I'm working with the Great Lakes Alliance."

Barbara stared at him for long moments, as if trying to work out the meaning of his words in her head. Then her serious face cracked like an egg, and laughter spilled from her soft red lips.

"You had me for a moment there," she guffawed. "I almost thought... You've got a good sense of humor Frank."

"I'm not joking," Cray sighed inwardly. If he had thought about this ahead of time, he might have prepared for this. It was not like he had any way to prove it after all. He couldn't go outside and lift up a bus like Stormcrow could, or shoot lasers like Lighthammer. He did all his magic from a keyboard. How could he make her see that?

"I am serious," he said stonily. "I realize it can be hard to take in. My name is Cray. I was there, when it happened at Belle Isle. Not actually on the island of course. That would be crazy. I don't have any superpowers. I was online. I back up the team there, and handle all the IT work. I hack into cameras, use drones, crack databases, compile dossiers, and just try to be the eyes and ears they sometimes lack. If nothing else, I'm the voice in their head lending encouragement."

"You don't really expect me to believe that? I mean, people like to cosplay and pretend that they are superheroes. But how many..." Barbara shook her head, and made an unimpressed face. Then her features gradually fell, and her voice took on a tone of dread. "How many of them actually had a supervillain for a son, and only found out after he was dead?"

"Is this about my son?" Barbara recoiled. She looked around herself, and carefully scanned the restaurant. "Did he... did he kill someone close to you? Blood Raven said that he didn't commit any of the actual murders himself. That was the Hierophant. She had proof, from the Hierophant's own diary. I mean, I'm sorry if you did. That should never have happened to you. No one should ever have to go through tha-."

Cray held up a hand to stop her. This had gone completely off the rails. He did not know what he had been thinking, telling her everything. This was why the first rule of the cape was to keep your mouth shut! Never tell a soul. Blood Raven had been clear on that from the very start. It protected everyone.

He had never had a problem with that, until now. Somehow, he did not want to go through life lying to this woman. Even if they were just people who worked together - and nothing else - he did not want that. It was just... wrong. He could not rationally say why. There was no logic to it. It just was... what it was.

"It's not about Julian," Cray said, making sure that the absolute sincerity rang through every note of his gruff, but gentle tones. "It's about me. It's about keeping all these secrets from everyone. Eventually it just gets to be too much. I don't know how Blood Raven does it, century after century."

"That's not the first time you've casually referred to her or the Alliance like you knew them," Barbara's serious face was back. Her eyes stared into his intently, calculating. Clearly, she was making her own tallies in her head.

"I'm not sure how I can prove it to you," Cray sighed and ran his fingers through is hair. "I don't have superpowers. I can't fly, or walk through walls. I'm just a hacker... an administrator. It isn't dramatic or flashy. I know how this sounds. I should have thought about this more, planned for it, like I usually do with everything. I mean, I don't keep pictures of us on my phone, or anything else that could link us. I know my OPSEC. I don't make mistakes like that."

"Except..." Cray looked up from her, and craned his head to one side. He stared at the wall of the pub, and the pictures of old Ireland that fought for space there. He thought of what lay beyond that wall. Of the black and gold combination Neo-Gothic and Art Deco tower that climbed into the sky across Capitol Square.

"What I can do, is show you." Cray looked back to her, and stared into her eyes. "If you come with me, I can take you to the Raven's Nest."

Barbara slid back in her chair. For a moment Cray thought she was rising to her feet. But instead her hand darted into her purse. It seemed like she clutched something there. Was it mace, or a gun, or just her phone? Once again he wanted to kick himself, as he thought about how that must have sounded.

"I am not trying to kidnap you," he insisted. "Which I know, is exactly what a serial killer would say. But if I was a serial killer, I wouldn't be here with you on close circuit TV. The cameras in here have had a good look at both our faces the entire time we've been here. So did the ones in the street outside. My fingerprints are all over the table and dining ware. We've left a clear trail every step of the way. I'd never get away with it. The cops would have me in a day."

"Besides, you know kick-boxing," Cray went on, grasping at straws to reassure her. "You could kick my ass seven ways to Sunday, just like Blood Raven could if she wanted to. You wouldn't even need whatever it is you've got in your purse. Even when I was in the Army I could barely do a pull-up. I was in the Signal Corps, not the Green Berets. I'm a desk jockey. I do all my fighting is with a keyboard."

"I am being serious about this," he wrapped up. He rose to his feet and pulled out his wallet. He threw down a pair of twenties on the table. That would be more than enough to cover the bill. Then he added in some more. Servers - the kind not found in data centers at least - lived off their tips after all.

"If you'll come with me, it's right across the street. Everything will be clear then. I can show you the computers I use. I can show you the shards of Y Ddraig Aur. I can show you Stormcrow's original uniform, and Blood Raven's."

"Y Ddraig Aur?" Barbara looked from him to one of the TV screens. The dragon shone like a beacon there, towering hundreds of feet into the sky. She looked back, then rose to her feet.

"It was a sword, before it was a dragon," Cray explained. "Blood Raven forged it years ago, before I met her. She went back in time to meet the dragon, the real dragon, and bargained for several drops of her blood. She infused that into the sword when she forged it. When she broke it at Belle Isle, she released that blood. It called Y Ddraig Aur here across time and universes."

"That is... nuts," Barbara breathed. But he could see her face softening. So he pressed on.

"I know, right, all this magic stuff?" Cray held his hands up innocently. "I don't pretend to understand it all myself. But that's tame compared to some of the other stories I could tell you. Lighthammer jokes about how weird his life has gotten since he met the Stormcrow and Blood Raven. He's right, and he doesn't even know the half of it!"

Barbara narrowed her eyes, and started at him with a calculating look. Cray felt like his heart had stopped. God, was he such an idiot! He knew better than this. He knew so much better. All of his life he had played by the rules. Dotted every "I", crossed every "T". The only time he had ever deviated from that was when he had blown the whistle on the VA scandal. That had sent him to prison for fifteen years. You think he would have learned from that. But here he was again, about to throw his whole life into chaos because of one reckless decision.

But then, that was what Blood Raven had done the entire time he had known her. She always followed her heart, and her ethics, and did what she thought was right. She never counted the cost beforehand. She just endured the consequences, often with very violent and painful results.

Then again, she was a vampire. She could regenerate from a bullet to the head. He could not.

Barbara pulled her hand out of her purse. It was not a weapon she had been holding, but a phone. She looked down and tapped on its screen. Then she held it up to the side of her head and spoke.

"Hi January, this is Mom," she said. "I'm with Frank Wigand. We just left the Irish Pub. He said he's going to show me where he works. It's... well you can see what time it is when you look at the call record."

"That was clever," Cray noted as she slid the phone back into her purse.

"It's an old dating trick I learned in college," Barbara said. "Always tell one of your friends who you are with and where you are going."

"I never thought of that," Cray admitted.

"You're a straight white man," Barbara said. "You have never had to consider that someone you are dating might murder you. The rest of us aren't so lucky."

"To be honest, I feel like an idiot," Cray breathed. "I can't believe I am doing this. The others, they're going to kill me when they find out."

He glanced up at the TVs. Their screens replayed taped footage of the Alliance and other heroes as they labored to clean up Belle Isle earlier that morning. Given who Barbara had just called, he knew that they were going to find out sooner rather than later. Well, they could always try to stop him if they wanted to. Unless January was too busy to check her messages. Cray imagined that there would be another after party following the clean up, like there had been after the original battle. She and the others would probably be there already.

"Well, that feeling's not unique to you Frank," Barbara said. "If someone had told me this a month ago, I would think they were full of it. But since then I've found out that my husband was lying to me for years, that my son was a supervillain, and that magic is real. So I'm a little more open-minded now. So lead on MacDuff..."
Acadian
Wow, those sandwiches sound good!

Well, this is a surprising twist – Cray interested in Barbara and justifying spilling too many beans about his role with the Alliance. I’m interested to learn what ramifications this has. Especially combined with Barbara’s desire to enter such a public and scrutinized role as a politician.
Renee
Cray looks exactly as imagined, especially the sweater-vest. tongue.gif

And it's sort of interesting the story's now going to his thoughts regarding love. I haven't considered him being involved with relationships at all. He's usually just the voice behind their comms, guiding them here and there. I wasn't even picturing him as a father or grandfather or anything. Sounds like Barbara's sparking some interest.

Indeed. Not outright lying; it's not like she asked him a question about Stormcrow or Jan and he outright lied about knowing both of them as the same person. But he's not being 100% forthwith about his knowledge of Jan/Stormcrow... quarters are really getting close.

That's pretty cool. So he gets out of prison and that is when Branwen's there to meet him!

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Thank god he was back in the Abyss where he belonged, hopefully never to return.


Feels almost like a question mark's debating.

Ah, so disaster relief denied. () The president in this story sounds sort of worse than the Donald.

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"They want to sell off the land to developers, so they can build condos and hotels around the drago


Mm hmm of course some developers would go there. Still, how could anybody see wanting to live near a spot where hellish creatures once emerged? indifferent.gif

Alright, good. See, Cray's doing the right thing. Maybe. Let's hear it, man. Haha, Barb doesn't believe him! ... "I am really a hacker/ IT superstar who's on a first-name basis with Blood Raven and the Alliance supers" does sort of come off like it's too farfetched. Almost like "I'm not just Bruce Wayne..." Yet that's only half the secret. Will he spill the other half?

Wow, she really doesn't believe him. So now he's gonna have to go out of his way to prove it. Yikes. This is getting 'weird'. He's overthinking! Fingerprints? Closed-circuit TV? blink.gif

Thinking about this more, now I'm wondering if Blood Raven had something over him and used this info to keep him in line. She was there when he got out of prison, and because of her, he didn't have to struggle with proving to parole officers how he was behaving outside or prison, presumably at least. Cray could go right into working for Raven, living a comfortable life, and so on. So it makes me wonder if Raven ever pulled him aside. "You know, one word about our relationship, and X can be the result..." Maybe he could go right back where he came from.

Or perhaps, just the fact she is a vampire living in plain sight was enough to keep him in line.

Because otherwise, why does he suddenly feel more confident that he can disobey what the capes warned him about? Would he be about to spill these secrets if Raven was still around? Somehow I do not think so.
SubRosa
Acadian: I want one of those boxtys as well!

I have been wanting to do more with Cray for a while now. I spent some time trying to figure out different subplots for him, as ways of fleshing him out more, and bringing him closer into orbit with the other characters. Then I took a step back and tried looking at things from his point of view. That is when I realized Barbara is right there, and she's not hard to look at, or be around. I instantly knew that was what I was looking for. She is the woman he's been waiting all his life for.

It has the bonus of being messy. All too often I think my characters are too perfect and cautious with their operational security. They make all the right moves a lot. So this season I have been looking to make things messier, show them doing questionable, if not stupid things. Because real people are not robots. Maybe I can introduce more conflict along that way too.


Renee: Cray is definitely interested in Barbara, and its causing him to dance with his feet close to the fire. Love makes you do the wacky!

Actually the president in this story is the Donald. Almost all of the Storncrowverse's president's quotes are literal word for word copies of his. Except the parts that deal directly with Stormcrow of course.

I think the draw to those hotels is that they are all right next to the giant glowing dragon. Not many AirBnBs or 5 star resorts can brag about being able to see a real dragon right out your window. Or allow you to stand on a place where history was made.

Blood Raven does not have anything over him. I don't want to say she would never do that at all. But definitely not with someone as close to her, and important to her, as Cray. He has been her right hand man for 15 years or so. Blackmailing someone like that is a sure fire way to have them betray you the moment you show a vulnerability. The master villain being killed by his own maligned lieutenant is a classic trope. Think Darth Vader turning on the Emperor. Blood Raven knows better than to go down that path. She would much rather rule through love than fear. That is what creates real loyalty.

Now with someone else who is not a member of her inner circle, someone who is not privy to knowledge that can really hurt her, then Blood Raven might blackmail them to get what she wants, if there are no other options. We will see that later this book in fact, when we meet her lawyer.

Would Cray still spill these beans if Blood Raven was around? Probably. Certainly. His life would be no different. It is really no different from January bringing Hannah home to the Witch House and spilling her secret identity to her, a girl she had just met. People do that when they have the hots for someone else. And Blood Raven's reaction would have been just the same as with January. Perhaps frustrated, but understanding.





Capitol Park pic

The Detroit Radiator Building

The Alley



Book 12.5 - Broken Arrow

Cray nodded when she motioned to the door, and took the lead. He led her out of the cozy little pub and out into the street. Capitol Park spread out before them. It was a tiny valley of red brick cobblestones and gray cement, surrounded on all sides by tall Art Deco buildings. He led her through the picnic and small cafe tables and chairs that lay in the western angle of the triangle formed by the small plaza. He continued on past the small grassy area at its south-eastern point, and enjoyed the shade of the trees there for the moment that it lasted.

From there they crossed Griswold at the eastern edge of the triangle. It was a narrow street, so it was not that difficult to wait for it to clear. The same was true of crossing State to the south at the same intersection. That put the Detroit Radiator Building right in front of them. At street level the skyscraper was all onyx marble and black mirrors, with shining gold corbel tables that added a bright splash of color overhead. From there the hundred year old building rose up like a Neo-Gothic needle into the sky. Cray had read that its black and gold bricks symbolized coal and fire. That was in keeping with its original owners, the eponymous heating company that had long since gone out of business.

"Isn't this place abandoned?" Barbara craned her neck up to gaze at the tower above.

"It is," Cray admitted. "That's the beauty of it. Blood Raven bought it a long time ago, through a series of offshore holding companies. She kept it open though, so homeless people can use it as a shelter. You should see what the heating bill is like in the winter..."

"Wasn't there a bunch of murders here, years ago?" Barbara murmured as he led her down State. He stopped at a narrow alley at the eastern face of the edifice. It separated the Radiator Building from the parking structure that rose up to east. He led the way down here, between the high artificial cliffs to either side.

"Yeah, a gang of drug dealers thought they could take it over," he said. "They killed some of the people living here to send a message. Blood Raven turned them into a message of her own."

"That's... not comforting," Barbara said from behind him.

"They worked hard to earn it," Cray insisted. "Blood Raven... she's actually remarkably restrained, all things considered. She's not petty. She doesn't kill people for shits and giggles. It takes a lot for her to go all out like that. But go on a killing spree in her house, and you are going to regret it."

"So this is her house?" Barbara wondered. "Won't she be mad about this? About what you are doing?"

"Probably," Cray shrugged. "But she'd deal with it. She'd be the first to admit that it's easier to beg forgiveness after the fact, than ask for permission beforehand. Besides, it wouldn't be the first time for one of the Alliance to do something like this. Stormcrow once... well, that's not for me to say."

"But it does not matter. She's gone." Cray's voice took on a tone of finality. "She moved on. I can't say where, or to do what. That's her business. She left all this to me."

"That's quite a gift..." Barbara whistled.

"Well, she was quite a woman," Cray said. "She was ferocious, kind, unforgiving, considerate, infuriating, noble, ruthless, pig-headed, and generous to a fault. She was the nearest I think I will ever get to meeting a real goddess on Earth."

"You sound like you love her," Barbara noted.

"No, you don't love a goddess," Cray shook his head. "You just survive her, if you can. She's from our planet, but she's not from our world, if you know what I mean."

"That sounds... foreboding," Barbara said.

"You met her once," Cray said. "You even punched her. Not many people can brag about that!"

He came to the end of the alley. Here a large roll-up door stood within a small annex to the larger Radiator Building overhead. Cray stepped up beside it and swung open a metal panel. He tapped a code into the box within. Then he leaned forward and held still while it scanned his retina. After all of that, the door began to roll up into the ceiling with a loud clatter of metal.

"I - you know that?" Barbara asked. "It's not something I really talk to people about."

"I know that," Cray said. "Like I said, I'm her IT guy. I did all her planning, all her prep work, all her research that did not involve magic and monsters. I saw everything through her suit cameras."

He led her into the loading dock within. There was not much to it. It looked like exactly what one would expect. It was a dusty concrete structure, with a sloped pit for trucks to back into, and a raised dock at the rear for their cargo to be unloaded onto. Cray shut the door behind them. Then he led Barbara up a ramp on one side, and to a wide utility elevator beyond the loading bay.

"Just like you do for me now," Barbara mused.

"Exactly," Cray murmured. "It's what I am good at: managing information. It's always been what I was good at, even when I was a kid back in Queens. I used to collect baseball cards and memorize all my favorite player's stats. I'd try to fill out the whole roster for the Mets every year. You know, regular kid stuff."

"Oh god, you're a nerd too, just like January and her friends." Barbara sighed. But she did smile. She looked a little more at ease when he led her into the battered elevator, and shut the vertical doors behind her. Then the old beast shuddered, and slowly clanked up skyward.

"I know, a computer guy who's a nerd, who could have seen that coming!" Cray laughed. "At least I dress better than most nerds. And I bathe regularly."

"You do," Barbara nodded. "You dress better than my husband, my ex-husband I mean."

"Blood Raven has her dragon silk. Gadget has his powered armor. I have my sweater vests and blazers." Cray took a moment to straighten up his tie. Not that it had been loose or out of place of course. "It's my super suit."

With that the freight elevator shuddered to a halt. Its vertical doors clanked open a moment later, and slid up and down to reveal the room beyond. It was the main floor of the Raven's Nest. A massive square of marble took up its center, and ran from floor to ceiling. It effectively divided the loft into four areas, each of which faced one of its wide faces.

The new trophy area lay against the face that lay straight off the elevator. At one corner of the marble block rose a display case that held the original Stormcrow armor. At the opposite corner sat an identical cabinet in which Blood Raven's iconic red and black armor and cape stood. In the center between them were the shards of Y Ddraig Aur, ensconced within yet another vertical case. Next to that was a lower case with all of the deactivated Abyssal detection poppets. A second low case sat on the other side of the broken sword. It was currently empty, but was pregnant with possibilities. Above all was a large team photo of the founding members of the Great Lakes Alliance: Blood Raven, January, Lighthammer, Blackhawk, Gadget, Ôkami, and Cray himself.

The quadrant to the right of this had been Blood Raven's modern research center. The area was still partly empty now. But the pool table, dart board, and old arcade games Cray had set up there gave it some character. The area to the left of course was his domain. It was all computers, servers, networking gear, and the like. The massive table computer dominated it all. He led Barbara toward this, but stopped when he realized that she was no longer following him.

"That's you, in that picture with the rest of them." She stated the obvious.

"Yes," Cray said softly, and walked back to her. He turned his head to follow her gaze. The team photo she was looking had been taken in this very loft.

"That's the only picture of me with the rest of them," Cray explained. "It's a security risk, because I don't have a suit to mask my identity. But Stormcrow insisted, because we are a team after all. Besides, if anyone gets in here, they are already going to know who I am. They'll probably be looking right at me, since I work here."

Barbara's eyes turned from the wide picture, to the two tall display cases that stood at either end of the central marble wall. "That's Stormcrow's original armor, from before she got her glow-up a little while ago. And that other one, that's really Blood Raven's too."

"It is," Cray nodded. "Blood Raven left it behind. I only found it packed away a few days ago."

"She really isn't coming back then, is she?" Barbara's voice was quiet, almost sad at the revelation. Cray had to admit that he felt the same. He was going to miss the old lady.

Then Barbara's eyes moved to the center of the space, where the broken shards of Y Ddraig Aur stood upright in their own velvet lined case.

"And this... this is really it, isn't it?"

"This is really it." Cray said softly. "I know it's a lot to take in."

"Here," he leaned over to the display case and opened its door. He reached inside, and withdrew the hilt of the now legendary sword. It felt heavy in his hand, and strangely warm. It was like there was a fire deep inside the weapon that had never gone out. He turned and handed it to Barbara.

She took the elongated grip of the longsword in both of her hands. Its double-edged black blade jutted from the crossbar, only to abruptly end at a jagged break. Cray studied her eyes. She looked amazed. Like a kid in a candy shop. He could not blame her. Even after all these years, he could not deny feeling the same way himself around all of this at times.

"The sword that cut the Ring from Sauron's hand," Barbara breathed, as she stared at the magic artifact.

Cray coughed. Gadget had said nearly those very same words upon seeing the sword, some three weeks before. That struck a little near to home. It reminded him of how closely he was dancing with his feet to the fire.

"What, I read Lord of the Rings too when I was little," Barbara defended herself. "I'm a librarian you know. I read books too, between stacking them on shelves."

"What was that about you calling me a nerd..." he smiled.

"Oh hush. I suppose I've always been a book nerd." She smiled back him. That simple grin lifted a massive weight from Cray's shoulders. Then she looked back down to the broken sword in her hands. "It's still warm, did you feel that?"

"It is," Cray agreed. "Stormcrow told me that it's still magical. It's not the original enchantment. It's a new one, that was created by the act of it being broken at Belle Isle and summoning the dragon. She says that someday a hero might wield it in their own journey."

"But it's broken," Barbara frowned.

"Mayhap the Sword-that-was-Broken may still stem the tide," Cray declared. "Stormcrow says that someday an elven king - or a witch queen - might reforge it once more."

"She sounds like a bigger nerd than either one of us!" Barbara laughed loudly then. Her eyes shone, and that light warmed Cray's heart more than any magic sword ever could.

"She is!" he exclaimed. "You would not believe how much she is, all these young kids are. They make us look boring and mundane."

"I can't believe you know them," Barbara gushed. She finally handed the sword back to him, and Cray reverently placed it back into its display case. In spite of how cavalier it might have seemed to just hand it to his boss - not girlfriend - she was totally not that, yet at least. Friend would be good enough. In spite of all that, he knew that this was the nearest to a sacred object he would ever handle, let alone see. The very fate of his world had hung upon its edge after all.

"I know them," Cray said. "I work with them. Here, let me show you where I do my own magic."

He motioned to the computer domain on the south side of the building. As he stepped into the lights of the numerous screens, he finally began to relax. This was going to work out after all.

* * *

"You told her who you were?" Avery practically shouted.

"I know, I know, it was stupid." Cray said.

"Please tell me you didn't tell my mom that I was Stormcrow." January almost pleaded.

She knew that she was the last person with a right to throw stones. After all, she had brought Hannah home to the Witch House after just meeting her. That really was no different from what Cray had done. But it still hit close to home.

Hannah. She had not thought about the other woman in... She did not know how long. Some analytical part of January's brain considered that a good thing. Then she brushed all thoughts of her failed love life aside, and back to more pressing matters.

"No, no, of course not," Cray insisted. "I didn't spill anyone's secret identity, except mine."

"I thought you're supposed to be the wise old mentor guy," Avery cried.

January's best friend did not often lose his cool. Like her, he preferred to live on the down low, not attracting too much attention. It was a survival skill when you were a gay black man. That went doubly so for one who lived in Warren, Michigan. It had once been a sundown town, and well, things had only marginally improved since.

But Avery had thrown his natural prudence to the wind, and was starting to really get worked up as he continued in a full-blown tirade.

"You're supposed to be the one who made all these mistakes when he was young, before the movie started," her best friend exclaimed. "So they just come across as cool and wise and all-knowing, because they're beyond doing all the stupid shit. Us youngin's are the ones who are supposed to be doing the reckless and foolish crap."

"You think I don't know how stupid this was?" Cray threw his hands up in the air with frustration. "I know! I know! I couldn't help it. Has it ever occurred to you that I'm human too? I'm not just a robot sitting at desk all day doing web searches and making phone calls for you guys."

"I..." January said. She considered what her old therapist might say if she had told her such a thing. "You're right. Tell us more. We don't really know."

"I..." Cray sighed, suddenly deflated. He leaned back against the pool table he had so recently added to the Raven's Nest. "Ever since I got out of prison and saw Blood Raven standing there outside the gate, I have been living a double life. There's been this one part of me that I show to the public: the plain, boring, IT guy. He dresses normal. He acts normal: stops at every red light, crosses at the crosswalk. Never steps one foot out of line. He's so boring that no one even wants to know what company he works for, because no one cares to. He's that bland."

"But then I have this secret life. This other life that I can't let anyone else ever know about. Where I do amazing things. Where I am part of something so much bigger than myself. Where I make the world a better place. Where I make a difference in people's lives. Only they will never know it, because I have to stay hidden in the shadows all the time. It's like I'm a dirty little secret."

"This job - this thing we do - cost me my marriage. She could handle me being an ex-con. She couldn't live with me disappearing at all hours of the day, and coming up with lame excuses for why every time. Even the old 'work called me in on an emergency' line sounded dumb to me after a while. She thought I was sleeping with someone else. I had to let her think that, because I could never tell her the truth. So she left me."

"I have a daughter too. She thinks I love my job more than her, because even when I have her, I'm not really here. I have to get on the computer to back up Blood Raven and Stormcrow as they try to save the world. But I can't tell her that. I have to let her believe that my generic computer job means more to me than she does."

"Then I met this great woman: your mom Barbara. She's smart. She's funny. She's driven. She's not content to just bitch about how the world sucks. She's determined to make it better. I want to be part of her life. Because you know what, I don't have one, not at all. I don't have friends. I don't really have family, not anymore. All I have are people with capes, and this damn... job."

"I can't keep living this double life all the time," Cray murmured. "I can't keep who and what I am a secret from every living soul in the world. I can't keep pretending to be what I am not all the time, for fear of what the consequences might be. I need to just be my real, authentic self for once in my life, with someone I care about."

The four of them stood there. Four - because while Ryo was present - he was nothing but a silent shadow against one wall. January found herself speechless, and she could see that Avery was as well. How many times had they each heard that speech of his, echoed within the confines or their own minds? Too many to count, that was for certain.

"Aww hell," Avery finally sighed. "I can't be mad at you bro."

"You are a Queer allegory," Ryo finally spoke up.

"Yep," January nodded. "Living a double life, trapped in world that doesn't understand you, smothered by secrets, having to hide what makes you special. Been there, done that friend!"

"You may be a cishet white dude, but you're one of us," Avery breathed. He stepped forward, and hugged Cray. "Bring it in bro, welcome to the family."

"I'm sorry Cray," January said. She too stepped forward, and gave the older man a shorter embrace than Avery had. "I didn't stop to think about how all of this made you feel. Of course we can deal with this. We always do."

"I am not going to hug anyone," Ryo shook his head when everyone finally turned to look at him.

* * *
Acadian
Nice review of the Raven Nest and how ‘Oh wow!’ it would be to see for someone like Barbara.

Really some good character development of Cray going on here as he opens up about Blood Raven, his past and the internal conflicts he deals with. Not surprisingly, the Alliance accepts him for who and what he is. That is what they do.

"I am not going to hug anyone," Ryo shook his head when everyone finally turned to look at him.’
- - Perfect ending! Letting others see him is as close as Ryo’s getting to hugland. tongue.gif
Renee
Ah, so that is The Donald. See, I didn't even know he tried to get 'extramarital' with some ladies in such a way, yicch. Doesn't surprise me, though.

Okay, I see (about Black Raven & Cray). Sorry, as you know I love speculating. The writer always knows the story best of course, so now Branwen's methods of recruitment were not threatening as I was assuming. Still, Cray got a pretty sweet deal after getting 'rescued" by the Raven. Most convicts when they get out don't have such luxuries; they wind up washing dishes or bussing tables, their parole officers always on call. indifferent.gif Somebody with tech skills like Cray might find themselves heading toward the Dark Web or some such, looking to continue their hacking careers, because it's what they know best. So what I'm saying: the chances of Cray straying from his sweet job so he can find something sweeter seem just about nil. He's got job security up the wazoo.

Anyway, thanks for the explanation. Wow, Detroit looks really clean in those pictures. Baltimore's so grimy in comparison! Huge dips and potholes in pavement, all sorts of diesel dust on the sides of buildings, and so on.

"Isn't this place abandoned?" Heh. If she didn't already know & trust Cray, she'd be out of there! Even Mister Rogers types can be serial killers. 🔪 Sometimes because they appear so non-threatening. Alright, let me shush.

"Wasn't there a bunch of murders here, years ago?" -- Holy cripes.

"You met her once," Cray said. -- Actually didn't they meet several times? But as relatives. But yeah, from Cray's perspective, he might not even know Barb & Branwen are related. I actually hope not. Because if he does know they're related, wow. The list of secrets keeps growing and growing. whistling.gif

I'm hearing Cray's voice as Mister Rogers when he speaks! ... I can just hear him, talking in his soothing voice, like Rogers did when telling young children about the trolley. 🚃

Nerds don't bathe? ohmy.gif Oh. Maybe the types who work all-hours, sleeping in their offices and such.

"It's still warm, did you feel that?" -- Mm hmm. A bit of innuendo, perhaps. whistling.gif

***

YES. Totally, Gadget. I totally get this perspective! Still, how can the guy hide such a secret if he's going to be working so closely to Barbara? It was only a matter of time.

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She knew that she was the last person with a right to throw stones. After all, she had brought Hannah home to the Witch House after just meeting her. That really was no different from what Cray had done.


The difference is that Hannah had already proven herself to be a super, mostly in the same league as Jan, herself. And who else is is Jan supposed to date, anyway? She'd feel most comfortable being with someone who's similarly 'super' as herself. So she meets Hannah, they do some super things together, things no other mortal can accomplish with magic and such. So of course she's gonna want to share her life immediately. sad.gif It's like when two famous actors date & marry. Sometimes that's all they can date, is someone who's in the same profession as themselves.

Hmm, lost my point there. It just seems like with Hannah, there is no need to keep secrets because they'd just met. Whereas it seems Barbara and Cray have mutual ppl in their lives whom they've known for a while. And Cray KNOWS this. The secrets are already ingrained. With Hannah and Jan there were two open books. No secrets, and Jan chose not to start any. Hope that makes sense.

I love Cray's answers as to why he did what he did. Indeed, the guy's super-lonely. In an ideal world he'd be talking up some lady who's not Jan's mom, but things don't always work out ideally.

Yah, Ryo's not into hugs. COVID was such a relief with the social-distancing thing, for antisocial folks like himself.
SubRosa
Acadian: It was good to catch up on the Raven's Nest and once more give a description of it in its current, evolved form. I have had the chance to figure out what Blood Raven is up to in Boston, and in the process I realized that she will no longer be using the Blood Raven armor (or that name). So I decided to add her old armor to the display cases. It makes a nice book end with the original Stormcrow suit, to form borders for the trophy space.

Cray's scene there was good to write. It was only about half-way through that I realized it was a Queer allegory, which led me to the ending quite nicely.

Conflict is what drives story, so I am hoping to work in more internal or at least less overt conflicts like this into the story.

Ryo makes for a great straight man in any comedy scene.


Renee: He was not bragging about having affairs in that circumstance. He was literally bragging about how he just grabbed women by the genitals whenever he felt like it. He thought bragging about committing sexual assault made him look cool. Which obviously it did, since people voted for him.

There are parts of Detroit that are just as grimy as B'more I am sure. And likewise parts of Baltimore that are as shiny, if not more so. Every city has its rich and poor, and the investment placed in the infrastructure always reflects where they stand in society.

Cray knows all about Blood Raven's family. He had to investigate every singe one of them when they were hunting the Hierophant and Summoner. Remember, January was a suspect in the beginning, as was her dad. His whole job is to do research like that.

Nerds not bathing is stereotype that sadly often is borne out in reality. There are some real hard core types who just never leave their computer desk to take a shower.

Ideally to January, Cray would indeed be hooking up with someone who is not her mother. But people fall for those they are around, and that is someone Cray is indeed around.










Mimic

Napoleon III's dining set was real

Starry Night

Systema Naturae

I For One, Welcome Our New Insect Overlords meme



Book 12.6 - Broken Arrow

August 10, 2019

January stretched her senses out into the astral as Avery drove the van up the driveway. She sat in the back, and immediately felt his aura in front of her. That of Ryo was a bright light in the passenger seat beside him. She pushed her awareness beyond them, to the world outside of the vehicle.

She touched the wards that surrounded the Witch House. They came in several layers. The first ringed the entire grounds. It started at the edge of the sidewalk before the massive front lawn, and circled around to the depths of the woods deep in the back yard. The next ring surrounded the very walls of the house itself. Then finally yet another set of barriers ran between the rooms within, like water-tight compartments within a ship.

She partially activated the outer-most shell of defenses. This left it possible for others to physically cross them, but obfuscated all within from clear view. The house was surrounded by trees to begin with, creating a partial barrier to sight. This magic played upon that natural barrier, and filled in the gaps. Now it was impossible to accurately see or hear anyone or anything within. Best of all, it was not obviously hiding anything. From the outside it still looked like a house with many trees around it. Only one sensing within the astral would know the difference.

Avery pulled his uncle Jerome's old Ford up to the garage and parked it there. It was old enough that you actually had to put a key into the ignition to start it, rather than use a fob. Avery pulled the archaic device from the steering column and dropped it in his pocket as he exited the van. Ryo slid out the side door, and January herself popped open both back doors and hopped down to the concrete.

"Ok, we are free from prying eyes and ears now," January told her two friends. She turned and reached back into the van. It was packed with furniture, cardboard boxes, and overstuffed garbage bags. She pulled out some of the latter, and tossed them to one side. They were not filled with trash of course, but rather Ryo's clothing. January had learned from her two recent moving experiences that simple plastic bags like this were ideal for stuffing with clothes.

With those out of the way, she pulled out a silvery aluminum suitcase, and set it down on its wheels beside the van. Avery stepped up and popped it open. Unlike the garbage bags, it was not filled with clothes, well, not exactly. The ultra tech metal of the Gadget suit lay within, all neatly flattened down and perfectly fitted to the space. Avery literally stepped into the case, where a pair of impressions matched his feet. He took a moment to tap the screen of his digital watch. Then he lowered both arms, and stood perfectly still.

His blue suit of powered armor leaped up into the air and clanked into place across his body. In just a few seconds it covered him from head to toe. It glowed to life a moment later, and spilled its soft azure illumination around the driveway. The now fully armored Gadget stepped back then, out of the empty aluminum case. He picked it up and set it out of the way beside the van.

January reached in the back of the van and pulled out the head and front boards of Ryo's bed, and handed them to the powered armor hero. He tucked them under one arm each, and headed for the back door with ease. She followed him with the side boards next, and picked up a dresser with her free hand. Ryo came last carrying the mattress with both hands. Rather than slide it out of the doors, he simply faded them right through the walls of the van.

January did not have to race ahead of Avery to open the back door. She simply reached out to the wards around the house with her thoughts, and a moment later the door swung open on its own. They tromped through the house to the rotunda in its center. Rather than walk the steps, Gadget simply flew up to the second floor with a stream of blue ions. January leaped the distance herself, and dropped lightly upon the banister that ringed the balcony which encircled the upper story of the rotunda. Ryo turned up the speed, and half-ran, half-leaped horizontally along the side of the wall with the grace of a mountain goat. Even with the wide mattress clutched in both hands, he made it look easy.

"This goes a lot faster with powers," Avery noted from the top.

"Yeah, we should get it all unpacked in a quarter of the time it took us at Ryo's parent's house," January noted.

Ryo had picked out a room for himself already. In fact, he had taken its measurements, and created a three-dimensional rendering of it in his computer. He brought this up on his tablet, and January saw that he had even added his belongings to the model. He had the location of every piece of furniture planned and plotted ahead of time, measured down to the inch.

So thanks to his obsessively precise nature, they wasted no time moving things here or there to see how they looked. Instead they were able to get his room set up in no time at all. Granted, Ryo did not really have much. It was just the contents of his bedroom that they were moving into the Witch House, not an entire home full of belongings.

January was thinking it was time to call for a pizza, as was the time-honored tradition after moving house. But both Avery and Ryo surprised her by insisting upon venturing up into the attic. So she dutifully led them back out onto the balcony that ringed the second floor of the rotunda in the center of the house. There she reached up to the ordinary hatch in the ceiling, and pulled both it and the folding ladder attached to it down to the floor.


"I'm not sure if we should be up here..."

She tromped up the wooden slats of the ladder and entered the attic. She cautiously eyed the boards of the roof that sloped sharply inward from each side, and hoped she would survive this expedition without bumping her head. The floor under her feet was coated with dust, as were the numerous crates, barrels, boxes and other containers that filled the space. There were even ceramic jugs that looked suspiciously like Roman amphorae, still sealed tightly with stoppers of fired clay and mortared shut.

"Nonsense," Ryo insisted. He had simply faded up through the floor, without the need of physical assistance from mundane things like ladders. The young Japanese-American reached out to dramatically pull a moth-eaten white sheet away from a large lump that rose up from the floor. Free of the cloth, a clearly modern reclining chair was revealed beneath. Ryo pushed a few buttons on the side, and its foot rest popped out. With another button press, the frame slid back with a faint hum of electricity.

"This is where Keziah put all of her stuff before she moved on," January noted. "I don't know if she'd want us fiddling with it..."

"Think you, such an act of defilement might vex her mightily?" Avery said with a twinkle in his eye. He had slid the faceplate of his helmet back to reveal his features. He had been the last to enter, having taken the steps after January.

He traced his armored fingers across a tall, rolled up carpet that leaned against one wall. "Seriously though, I do not think she would mind. If she really wanted to keep people out, she would have at least locked the door. Or set up a monster like a hellhound or skeleton to stand guard over it all, or maybe left a mimic to bite the unwary hand."

The meta-inventor made a show of reaching for a massive chest, only to sharply yank his hand away for dramatic effect.

That reminded January of the Hierophant's secret lair, and the wight that had formerly guarded it. Until Blood Raven had found it and done to it, what she did to those who vexed her mightily.

Now Ryo stepped up and did open the chest that Avery had pretended was a camouflaged monster. He drew forth a curious dinner plate. It was made of silvery metal, and its rim was decorated with an ornate frieze of palm trees. A coat of arms was engraved just inside the rim. It was as complex as the frieze, and depicted an eagle under a crown, with a pair of scepters crossed behind it.

"Is that silver?" January wondered. Her curiosity got the better of her, and she walked over to see more plates within the chest, carefully packed away in straw. Along with them were cups, platters, pitchers, utensils, and the like. It was an entire dining service. Apparently one fit for a king.

"No, too light," Ryo handed it to January, and he drew up a cup, which also bore the same royal-looking seal.

"I think this is... aluminum?" January thought aloud as she turned the plate this way and that in her hand. "Who makes plates out of aluminum, and puts a fancy seal on them?"

Avery snapped the face plate back down over the front of his helmet. A light sprang from his eye pieces a moment later, and spilled out across the plate to scan it.

"This is the royal seal of Emperor Napoleon III of France," He reported a moment later.

"The mini-Napoleon," January remembered.

"2 Napo, 2 Leon," Avery quipped.

"Nap de Leon 3 - Corsica Drift," Ryo remarked dryly.

Avery apparently studied something within his helmet. "Teh Interwebs say he reigned from 1852 to 1870. One of his baller moves to peacock in front of the other royalty of Europe was his aluminum dining set. This is back before people had figured out how to make the stuff, so it was worth more than gold. When did Keziah leave?"

"Earlier than that," January considered. "I think Blood Raven said 1840-ish? Give or take a few decades?"

"Well clearly she considered time to be merely a suggestion, rather than a Law of Nature." Avery quipped. He once more opened up his helmet, to make his face visible. "Sort of like gravity is to anime characters."

"We should bring this stuff down and start decorating," Ryo drew forth a portrait of a very Enlightenment-looking man striking a dramatic pose on horseback. "Even I think this house is bare and empty."

"I mean, he's not wrong," Avery agreed with the other young man. "You really need to spruce up this place. Most of the rooms are completely empty. It's supposed to be a Witch House, but aside from just a few rooms, it's just a blank house."

"Have you been furniture shopping? I can't afford that." January shook her head, and looked to Ryo. "We can't afford that. None of us are billionaires."

"Exactly," Ryo declared. "That is why we should take all this downstairs and start setting things up. At least get a living room going. The library could use some work too. Well, a lot of work. Hey, I like this one."

He pulled out painting from a stack of covered frames. It depicted a deep blue sky, filled with golden stars that swirled with color. A cypress tree rose up in the foreground, along with a sleepy little village. The flowing brush strokes and vibrant tones gave it an ethereal quality, like it was from another world.

"I know that one!" January cried. "That's... that's..."

"Starry Night," Avery nodded appraisingly. "Vincent Van Gogh."

"I wonder if it is the original?" Ryo mused.

"Isn't that in a museum someplace?" January said.

"It might be," Ryo declared. "But someone who can go back and forth through time at will might have easily picked it up in the future, and brought it back to the past."

That sounded exactly like something that Keziah Talmadge would do. The Witch who had taught Blood Raven herself magic, she had created the Witch House within which they stood, including its space-bending sanctum. All of that was just a work-study program that she had used to teach herself how to travel the multiverse. She did not strike January as a woman who was easily daunted or swayed.

"We'll just tell people it's a copy," January declared.

"Now this, this is definitely going up!" Avery laughed out loud as he pulled out one of the most iconic portraits ever made: a group of dogs sitting around a table playing poker.

"Clearly, she possessed a sense of humor." Ryo observed in his usual dry tones.

"No, no way," January laughed. She reached for the painting, but Avery danced away, holding it just out of reach.

"It can go right over the grand staircase, in the center of the house!" he cried. "That way everyone will see it!"

"It'll go in the bathroom!" January insisted. "That's where it belongs."

"Well, you do have a point there," Avery considered. "The bathroom it is. Downstairs or upstairs?"

"Hey, look at this." Ryo opened up another chest, and drew forth a handful of books. They were all hard covers. Some were bound in faded and cracked leather, others in worn cloth, and even a few had covers of wood.

"Systema Naturae, 1735," the Japanese-American read from one of them. "I think this is where Linnaen taxonomy came from."

The promise of books was more than enough to distract January from Avery's canine portrait. She walked over and stared down into the chest. There were more books that looked like they dated back to 18th century, and even older. But some looked brand new. She pulled out one of the latter, and looked at the slip cover.

"Modern Witchcraft, by Branwen Renner," January noted. "It's from last year. It's the last book Blood Raven wrote under that name. I wonder if Keziah read this before or after she met Blood Raven?"

"Now that is just weird," Avery murmured. Like the others in the Alliance, he knew that Branwen Renner was Blood Raven's secret identity. Well it had been until a month ago, when she had moved on to her newest life in Boston. "Imagine if Keziah already knew that Blood Raven was going to be a magician, before she even met her and trained her. It would be like me going back in time and teaching physics to Einstein."

"You know, you guys are right, we do need to decorate," January looked over the books and smiled. "I'll start with these."

"Leave it to books to change her mind," Avery laughed.

"I am consistent," January nodded. "You would do the same if it was video games."

"I would steal the Devil's own game collection!" Avery insisted. "That guy's got to have the best stuff, without the parental advisories or cut content, and every DLC ever made!"

January stared at the sun that slanted in through the window. "We are going to have to pick it up. My mom's coming soon to record the next podcast series."

"So what's up next?" Avery asked.

"Labor: from prehistory to today," January said. "I've even got a poem to start it out with."

"Dope," Ryo nodded. "It is something that affects the lives of everyone."

"Yeah, it is. But it's sort of unintentional," January explained. "I was going to do the Russian Revolution. But as I worked on the early stages, I had to read up on Marx to get context. Then to understand what he was talking about, I had to read up on the Industrial Revolution. And to do that... well, you can see how it dovetailed. I decided to start with just Labor in general. Then maybe in the future I can do an episode on Marx and Engels. Then maybe one on the Paris Commune, and then maybe I can finally get to the Russian Revolution."

"I for one, welcome our glorious overlords from the Soviet Union," Avery cried in a comically bad Russian accent. "Workers of the world, unite! We must rise up and seize the means of casting pods!"

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Acadian
A fun episode that spills a lot of detail about the witch house and tantalizes with all kinds of tidbits about Keziah. Yes, thinking about manipulating time can make your head hurt!

When Gadget suited up, I had visions of Tony Stark donning his Ironman outfit!
Renee
Mimics are annoying. Urgh.

The Aluminum page taught a bunch of stuff. Like... it was actually rare and even valuable! Did not know that. Well, I knew it was rare, but did not know it was valuable.

Starry Night (any Van Gogh, really) I can't look at those and not get emotional. There's something about that man's work... hard to explain. He really was able to transcend.

Whoa that's crazy. The Witch House has barriers which are unseen, but actually work. That's better than ADT. Problem with security companies is now you're involving an outside entity directly into your personal home. indifferent.gif Which also means dealing with all the false alarms (not a pun) which occur. First two calls are free, after that they charge for each time the alarm triggers, but nobody's there to access the keypad in time.

Ha ha, Acadian is right! He's got an Ironman outfit! 🤖 Ah, so the two dudes are moving into the house. That's a good idea. Place is so huge and cavernous, from what I recall. And Jan barely had any possessions to fill it.

Despite all the gadgetry and magic, it all comes down to an old-fashioned pizza.

Did Gadget really just say "teh" instead of "the", or is that a nit? laugh.gif

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Nerds not bathing is stereotype that sadly often is borne out in reality. There are some real hard core types who just never leave their computer desk to take a shower.


Ah, I see. Sheesh.
SubRosa
Acadian: The Witch House is a pretty cool place. It is fun to explore it some more, as we move things forward with Ryo moving in.

I too instantly thought of Tony Stark when Avery suited up. That was something I tried to avoid actually. But I think it is just impossible with the Marvel movies making him the icon of all powered armor characters.


Renee: I was surprised when I learned about that history of aluminum myself, from the Mini-Napster's plates, to the cap on the Washington Monument. It is weird to think that it was a power move back then, given how cheap aluminum foil is today.

Van Gogh's really impress me too. He has a real mastery of color that just pops off the canvas, and his brush strokes are really soothing to the eye. The guy was amazing. That was a really cool Doctor Who episode featuring him. You can find a clip from it on YouTube, where the Doctor takes Van Gogh to the future to see how he has been remembered.

That was an absolutely intentional "Teh Internetz". smile.gif





Beethoven's 5th Symphony on Electric Guitar

Questions From a Worker Who Reads

The cookie meme Barbara refers to

Bloodhound Gang - The Bad Touch


Book 12.7 - Broken Arrow

By the time her mother did arrive, January and the others had at least filled the den with books. There were more than January or the others had even guessed at. Every time they emptied out a chest or crate, another container seemed to almost magically appear with more. In fact, January did not think it was almost magically at all. They ended up with more empty containers than they had to start with. If the same remained true of all the furniture and decorations, they would have more than enough to fill the entire house, and still have plenty to spare.

"Where did you get all the books!" Barbara marveled when she got her first look at the new den. Now the shelves that lined its walls were packed with volumes both new and old, large and small, on every topic imaginable. New lamps stood from the floor, along with a few small tables, some comfy chairs, and even a couch. As ever, the gigantic globe rose from the floor in its massive wooden stand, and the huge desk that was their recording studio loomed over it all.

"An estate sale," Avery said quickly. He had ditched his Gadget armor before she had arrived. So he was back in street clothing once more, the same as the others. "I showed up early, and got it all for a steal."

"You should have called me, I would have helped you move it," Barbara said. "I'd have helped you move in too Ryo."

"Aww, it was nothing," Ryo said, somewhat abashedly. "I do not have much. The three of us took care of it in no time at all."

"It's good that you moved in," Barbara said. "I'm glad January has some company in this big, old house. I thought you would have moved in first through Avery."

"I wish I could," the young man rubbed the back of his head, his sure tell of distress. "But my Nana's Alzheimer's is getting worse. I need to be at home as much as I can. We talked about putting her in a nursing home. But she wants to spend her last... Well she belongs at home now."

"I am so sorry to hear that," Barbara murmured somberly. "Time comes for all of us someday."

"How is your campaign going?" Ryo's change of the subject was abrupt, as was his wont. But it was not unwelcome. January had known Avery's grandmother all of her life, just as she had known Avery all of that time. It was hard to imagine a world without the old lady and her housecoat and curlers. But people moving on - one way or another - seemed to be happening a lot lately.

"Slowly," Barbara frowned. "I don't know how you did it, but getting the Alliance to campaign for signatures to put me on the ballot really helped. But the news cycles turn quick these days, and I don't have a lot of money to spend on advertising. Not like the other guys do. Galpin and Harding each have an entire political party behind them. I've got, well - you guys - and the Allies."

"With the leave of absence you took from work, you at least have more time now," January noted. "And there is that fundraiser you've got coming up. That should at least get some cash flow going to the campaign fund, such as it is."

"Yeah, it's good." Barbara said. "It's going better than I ever imagined really, especially since Frank came on to be my campaign manager. He's been a godsend. It's just, a lot."

January of course knew that Frank was Frank Wigand, aka Cray. The latter was a fact which they all knew now, thanks to his coming out to Barbara. But Barbara did not know that they knew, much less that they were in fact the Allies. This web they had woven was complicated. She hoped they would not trip over it someday, keeping all these secrets.

On the other hand, January wondered if it was time for the Alliance to make another gesture to help her mother? Part of her wanted to shout from rooftops. But another part of her was cautious. It would be dangerous to associate Barbara Ryan's name too closely with that of Stormcrow.

Given that she was her daughter, inviting extra scrutiny was not wise. But even that aside, creating too strong of an association between Barbara Ryan and the Allies posed an added danger. Villains both mundane and super who lacked the nerve or wherewithal to attack the Alliance might go after Barbara instead. Bullies punched down after all, not up.

Besides, people needed to be listening to her mother because of what she had to say about reforms. Things like raising the minimum wage, providing healthcare for all, and other changes that would make people's lives better. Capes had a way of overshadowing all of that with the glamour that came with them, even if it was undeserved.

"So is Mr. Jack here yet?" Barbara looked around the room for their audio engineer.

"No, Jacob could not make it," Ryo shook his head. Only he called Blackjack - or Mr. Jack - by his full, given name. Even his parents called him Jack. "He has a part in a movie. He had to leave for Vancouver."

"Really, that is totally rad!" Barbara grinned. "You kids don't say that these days do you? What is it you say, it's sick?"

"Totally dope," Avery nodded.

"Dank," Ryo added.

"It slaps," January rounded out the terms of approval. "It's a small part. He's only in a few scenes. But it's a start, and he gets to play opposite the Stone."

"That is Duane Johnstone," Ryo corrected January. "He does not like going by his old wrestling name anymore. I do not think he owns the rights to it."

"Well that's still dope," Barbara nodded. She slung the purse from her shoulder and plopped it down on one of the new reading tables. "Let's get to it. The last time we did this it went on for hours."

"Good," Avery noted. "The longer the better. Listening to podcasts really fills up the dead hours in the day, like cleaning house or doing laundry."

They walked over to the large desk that was their recording studio. Avery hung back and stayed out of the way. He was just a fly on the wall. Without Blackjack, Ryo took over full engineering responsibilities. Once he fired up his laptop they pulled on their headphones and began their usual testing.

"So Belle Isle is looking better," January said into her microphone. She glanced over to see Ryo fiddling with his software, and continued on. She knew from experience that he would need them to talk for a bit to make sure everything was coming through correctly. "It looks green again."

"Yeah those Gaia Sisters from Oregon are really something." Barbara said into her own microphone. "And everyone else too! The Allies sure have a lot of - well - allies. I can't believe they cleared out all the broken concrete, made new topsoil, and planted new trees and grass. With magic they say. It's incredible."

"Good thing too, given that the president refused to release any disaster relief money," Barbara continued. "It's not even his money. But he refuses to do anything that might help a state that isn't run by his party. We really are all on our own."

"Oh come now Mom, he refuses to help the people who voted for him too!" January interjected. "But as long he is hurting the people he is supposed to hurt, they will still vote for him anyway. That's why we need people like you in government."

"I think he's just upset that the battle was won - and run - by women," Barbara went on. "Remember his dig about 'Those Women from Michigan'? Blackhawk led the defense of the bridge. She's the Rock of Belle Isle now. Blood Raven led the overall fight, and she's the one who summoned the dragon and destroyed the gateway. Stormcrow is the one who actually defeated that Abyssal Shadow King and sent him back where he came from. A First Nations woman, a white woman, and a trans woman saved the world. It must really grind his gears."

"Well, Stormcrow did not exactly defeat the Abyssal General," January found herself saying. She was careful not to use his name - Nátthrafn. They had all worked hard to keep that under wraps. Someone might be able to trace that name to the Rauðskinna, and then with that terrible book summon him all over again. "She just sort of knocked him back through the gateway."

"Good enough," Barbara insisted. "That took him out of the fight long enough for Blood Raven to finish destroying the gate. Besides, from what most people say, she's the one who created the Alliance in the first place, not Blood Raven. That's really Stormcrow's greatest power, she inspires people."

"Well, the latest rumor on the internet is that Janos Heisen is responsible for winning the battle," January frowned. "According to right wing pundits like Len Schapiro and Peter Jordanson, he single-handedly killed all the Abyssals and 'scienced' the gate shut. Not surprising that they like the former Nazi."

"Yeah, I saw that," Barbara sighed. "But Heisen shut that down pretty quick. He actually released an official statement stating the facts: he and the other Europeans only showed up at the end and pitched in to help, but Blood Raven led the battle and won it. He even put the Alliance's golden dragon badge on the shoulder his robotic suit."

"So when do we start recording?" January looked over to Ryo. "Are we coming through?"

"We have been all along," the young man nodded, and raised a thumbs up in assent. "It sounds good."

"Oh great, maybe I can throw out a few slurs about the president while I am at it!" she laughed.

"Well, I'm not going to stop you," Barbara said. "The First Amendment protects your right to free speech."

"Ok well, I guess we should get going then." January said. Before she could stop it, her perky phone voice leaped out. "Hi! This is a podcast. I'm January Ward, and my pronouns are 'she' and 'her'. See, I got that right this time."

"And I am Barbara Ryan. My pronouns are 'she' and 'her' as well." January's mother chimed in. "Our audio engineer and editor is Ryo Kuroda, so everyone say 'hi' to Ryo. Those slapping beats you heard in the intro was Beethoven's 5th Symphony, performed on electric guitar by Blackjack Schwartz of Epic Fail."

"What is this Mom?" January asked.

"What do you mean, it's our podcast dear," she replied.

"No, I mean what podcast, so the listeners know."

"Oh, yeah, right." Barbara slapped an open palm against her forehead for a moment. Then she went back to speaking into her microphone. "This is Heroes and Villains. Because real life is messy - and so is this podcast - and sometimes we are a little of each."

"This time it's my turn to present," January said. She looked over her tablet, and stared at the script she had written out there. It was long, page after page after page. Avery was going to be happy, because this was going to be another four part series. That would give them a month of content.

"Our topic for this series is the history of Labor." January began. "That is with a capital 'L', as in people who work, not the act of giving birth. Which I suppose could be an episode of its own someday too... I am going to start with a poem by Bertolt Brecht, called Questions from a Worker Who Reads."

Then she launched into it.

"Who built Thebes of the seven gates?
In the books you will read the names of kings.
Did the kings haul up the lumps of rock?

And Babylon, many times demolished,
Who raised it up so many times?

In what houses of gold glittering Lima did its builders live?
Where, the evening that the Great Wall of China was finished, did the masons go?

Great Rome is full of triumphal arches.
Who erected them?

Over whom did the Caesars triumph?
Had Byzantium, much praised in song, only palaces for its inhabitants?

Even in fabled Atlantis, the night that the ocean engulfed it,
The drowning still cried out for their slaves.

The young Alexander conquered India.
Was he alone?

Caesar defeated the Gauls.
Did he not even have a cook with him?

Philip of Spain wept when his armada went down.
Was he the only one to weep?

Frederick the 2nd won the 7 Years War.
Who else won it?

Every page a victory.
Who cooked the feast for the victors?

Every 10 years a great man.
Who paid the bill?

So many reports.

So many questions."

"So, what is labor?" January asked. "Once again, I don't mean those people with uteruses using them to give birth, which is certainly laborious. I mean the other kind of labor: working. We have a whole working class, we have workplaces, we have - occasionally - worker's rights, we have working mothers-."

"Back in the 80s we had Men at Work," Barbara interjected. "They came from a land Down Under, and made us wonder Who Can It Be Now?"

"Please mom, no vegemite sandwiches," January murmured. "We have avocados these days. But you know who did not have avocado toast? People living before history. They also did not have those other things I just mentioned. They did not need such social classes, or distinctions. In fact, there is good reason to believe that the very idea of social class had not even been invented."

"Back in those halcyon days before history, before even MySpace, life was shaped a lot differently from now. For most of that period Homo sapiens lived as hunter-gatherers. How much hunting, how much gathering, would have varied wildly from place to place of course. It is hard for us to speak in anything other than generalities, since by definition prehistory means before written records. So we don't have firsthand accounts from people who lived 40,000 years ago to work from."

"We do have archaeology, and we do have anthropological studies of modern hunter-gatherer societies," January explained. "These can help us fill in gaps, and form a picture. But it is important to stress that we don't possess exactitude here. Every society is unique, and has its own specific customs and beliefs. Which is just as true for people today as it was for those in the far past. Even now hunter-gatherer societies are not a monolith. They are not all identical copies of one another. You will find all manner of variations between them."

"So looking back, what we do know is that things like employers did not exist. Companies did not exist. Landlords did not exist. Bankers did not exist. Money did not exist. Credit did not exist. Taxes did not exist. These are all extremely new concepts, things we literally made up in the last few thousand years. Ugg the caveperson would have no concept of these things, which literally shape and especially constrain our existence today."

"So what was Ugg up to back then?" January went on. "Well Ugg was first and foremost trying to not starve to death. This is pretty much the first priority of every living thing, and remains so to this day. Some of us may have the privilege of not having to consciously worry about it. But we sure notice when the fridge is empty! So Ugg's most important job, their work, was to hunt and/or gather food. Again, how much hunting went on, versus how much gathering, varied wildly depending on the environment. For example, if you look at people living above the Arctic Circle, you will find that hunting sea creatures takes up the vast majority of this equation. Go to people living in a temperate forest and that will shift dramatically."

"So when Ugg was not digging up tubers or throwing javelins at antelope, what was Ugg doing? Well No. 2 job was pretty much trying to not get eaten. For much of human existence we have not been on the top of the food chain. For example, do a Googol search on saber tooth cats. Those things were real, and they really ate us. Same with prehistoric crocs, hyenas, and even cave bears. I read that the latter were not carnivores. But if a human got in their way, well, that was a bad time to be a human."

"So Ugg's got food, Ugg's not something else's food. What does Ugg do next?"

"I am thinking that being nothing but mammals, Ugg might be doing it like they do on the Discovery Channel?" Barbara laughed.

"Ok that was not in my script, but yes, I am sure sex - both for fun and procreation - was in the mix too." January shook her head, but she had to fight to suppress a smile. "What I am getting at is that there are some things that Ugg needs to survive. Or things that while not absolutely necessary, do make life easier for Ugg, or at least more pleasant."

"Because Ugg made and used stone tools," January went on. "The same was true of some other pre-human ancestors of Ugg. With fire and tools, Ugg was able to more efficiently hunt animals, defend against being hunted by other animals, and even more easily skin and otherwise process the meat taken in said hunts. Ugg was able to make clothing to stay warm during those chilly Ice Age nights. Ugg was able to make shelters to keep the rain off when the weather was bad."

"All of this tool-making requires work. What we today would recognize as work. Some people listening to this might even be making the same sorts of tools that Ugg was using 200,000 years ago: such as hammers or cutting instruments. Only they are getting paid to do so - I hope - and Ugg was not. Because Ugg had not invented money yet, or the need for money yet."

"Ugg did all this work because it was helpful. It was not fun, but it did improve life, so Ugg did it. It was not because he was from an underclass that was forced to do it for some higher, ruling class. That had yet to be invented. At this point, there is no reason to believe that there was any division of labor based on class, or specializations within specific kinds of work. There is also no reason to believe there was even an idea of property yet, not in the way we look at it now."

"These people lived in what were probably small communities, as hunting and gathering does not lend itself to concentrating large groups in one place for long. That exhausts the resources in the immediate area too quickly. They definitely had some social organization, as some of the hunts we have archaeological evidence for shows that they took down massive animals such as mammoths, which required planning and teamwork."

"Now as I said before, we do not know exactly how these societies were structured," January went on. "But looking at modern analogues, we can expect that they were not authoritarian or hierarchical. Rather they were probably quite egalitarian, and very 'live and let live' by comparison to modern, industrialized societies. If someone had what sounded like a good idea, people would follow them and do it. The next day they might likewise follow someone else with another idea. There were no gods or masters in those days."

"For example, one practice that has been recorded in a hunter-gatherer society was that of not quite shaming, but of deliberately giving a cold shoulder to hunters who tried to get too big for their britches. These are people who try to win too much favor and influence over society as a whole. They would essentially be ghosted by everyone else, who would refuse the food or objects the wannabe big shots might be offering up as bribes to others to become their followers. Eventually the would-be big man would learn their lesson, and go back to staying in their lane."

"If you took our friend Ugg and dropped them in the modern world, they would probably not be able to cope with it," Barbara frowned. "Not because of technology. I think Ugg would adapt to modern clothes, and food, and cooking easily enough. He is literally just as intelligent as we are after all. But he could probably never grasp written laws, that are bigger than people, or that other people he had never met had power over him, including the power of life or death. His first encounter with the police would probably end with him either being dead or in prison. That would probably be before his first day here was over."

"Yeah, we've made a world that to Ugg's eyes, would be insanely stratified and organized and regimented and above all constrained," January sighed. "That is not to say that life in Ugg's world was paradise. It was tough. If you made it past one year old you were lucky. If you got sick, if you broke a leg, if there was a drought, if there were floods, there was a real chance you were not going to make it. Mother Nature is harsh and uncompromising, and there is no reloading from a previous save game in real life. There is just no reason to believe that in general people went out of their way to make it even harsher for each other, yet..."

"Which brings us to agriculture," January continued. "This changed everything. It is one of the most momentous shifts in the planet's existence. Modern humans have existed since 300,000 years ago, give or take about 50,000 years either way. But starting roughly 12,000 years ago people began to invent agriculture. It was not a sudden switch, where one day they were hunter-gatherers, and then next they were farmers. It most likely was a slow drift that took place over thousands of years. People and their descendants probably went back and forth from one to the other and back again through that time. But in the end we saw large populations of humans living in a single place year round, and growing crops for their sustenance."

"That is a huge timescale," Barbara observed. "Literally from 300,000 BCE to 10,000 BCE - almost all of human existence - we were living an Ugg's life. Sedentary life is very, very new, and radical, and unusual. It really brings home how new and untried our current model of living actually is. People tend to fall into the trap of thinking the world was always the way it is now, and that nothing ever changes. The ultimate takeaway from that line of thought is why bother to even try to create change at all? But when you look at time like this, it is astounding just how vastly the human experience has transformed in a relatively short period."

"Yeah, it's staggering when you really think about the gulf of years when you look back so far," January agreed. "Time just sort of becomes flat after a while, it is so hard to comprehend compared to what we are used to."

"But back to my script. With this radical change, suddenly the idea of ownership became real: the ownership of land, the ownership of animals, the ownership of people. With that came the idea of social classes. The people who worked, and the people who ruled them. The haves, and the have-nots."

"We also began to see real divisions of labor. We have people who tilled the fields, and that is all they did. We have people who mined the earth. We have people who worked bronze. We have people who sailed the seas, and brought tin and copper from far off places for the previous people to turn it into that bronze. We have a priest class, who gave the kings and pharaohs the divine legitimacy to rule. And so on."

"We now have people with specialized roles, with jobs. These people do one thing. But that one thing cannot support their life. They need stuff from other people. Like food, and beer, and shoes, and the like. So they had currency. People now get paid for the work they do, and in turn they pay others for the things they want or need. I am sure everyone listening is familiar with the concept. But it would have absolutely blown poor Ugg's mind."

"Our oldest form of money appears to have been clay tokens that date back to about 8,000 - 7,500 BCE. By the time of Ancient Sumer silver and cattle had become currency. At first their writing system was primarily used in contracts for trade goods and assets. Royal contracts like this even had a cylinder seal that was rolled over them to create an impression in the damp clay of the tablet. These acted as a sort of ancient credit card, that guaranteed the goods or services specified in the contract to whoever produced it."

"So to recap, we started with communal societies where everyone shared and contributed together, because that is the only way to survive in nature. Then we shifted to complex urban centers where technically that was still happening. But it was taking place under this added layer of commerce, and property, and ownership, and law."

"Most important is money I think. Money changes everything, now doesn't it? It has been noted as being the root of all evil. It inevitably overrides those bonds of community, as people discover that money means the difference between starving or not, freezing or not, living or not. Worse, money and wealth are zero sum propositions. There is only a specific, finite amount of it. For one to have it, means someone else does not. The only reason billionaires can exist today, is because billions of others have nothing."

"And you can't just print more money," Barbara added. "People keep trying that, and it always works out badly, really, really badly. Even though money is literally something we made up, it still obeys its own laws of nature that we can't change, even if we want to."

"So we created a world where everyone must compete with each other for money, the imaginary thing we now need to survive," January went back to her script. "Instead of working together to obtain food, clothing, shelter, medicine and the like - the things we really need to survive. We have stratified the world into working classes and middle classes and leisure classes, based solely upon money."

"Ideas like nobility were invented. It was a PR move invented to explain away why some people had more than others. They deserved it you see, because they were born special, better than everyone else. As I alluded to before, the same was true of organized religion. One of its most important functions was to legitimize the rule of the king, or pharaoh, or other ruler. It isn't just an accident this guy lives in a literal palace of gold. It's because Marduk, or Ra, or Yahweh said so. And sometimes these religious organizations even competed with the king for power."

"We still have a form of both today in the prosperity gospel," Barbara interjected. "Rich people deserve to be rich because God wants them to be. Likewise poor people deserve to be poor, because they are immoral. I don't think it's an accident that when Gene Roddenberry created Star Trek, his utopian society of the future did not have money."

"And to be clear here, I am not talking about religion or spiritual belief in general," January added. "Religion existed long before sedentary life. The Circumpolar Bear Cult goes back to the Neanderthals after all. I am talking about formal institutions which are often directly tied into the state apparatus. In some cases they literally were the state apparatus. These organizations did not simply lead worship, they were part of the control and direction of the people on behalf of the state, or even just for themselves."

"And of course you can add in weaponized bigotry for the trifecta," Barbara added. "It is how the capital class has divided the working class for centuries. You have your factory owner with ninety nine cookies in a pile, a white guy with one cookie, and a black guy with none. Then the factory owner tells the white guy that the black guy is trying to take his cookie..."

"Put a pin in that," January murmured, "because we will be getting to Haiti, and the racist laws that the Big Whites created to divide the Small Whites and the Free People of Color. Not to mention the dawn of what can be considered the modern Labor movement, when the Gilded Age robber-barons did the same thing against labor unions."

"If you scooped up your average Nin or Sippar from Sumer and dropped them in our modern would, I am sure they would have little trouble at all," Barbara nodded along. "Oh, they would be amazed at all our shiny gadgets of course, and have to be told not to stick a fork into the light socket or walk in the street. But unlike Ugg, they would understand that beneath all our gleaming phones and TV screens, the world really has not changed much from when they were living in mud brick houses in the shadow of the ziggurat."

"But you know what won't stick a fork in the light socket, or walk in the street?" January fumbled when Ryo signaled her to make an ad transition.

"I don't think we can make that guarantee..." Barbara murmured.

"The products and/or services that support this podcast," January went on. "Assuming we have ads by now. If not, when the outgoing music ends, you might hear the intro music immediately start up and bring you right back. We don't know, isn't that great!"

"Did we mention that we have a Paetron account now too?" Barbara added. "Simply subscribe to our lowest tier level of two dollars a month, and you will receive our episodes in advance of the regular feed, all ad-free. If not, that's fine too. You can still find us on all the standard podcast feeds. Do what is right for your financial situation. We use this money to support the podcast. Or we will at least. Our first goal is to buy equipment, so we don't have to keep borrowing microphones and headsets. Being able to buy research materials like books and pay for news and magazine subscriptions someday would be nice too."


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Acadian
Magic boxes full of books and furniture has really filled out the Witch House. Reminds me of Candlekeep. . . dusty old tomes, bookcases nearly spilling – oops, wrong story. Can you tell I’ve been playing BG2? tongue.gif

A long podcast but hey, Jan and her mom are trying to cover hundreds of thousands years of human history and apply their take on societal evolution.
Renee
The funny hting about teh and hte is I write teh and hte more often than I write "the". Probably a lot of typists do. It's just taht those mistakes are constantly getting corrected, either with our fingers or auto-correct. It's also because we're using left index finger/ right index finger/left middle finger... tap tap tap! Do it too fast, and teh or hte are the results!

Ha ha haven't seen that Bloodhound Gang video in ages.

No, us nerds/geeks always have way more books than we realize. 📕 And then we want more! It's almost crazy that I work in a bookstore nowadays; there are literally hundreds of publications I'm curious about. Anyway, it's good they're getting the house together. Nice to see they've got downtime, and it's being written up just like saving the world is. smile.gif Yin & Yang. ☯

Yeah, that'll be interesting to see how Barb gets funding. Maybe this'll become a Daria versus Goliath situation. Those who have way more money for ads and stuff won't just topple those who don't.

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She hoped they would not trip over it someday, keeping all these secrets.


Ha. I have a feeling somebody eventually will, trip over that is. That'll be one heck of an episode! - Besides that though, it's hard not to feel a bit worried about Barbara being in the dark all the time. They're really tiptoeing around her in this episode, trying not to say the wrong thing.

"Villains both mundane and super who lacked the nerve or wherewithal to attack the Alliance might go after Barbara instead." - YEesh, this is true. Gosh darn, this is very true.

I've heard of rad, dope, gnarly. laugh.gif Sick. Da bomb. Cool (prob the term which started it all, from our parents' generation). Kids still say cool. cool.gif Never heard "it slaps" though. Wonder if that's a Michigan/Midwest term, sort of like "wicked" belongs to New England.

This is pretty fun. The entire podcast is being written up. 🦸

Very true. Money is nothing but a concept, which us humans made up at some point. And continue to reinvent rules for. Technically, America shouldn't be at the top of hte world, we're so far in debt to ppl who are sometimes technically enemies. See... hte. rolleyes.gif But because of some tweaking and the way economy really works, we still are, somehow.

Ugg reminds me of glargg. Anyway, this fascinating.

"He is literally just as intelligent as we are after all." -- THIS. We didn't just get intelligent in the last 4,000 years or so. We've had large brains for much longer than that. Every single day (literally) there are discoveries being made. "Huh. We didn't know they could do X back then," the archaeologists and anthropologists (etc.) are constantly saying, "back then" might only be 8,000 years ago instead of 200,000. As if we were still banging rocks together not long ago.

Sorry. Let me shush. Interesting how the concept of ownership turned into labor divisions and such. And things haven't really changed that much underneath it all.
SubRosa
Acadian: I am working towards doing more with the Witch House as a setting. Part of that is more people moving to live there, starting with Ryo. And of course that means decorating!

I can tell you have been playing BG2. I have been thinking of going back to BG1 or 2 soon too, thanks to playing the new game a few months ago.

I know, its a long podcast. Juggling those scenes is tricky. I don't want to write what would be a full episode of a podcast. But at the same time, I want to show what one really looks and sounds like. And the good ones require a lot of context before you even get to the meat of the story you are trying to tell. The ones i listen to often have an entire episode of just front-loading context like this, and then an entire episode on the actual subject. Because you cannot understand what is happening today, unless you look at what created those events in the past.

It also gives me a chance to do more with Barbara, which has been one of my goals for Season Two. The advantage of this particular podcast episode is that it ties in nicely with Barbara's political campaign, and her stance as a progressive fighting for the working class.


Renee: I envy you for working in a bookstore. I would love to work in a place like that, surrounded by books. Though I am sure it has its good days, and it bad ones. The same as any other job.

When I stop to think about it, it is wild how money is literally just a thing we made up one day. We cannot live without it now. But for nearly all of our existence it did not exist at all.

The timeline of human existence keeps getting pushed back farther and farther as we discover more and more remains. When I was a children we used to put anatomically modern humans at around 50,000 to 60,000 years ago. Now it is back as far as 300,000 years, give or take about 50k in either direction. And those people were literally no different from how we are today in terms of intelligence or physical ability.






Riven (RL Jeri Ryan)

Mt Shasta Peak pic

Mt Shasta from above, looking west to the valley below

Mt Shasta from above, looking north

Belly to Belly Suplex




Book 12.8 - Broken Arrow

August 12 (Monday)

The view from fourteen thousand feet was breathtaking. Northern California spread out beneath January like a carpet of green forests, blue lakes, and brown earth. To the west lay a nearly flat valley, whose floor lay some ten thousand feet below. A small, rounded hill rose up from the middle of this otherwise level plain. The land around it was crisscrossed by roads of gray concrete. These connected one small town to another down the length of the valley from north to south.

January and Riven stood high above all this on Mount Shasta. They were on a small, roughly oval-shaped gradient. To either side the slopes of the mountain fell away starkly to the east and west. But the ground gradually sloped upward to the north. Then it suddenly jutted nearly vertically to form the highest peak of the mountain. It was less than a hundred feet above their heads, if even that. Ice clung to some of the jagged rocks, while others were left bare in the summer sun.

January could trace several lines of footprints in the snow. They ran across the relatively open space that she and Riven stood upon, and wound their way up to the peak overhead. That made it clear that climbers had been there recently, perhaps only a few hours earlier.

That snow now crunched under her booted feet and those of her Raven Sister - and current teacher - Riven. Even though it was mid August, the air bit at their lungs, and puffed out in small clouds of frost with every breath they took. The horizon was a hazy, gray band, which turned to soft azure the higher January lifted her eyes. Overhead the sky was clear blue bowl, which melted deeper velvet the higher January gazed.

Like January, Riven wore her super suit. Hers was primarily red, but had white accents in the belt, boots, gauntlets, and around her neck and shoulders. A white cape cut to resemble sword blades hung down her back. A pair of domino-style goggles covered her upper face, but left her long, blonde hair free. As usual, a layer of transparent golden light glowed over her suit. It reminded January of a force field that had been shaped into a suit of armor. In fact, that was clearly what it was, as January discovered every time she grappled with the older woman.

"We went through leg locks last week, and arm holds the week before that." Riven began. "So now we get to do the fun stuff: suplexes."

"Ooh, I know the German suplex!" January cried with delight. "I used one against a bone wraith once, sent it right out the window."

"Ok, so that's one down," Riven remarked. "But there are over twenty more I can show you. Let's start with the belly-to-belly. As the name implies, we start out face to face."

Riven stepped close, uncomfortably so. Well, under normal circumstances at least. They were wrestling after all. The blonde heroine wrapped her arms around January's waist and locked their bodies tightly together. Then she lifted January from her feet and spun them both around. Finally she slammed January's back down upon the snow below.

The rocks below, as January quickly discovered. For the layer of white fluff hid a field of rough stones. These cracked and shattered under the impact of the blow, and a small cloud of broken rocks and snow kicked up into the air above them.

January was ready for it however, and was not fazed. As Riven was on top of her, the older woman rose first to her feet. January took her proffered hand up, and then it was her turn to do the same. She could not quite manage the suplex the first time, nor the second either. But with a little tweaking of her hand holds and the shifting of her balance, January eventually got the hang of it. Finally she lifted the other woman from her feet, then sent her crashing on her back to the snow-packed rocks below.

"You know, you could have just come to my dojo in San Francisco for this," Riven remarked as she took January's hand to rise to her feet. "I have actual mats on the floor, instead of rocks."

"This is closer to the waypoint," January said. She glanced to one side, where one of Blood Raven's teleportation nodes lay invisible under the blanket of snow. "Besides, the view from up here is amazing. If this was a movie, the training montage would absolutely take place here."

Riven laughed. "If only life was as easy as a thirty second montage, learning new skills would be so easy."

The older woman's eyes turned down to the valley that lay at the base of the mountain's western slopes. Her gaze wandered to the towns nearby, and a frown crossed her features.

"It's not all wine and roses though," she murmured. "The people living here... well, they're not the nicest. They're more the torches and pitchfork types."

"This is where you grew up isn't it?" January asked quietly. "That's why Blood Raven put the waypoint here."

"Yeah," the other woman nodded to one of the small town's below. "The view was great. The homeschooling sucked. 'A woman should learn in quietness and full submission. I do not permit a woman to teach or to have authority over a man; she must be silent.' You don't want to hear what they say about brown people, or LGBT people, or anyone else. People think that California is a liberal haven. But lots of it is as conservative as anywhere else."

"Christofascism for the win..." January breathed. "You said your parents would have murdered you if they knew about your learning magic. You really meant it then, didn't you?"

"Yes, absolutely," Riven turned back to face January. "Blood Raven saved me from all that, from that life. She didn't sweep in and fly away with me. But she showed me that I could think for myself, and respect myself. She showed me that I had value - not as an incubator for white babies - but as a person in my own right. I couldn't wait to get out of there."

"And you went to San Francisco, the gayest city in the world, and married a Chinese-American." January noted. When she had been a child in the mid 2000s she had read all about Riven in magazines. The older woman had been one of her heroes growing up. Riven was fierce and kind and glamorous. She was a woman who always fought the good fight, and never gave up. What was there not to like?

It still seemed strange to actually stand beside her, and just talk to her like an ordinary person. Much less learn a new martial art from her. But a lot of things that used to seem strange had now become normal for January.

"Rick is Singaporean," Riven corrected her. "Well, Singaporean-Chinese. It's complicated."

"It usually is," January chuckled. That was the reason for her and mother's podcast after all. "I found out my ancestry from Blood Raven a few months ago. I'm Danish, and Irish, and Polish, and Italian, and West African, and... Well you see what I mean."

"And one of those ancestors is the undead Shadow King from beyond reality who tried to end the world," Riven shook her head. "Congratulations, your family's got even more skeletons in its closet than mine."

"Literally," January agreed.

Before Riven could see it coming, January leaped in closely and wrapped her arms around the other woman's waist in a bear hug. She had her off her feet in an instant, and then they were twisting through the air. They came down hard upon the snowy rocks below, and kicked up another geyser of stone chips and frozen water. It was a perfect belly-to-belly suplex, exactly as Riven had just taught her.

"You are unwise to lower to lower your defenses!" January laughed.

Sága dinged then, and January looked down to see that a text message had come in from Silverlight, telling her to check Gilda Gadfly's latest update. She bounced to her feet and took a step back to give Riven the space to rise. Then she spent a few moments tapping at her digital assistant. In a moment its screen was filled with the gossip reporter's wide features, and her voice issued from the speaker.

"Hold the phone, stop the presses, pause that download, and don't click that link. This is Gilda Gadfly from Worldwide Network News, and I am bringing the dish for you. I have an inception alert for you my pretties! You heard it here first. A totally wicked new cape has just taken flight in Boston, and her name is Corvus!"

Riven stepped closer, and January held up her forearm so her sister could see Sága's screen.

"I had to do some digging to find this, because news of this event went unnoticed at the time by major media sources. It seems that a certain beloved Crowgirl of ours was laying the smack down upon the heinous Hyenaman at Detroit's Big Tire at the exact same moment this event unfolded. And I am afraid that the Alliance accidentally overshadowed this other event."

"So almost exactly one month ago, a group of teens were playing in an abandoned school in the North End of Boston. Then a meta-human of unknown origin or even name attempted to kidnap one of them. Well Boston's newest superhero was having none of that. She was on the scene and immediately rescued the girl. Then she threw down with the phantom stranger."

"The battle that ensued leveled the school, literally. We don't have footage of it, as it all took place out of sight inside. But here you can see the aftermath. The center of the building fell in upon itself and collapsed into the basement. However, our new heroine was again fast on her wings, and was able to save the teens who had yet to flee the building."


"Yes, you heard me right, wings. She has them. Our new finely feathered friend introduced herself as Corvus in an interview that she gave to a local influencer immediately afterward. As you can see here in the video he took, she wears a black and white outfit culminating with a great set of black feathered wings. When asked if she knew our other blackbird friend from the Dragon City, well, here is what she had to say:

"Stormcrow and I have yet to be formally introduced." The audio changed to a clearly less polished source, and the masked features of the corvid-themed heroine filled the picture frame. "However, I am certain we shall get along gloriously shall we ever meet. We are birds of a feather after all, given that we share the same mentor."

"There you have it," Gilda's voice once more rang across the link. "Not just a new super, but yet another student of Blood Raven. They have come to be known as the Daughters of the Raven, or Raven Sisters. Blood Raven may have taken a well-deserved retirement, but her legacy lives on in the other capes that she has trained. From Riven to Stormcrow, from Boston to San Francisco. Welcome to the party, Corvus!"

January closed down the Worldwide Network News app as the pre-recorded clip came to an end. She lowered her arm, and turned to her eldest sister.

"That was no 'student' of Blood Raven," she smiled.

"Hell no it wasn't. She's got a new name, and a new look. But that was the old bird herself." Riven grinned. "It is brilliant though, rebranding herself as one of her own students."

"Now if anyone notices any similarities between her new identity as Corvus and her old one as Blood Raven, she can just put it down to her training," January mused. "It's genius!"

Then Riven wrapped her arms around her, and January forgot all about her newest sister of the traveling raven. A moment later she went crashing to the snow-packed rocks below, and the lesson went on.

* * *

August 13th (Tuesday)

"Happy birthday dear... Janaury..., happy birthday to you!"

January leaned forward and blew out the twenty candles sprinkled across the cake before her. It was round, with white vanilla icing: her favorite. Written out across its surface in blue lettering was her misspelled name - Janaury - surrounded by pink flowers created from frosting. Cheers erupted from around the table as the candle flames winked out, and a small cloud of smoke rose up in the air in their wakes.

January leaned back and reached for the conical party hat that was slung over her head via a rubber band. But Rus batted her hand aside, and prevented her from removing it. He and all the other Knights of Nerddom were gathered around the kitchen table in the Witch House. The table was something that she, Avery, and Ryo had found in the attic. Made of light brown oak, its rounded edges were carved with scrollwork, and it legs curved out gently to mimic sinuous feet.

"We are not getting a cake from that bakery again," January's mother Barbara shook her head after glancing at the misspelled name. "Still, I think you might be getting a little old for all this."

"Never!" Blackjack cried out from the phone that Ryo held aloft. He was still away in Vancouver, so he had to join them via video chat. "We will never grow up!"

Ryo himself had only just returned from Obon - the Japanese festival for the dead. Cranbrook held a celebration of it every year for the city's Japanese-Americans. While he was a Buddhist, Ryo himself was not very traditional. Like January - and all the other Knights of Nerddom - he was a product of the 21st Century. In some ways, they all lived in vastly different worlds from their parents and grandparents.

But his parents were traditional. There was no question of them not attending Obon. If Ryo was anything, he was a dutiful son. In that way, he was indeed very traditional as well. So there was never a question of him not attending with them.

All of that slipped from January's mind when her mother leaned forward to cut the cake. She smiled in spite of herself at the sight of the spongy yellow filling within: her favorite. In the meantime her grandmother Sarah went to the fridge and pulled out a box of vanilla ice cream. Again, it was January's favorite.

Kell leafed through the newest issue of Artemis Argent and the Secret of Mystery Hill. It was the second of their six issue series, literally hot off the presses. January would start shipping them tomorrow to their Jumpstarter backers. The bearded young man had to put the comic book aside when a plate filled with cake and ice cream was pushed in front of his face however.

"This is really cool," Kell murmured through a mouth full of ice cream. January was not sure if he meant the ice cream, or the comic. "I am going to miss you guys when I move Up North for school."

"When do you leave for Houghton?" Sarah asked. "It's really nice in the autumn. My late husband and I went up there once to see the fall colors."

"Two weeks, at the end of the month," Kell murmured through a mouth full of food. "Classes start on the 28th."

"Naah, we're just a vid call away," Blackjack declared through Ryo's phone. "We can still do video gaming."

"Besides, you are going to be partying and rolling with the fine ladies of da UP, eh," Rus teased in a mock Yooper accent. "And if you get bored, you can go out hiking and look for the Michigan Dogman."

"Nah, they found him!" Blackjack exclaimed through the phone. "The Allies put the smackdown on that furry fiend! Stormcrow gave him the Crowbow, and his dogging days were done!"

"The Crowbow?" January wondered.

"The elbow drop," Blackjack said. "Yeah, it needs some work. She needs to hire a writer - or a pitchman - and workshop this stuff."

"Like how the Stone has the People's Elbow," Rus added.

"He prefers Duane Johnstone," Ryo finally spoke.

"People's Elbow?" Avery said in his terrible Russian accent. "Sounds like the finishing move of the mighty hero of the Great Patriotic War - Red Snow. Na zdorovye!"

He held up his glass of milk, and January leaned over to clink her own glass against it.

"The Valkyrie's Elbow," Grandma Sarah ventured another possible name for the finishing move.

"Valhalla's Thunder," Barbara offered.

"Ragnarok," Avery considered. "Because when it drops, it's all over."

"I so gotta twit that out," Blackjack murmured through Ryo's phone. "Stormcrow follows me you know. She'll like that one."

"She was at the airport when you came back the last time," Kell said. "That is so awesome that you got to meet her and get selfies. I wish we could meet her and the other Allies someday."

"Maybe if you write songs about supers, they will come out to meet you too." Avery suggested. "You know, I think White Fell is single, and you know she's a wild one."

"Yeah, she's a werewolf!" Rus laughed. "Your song could be Werewolf of Minnesota! AAAAAWWWWOOOOO!"

January bit her tongue, as was reflex whenever the topic of Stormcrow came up. It was just so weird, hearing the people she knew talking about her, without them knowing it was her. She did not know how Avery could be so cool when talking about the Allies. It was like he never worried about someone putting two and two together. Or maybe he just blustered through it all so well, that it just seemed that way. She should probably take a few cues from that.

Ryo was a cipher of course. But he was always taciturn by nature. So no one ever noticed his lack of participation in a conversation. That was just normal for him.

The time for presents rolled around soon enough. The Knights had made a rule a long time ago to not give individual birthday presents to one another. Instead they all pooled together to give one present to whoever's birthday it happened to be.

Given how they all seemed to be going their separate ways these days, January privately wondered how long that could continue. Blackjack's career was taking off. If things continued to go well for him, it would mean more time he was in Vancouver, or Los Angeles, or wherever else he might have to go for his next movie role. Assuming of course he got another one. January certainly hoped he would.

Kell would be gone soon, off to Michigan's Upper Peninsula for three years to finish his electrical engineering degree. That would leave just her, Avery, Ryo, and Rus from the old adventuring party. She did not see Avery or Ryo going anywhere soon. Ryo had just moved in with her after all. But Rus, well, he had never made it a secret that he hoped to make it just as big as Blackjack was doing, and be off to someplace like New York to pursue a career in art. Given how well Artemis Argent was doing that no longer looked like merely a pipe dream, but a real possibility.

January took a long moment to look around the table at her friends, there both physically or remotely. She was the youngest of them all - albeit just barely - so this was the last birthday of their gang for the year. Would this be the last time they were all together? Did this time even count? Or were the Knights of Nerddom already a thing of the past?

She knew that it was normal for people to move on with their lives after high school, and eventually drift apart. People did not remain with their childhood friends forever. They had all turned twenty this year, starting with Blackjack and Ryo's birthdays in February, only a day apart. Most people would have already moved on by now, to different jobs, different schools, and different lives. She supposed that she was lucky, to have held on to all of her old friends for even this long.

"Ground Control to Major Tom," Avery quipped, waving a hand in front of her face. That brought her out of her reverie, and back to reality. There were presents to open, and she was the birthday girl. So she could not tune out on that.

She resolved to live for the moment. For right now, and enjoy it while it lasted. So with a grin she ripped into her gifts with wild abandon, just as if she was still a child on Christmas morning. She found all of her presents to be based upon her motorcycle. Her mom had given her a pair of skin tight leather motorcycle pants. The Knights had gifted her with a pair of racing pants in black, white, and pink. Finally her grandmother had given her a pair of calf-high motorcycle boots, with stylish laces that ran up the sides. They looked rakish enough to be something that Artemis Argent would wear while swashbuckling from one airship to another. She vowed to talk to Rus about that, and include something like that in the next issue he drew.

* * *
Acadian
The scene with Jeri Riven did indeed conjure images of movie training montages such as Sean Connery and his apprentice in Highlander.

So Blood Raven reemerges with a new identity! A superhero disguised as a new superhero. Brilliant indeed.

Nice birthday party and you presented the bittersweet nostalgia nicely as Jan realizes that, with twenty summers behind her, hanging onto childhood friends can be challenging -

I had an invisible friend when I was six. We used to spend our days playing. Then as life filled with the demands of school, more school and career, I lost her. It took me over half a century to find her again. . . and now we spend our days playing.


Nit: ’She smiled {in?} spite of herself at the sight of the spongy yellow filling within: her favorite.’
Renee

Whoa, Riven is cute. embarrased.gif

They're wrestling on a mountain, huh. Riven's thought is my first thought: why are they doing this outside, with rocks and snow all around? But maybe it's because it's more like real-life, eh? When fights occur in the real world, they rarely happen in studios.

Ugh. Sounds like Riven's upbringing was pretty doggone conservative.

Gilda is like Three Dog, but without the occasional condescending remarks.

Hmm, this Corvus, she's another white hat from the sound of it. And okay, yeah, she's from Boston. Which is where Branwen went (sort of.) OHHH. So Corvus == Blood Raven. Good gosh. Did not see that coming. I wonder why she changed her name.

Jan's a Leo. I never tried guessing, but if I had to I would've gone with Aries. Another fire sign, but cardinal rather than fixed. Somebody misspelled her name. laugh.gif

Nice. She gets a bunch of gear for her flying Vespa. That's what all her friends are seeing, all her friends who don't know her alter-identity, anyway. They see her flying around town on her cycle, so from their perspective, THAT bike is the newest thing in her life. Because they don't know the other side of her.
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