Renee: I wanted to keep with the whole spider theme regarding Viuda's aircraft. So I looked up how spiders balloon, and found that their electrostatic repulsion was just perfect.
La Sirene is the Haitian loa (goddess) of the sea.
Viuda is definitely the science gal, while Calypso is the magic chick. Together they make a great duo.
I wouldn't want to have a tarantula walking over
me. But I am a lot less bothered by one crawling over January. As Viuda said, they are just animals after all.
Well, it is still just an idea to use water elementals for that. It might not work, just like all the other ideas Viuda mentioned that they tried. Things are often easier said than done.
Acadian: It was nice to come across a new form of flight like the electrical repulsion, aside from the basic ideas of: "go really fast", or "ignore the law of gravity, because physics is just a suggestion" routes.
I could not help but throw in a Minsc and Boo reference as I was writing that part.
If the Hierophant was smart, he would not be doing any of this. As January pointed out, everyone who tries is, ends up dead. That is not even taking into account the utter foolishness of picking a fight with Blood Raven. I mean, she killed an entire panzer division once.
WellTemperedClavier: One of the reasons I made January a nerd was so that I could consistently use all these nerd culture references, like Minsc and Boo.
The Technocracy is a sovereign state. I spent a lot of time working, and reworking it. I still only have a general idea of what it is. At first it was going to be a republic in Central Asia, centered around RL Kazahkstan, Tajikistan, etc... But I did not like how that was working out with Heisenberg as its ruler. It felt too much like the White Savior trope, with this European scientist leading an Asian nation. So I moved it west to Central Europe. Right now I am working on the idea that it is Austria. But that could change if I have a better idea.
The Technocrat is RL Werner Heisenberg. I originally created him as a sort of Doctor Doom like character. A genius scientist in power armor who was the ruler of a country. Working up his background I realized that he had not been a villain for a long time however. Not since WW2. He fought for Germany of course, and at the end of the war he was captured by the Russians, in their own version of Operation Paperclip. When Stalin died he escaped, and I picture him being part of a complicated series of diplomatic moves that ended up in Austria gaining its freedom from both Soviet and Western control (which actually happened IRL). The Technocracy was created out of this as a socially progressive, pacifist society dedicated to education, science, and the arts. It is definitely the most advanced nation on the Earth.
I picture Heisenberg being the head of state at the beginning. But I know he stepped down from that a long time ago. He cycled through some other positions, like minister for education. Now he is completely out of the government. But he still has a lot of soft power, because his name carries a tremendous amount of weight. These days he follows his own passion projects. Such as a recent mission that he took to Jupiter and its moons. I am thinking he brought back some ultra-dense hydrogen from Jupiter, and he would have explored its inner planets. Now he is working on the project to clean up the ocean garbage patches with folks like Calypso, between other things.
Occasionally he also fights supervillains along the way. Because, this is superhero fiction after all. Being over a century old, and a meta-human inventor, he is one of the most powerful metas in the world. He is up there at the level of controlling spacetime, gravity, quantum energy, and the like. He will also be making a personal appearance near the end of this book. Along with every other active superhero and villain I have ever name-checked in all these stories so far.
Put a pin in what you said about putting the fire under the Hierophant's feet. Because that will be directly addressed this coming post.
RaderOfTheLostArk: Yellow Journalism is very much subject to the Law of Supply and Demand. If there is a demand for something, someone
will provide it. As you said, the only reason it is profitable is because so many people eagerly slop it all up.
I am pretending I understand that part about Coulomb's Law too...
It is amazing how much of what we perceive as reality, is actually just our brain filling in gaps for us like that. Whether it is vision, memory, etc... It really is rather disturbing when you think about it.
I don't see a specific end in sight for the Stormcrow fic. I am kind of looking at it like a TV show, with distinct "Seasons". Each Season having its own theme and single overarching story. Books 1 - 10 is Season One. It introduces all the main characters and the world, sets them in motion, and gives them something gigantic to do.
I have a general outline for Season Two and its themes and plot written down. It will be a lot more down to earth, focused on fascism, a political race, and police brutality. January's mother will play a much larger role here.
Season Three is a very vague idea of January going on an accidental adventure across both time and the multiverse, where she is mainly just trying to get home, but learning more about magic and fighting along the way. I see her meeting Blood Raven's mentor Keziah Talmadge in the process. I see her in Viking Age Scandinavia, and learning that the Norse were not everything she had hoped for (she really does not fit in there). I also see her meeting her own fictional characters (in what is at least to them) a very real world. I see her reappearing back on her own Earth at the same moment she left, wondering if it was all real or just her imagination. Except that she will come back retaining all the knowledge she had gained along the way, like how to fight with a sword.
Since this is the final Book in Season One, I am going to repost the entire timeline again. All of Book 10 takes place in one day - July 8th (which is just one day after the end of the previous book).
2019
March 24 = The Summoner summons an Abyssal (a goblin) during the Nain Rouge Parade. It is not anchored, and easily banished
May 4 and 5 (Saturday and Sunday) = Stormcrow 1 Rising
May 4 = January's first battle as Stormcrow against Lighthammer at ConFabulation in Southfield.
May 5 = January teams up with Lighthammer to capture conflict diamond smuggler Bhavin Subramanian at the Flint airport.
May 5 = The Summoner summons an Abyssal (flying head) during Cinco De Mayo, using elemental symbols to anchor it, making it immune from banishment
May 14 and 15 (Tuesday and Wednesday) = Stormcrow 2 Recycled
May 14 = January's first battle against Archie at Source One Metals
May 14 = January overhears her parents argument about her being trans.
May 15 = January's second battle against Archie, then meeting with Isaac.
May 24 = January's Mom files for divorce
May 25 and 26 (Saturday and Sunday) = Stormcrow 3 Burning
May 25 = The Summoner summons an Abyssal (buggane) during the Technofest, anchoring it with an animal sacrifice
May 25 = The Flying Dutchman fire.
May 26 = Blood Raven reveals her identity as 'Aunt Branwen' to January
May 27 = Memorial Day. January and her mom move into the Witch House.
May 27 - June 1 (Monday -Saturday) = Stormcrow 4 Pride [Ferndale Pride on Saturday]
June 1 = The Summoner summons an Abyssal (djieien) during Ferndale Pride, anchoring it with a human sacrifice
June 1 - 9 = Stormcrow 5 Crystal Death [Motor City Pride]
June 1 = Chad overdoses on Crystal Death at Leland City Club.
June 3 = first Crow Tales, featuring Frankenstein
June 8 = second Crow Tales, featuring This Spell For Hire. January stops the Death Dealer. Blood Raven humiliates Nazis at Motor City Pride
June 9 = Nazis on Crystal Death attack Motor City Pride
June 10 - 14 = Stormcrow 6 Eloise
June 11 = January records interview with WNN.
June 13 = January quits working at the dojo, starts working on Artemis Argent with Rus
June 14 = January's interview is aired in its entirety, as well as in print and on WNN's website. It generates massive waves of both support and backlash against her. The same night she faces off against Gola at Eloise.
June 16 - 24 = Stormcrow 7 Hammer Down
June 16 = January does first aborted taping of Crow Tales Podcast
June 17 = January does second attempt at Crow Tales Podcast
June 17 = Lighthammer ambushed at Cedar Point
June 18 = January's mom moves out.
June 20 = January meets Michigan AG.
June 21 = January meets with Ohio state AG, DEA, and Lighthammer to make a deal.
June 22 = Fourth Crow Tales, featuring Winter Tide, by Ruthanna Emrys.
June 22-23 = January and Blood Raven patrol downtown, while the Detroit River Days festival takes place. They are joined by Ôkami, and all 3 intervene in a truck accident on the Ambassador Bridge.
June 24 = January does her first book signing at the library.
June 25 = (afternoon) January joins Lighthammer in a joint police raid on a ship in the Cleveland port.
June 25 - July 5 = Stormcrow 8 Blood
June 25 = (evening) Ryo gets his armor and sword at the Witch House
June 26 = January encounters Hannah and her father at Lakeside Mall
June 28 = The Summoner ambushes January and Blood Raven at Gull Island during Jobbie Nooner, summoning another Abyssal (oniare).
June 29 = fifth Crow Tales, featuring Nemesis, by April Daniels
July 3 = Funeral of the Summoner.
July 5 = Entire team trains on Green Island. Hannah melts down.
July 6-7 = Stormcrow 9 Ashes
July 6 = January captures tiger, does brief interview with Gilda Gadfly
July 6 = January's parent's divorce is finalized.
July 7 = Battle of Montserrat, January meets Kaelin, Harper, Viuda, and Calypso
July 8 = Stormcrow 10 Alliance
Blood Raven's Main Theme - Two Steps From Hell - BlackheartBlood Raven and Stormcrow can be found on the Stormcrow MapMemories Change Every Time You Access ThemThe Iron BrigadeBook 10.1 - AllianceJuly 8th, afternoon
"I met your old friend Calypso when I was in the Caribbean yesterday," January said. "She told me that you trained her."
"That privilege was indeed mine." The other superheroine's name brought a genuine smile to Blood Raven's crimson lips. "How does she fare? Long indeed has it been since we last met."
"She's good," January replied. "She and a bunch of other people are working with the Technocrat - umm... Janos Heisen - on removing plastics from the world's oceans."
"Glad tidings indeed," Blood Raven nodded. "She was always passionate about the sea, even as a child. It does an old woman's heart well to see that dedication invested within such a worthy endeavor."
The pair of superheroines stood atop one of a row of red-brick residence halls in the heart of the University of Michigan's main campus. Their feet balanced upon the knife edge of the roof's sharp peak. In January's case she literally rested her weight upon the dark shingles. Her mentor simply hovered in space as if gravity was merely a suggestion, rather than a law of nature.
Around them stretched out both the university and the city of Ann Arbor. Directly in front of them was a row of tennis and basketball courts, flanked by a large athletics field. Even now various groups of young people availed themselves of both to exercise and compete. Beyond stretched more of the university buildings, along with the twin smokestacks of a power plant. Farther away still rose the brick and stone forest of downtown Ann Arbor, interspersed in a few places with more modern-looking glass and steel edifices.
The narrow belt of the Huron River looped back and forth to their right, only to disappear behind them. Tall hospital and medical school buildings stretched skyward behind their backs, rising between them and the river's undulating course. Finally to their left stretched out a carpet of trees that covered the Forest Hill cemetery in a blanket of greenery. This continued on to form a nature area and arboretum that hugged the river as it meandered to the east.
In all directions beyond this stretched the long rows of neighborhoods of Ann Arbor and nearby Ypsilanti. A few lonely sentinel peaks rose from this expanse of suburbia, such as Michigan Stadium. But from up here, it was mostly green trees, homes, and fields that spread out to the horizon.
"So how many of us are there?" January asked.
"Us?" her mentor cocked an eyebrow whose incredulity even a Vulcan science officer would have been proud of.
"Daughters of the Raven," January replied. "People like me that you have trained."
Blood Raven leaned back her head and laughed.
"Daughters of the Raven?" she shook her head. "You are spending too much time around Cray. That young man loves his melodrama. But to answer your question, well, we should be here the entirety of this afternoon should I recount all of my apprentices throughout the centuries."
"In the last few decades then," January pressed. She was genuinely interested.
"Well, speaking purely of magicians, rather than meta-humans such as Vortex, there is yourself of course, and your friend Ôkami."
January tried not to react to the sound of Vortex's name. She really did. But that did not prevent an empty feeling from spreading through the pit of her stomach. She banished that feeling through sheer force of her will. She was so over her, completely over her. Whatever she had with the other woman - and January was still not sure what it even was - was done.
Sure.
"I met Kaelin here in Detroit when she was little. She had crafted a potion that allowed her to fly. But unbeknownst to her, its efficacy was of a very limited duration. She found herself marooned atop a church steeple. I had sensed her flight, and was there before anyone else noticed."
"I first met Calpyso whilst upon a quest in the Bahamas. Her parents were of great assistance to me, as they possessed a local knowledge which I sorely lacked. There was no mistaking their young daughter's growing power. She was practically a mermaid! So when the affair was concluded, I availed her of my own knowledge."
"There is Silverlight in Washington DC," Blood Raven continued. "I tutored her oh, some two decades ago. She is not one of Selene's Heirs, like myself. Yet she draws her inspiration from the moon goddess Selene. She takes after me in many ways."
"Then there is Riven. I met her in the 90s, in a small town near Mount Shasta. Like the others, she was young, much younger than you are now. She is now wed to Thunderbolt of course, and currently makes her abode in San Francisco."
"Wait, Riven is a magician?" January asked. "I thought she was a regular meta?"
"Nay," Blood Raven shook her head. "Like you, she has focused her magic upon the physical, even more so than in your case. It is how she creates her weapons and armor. It is also why she can alter their sizes and shapes."
"That seems to be a thing with us." January noted. "We all seem to have a shtick don't we?"
"A shtick?" Blood Raven seemed to fumble with that word for a moment, before she finally nodded. "Yes, I suppose so. There are magicians who are jacks of all trades, skilled in all manner of spellcraft. But I suppose the greatest of us focus ourselves upon an ideal, and we make that our reality. You have done this to become an elemental valkyrja, and Kaelin an alchemist. Riven is a master of weapons. Calpyso has her connection to the sea, and Silverlight the moon goddess whom she personifies."
"And you?" January spared a sidelong glance at her mentor.
"I am the raven ravenous," the elder heroine murmured, "The phantom queen."
January nodded. She had seen her mentor in action. With sword in her hand and fury in her eyes, she was indeed the Morrigan on Earth, the Irish goddess of magic, war, and death. Even her sword - Samhain - whispered in the Morrigan's voice, as if it was the goddess itself. Perhaps a better way of looking at it was that the raven sword embodied the ideal of the goddess. It was an idea given form and matter, and breathed into life through magic.
Or it was given a shtick, if one chose to look at it that way.
"But we have other things to discuss, and errands to run this day," Blood Raven went on. "We must return to the hunt. And it is time that you learned the secrets of the Hypnotic Voice."
Blood Raven took off into the sky. January unfurled the great crow's wings from her back and followed. Soon they were back to questioning all of those who had come into contact with her brother. They spent as much time in the air as possible to avoid complications with civilians. People always stared and flocked around someone wearing a cape after all.
They would not have worn their armor at all, save for the fact that driving back and forth in a car and constantly finding parking would have taken forever. Walking would have burned even more time. So the sky was still their best option for transport. Besides, as Blood Raven had already noted, the Hierophant knew they were hunting him.
"Let him hear the ravens shriek of his coming demise," her mentor had said.
Almost as if summoned by those words, January noted a curious man who strode the sidewalk beneath them. He was somewhere between fifty and fifty thousand years old. It was really hard to tell given his unruly mop of gray hair, and equally sloppy beard. She could see that he wore an old leather patch over one eye, as threadbare as the rest of his clothing, which appeared to be mostly old Army surplus.
He carried a hand painted sign high over his head which proclaimed that the end of the world was here. This was in sharp contrast to the two dogs that crowded his feet, whose tongues lolled happily in the summer sun. January guessed they might have been huskies, but really big ones. They were practically wolves, with their great statures and gray-white fur.
He was shouting something about the end coming for everyone. January could not make out the exact words. All she could hear was the screeching of ravens in her ears. She stared for long moments as they flew past this strange man.
Then she shook her head and continued on. They had things to do, and gawking over crazy people in the street was not one of them.
They made their way into one of the many university buildings. There Blood Raven questioned one teacher and student after another, January turned her senses to the astral. Her mentor had already explained the theory of how the spell functioned. It sank into one's brain and took hold of the mind. It could work in multiple fashions, from creating strong suggestions to guide behavior, to recalling memories, and of course to forcing the truth from subjects.
Now she watched as the tendrils of power quietly sank into the minds of one person after another. She watched how they activated various areas of the brain. But there was more to it than that. When Blood Raven encouraged them to remember past events, the spell was not simply working on their minds. It was doing something to reality itself, folding it somehow, warping it.
It took some time for January to put her finger on just what she was witnessing. Then she understood why it felt so familiar. It was similar to how Vortex warped space, connecting one place to another for just an instant, and stepping across the gap between them. Only Blood Raven was not linking
places in the world with one another, she was linking two separate
times in the world, the past with the present. Because of that, her subjects recalled events with the same clarity as when they happened. Because for all intents, it
was happening even as they spoke.
"Memory is not a fixed thing, as many would like to believe," Blood Raven explained to her in private. "It is not a record chiseled in stone, which never changes. Rather every time we remember an event, we are in truth recalling the
last time we remembered it. Not the original event. Because of this memories change over time, sometimes in drastic ways, like the wandering course of a riverbed."
"So it's like a playing a game of telephone with yourself, but across years," January observed.
"We called it pass along when I was your age, but yes, that is exactly the case." Blood Raven said as they flew to their next stop. "Because of this, simply prompting one to recall an event is not enough to summon a truly accurate depiction of events. One must step back through time, to the event itself. Otherwise you can never do more than witness the past as if through a mirror darkly."
"Now, it is time for you to try." Blood Raven said at their next stop. They touched down in front of a two-story home near the university campus. They still wore their armor of course, but she knocked on the door as an ordinary person would. Here in the suburbs there were at least fewer people around, meaning no crowds to mob them seeking selfies and autographs. Those few who were outdoors simply stopped from their gardening or walking their pets and stared. Some fumbled for phones to take pictures. But all were too far away to hamper their mission.
Also as January had already noted, they were not trying to be subtle anymore. The Hierophant knew they were coming for him. There was no point trying to hide it.
January called up her magic when the door opened to reveal a man within. He was middle-aged, with hair retreating back from his scalp. He was clad in the classic tweeds and stereotypical bifocals of everyone's idea of a professor. If she had written him as a character in a book, people would decry her from being unoriginal and uninspired. But it turned out that sometimes real life was common and ordinary, and exactly as you expected.
She looked into his eyes and reached out with her power. It sank into his brain with tendrils unseen to mundane eyes. Yet they were brilliant strands of energy within the astral realm. That glowing power subsumed his will, replaced it with her own, and turned him to nothing but a puppet on her strings.
January's stomach felt... wrong. It sank, like it had when Vortex had vanished from the beach on Green Island after their argument. She felt queasy. His mind was under her control, but she pulled back, as if she had burned a finger upon a hot stove.
She turned away, and pulled her magic in tightly to herself. She heard Blood Raven speak behind her, and felt the elder heroine's own magic complete the interrogation. They left without a word, and did not speak until they were both alone atop the roof of a nearby apartment building.
"Tell me," Blood Raven said gently.
"It felt... wrong," January scowled. "I don't think I can do that."
"That is a healthy attitude to take where these matters are concerned," Blood Raven replied. As ever, she had a habit of saying the last thing January expected. "This is very dangerous magic. The opportunities for its abuse are as plentiful as they can be catastrophic. Even with the best of intentions, one can inadvertently seed false memories within a person. Worse, it can turn another into a slave to your will."
"So why do you use it?" January asked.
"Because all power poses a similar danger," Blood Raven replied. "Take your strength. You can use it to save someone by lifting a burning motor car from their body. Or you can use it to rip them limb from limb. The Hypnotic Voice is no different. It can ease misery, or cause it. It is our ethics that determine how we employ all of these tools."
"I hear you," January still frowned. "But it still feels wrong."
"Then it is not for you," Blood Raven insisted. "Never use your power in a pursuit that unsettles you. It will likely go awry in your hands, for you are sure to unconsciously sabotage the endeavor. Worse, it will chip away at your ethical beliefs, until all feels permissible in the quest to fulfill your goals."
"Is that why you didn't use it on people like those Nazis at Motor City Pride?" January wondered.
"Yes," Blood Raven agreed. "This is a power I rarely employ. Usually only to gather knowledge, or to ease another's suffering. I remember slavery. The woman who suckled me as a babe was
owned by my father, which is another way of saying she was owned by
me. Never again. I did not serve in the Iron Brigade for that."