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McBadgere
Most excellent!!!...

Loved it... biggrin.gif ...

I loved the idea that he's have to stand and declare himself first...Like they do on TV "F.B.I. Stand down!!!" sort of thing...Excellent!!... biggrin.gif ...

Brilliantness!!...As for these here..

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Savlian quickly knelt by the dying elf and lowered both sword and shield to the ground. He clamped one hand over the mage’s face to steady it, drew his dagger and drove it powerfully up under her chin.


*Winces*...Ouchie!!...Well, briefly at least... biggrin.gif ...

And...

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“I cannot imagine surviving without blade, shield and mail. You’re quite brave to do what you do.” He studied me for a moment. “I shall serve as your steel.”

“I know you will, Savlian.”


Awwwww!!...Bless...Tha's lovely that is... biggrin.gif ...

Nice one!... biggrin.gif ...
mALX
I love the shock on the conjurer's faces at the sight of a Legion in their midst taking them down - great touch !!! My fave line has already been quoted but bears repeating:

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“I shall serve as your steel.”

“I know you will, Savlian.”


Awesome Write !!!
ghastley
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Being a mage without magic is a very traumatic and helpless feeling.


Very much the equivalent of being attacked by a will-o-the-wisp while equipped with only a steel longsword.
liliandra nadiar
Woo. Ending the year with style. smile.gif

the Legend of Button and the Bear
That sounds like the title of a childrens story released by Black Horse Press. tongue.gif

Stripped of her magic by my spell, and equipped with only robes and a dagger, she intended to take on the Legion soldier who had stepped in front of me!
No one's told Buffy of the AI that dosen't concider equipment I see. tongue.gif

He gestured toward the heavy door. “Can you see life signs inside?”

“Not into buildings from the outside, or even differing levels of the same structure.” Shrugging my shoulders, I added, “I don’t exactly know why that is.

And more poking fun at game limitations. biggrin.gif Love it.

“How dare you throw your puny magicks at me, leaf licker!”
No, no, Teresa's the leaf licker. Buffy's the branch swallower. hubbahubba.gif

Awesome introduction to the fort and it's cheerful and friendly inhabitants. I second the appriciation of the last couple of lines in the chapter.
SubRosa
“I am an officer of the Legion and will offer this sentry the opportunity to surrender the fort.”
I liked this, becuase it is not just a hokey sense of fair play. Savlian is a lawman, and this is part of his rules of engagement. If not, he'd be a tyrant, rather than a protector of the people.

Noting the numerous skulls mounted on stakes that flanked the door to the fort, I vigorously nodded my agreement.
Me three! ohmy.gif

So into the fort with the tongue-twisting Celtic name. One clannfear down without too much fuss. Now it is another Altmer with his shiny new skull toys. Got to love these folks. Oh, and he moved just as Buffy fired! That always drives me nuts in the game. At least now we know that they are worshipers of Molag's Balls.

...leaf licker!”
I have to remember that one!

Now Buffy is the one to be silenced. The hand is on the other foot now! But thankfully she has Savlian with her, and those potions. Buffy's admission that being severed from her magic was spot on. The worst thing that can happen to any mage.
Grits
I blinked at him, then whispered, “Are you-” the word ‘daft’ came to mind, but I settled for something more tactful, “-sure?”
laugh.gif

Savlian stood upright. I rose from my crouch as well, hoping the sudden appearance of both of us would intimidate the sentry.
That must have been very difficult for Buffy to do. Only for Savlian!

As the soldier yanked his blade free, the heavily wounded creature not only survived, but wheeled to retaliate. I grabbed its now exposed tail and discharged illusion magic.
First standing up and announcing her position, now grabbing a clannfear by the tail?!

My leap to the side was too slow and, as the spell struck, I felt the link to my magic sever. One hand dove into an outer compartment of my pack for a potion.
This has turned into a tour of Buffy’s worst nightmares, but she has responded beautifully to the pressure!

I restrained my queasy stomach to a quiet burp before I replied, “I told you I don’t do so well at close range.”
Well, I think she was magnificent at close range. Savlian’s professionalism was inspiring. They make a very strong team. I especially like the respect that they show one another. These two are a joy to see in action!
King Coin
This chapter starts immediately wonderful! The description of the fort under the moons set the scene beautifully in my mind.

I blinked at him, then whispered, “Are you-” the word ‘daft’ came to mind, but I settled for something more tactful, “-sure?”
laugh.gif
I’m glad Aravi doesn’t feel the need to announce her presence anymore.

Now that Altmer was daft… Easy prey for the lion of Kvatch. Wait, is that Jerric’s title?

Just inside, they are learning to work together well.

Good idea, affiliating the conjurers to a daedric lord.

For a second I thought the brutal close range work of Savlian’s sword that made Buffy queasy. It was actually from being silenced!
Acadian
In Episode 145, Savlian and Buffy arrived at Fort Agarctova. The single conjurer on sentry duty refused to surrender and was killed by magic and blade. Our duo under training then entered the fort. As they began their gruesome task of clearing conjurers and Daedra, they continued to learn from, and adjust to, each other. They will spend the next two episodes inside this fort.

McBadgere- Thank you! Buffy long ago realized that she doesn’t have the stones to declare herself and survive. She’s not proud of it, but she is definitely a devotee of what she calls the ‘cowardly preemptive strike from shadows’. Savlian’s world of in-your-face honor and blood is some real culture shock for her.

mALX- Thank you for quoting what I hoped would be a powerful line. Buffy has always been drawn to chivalry and heroes clad in steel. This is likely a matter of opposites attract, but Savlian’s statement certainly pulled her heart closer to him.

ghastley- I think comparing a ‘silenced’ mage to a warrior trying to fight a will-o-the-wisp using a steel sword is an excellent analogy. ohmy.gif

liliandra nadiar- Thanks for noting the curious effect of loading screens on detect life; Buffy shrugging her shoulders was the best explanation we could provide. Lol on the leaf licker! tongue.gif

SubRosa- Thanks for endorsing Savlian’s duty to declare himself – at least to the first conjurer. I like how that draws a sharp distinction between characters like Savlian/Alawen vs Buffy. Hey, I stole ‘bark biter’ from you and would be honored to see ‘leaf licker’ appear in TF. I agree that when we portray enemy mages who are smart enough to use silence, detect life or dispel, those squishy robe wearers can become terrifying for characters like Buffy or Teresa. I hope you will enjoy a couple minor mysteries regarding its occupants that we have tried to weave into Fort Agarctova.

Grits- Hee! Buffy was smart enough to think that Savlian was daft for declaring himself, but not dumb enough to call him on it to his face. I was focused so much here on trying to develop Savlian, that it quite escaped me how right you are to point out that little Buffy required some courage to do a couple of the things she did. Thank you so much. Thank you even more for highlighting that these two characters do indeed respect each other and readily show it. I know it sounds cliché, but I believe any strong relationship rests upon a foundation of respect. I like to think we have done that with all the ‘anchor’ characters in Buffy’s life like Daenlin, Mazoga, Acadian, Boderi and others.

KC- Thanks for the kind words on our intro. I’m glad that Aravi believes in the preemptive strike as well – it’s just safer that way for more fragile characters. You were right on both counts at reading Buffy’s reactions to the fighting. The gruesome swordplay made her queasy and having her magic cursed nearly scared the pee out of her.

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146 Forged by Fire

We continued deeper into Fort Agarctova.

The layout seemed simple enough. A single main corridor descended down several small sets of steps and provided access to a handful of rooms on both sides. As we made a turn and looked down the cut stone walls of a long passage, I studied the glow ahead. Noting its tail and long arms, I whispered, “Scamp.”

A single poisoned arrow killed the Daedra.

As I crept toward my kill, I felt the horror of a thin line tightening against the buckskin covering one shin. Then I heard the tripwire break. Before I could drop to the floor, Savlian’s shield swept around me and I was pulled against the wall. The massive iron ball, replete with spikes, barely missed us as it swung on the arc allowed by its chain. How could this man think, move and react so much more quickly than I? Looking up into his face, I breathed, “Thank you.”

After stepping around the sprung trap, we crept up to the dead scamp and cut free my arrow. Scanning ahead, I quietly reported, “I see two glows fairly close. One looks like another scamp and I think the other is a conjurer.”

We silently moved around another corner and into a chamber containing the two closest glows. I was impressed at Savlian’s ability to glide among the shadows when required. From our crouched position against the wall, we could see a scamp in the company of another blue-robed Altmer. She seemed able to control the Daedra. It stood patiently as she loaded its long arms with logs from a massive pile of firewood along one wall.

I held up my fist and looked to Savlian with a question in my eyes. He nodded. I launched an emerald swirl of magic that engulfed the scamp. The Deadra dropped its burden, viciously raked its claws across the robes of the Altmer, then stepped back and began to gather fire in its hand. The startled conjurer responded by summoning a clannfear to defend against her formerly obedient servant.

The beady eyes and long muzzle of the reptilian armored life support system for teeth and claws swept our direction. There was no doubt we were now detected. Ignoring the plight of its mistress, the beast lowered its armored head and turned its full ire toward me!

Surprised and frightened, I momentarily froze as the charging clannfear devoured the limited space between us. Instinctively, my right hand had filled with magic that could render me invisible, but I would not abandon the man at my side. My mind raced indecisively. Muscle memory caused shielding magic to flow through my left arm into Slayer, and the bow came up defensively of its own accord – just like Boderi Farano had relentlessly drilled into me.

The beast of my nightmares was then intercepted by the man of my dreams.

The resulting clash of teeth and steel spurred me to action. I barely noticed the ongoing struggle between Altmer and scamp as I danced behind Savlian, reaching out to briefly apply healing touches as best I could. When the creature lifted its head to shriek in pain, a Legion blade viciously slashed across its unarmored throat.

As the clannfear fell and its glow faded, so did the Altmer to the ravaging scamp. By then however, I had fitted the tail of an arrow to silk. “Get down!” I commanded.

Just like we had briefed in his tent, the soldier immediately dropped to one knee. The wounded scamp’s fireball was passed in flight by a single lethal arrow fired from over Savlian’s shoulder. My protector made no move to dodge the fireball; rather, he raised his shield. I ducked behind him as flames fanned out around us before quickly dissipating.

We rose to our feet and turned to face each other. Both of us said in unison, “Are you all right?”

Proud that I hadn’t peed my greaves, I nodded. Even in the dim light, however, I could see the blood and burns on the Imperial as his chest rose and fell heavily. “Hold still,” I ordered. Shouldering Slayer, I reached up and placed a hand on each side of his face. My magic flowed into Savlian, allowing me to assess and diagnose. I then closed the wounds, eased his bruises and faded the burns to memory as I willingly accepted his pain. Lingering in the intimate bond of white magic for longer than was necessary, I was stunned by the number and extent of long-healed lacerations, punctures, burns and broken bones that I detected. Lucilius had spoken the truth about the harshness of Savlian’s career. Reluctantly, I allowed the bond to fade, then slid to the floor exhausted.

Savlian lowered himself to the cold stone and sat beside me.

“I need to let my magicka and fatigue recover,” I said. “I don’t have much endurance and the way I heal is very draining to body and spirit.”

“Take as long as you need, my elf.”

“I’m sorry I got flustered and froze up on you, Savlian. I realize now that I should have commanded that clannfear to fight for us just like I did with the scamp. Or at least turned him from us in fear. I’ll try to do better.”

“Buffy, I can see that fighting alongside an ally is not something you’re used to. I believe the two of us can learn to be stronger than the sum our dramatically different skills. That’s why we’re here. Don’t be harsh on yourself. It is your magic that both located and caused the death of that conjurer, and it is your bow that killed the scamp. I believe in you.” He wrapped an arm around my shoulder. “Rest now. I will listen for any approaching foes.”

A slow scan around me verified the only glows within range were distant and stationary. I snuggled into the warmth of Savlian’s chest. My head filled with the fragrances of mineral oil, singed surcoat and sweat. Although very different from the comforting smells of Superian, inhaling the scent of this man brought a similar peace and feeling of safety. “I’m also sorry you got burned,” I said quietly. “I know you could have easily dodged that fireball had I not been behind you.”

“I told you that I will protect you – whatever it takes. I’m beginning understand how being small and vulnerable drives so much of what you do.” He rubbed one hand along the rounded edge of the steel disc that had taken the brunt of the fireball. “Besides, this shield is the one I gave you during your first visit to Kvatch. The very one you enchanted then returned to me the second time you came here. It helped protect both of us by resisting some of the flame.”

We rested a bit longer, passing a waterskin between us. “I’m ready to continue now,” I reported.

As he stood and pulled me to my feet he chuckled. “Perhaps we can figure out a method of dodging in unison.”

“Like dancing?” My arms found their way around his neck as one cheek settled against the wolf on his chest. Strong arms circled my waist and I felt Savlian’s chin resting atop my head. I had no doubt his eyes were open for danger as I closed mine. Just for the briefest moment, we were not standing in some dark and dangerous dungeon, but swirling across the floor of a sparkling ballroom. As the strains of beautiful music filled my ears, I imagined us dressed in silk and velvet instead of leather and steel. I could almost-

“We have a task here, Buffy.” Savlian’s admonishment was gentle and he did not withdraw the warm comfort of his arms.

“You’re right of course.” It was I who reluctantly broke away and said, “If either of us commands ‘dodge left’ or ‘dodge right’, I expect that would work. If I say or hear the word ‘split’, I will move right, expecting you to go left?”

“Agreed.” He gestured across the chamber. “Let us search the dead conjurer and recover your arrow from that scamp.” As we did so, Savlian remarked, “Some of these Daedra are not summons.”

“I know,” I replied, “and I’m mystified by it. The Altmer in that room full of skulls mentioned Molag Bal. Perhaps these conjurers have made some sort of pact with that particular Daedra Lord. Maybe we’ll find answers ahead.” I augmented my detect life range with a spell and scanned all the way around us. “There are only two remaining glows – unless there are more levels below this one. They look like sleeping conjurers.”

“Lead on, my scout.”
SubRosa
I felt the horror of a thin line tightening against the buckskin covering one shin.
Wonderfully described. Oh noes! ohmy.gif Good thing Savlian was handy with his shield.

How neat that the scamp was on firewood detail! I love seeing conjured critters being put to uses other than simply killing things.

Uh oh, it is a Clannfear! The beast of my nightmares was then intercepted by the man of my dreams. Again, this is a wonderful description of our bosmer bowgirl's straits.

Proud that I hadn’t peed my greaves,
Yay! biggrin.gif

What a wonderful turn of events that the Savlian is using the same shield he had given to Buffy, and she had given back to him, enchanted. We also see more teamwork evolving between the pair, doing exactly what this dry run against the conjurers was meant to.
King Coin
As I crept toward my kill, I felt the horror of a thin line tightening against the buckskin covering one shin.

I love that sentence. Aravi knows that feeling, and luckily it isn’t very often that she feels it.
I’m glad Savlian’s great reflexes saved Buffy from a lot of pain.

Oh no! the clannfear charges Buffy! Unlike her nightmares though, it was put down by her knight in shining armor!

Of course Buffy would use the healing as an opportunity! laugh.gif
Haha, Buffy’s mind wanders. They are working well together, though as Savlian pointed out, Buffy needs some practice. I wonder if he’ll need some practice working in such a small group. He’s normally leading a garrison.
McBadgere
There are soooo many cool things in this chapter that I may as well just re-post the whole thing... biggrin.gif ...

But maybe I'll just settle for this one thing that I thought was unbelievably cool...

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Lingering in the intimate bond of white magic for longer than was necessary, I was stunned by the number and extent of long-healed lacerations, punctures, burns and broken bones that I detected. Lucilius had spoken the truth about the harshness of Savlian’s career.


*Applauds*...

Brilliant mate...Just brilliant...

Nice one... biggrin.gif ...
Grits
All right, now I have such a crush on Savlian, I probably shouldn’t even comment on this episode! tongue.gif

How neat that the scamp was carrying firewood. The summoned clannfear showed why they make such valuable allies, attacking a danger that the conjurer didn’t even see!

This is my favorite part in a favorite episode:

As the clannfear fell and its glow faded, so did the Altmer to the ravaging scamp. By then however, I had fitted the tail of an arrow to silk. “Get down!” I commanded.

Just like we had briefed in his tent, the soldier immediately dropped to one knee. The wounded scamp’s fireball was passed in flight by a single lethal arrow fired from over Savlian’s shoulder. My protector made no move to dodge the fireball; rather, he raised his shield. I ducked behind him as flames fanned out around us before quickly dissipating.


So swiftly and elegantly described that even before Buffy’s remark, I thought of them as dancing. happy.gif

Now I’m wondering about the source of those non-summoned Daedra. But I'm in no rush to find out, in case there might be time for another quick cuddle. tongue.gif
mALX
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These two lines bear quoting again - very Buffy moments !!

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Proud that I hadn’t peed my greaves, I nodded.

Lingering in the intimate bond of white magic for longer than was necessary, I was stunned by the number and extent of long-healed lacerations, punctures, burns and broken bones that I detected. Lucilius had spoken the truth about the harshness of Savlian’s career. Reluctantly, I allowed the bond to fade, then slid to the floor exhausted.


Another that could not be quoted enough times - gotta love this line for all the times I've heard that wire snap and thought ... "oh no" right before the swinging mace hit or the bridge crumbled, lol. :

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As I crept toward my kill, I felt the horror of a thin line tightening against the buckskin covering one shin.


Awesome Write, too many places to quote or I'll be spamming your thread !!


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Tábrasa
“Buffy, I can see that fighting alongside an ally is not something you’re used to. I believe the two of us can learn to be stronger than the sum our dramatically different skills. That’s why we’re here. Don’t be harsh on yourself. It is your magic that both located and caused the death of that conjurer, and it is your bow that killed the scamp. I believe in you.”

wub.gif I'll admit it, this made my heart flutter a little bit! Such a sweetie!

Proud that I hadn’t peed my greaves, I nodded

The amount of times Tara has almost done that is one to many. She fully understands Buffy's pride at that lack of pee-age! tongue.gif

Such an exciting chapter! Intense, exciting, thrilling, dramatic EVERYTHING! It seems that Buffy and Savlian work well together at this point; a mutual understanding on the battlefield underlined with looooove? hubbahubba.gif <3 Haha

Well done smile.gif
Acadian
During Episode 146, Buffy and Savlian continued to clear conjurers and Daedra from Fort Agarctova and forge their ability to fight together. As Buffy displayed then lamented her limitations, it was Savlian who reminded her of the potent abilities she possesses. He also stated his belief that together they can be stronger than the sum of their disparate skills. Savlian’s quick reflexes and readiness to step between Buffy and danger were also showcased.

SubRosa- Thanks for noting that we had the scamp working; I try to have foes doing something rather than quietly standing with a ‘shoot me’ sign. I appreciate you highlighting her clannfear observations, dry greaves and the reminder about the history of the shield Savlian carries.

KC- Since Buffy navigates by pink glows in dark dungeons, traps are a challenge for her to detect. She’s jealous of Aravi’s wonderful cat night vision. You are right; Buffy’s mind seems to wander even more than normal around her hero. panic.gif Fortunately, he seems to realize that and tries to keep her task-focused. If they can pull this training off and close the gate, then Savlian might get a chance to show his larger unit tactics in an assault to retake the city.

McBadgere- Thank you so much for highlighting the way Buffy heals. For better or for worse, she owes it to her paladin. One downside is she must lay hands on her patient to heal (no ranged healing). Another is that she is empathic, accepting some of her patient’s pain to heal them. The upside is that like a priest, cleric or paladin, she can assess and diagnose injuries and even read some of her patient’s spirit. I thought it was a wonderful opportunity to reinforce the violence of Savlian’s career and physical price he has paid.

Grits- Welcome to the Savlian crush club! Buffy has had hers from nearly the moment they met. wub.gif While I don’t have a crush on him, I have always felt that when it comes to noble selfless heroes, he is the gritty real deal. Thank you so much for enjoying how we tried to tie an ongoing theme of ‘I hope you dance’ into this dark and dangerous dungeon. We’ll resolve the mysteries of Fort Agarctova in this next episode.

mALX- Thanks for highlighting how ‘Buffy’ her relief over dry greaves was, as well as using her unique healing to snoop into Savlian’s past injuries. As I said, one of the hazards of navigating dungeons only by detect life is traps. She has gradually learned to avoid most of them, but we have both jumped and yelped in pain and surprise many times. ohmy.gif

Tabrasa- Thank you so much for feeling a little of what Buffy did when Savlian gave her that much needed pep talk. Oh, Tara leaves puddles sometimes too? As terrible as it sounds, that makes Buffy feel a bit better that she is not alone. embarrased.gif Buffy and Savlian have picked one hell of a venue in which to attempt a romance, but we cannot always chose our battlefields and dance floors. I’m so glad to see you back and updating Tara Willow after a short holiday break.

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147 The Mysteries of Fort Agarctova

Buckskin and leather boots silently carried us toward the only glows I could see remaining within this first level of Fort Agarctova.

We soon found ourselves in a chamber that was softly lit by several of the flickering wall sconces we had seen throughout the fort. Half a dozen or more bedrolls were arranged on the floor, including two that hosted the sleeping pair of conjurers. Savlian looked at me with a lifted eyebrow.

“Remember?” I whispered, “No warning, no quarter. How many travelers along the Gold Road have they ambushed and killed?” I narrowed my eyes. “Where do you suppose all those skulls came from?”

He nodded, then quietly sheathed the arming sword and drew his dagger.

As Savlian knelt over one of the blue robes, I nocked an arrow and aimed in on the other.

The pair of Altmer died simultaneously.

I cast a spell to boost my life detection range and fully scanned around us. “They’re all dead.” I frowned as I looked at Savlian. “We now have another mystery besides how the permanent Daedra got here. Why are all these conjurers Altmer?”

He shrugged. “I’m a soldier, not a scholar. Why don’t you search these two? I’ll look around the rest of this chamber for clues.”

My search of the blue robes yielded no answers. While still kneeling between them, I summoned an elven dagger and began cutting my arrow free. I was proud that I had recently learned to cast spells with both knees on the ground. I grimly realized the reason I had worked so hard to gain that ability was not for convenience, but to better heal those who would pay the price of freeing Kvatch. I knew that kneeling beside a downed soldier, I could better heal than having to bend over or crouch to do so. I dispelled the bloody blade, then rose to my feet.

After inspecting, wiping down and returning the arrow to my quiver, I was met by Savlian who wielded a thick leather-bound text. “This was in a chest,” he said. “I also found a door that likely leads to a deeper section of the fort.”

I bathed myself in light, then we sat together to inspect the tome. “The title’s in Daedric. I can only recognize the words ‘Molag Bal’, one of the less savory Daedra Lords.”

“We’ve heard that name here,” he said.

I nodded, then opened the book. Fortunately, only the outside title was in Daedric writing. We quickly skimmed what was clearly a load of troll dung about worshipping Molag Bal and the need to harvest mortal souls while purging ‘human scum, tail draggers and lesser elves’ from Cyrodiil. I stuck the book in my pack. “This’ll be of interest to my guild, and explains why this particular cult is exclusively Altmer.” Slipping the ribbon from my hair, I gathered numerous blond strays. “Somehow Molag Bal must be responsible for the permanent Daedra we’ve encountered here.” I frowned as I retied the green strip of silk behind my head. “I wonder what type of pact these conjurers have with him?”

Savlian smiled at my hair antics then pointed to the door in one corner of the chamber. “Perhaps there are answers below.”

I rose to my feet, then dispelled the light effect.

“Buffy, can you not cast spells while seated?”

I shook my head. “Magic is very personal and it’s not the same for all mages. I need to be standing crouched or kneeling – and my feet or knees require firm contact with the ground to bring magicka to my hand. I can’t cast while riding my mare for example; even if I stand in the stirrups, my feet don’t have contact with the ground. If knocked down, I must at least get to my knees to cast spells. The only exception I’ve discovered is underwater, where I can somehow use contact magic as long as I’m upright.” I shrugged, then smiled. “If someone lifts me from the ground or simply restrains me on a barstool, I’m helpless.”

“I’ll just have to make sure that doesn’t happen. Magic is more complicated than I imagined. No wonder it’s always eluded me.”

“You have all the magic you need standing right beside you, Savlian.”

With weapons drawn, we quietly slipped into the fort’s lower level.

Several pink glows blossomed, but none were within teeth range of our faces and we remained undetected. I breathed a sigh of relief and we remained crouched while taking a moment to survey our surroundings.

The tall chamber was almost as big as the throne room of Castle Leyawiin. It was lit by numerous fire bowls atop stone bases. Dominating the center of the room, a statue rose almost to the ceiling. The stone figure displayed the horns, teeth and tail that could only belong to Molag Bal.

In front of the Daedra Lord was a rectangular stone platform that rose to waist height and was heavily stained by what appeared to be blood. Tied to the dais, struggled the figure of a young woman.

Our view of the gagged human was partially blocked by the back of a tall hooded conjurer who stood over her. The voice that chanted unfamiliar words revealed his gender and, along with his height, suggested his race. On the floor near his feet was the dead body of a man whose shirt was deeply stained by a wound to the center of his chest. Judging by the two humans’ apparent age and similar manner of dress, I imagined they were a couple – perhaps travelers who had been captured by these foul blue robes. Pacing off to one side of the scene was a single scamp.

As the conjurer finished his incantations, he drew a dagger.

I nocked an arrow and urgently whispered, “Shooting” – just like Savlian had taught me so he would know to avoid Slayer’s line of fire. As the blue robe raised his blade, I pulled silk to cheek. My arrow and the conjurer’s dagger found their marks at the same time. Helplessly, I watched as both glows extinguished.

Savlian’s own verbal warning preceded the twang of his bowstring. A moment later the lone scamp in the chamber screeched and was spun around as the arrow struck its shoulder.

We both nocked and loosed our next arrows together. Savlain’s missed. Mine did not. As the ball of flame being conjured by bony fingers dissipated, I heard the dying Daedra’s magicka being swept into Azura’s Star.

“The statue!” Savlian said ominously as he quickly rearmed himself with sword and shield.

I stared in confused horror. The eyes of Molag Bal’s statue now glowed crimson. From his stone mouth came a swirl of black fog, which slowly traveled to hover over the dead woman. Within the shifting vapor a flame appeared, growing and feeding the changing shape as limbs began to form. I reported what my rings displayed: “It’s alive.”

Over the next few moments, the gaseous cloud fully transformed into a fiery atronach. As the Daedra straddled the dead woman, it hissed at Savlian and I. A globe of fire began to augment its already flaming hands.

Somehow, my own hand had managed to select a broadhead arrow and nock it to Slayer’s silk. I warned Savlian as I drew my bowstring and loosed.

The atronach staggered at the arrow’s impact, sending its spell harmlessly into the ceiling. As I was nocking my second arrow, the Daedra cast a second fireball – accurately.

“Split!” commanded Savlian as he slid to the left.

I instantly sidestepped to my right and warned, “Shooting again.” The muted twang of Slayer’s bowstring was still in my ears as I felt the heat of the fireball pass close between us and saw the Daedra fall to my arrow.

Savlian and I stared at each other for several long moments. He broke the silence. “I guess we now know where those permanent Daedra came from.”

A search of the chamber revealed no other passages or doors except the one returning to the upper level. Savlian gathered some documents from the pair of dead Bretons, identifying them as citizens of Anvil. “I’ll forward these to Captain Langley with the next rotation of Anvil soldiers.”

In the robes of the Altmeri conjurer were notes detailing how the cultists performed the ritual we had just witnessed. I placed them inside the tome already in my pack, “I hope to someday get all this to the University’s Mystic Archives for study.”

“Good riddance to those damn misguided conjurers,” said Savlian.

I nodded. “Can we leave this place now?”

We returned to the surface and quickly found the horses. I squeezed the last of our water into a pair of collapsible leather buckets for them.

Savlian studied the stars, then announced, “We were in there for almost twenty four hours. Let’s cold camp here behind the fort with the horses for the rest of the night. We’ll take turns sleeping and keeping watch. We need the rest, and if any more conjurers return to Agarctova, I want them to share the same fate as their comrades. While I’m on watch and you’re sleeping, may I use your detect life rings?”

After a chuckle, my reply was, “Sure. I expect they may fit over the tips of your little fingers.” I gathered Savlian’s bedroll from our jumbled pile of tack and supplies. As I spread it on the ground for him I asked, “Can I have the first watch? I’m too wound up to sleep.”

“That’ll be fine.” He placed an arm around my shoulder and pulled me comfortably to his side. “I could fall asleep on my feet right now.” He then pointed skyward. “See that large star between Masser and Secunda?”

I leaned into him as I craned my neck. “Yes?”

“When it hides behind Masser, will you wake me for my watch?”

“I will, brave man. Get some sleep.”

With sword and shield by his side, and fully dressed to fight, Savlian was soon asleep on the bedroll. After charging Slayer, I sat beside him and began my vigil against approaching pink glows. Without waking the sleeping man, I managed to lift his head and cradle it in my lap.

My watch was uneventful but, by the time I nudged Savlian awake to trade places, I was exhausted. We discovered my rings did indeed fit over the tips of his smallest fingers enough to function. He stood and stretched as I crawled onto his still warm bedroll. He then sat next to me. I hugged his mail-clad leg, using it as a pillow, and felt the comfort of his hand stroking my hair as I drifted off to sleep.

I awoke to brilliant sunshine.
McBadgere
Awww...Most excellent!!...

Loved it, nice conclusion to the - ahem - Dancing In The Dark... biggrin.gif ...Oh yeah *Does finger guns*...

Nah, loved it...Fantastic as usual...Brilliant tactics...Mysteries...

Shame about the Bretons, but well done nevertheless...*Applauds*...

Loved these bits...

QUOTE
Several pink glows blossomed, but none were within teeth range of our faces and we remained undetected


and...

QUOTE
Savlian gathered some documents from the pair of dead Bretons, identifying them as citizens of Anvil. “I’ll forward these to Captain Langley with the next rotation of Anvil soldiers.”


The first one made me laugh and the second one made me chortle...I dunno, the idea of forwarding the paperwork to Langley...*Shakes head*...I watch too much TV... biggrin.gif ...

Fantastic mate...

Nice one... biggrin.gif ...
SubRosa
“Where do you suppose all those skulls came from?”
Indeed. I had no qualms about killing the conjurers in the sleep after that as well.

one of the less savory Daedra Lords.
When you go through the list of them, nearly every one qualifies as this. Though Molag does seem even less so then many of the others.

A nice little recap of Buffy's spellcasting limitations. We also see that she has removed one of them, at least partially, by learning how to cast while kneeling.

They caught the remaining conjurers in the act I see. But were too late! sad.gif What a brilliant addition you have here though, showing us that the permanent Daedra are made so through the sacrifice of victims. Excellently shown through the statue of Molag Bal as well.

A nice, cozy little sleep/watch routine afterward. I bet that is not how it usually works in the city guard! biggrin.gif
King Coin
I’m glad Salvian agreed to kill the two in their sleep. I was a little worried he wouldn’t be willing to do that.

Humans, tail draggers, and lesser elves?! Buffy and Salvian will show them!

Aww, she’s too late to save the woman. sad.gif The cultists were trading souls for daedra! What an awful fate. I can’t imagine being Molag Bol’s possession for eternity would be at all pleasant.

Salvian telling the time by the stars was a neat little bit at the end!
Grits
The tall chamber was almost as big as the throne room of Castle Leyawiin.

Oh, I just love this! Many memories, and we know exactly how big it is.

The origin of the permanent Daedra was fascinating, and made perfect sense to me. Sort of the conservation of mass applied to the realms. As much as I enjoyed the smooth teamwork and the nighttime cuddles, the statue scene was my favorite part.

“When it hides behind Masser, will you wake me for my watch?”

So many people would have issued that as an order, “Wake me for my watch.” Savlian knows how to talk to Buffy! smile.gif
mALX
I also loved the line comparing the greatroom to Castle Leywiin's throneroom. Anyone whose played the game now knows the size of the room as she entered, a great descriptive trick !!

I have to agree with Grits, my fave part was the statue. That was some powerful imagery !! Awesome Write!
Acadian
In Episode 147, Savlian and Buffy discovered why the conjurer clan infesting Fort Agarctova was exclusively Altmer, and that a sacrificial arrangement with Malog Bal was responsible for the permanent (as opposed to summoned) Daedra they encountered. After clearing the fort, they cold camped nearby, taking turns on watch. Buffy awoke to a sunny morning.

McBadgere- Thank you! Buffy sneaks into every dungeon loading screen and remains quite scared until she emerges on the other side, scans for pink glows and knows she remains undetected.

SubRosa- Thanks for enjoying our attempt to give Fort Agarctova a little bit of a story. I know we spent some time on Buffy’s spell casting positional limitations, but they will come into play again in the next episode – albeit in perhaps an unexpected manner. wink.gif

KC- Buffy was afraid that her soldier would wake up those two conjurers to ‘declare himself’ and start a big fight. She’s glad he saw things her way. I note that in the game, all conjurers are Altmer or Breton and thought I would try to work with the ugly side of that racial element. Thank you!

Grits- I’m so glad you liked our attempt to use familiar in game references. I remember being impressed when you did the same thing by having Jerric refer to something’s size in terms of his trading caravans. Thanks also for noting how gentle Savlian is in his ‘orders’ to Buffy. He is trying hard to understand the confusing and skittish young elf. As we’ll see in the next episode, he doesn’t always get it right.

mALX- Thank you for your kind words relating to the description of Molag Bal. I was trying for some mystical imagery, and appreciate your endorsement so much. biggrin.gif

* * *

148 Horses (and Elves) Need Water

After rolling up the bedding, I tossed kisses to both horses then stretched my short limbs under the welcome sunshine. Savlian handed me some bread from our bag of provisions.

He also slipped my detect life rings from the tips of his smallest fingers. “Here. You’d better wear these for us. My head hurts from using them. I think some deer and perhaps a wolf are all that came within range last night during my watch. It’s quite hard seeing beyond the large glows in our own camp.”

As I donned the rings and quickly scanned the area I nodded. “It took me a long time to get used to them.”

“Bolden gave me a bag of mixed grain for the horses,” said Savlian. “Should we feed them some?”

“No,” I replied between bread bites. “They’re better off with just light forage until we can find them some water. And they’ll need that soon.”

Savlian smiled and took my hand. He led me around to the front of Fort Agarctova and out to the edge of the bluff upon which it was built. I sucked in my breath as the morning sun reflected blindingly off the Strid River below.

“Will that suffice?” he asked.

“I didn’t realize we were so close!”

“Did I not promise to take you to Valenwood?”

“Savlian!” Without thinking, I simply jumped at him. My arms flew around his neck while both legs wrapped tightly around his waist. “Thank you,” I managed to say with our faces just inches apart. As I looked into his eyes my head swirled with questions that I so wanted to ask, but dared not: We’re free of danger for the moment and Oblivia can wait a bit longer, so why won’t you kiss me? I know you feel something for me beyond protectiveness. Did I put you off that much the other night with my embarrassing moans and pushing you away? Is your stomach full of butterflies like mine? Or is Sigrid perhaps right, that your armor of duty is too hardened for any woman to penetrate? I’m doing everything I can to show you how I feel, Savlian Matius. I’ve quite literally just thrown myself at you. Why can’t you read my heart?

Instead of kissing me, Savlian spoke, “When you mentioned Valenwood the other day, I could tell it was important to you. I don’t know when we’ll get the chance to come back here.”

I reluctantly unwrapped my legs, and Savlian eased me to the ground. Blinking back tears of. . . I don’t know what, I said, “I adore that you remembered.”

We loaded the horses and, after saddling up, allowed them to slowly pick a path down the side of the ravine, then to the water’s edge. They were still cool and not breathing hard, so we allowed them to drink their fill as we did the same. Noting an inviting meadow on the far side of the river, I talked to Savlian about casting spells on the animals to get them across.

Getting the unflappable Raxle used to walking atop the water’s surface was not difficult, and he willingly followed Superian as she confidently led the way. Soon, we set hooves on Valenwood soil, much to the displeasure of an angry mud crab guarding the meadow.

After my hero dismounted and bravely slew the lumbering beast, I slid to the ground and joined him. Inhaling deeply, I looked around. “It’s beautiful here, Savlian! Can we stay for a time? Perhaps cook up this crab?”

“Aye, if it retains the smile on your face,” he said. “Lucilius was right; Oblivia can wait a little longer.”

After a scan of the area, I pronounced it free of pink glowing threats and slipped off my rings, bow, quiver and pack.

Savlian added his shield, sword belt and pack to the pile I had started on the ground. He then set about gathering a supply of dry branches and building a fire to cook the crab.

By the time I stripped down the horses, inspected their hooves and gave them a quick groom, a cheerful fire and warm meal beckoned.

The roasted crab was wonderful, and we gorged until full. We then fed both horses some of the grain Bolden had provided. I mused, “I think our training went well?”

Savlian nodded while rubbing Raxle’s nose. “Yes, I’ve begun to see what a mystic archer can do. Despite your vulnerabilities, I was wrong to underestimate you. I think we make a fine team, complementing each other’s abilities. Together, we should be able to sneak past most Daedra in the Deadlands and kill those that we must.”

I replied, “And I’m very impressed how you can blend into the shadows as necessary, yet provide a safe haven of steel when required.” I looked longingly at the river. “When’s the last time you had a real bath instead of dumping buckets of water over your head?”

“Before the invasion.”

“We’ll fix that,” I said. “Lift your arms.”

Savlian helped me slip the surcoat over his head. As I fumbled with the buckles and fasteners on his cuirass, he again assisted and we lifted the mail from his tunic.

His familiarity with armor allowed him to deftly unbuckle and pull my leather scale cuirass over my head to join his on the ground. Unlike his tunic, mine was very lightweight and cut to match the plunging neckline of my armor.

“May I cast a spell on you?”

He didn’t question what I intended or even raise an eyebrow. “Of course.”

After filling my hand with the magic of alteration, I opened my fingers against Savlian’s chest. I knew the weak feather effect was only symbolic but, as it swirled around him, I said, “This is to temporarily banish the weight of your crushing responsibilities. Let Kvatch go - just for a time, my brave man.”

My eyes were drawn to the thin leather strap around his neck that I recalled seeing when he was sleeping in his tent the day of my arrival. I reached up and freed the small pouch that was suspended between his chest and tunic.

In response to the burning question in my eyes, he nodded.

Looking inside the pouch, I could see a small tuft of long hair, the same color as mine.

“Do you remember when you charged into the Oblivion Gate?” he asked.

My eyes flew open wide. “I surely do! I also remember you snatching me right back out, and my hair getting caught in your armor.”

The muscles of his jaw rippled slightly and his gaze drifted beyond me. “For the longest time, that wisp of hair was all I had of you. I fear I have wishfully presumed too much about your feelings.” His eyes then met mine. “I apologize, Buffy, for kissing you the other night in my tent. I could tell by the way you tensed up and withdrew that you were. . . conflicted, and I don’t blame you.” He looked down at his open hands. “What on Nirn would possess me to think I could hold such a beautifully precious and fragile butterfly in these grimy bloodstained hands? Despite my feelings for you, I will not again place you in such an awkwar-“

“Savlian!” My heart was pounding, singing and breaking as I interrupted. “I wanted you to kiss me! It is I who must apologize; the very sounds of pleasure you drew from me when kissing my ear are what caused me to destroy that wonderful moment for us. Bosmeri ears are. . . well, they’re not like human ears and I-I couldn’t help my response. Given the thin walls of your tent and close confines of the encampment, I thought my noises would offend you or embarrass your position.”

“You could never offend or embarrass me, Buffy.” After a smile, he added, “Clearly we both need to be more open with each other about our feelings to avoid such misunderstandings.”

I slipped the green ribbon from the ponytail it restrained and shook loose my hair. Lifting one fist, I summoned an elven dagger. Grasping a blond lock as thick as a finger, I cut it free from near my scalp. After rolling up its length, I placed it into Savlian’s pouch then dispelled my blade.

With a hand now on each of my shoulders, he said, “You didn’t have to do that.”

“I want you to have it.” I looked up into his eyes and took a deep breath. “In fact, Savlian Matius, you can have every part of me that you want.”

I was swept into strong arms and, after a long deep kiss, my eyes finally opened to see a tender smile. As if a huge weight had been lifted from us, the mood was now light. “How about that bath?” I said with a giggle. “We smell like roasted crab, death, fire and sweat.”

I slipped off Savlian’s headband, then both tunics came over our heads and we added them to the growing pile of armor and clothing. “I’m sorry,” I said nervously.

“For what?” said Savlian with a mystified look.

“M-my friend Mazoga says I’m kind of scrawny.”

His eyes traveled slowly and unabashedly over the topless elf standing before him. “Your delicate perfection takes my breath away; you always have.”

“I’m still young, Savlian. Wood elves can continue to. . . bloom until nearly thirty years of age.”

“Never apologize for your elven beauty, Buffy. I’m the one who is marred. The scars-“

“-are beautiful,” I quickly finished. I then reached out to trace the line of one of the many old wounds across his chest. “I shall view them as testimony to the lives you have saved.”

He gave me the most adorable crooked smile. “I guess we were made for each other.”

After loosening then fumbling unsuccessfully with each others’ greaves, we lost our balance and fell to the ground, laughing. It was then we decided that tugging our boots off each other should come first. Finally, with everything we had been wearing in a jumbled pile on the ground, Savlian took my hand and led me into the Strid River.

Between kisses, touches, splashes and play, I’m sure we got pretty clean before he carried me ashore and we collapsed together into happy laughter and soft grass.

This time, when he began kissing me, I melted into his arms. As we gently explored each other, I learned that there were plenty of places on me that were every bit as sensitive to Savlian’s kiss and touch as my ears. In fact I quite noisily let him, both horses and every bird or butterfly near the river hear all about it.

The afternoon was a beautiful blur of new sensations as, together, Savlian and I learned to dance.

Crashing Abecean waves that I never wanted to end. The lion roaring all too soon. Rolling Savlian onto his back and discovering what a combination of restoration magic and kisses could do.

Grinning adventurously, I lifted one knee over Savlian’s hips and carefully assumed what could only be called an equestrienne pose. As Superian nudged her encouragement with a nose to the bare skin of my upright back, I giggled and managed to breathlessly say, “Get your own stallion.”

Soon enough, more waves were lifting me with them. With both knees anchored to the ground, mystical energy surged and grew uncontrollably within me until one hand broke from its grip on the muscles of Savlian’s chest to spike the air wildly with erupting magicka. The errant spell that I could not control caused both of us to momentarily disappear as I cried out to the treetops and the lion roared again. I collapsed forward onto his chest, both of us spent and exhausted.

I awoke to gentle fingers trailing through my hair. Glowing embers, twin moons and countless stars punctuated the night that had gathered around us. After a tender kiss, we pulled each other to our feet. While briefly checking the horses, I studied the beautiful man’s scars and muscles as he added wood to our campfire and stirred life into the flames.

I wanted to remember this moment forever.

A return to the soothing waters of the Strid River. White magic to lift the elven scratches from Savlian’s back and chest – the man already had enough scars. Healing my own sore bits. Smiles that spoke of a future together. More kisses and the surprising return of mutual stirrings.

“Are you hungry again?”

“Only for you.”
mALX
I don't see much training taking place after this, lol. Great Write !!!
SubRosa
Buffy leapt upon him! I must admit I did not see that one coming. Savlian must have a will of iron to resist that.

So we are off to Valenwood. Even if it is only the other side of the river.

I loved the feather spell, to dispel the weight of his responsibilities! Very cute. smile.gif

Then a tender, if albeit unwashed, moment on the riverbank, followed by a wonderful frolic in the water. You paint a very sweet, passionate scene between the two. After so long, Buffy has finally gotten her man!
Glargg
Well! smile.gif It certainly took long enough to get to this! laugh.gif

Well written, Acadian. smile.gif
McBadgere
Oo-er... biggrin.gif ...

Nicely done!!...As it were... huh.gif ...

Yes...indeed...yes...

Nice parts...I mean sexc...Section!!...

Brilliant...Yes!!...

Nice one!!... biggrin.gif ...

*Applauds*...
ghastley
Now wasn't that better than using Pelena's potion back at Kvatch? Even if it did wake the horses.

I'm surprised that the water didn't get to Buffy before she reached the other shore, but it did do the trick.
Grits
How wonderful that Buffy got to go riding in Valenwood! And Savlian did promise he would take her there. biggrin.gif

What a beautiful scene on the riverbank! Tender, passionate, sweet, adventuresome, and best of all, fun. It’s a happy couple that can giggle and roar together.

That was so worth waiting for!! happy.gif
King Coin
Whoa Buffy! Launch yourself at him!

So very nice that they got to visit Valenwood. I mean, with an Oblivion gate in front of Kvatch, anything could happen really.

When Buffy started the pile on the ground I wondered. Still, the final scene took me by surprise. What a wonderful surprise. happy.gif It’s great that they got to share this moment together in Valenwood rather than a tent in the middle of a camp. They didn’t have to worry about a thing, just each other.
RainbowVeins
Simply beautiful. wub.gif
Acadian
In Episode 148, Savlian allowed a short break between Fort Agarctova and returning to Kvatch as he put paid to his promise to take Buffy to Valenwood. They found themselves in a pleasant meadow on the nearby southern bank of the Strid River. After tending to the horses as well as their own thirst and hunger, Buffy’s clothes started to do what they often do when close to so much water. Once the two clarified some misunderstandings, one thing led to another.

mALX- Training? Hee! Buffy did get to practice her unintentional spell casting. embarrased.gif Thank you!

SubRosa- Buffy is quite ‘touchy-feely’ of course, and jumping on Savlian just sort of happened to her when she realized that he not only remembered his promise to take her to Valenwood, but fully intended to do so – that day. I’m so glad they got beyond their misunderstanding over her ears. Simple open communication won the day!

Glargg- Gosh, yes it did take them a long time to get on the same page! Thank you!

McBadgere- Thanks! I'm glad you liked our bits and parts – even the sore ones. Lol.

ghastley- Between the water and noise and errant spell casting, we now know why this scene just wouldn’t have worked back at the encampment! She’ll just have to wait to try Pelena’s potion. And thanks for noting that, yes indeed, getting Buffy near water surely did do the trick. tongue.gif

Grits- My counsel to Buffy on writing her love scene was, “Fade to misty gray, Buffy. Let readers use their imaginations”. Her response was, “Oh for Mara's sake, Acadian. I tell my readers in great detail how I brush my teeth. I’m not about to gloss over something as important as this just because it has juicy bits in it!” The noise and scratching was easy to portray; it was the errant spell casting that was a challenge not to make overly, um. . . graphic. We tried very hard to lace the necessary specifics with plenty of awkwardness and humor. Thank you so much for seeing the tender passion, adventure and discovery as the wide-eyed elf and her hero learned to dance.

KC- Thank you. I so agree that it just couldn’t have been as. . . Buffy in a tent back in that smoky camp.

RainbowVeins- Aww. happy.gif This was an extremely powerful episode for Buffy and I to write. Thank you so much for your soothing endorsement!

* * *

149 While You Were Gone. . .

We dismounted next to the kitchen area under an early afternoon sun and the beaming gaze of Weedum-Ja. “I shall have to send you two hunting more often.”

At the Argonian’s orders, several men gathered on the patient Raxle and unlashed the field dressed deer. When their attention turned to the buck behind Superian’s saddle, Savlian gently warned them off even before the mare could flatten her ears or begin to prance away. “This girl’s a high strung, skittish one like her mistress, lads. Best leave the task to hands that she knows. Buffy and I will unload her.”

Once complete, we led the horses toward the stable. I loved that Savlian was protective of both Superian and I, and how we tried to understand each others’ ways. During our return trip from the Strid River, I had explained what Daenlin taught me about hunting. I was pleased when Savlian joined me in kneeling by the deer we killed to cut our arrows free and thank them for their bounty. We then wished each animal’s spirit safe passage through the Dreamsleave until they returned. Nearing the mountains of Kvatch, we rode past several bears at a respectable distance. As a pair of eagles lazily winged overhead, Savlian told me that although the Kvatch wolf symbolized the city, his mountains were really the land of bear and eagle. I had joked that he could be the bear and I wanted to be the eagle.

“Welcome back, conjurer hunters,” greeted Bolden as he looked over the horses. “Safe trip? No injuries?”

“That clan of corrupted mages will cause travelers near Kvatch no further trouble,” said Savlian. “The horses, Buffy and I are fine.”

I took Raxle’s reins from Savlian and squeezed his hand as I did so. “Just some sore muscles.”

“Do you know where Lucilius is?” said Savlian to Bolden, but not before I felt his fingers briefly return my squeeze and noted the hint of a smile that played at one corner of his mouth.

“Yes, he’s been keeping me apprised of his whereabouts so I could send a runner for him as soon as you returned.” Bolden called over one shoulder, “Moria!”

The young Imperial I recalled seeing several days ago approached. Small hands pulled rather wild tresses of nutmeg-colored hair from her face. A threadbare dress of tan flax covered the slight frame, and her feet swam in sandals that were entirely too large. Ignoring Bolden, she walked right up to me and said, “You have pretty hair.”

“Thank you, Moria.” I found myself looking down slightly at a nicely featured but dirty face that I estimated to be ten to twelve years of age. “My name’s Buffy, and you have lovely eyes. They sparkle like emeralds.”

“Well, you look like an elf to me. Tavia taught us all about them. I learned that Batul’s a Horsemer. You have big ears like Athrelor. Are you a Bustmer like he is?”

After a smile, I replied, “I think Tavia probably meant Batul is an Orsimer. And yes, I’m a Bosmer – you can call me a wood elf if that is easier to remember.”

“Moria,” said Bolden, “run up to Camp Defiance and tell Sergeant Lucilius that the Captain’s back.”

The girl frowned, planted both hands where someday her hips would widen and lifted her chin to glare up at Bolden. I had to smile as she quite ably assumed ‘the position’ that was all too familiar to me when angry. “But Tavia said you were going to teach me to be a hustler! How is running all over Kvatch Mountain going to help?” She turned her gaze from the Redguard to the Imperial at my side, and her frown transitioned to an impressively convincing pout. “Captain Savlian, you’re in charge. Do I have to do what Bolden says?”

My Imperial eased himself to one knee and gently swept aside some of the wild brown strands that had again fallen into the girl’s face. “I think Tavia meant ostler. And if you expect to be one, you must first learn to follow the orders of your stable master. Secondly, if you want to understand and take care of horses, wouldn’t it be helpful to practice running like they do?”

She beetled her brow skeptically at Savlian, then shifted her gaze to me as if for a second opinion. I placed one hand on Savlian’s shoulder and nodded my endorsement.

“Well, I want to be a good oyster all right.” She then kicked off the oversized sandals, hiked the hem of her dress to mid-thigh and took off at a sprint up the hill.

Bolden chuckled as he shook his head. “Moria’s one of Tavia’s bigger challenges over at the Orphans Guild. She’s spoiled and strong willed.”

Tugging on Savlian’s arm, I helped him to his feet. He said, “I’m pleased she’s retained a strong will. As for being spoiled, I suppose some of that can be forgiven a child who watched both her parents burn to death.”

Bolden shuddered visibly. “I can still hear the little thing screaming as you carried her out of the city that night, Savlian.”

“Let’s get these horses tended to,” was the soldier’s reply.

I began to unlash the traveling supplies from my mare’s saddle. Seeing how gentle and wise Savlian was with Moria, I couldn’t help but think what a wonderful father he would be. Knowing how difficult it was for elves to conceive, I knew it was silly to even think about the fact that I carried his seed within me. The thought of him rescuing the screaming girl intruded though, as a stark reminder that we were indeed back at Kvatch. As we stripped off the tack and removed dried deer blood from bay and black coats, I could sense the weight of Savlian’s responsibilities settling again onto his broad shoulders.

With the tack racked and horses groomed, Bolden led both animals to the stable’s water trough.

I looked at the pile of traveling supplies at our feet. “Um, where should we take my bedroll, Savlian?“

“We promised to avoid misunderstandings by speaking freely.” He gathered up everything from the ground – including my bedroll - then looked at me. “My feelings for you did not stay behind in the waters of the Strid River. I’d like very much for you to share my tent.”

“I was hoping you wanted that. Perhaps I should briefly report to Sigrid? I can let her know we’re back, and gather the rest of my belongings from the guild.”

“Aye. I’ll take all this to our tent and meet you there shortly. Lucilius will know to look for me there.” He leaned over and gave me a quick kiss before we parted ways.

As happy feet carried me toward my guild, I felt the familiar comfort of being alone with my paladin - something I had not experienced since before Savlian and I left on our training expedition. Acadian had thoughtfully and discretely retreated to a place deep in my heart while Savlian and I were discovering each other. He had already silently let me know he was pleased that I had followed his advice and truly learned to dance. “I’m so glad you’re with me to share in this, Acadian. I hope it’s not, um. . . awkward for you.”

“It is certainly a new and unfamiliar perspective, my bowgirl. But I am a part of you and fully share – nay, rejoice – in what you are experiencing.”

“When should I tell him that I harbor the ancient spirits of a dragon and her rider within me?”

“Savlian’s a strong and noble warrior, Buffy, but he has much to deal with at Kvatch, even while adjusting to his feelings for you. Tread lightly here. You will know when the time is right.”

“Thank you, Acadian. For everything.”

After a light chuckle, he said, “And may I say, you dance well, albeit noisily.”

I giggled. “I have some of Pelena’s ‘little moaner’ potion and the recipe for it. That should help.” I lifted the blue and white flap to enter my guild.

Within the half hour, I completed my business, gathered my belongings and rejoined Savlian.

“Look what Sigrid gave us for a tent warming gift while I was at the guild!” I held up the small blue tapestry with its arcane formation of stars.

“It’s very thoughtful of her,” replied Savlian. “The Steed is my birthsign.”

“And you know how horse crazy I am.” I tried to tickle him, but my effort was thwarted by his mail. “Seriously though, no wonder you can move so quickly when you fight. Oh, my sign is the Mage.”

“No surprise there, my magic elf.”

I held the tapestry up against one of the canvas walls of my new home. “Don’t you think it would look nice here?”

“Captain?”

I was now getting used to the interruptions that came with Savlian’s position. “Come in, Lucilius,” I chirped as I set our tapestry on the table.

“I hope the afternoon finds you well, Milady,” said Lucilius as the tent flap closed behind him. “And you also, Captain. I trust the training was productive?”

“Aye, it was,” said Savlian.

Lucilius’ eyes traveled to the two bedrolls nestled together in the corner, then to my happy face. “Congratulations. I’m glad you both seem to have discovered what’s been clear to me for some time.”

“Thank you, my friend.” Savlian’s features creased into a beautiful smile. “Somehow, it seems I’ve managed to capture the heart of a butterfly. Lucilius, would you give me your report please?”

“The perimeter and encampment are secure, with two developments. One of our watch team leaders suffered a broken arm when a pair of clannfears emerged from the gate simultaneously. One of them got past our swordsmen, the spells of Roliand and into the archers.”

“That’s Merandil’s watch team,” said Savlian, his face clouding. “How is he?”

“He’ll be fine. Roliand mended the arm within minutes and, by the end of the shift, Sigrid finished the job. She has Merandil drinking a healing potion each morning for a couple days. It’s his left arm. Until Sigrid clears him, he’ll be relying on his axe instead of that fortify marksman spell and bow. He’s still capable of leading his team though. I did not replace him.”

“Well done, Lucilius. What’s the second development you mentioned?”

“Two men showed up this morning calling themselves fighting monks of Talos. They offered their blades to help free the Chapel of Akatosh.”

“Free the chapel?” repeated Savlian. “Don’t they realize we have the small matter of closing a damn Oblivion Gate first?”

“They said they would discuss it only with you.”

“Your impressions of these men?” asked Savlian as one eyebrow crept up toward his headband.

“They strike me as serious, Captain. Both move with the control and precision of soldiers. I suspect their robes are enchanted, and the katanas they carry are not the simple defensive weapons of churchmen. May I arrange a meeting this afternoon? Perhaps between our crop fields and the stable, near the edge of the encampment plateau where you will not be overheard?”

Savlian nodded. “That location will be fine, but their desire to speak to me alone is not. Perhaps these men do have some sort of need for secrecy, but I have a whole city under siege to worry about. You are my second in command. Buffy is a valued advisor, scout and mage. I want both of you at this meeting.”

Before Lucilius could respond, I asked, “You said monks of Talos? Did these men offer their names?”

“Yes, Milady,” replied Lucilius. “The Redguard who seems to be in charge calls himself Brother Baurus. He refers to the Imperial with him as Brother Arturo.”

“Before we meet with them, the three of us need to talk,” I said. “I know Baurus, and why he is here. Perhaps we should sit down?”
mALX
I think it is hilarious that Baurus shows up to save Martin - AFTER Buffy gets there !! How long ago were they supposed to be going to find him? No wonder the Blades couldn't hang onto the amulet or keep the Emperor alive, ROFL !!

Uh oh, Buffy's going to spill the secret of Martin !! Now things will heat up !!

Some very nice touching moments in here, and some humorous ones - like the Orphans Guild, etc. Awesome Write !!
McBadgere
Another most excellent chapter!!...

Loved it...Hugely...

Nice return to camp and all the attendant business therein...And just to show, the Blades turn up... laugh.gif ...Me likee Blades, Oblivion stylee at least... biggrin.gif ...

Loved the hand squeeze around the "Sore muscles" line... biggrin.gif ...Fantastic stuff...

This bit made the hairs on the back of my neck rise...

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Bolden chuckled as he shook his head. “Moria’s one of Tavia’s bigger challenges over at the Orphans Guild. She’s spoiled and strong willed.”

Tugging on Savlian’s arm, I helped him to his feet. He said, “I’m pleased she’s retained a strong will. As for being spoiled, I suppose some of that can be forgiven a child who watched both her parents burn to death."


So many questions rose from this chapter that I think once I've finished the current story I'm doing from the start, this one will be next...Oh yes...I will... biggrin.gif ...

Now, to find that "Add Time To Day" spell... laugh.gif ...

EDIT...Sorry, forgot to add my...

Nice one!!!!... biggrin.gif ...

*Applauds heartily*...

You know you'd miss it... tongue.gif ...

Darkness Eternal
This is a huge story...how many threads do you have exactly? The number of chapters is amazing, but yet only read the first two. Can't help but feel I am missing something? Which is the first story?
ghastley
Good point. I'm going to have to go back and re-read where Buffy last saw Baurus to remind myself of the differences between her path through the game and my own characters' versions. If anyone finds it before I do, let us know!
Grits
Check the very beginning of this thread, folks! wink.gif
Acadian
Rather than waiting a week to detail things in my next thread posting, I wanted to pop in here and hopefully provide some answers. We are still writing Buffy’s ‘Book 1’ and are in the fifth and final thread of it. Each thread is labeled the same except the thread numbers progress from 1-5. All of them except our current/active thread are in Acadian Subforum .

It is indeed a long story, and I grew concerned that it might intimidate newer readers. Therefore, in our subforum, I created an Executive Summary thread that summarizes her story to date in one easy sitting of less than 2000 words.

Let me review some past details that may help add context to today's episode: When Buffy turned the Amulet of Kings over to Jauffre, he was unkind and accusatory to her so she stormed out on him (Episode 8). She later learned well after the fact (Episode 31) that Jauffre had been killed the very next day after receiving the Amulet. Because of her confrontation with Jauffre, Buffy was afraid she might be accused of killing him and remained quiet on the matter, trusting that the Blades would take care of ‘Emperor stuff’ since she had turned over the Amulet. Much later (right after Buffy's second place finish in the Tournament of Archers plastered her name in the Black Horse Courier), Baurus finally tracked Buffy down (Episode 125) to find out what happened to the Amulet. Between the two of them, they pieced together that Jauffre had been killed and the Amulet stolen before Jauffre could take any action regarding Martin or even notify his Blades. Buffy then shared what Jauffre had told her about Martin. Baurus agreed that he would try to get support from his chain of command to investigate the possible claim to the throne at Kvatch. Buffy’s meeting with Baurus that generated his current arrival took place about two weeks ago in ‘Buffy time’.

Hope that helps some! tongue.gif
SubRosa
“Just some sore muscles.”
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Moira was delightful. Horsemers, Bustmers (I think Sigrid is one of those wink.gif), hustlers, and all. smile.gif

No more public pretenses between Buffy and Savlian. Good show! Now they are officially an item, for all the world to see.

“The Steed is my birthsign.”
Now we know why Buffy was moaning so loudly!

Baurus! W00T. Now we are really getting down to the business of closing that gate, and retaking the city!
King Coin
“Just some sore muscles.”
They were talking about fighting the mages Buffy, not after. laugh.gif

I really enjoyed Moria’s difficulty with words.

I hadn’t even thought about where Buffy would stay when she returned to the camp. Glad Buffy’s going to share his tent. And then she starts decorating! laugh.gif

The Blades! Now that’s exciting! Baurus!
Grits
I loved that Savlian was protective of both Superian and I, and how we tried to understand each others’ ways.

Me, too. Savlian demonstrates that he has really been paying attention.

Moria charms in so many ways. Buffy’s history and temperament make me think she would be the right one to take on this particular challenge, starting with that nutmeg-colored mop of hair.

As happy feet carried me toward my guild, I felt the familiar comfort of being alone with my paladin - something I had not experienced since before Savlian and I left on our training expedition.

How wonderful to check in with Acadian, and get some reassurances.

“The Steed is my birthsign.”

Yeah, baby!! hubbahubba.gif

“Two men showed up this morning calling themselves fighting monks of Talos. They offered their blades to help free the Chapel of Akatosh.”

Woo hoo!! Savlian meeting Brother Baurus, I cannot wait! Now, about that damn Oblivion Gate…
TheBrume
I really enjoyed this latest episode. I particularly like Moira, she reminds me of someone, can't think who though.

The Redguard who seems to be in charge calls himself Brother Baurus. He refers to the Imperial with him as Brother Arturo

The plot thickens? I look forwards to this upcoming meeting. smile.gif
liliandra nadiar
Chp 148: First impressions on the title. "Someones going to be getting a show." And that set my mind into the gutter for the whole chapter. Case in point, the first time I saw Strid River I read it as Stud River.

Buffy (and Savlian) touched on some of their more persistant fears but both decided to step out and dance. Yay!

Chp 149: And back to Kvatch with some 'sore muscles'. Poor Buffy isn't a Bustmer yet, couple more years maybe. Savlian may have ment ostler, but I think Boldan could still teach her to be a hustler.

The Blades make an appearence finally, only took them how many months to figure out what Jauffre intended? Tsk, they need more clear lines of communications and record keeping. Looking forward to Baurus' reaction to seeing Buffy, assuming he remembers her.
Acadian
Episode 149 saw Savlian and Buffy return to Kvatch and begin settling into both the city’s war time footing and a new life together as the two agreed to share Savlian’s tent. When Lucilius briefed what had transpired during the couple’s absence, it became clear to Buffy that Baurus and a fellow Blade had arrived. She acknowledged that she needed to explain the nature of their business in Kvatch to both Savlian and Lucilius.

mALX- Well, better late than never for poor Baurus. tongue.gif Of course Buffy not coming forward after learning of Jauffre’s death didn’t help. Thanks for enjoying how we tried to use the Orphans Guild to bring out some humor, then slam things right back into perspective as we were reminded of why they are orphans.

McBadgere- Thanks for following the hand squeeze/sore muscles private joke between our couple. The next episode should help to review our treatment of how the Blades fit into things in the story.

Darkness Eternal- A warm welcome to Buffy’s world! I hope my comments above in post #236 helped provide some structure to things.

ghastley- I’m hoping that previous comment I made helped review Buffy & Baurus. You can also expect some review of that in this next episode.

SubRosa- Moria was such fun to write and, in some ways, reminds me of a younger Buffy – just with a slightly different set of ‘-isms’. Yes, Buffy and Savlian are really and finally beyond that tentative uncertain stage and have fully declared for each other. Hopefully, the couple that slays together stays together. Yes, the pieces to free Kvatch are falling into place.

KC- Thanks for your chuckle over Buffy’s sore muscles and some of Moria’s word challenges. Thank you especially for noting that our little elf wasted no time beginning to build a nest in her new canvas home. I always wished the Blades had been more involved at Kvatch. We rather carefully crafted their delay (via the death of Jauffre, etc) to support Buffy’s own delay, but they have finally arrived where they should be – at least a couple of them.

Grits- Thank you. As you pointed out, Savlian does listen carefully. His response to Buffy’s words may not be immediate, but it is clear that her needs factor very heavily into what he does. We’ll see more of that in this next episode. It was important to bring out and diffuse the potential for awkwardness involving Acadian, and this was the first private chance that Buffy had to do that.

TheBrume- Thank you! I’m so glad to see you continuing the tale of Lucius – it is a great story. Yes, this next episode should be a revealing meeting with the Blades, both reviewing the past and painting the way ahead.

liliandra nadiar- Stud River - I love it! Thank you for endorsing our dancing metaphor; the ‘I hope you dance’ theme has woven through this story. I also appreciate you noting the possibility that scrawny Buffy just might continue to ‘blossom’ for a few more years, given how slowly woodsters grow up. Baurus tracked down and met with Buffy right before she left the Imperial City for Kvatch, so she has been hoping for his arrival as part of her effort to get more fighters for Savlian.

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150 Our Lives and Blades are Pledged to Your Service

“Lucilius should arrive with the two Blades soon,” said Savlian. “Given the implications of why they’re here, I’m surprised you didn’t share all this with me before now. You are not built to bear such burdens alone, Buffy.”

A cool breeze animated the grass on the southeastern edge of the encampment’s plateau. Our shadows, cast by a westering sun, were long over the ground as I looked down to stir the rich soil with a booted toe. After a few moments, I raised my eyes to meet Savlian’s. “Your shoulders are broad, and I know you carry the weight of Kvatch’s future upon them. I’ve sensed the toll it takes on you from the moment we met. I didn’t want to add additional concerns that may be for naught. As I told you and Lucilius, I’m not sure there are survivors - only that it might be possible due to the sustaining power of Akatosh’s altar and his disdain for Daedra. Even if Martin is somehow alive after all this time, I don’t know for certain that he is the son of Uriel Septim.”

“Some of the provinces, especially to the north, border on rebellion and the very fabric of Tamriel is in jeopardy without an emperor,” replied Savlian. “I confess to being somewhat overwhelmed to now learn that the very future of the Empire could be inside our own Chapel of Akatosh.”

“The Blades are here to assess and deal with Martin – if he lives – so you won’t have to,” I said. “After Kvatch is free and your mountain is once again the land of bear and eagle, let us focus on building a life here together. You’ve earned enough scars for a lifetime, Savlian. Someone else can nursemaid a would-be emperor or go fight on the Mara-forsaken border of Skyrim.”

The muscles of his jaw rippled. “But I have a duty to-“

“Serve an ungrateful empire that abandoned you to the very jaws of Oblivion?” I augmented my interruption by assuming ‘the position’ and continued, “Or a legion that has largely ignored your desperate plight? Have you thought about who or what is important to you after Kvatch is free of Daedra?” I closed my big mouth at that point, feeling guilty over my outburst. This beautiful man had so many things to concern himself with beyond the whining of a selfish elf. I knew this wasn’t the time or place for it but, as I looked up into the eyes that held my future, I couldn’t stop my silent thoughts: Savlian, my world has revolved around you for so very long. I’ve given up my home and will freely risk my life for you. You are more important than any empire. Will you ever be able to say the same of me?

“You’re beautiful when you do that.”

“W-when I do what?”

“Flash those blue eyes in anger as you defiantly lift that little chin and plant both hands on your hips.”

I opened my mouth then closed it again. Although disarmed by Savlian for the moment, his words had merely parried my concerns rather than addressed them. Again, I knew he had larger matters on his mind and I should simply drop it for now and support him. I hated it when Acadian told me I always had to have the last word, but I just couldn’t stop the peevish “Fine,” that eventually escaped my lips.

Savlian’s smiling expression turned serious and quite gentle as his hand cupped my cheek. “I know there is much truth in what you say, and I will think carefully on it.”

I turned my face slightly to kiss his palm, then pressed my cheek into his warm, strong hand. “That’s all I ask, Savlian. I trust my future to you.”

The softness in his eyes dissipated as his gaze traveled beyond me. “Here come our guests.”

I turned to see the two men approaching, escorted by Lucilius. I recognized the Redguard, Baurus. The other man, judging from the olive complexion and dark eyes, was a Nibenean Imperial. His black hair was pulled back into a queue. Both men’s brown robes were gathered at the waist by sword belts that each hosted a katana. I could see the toes of leather boots with each step they took. As they drew closer, Lucilius made introductions. “Dame Buffy and Captain Savlian Matius, this is Brother Baurus and Brother Arturo.”

A round of handshakes ensued. I could see now that Arturo was no stranger to violence. His nose had been broken and not healed well. A rather dramatic scar, no doubt caused by a blade, ran from the missing tip of one ear across the same cheek and down to his chin. His face – perhaps roguishly handsome at one time - was not at all favorable testimony to whoever the Blades used as healers. Of course, given the scars that adorned my own man, I -

“. . . to see you again, Buffy. Have you explained why we’re here?” My eyes snapped from Arturo’s face to that of Baurus as I realized the Redguard was speaking to me.

I nodded. “Savlian and Lucilius are aware that you are Blades and why you’re here. I’ve shared with them what I know of Martin, and explained how it’s possible there may be survivors inside the chapel.”

“Good,” replied Baurus. He then turned to Savlian. “Buffy was with me when the Emperor died and clandestinely carried his last wishes to the leader of the Blades. Grandmaster Jauffre was killed, however, before he could share or act on the information. That left Buffy as the only living soul aware of the name and location of the Emperor’s last possible heir. Alas, she is but a small elf in a large land and I lost track of her – until her name recently surfaced in the Black Horse Courier. An article about the Tournament of Archers mentioned her membership in the Mages Guild. Inquiries at the Arcane University allowed me to finally track her down.”

“Yes,” I said to Savlian, “when Baurus found me in the Imperial City, I shared with him everything Jauffre had told me.”

Arturo then spoke, “Baurus presented his findings and recommendations to Acting Grandmaster Steffan at our headquarters, who selected me to join Baurus for this investigation. Traveling as monks, we were waylaid several times by those who would take what little we carry and others merely seeking the blessing of Talos. Thus, it took nearly a tenday for us to get here.”

The Redguard then turned to Savlian. “Captain, given what you’ve heard, I hope you can appreciate our need for secrecy. We hope to avoid rumors, as well as to protect this Martin from assassins if he yet lives and is indeed the heir.”

“I see your need for discretion,” said Savlian, “and you shall have it from us. Is that the reason you present here as monks?”

“Yes,” said Arturo. “The Blades are closely aligned with Talos and our guise is not far from the truth. We hope that, beyond this meeting, you will acknowledge us simply as fighting monks who are here to help eliminate the desecration inflicted upon Akatosh’s Chapel. The fewer ears that hear we are Blades investigating a possible claim to the throne, the better.”

“I’ve known Martin for years. He’s a fine priest, but heir to the throne?” Savlian folded both arms across his chest. One hand then lifted to rub a square chin as his eyes fell upon me. After a long moment, his attention returned to the Blades. “I’ll leave it in your hands to determine matters of the Empire beyond Kvatch. I presume you’re aware that access inside the city is blocked until we can close the damn Oblivion Gate?”

“Aye,” said Baurus. “Captain, we understand who’s in charge here and appreciate your discretion and support of our task. While we’re here, our lives and blades are pledged to your service.”

“I gratefully accept your assistance,” replied Savlian. “Once the gate is closed, we’ll retake the city and you shall have access to the chapel. If Martin has survived and is indeed heir to the Empire, I understand your fealty will shift to him at that point. In the meantime, Lucilius will assign your duties.”

“Captain,“ Arturo exchanged a quick glance with his fellow Blade before continuing, “we do have other claims to the throne queued up for investigation. Do you have a plan and time frame in mind to attempt closing the Oblivion Gate?”

All eyes fell upon the Captain of Kvatch.

“I do.” Savlian looked south toward the Strid River where his attention seemed to linger for several moments. His eyes then traveled north and upward to the edge of the plateau that hid the city. Finally his gaze settled upon me, one eyebrow lifting almost imperceptibly as his eyes searched mine. I was unsure exactly what he had in mind, but I knew I would follow this man whenever and wherever he led. I dipped my chin ever so slightly in a single nod, meant only for him. Savlian then spoke, “Tomorrow morning, Buffy and I will enter the gate. Together, we’ll close it.”
mALX
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Someone else can nursemaid a would-be emperor


Oh no she didn't !!!

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I opened my mouth then closed it again.



I'll bet that doesn't happen often, Acadian's jaw probably dropped, lol.


WOO HOO !!! The Gate !!! Awesome Write !!
Darkness Eternal
QUOTE
“You’re beautiful when you do that.”


Never knew Savlian was a flirt.

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Savlian’s smiling expression turned serious and quite gentle as his hand cupped my cheek. “I know there is much truth in what you say, and I will think carefully on it.”


Very touchy. So, they seem to be emotionally tied together, it seems. I had to back and read "Horses (and Elves) Need Water" for a better clarification.

"Are you hungry?"

"Only for you.”

hubbahubba.gif

McBadgere
Most excellent!!!...

I did very much enjoy this...

I like these Blades...So proper...

And the alignment with Talos thing...

Brilliantly done...

Looking forward to Gateyness...

Nice one!!!...

*Applauds heartily*...
King Coin
I augmented my interruption by assuming ‘the position’

This could only mean hands on hips and chin lifted laugh.gif She shouldn’t so lightly insult someone she hasn’t met before though. Amused and a little disappointed in you Buffy, though exactly what I expect. I do hope she can convince Salvian to not go running around after this ordeal of closing the gate and freeing the city.

AHHH!!! The Gate!!
Grits
Whew, what a relief to have the post- damn Gate discussion with everyone. It was great to see how Savlian responded to “the position” and the f-word. tongue.gif

“I’ll leave it in your hands to determine matters of the Empire beyond Kvatch.

I think that was the answer we were looking for? I know it’s a serious subject, but Savlian’s “damn Oblivion Gate” always makes me laugh.

The whole last paragraph was just beautiful. Savlian’s thoughts were easy to follow through Buffy watching him look around, and the silent communication between the couple was as sweet as the hand squeeze in the last episode. Love it! smile.gif
SubRosa
“Some of the provinces, especially to the north, border on rebellion and the very fabric of Tamriel is in jeopardy without an emperor,”
This was a welcome piece of world-building, which is to say that without an Emperor, an Empire is naturally in a precarious position.


I augmented my interruption by assuming ‘the position’ and continued,
I loved this! We all know the "position"! laugh.gif

“Fine,”

biggrin.gif

Baurus' discretion is very prudent. Of course he and Arturo would want to keep their true identities and purpose secret here. The last thing the need is for the Mythic Dawn to learn they missed out in killing Martin, and try again.

“Tomorrow morning, Buffy and I will enter the gate. Together, we’ll close it.”
Yes! After so long we will see the Empire Strike Back, erm, I mean the Kvatch gate closed. laugh.gif Seriously though, it really good to find us reaching the culmination of your tale, and seeing the Daedra thrown back to the pit whence spawned them.
Darkness Eternal
Hey Acadian, how does youre story tie in with other stories concerning the Kvatch Oblivion crisis?

Is there any connections I should look out for? I'm kinda interested in those aspects, because I just find it awesome. And also because I don't like my stories to contradict lore and other stories as well.
TheBrume
I don't have much to say that hasn't been said. Just know that I really liked Buffy and Salvian's back and forth. It seemed quite realistic.
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