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Niiiice! And welcome back.

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Updates! Yay!

It certainly appears that Sethyas has made his decision on how to deal with these three. I'll be curious if he tries to coverup the real purpose of assassinating the other two as well.

Welcome back to the fold!

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YAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY!!!!! more Sethyas!!! I'm so glad to see you back on track Blackie! Sethyas means a lot to me.....

You're a fabulous writer Blackie! Anyone told you that?

The pawnbroker is dead? Who could have done that? I know nothing... nothing.

Methinks that Sethyas is going to be running into a certain Temple steward soon...

Excellent rendition of those two tasks Black, I wouldn't have expected Sethyas to handle it any other way. I wonder how the meeting with the queen will go?

ahhh methink I´d like to be Renzie´s alter ego! To meet Seth...yay..

Wow, Sethyas has abandoned Helseth. Now this will cause some changes in the situation.

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That was a fantastic conversation between Sethyas and Barenziah. Very classy.

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From one manipulator to the next. While I hate to admit it, she does have a point however.

Ahhh, very very good Blackie! Seth really has done it again! And his conversation with Barenziah was wonderful indeed. Also I like the way you made her vivid! The way you pictured her was very convincing and trustworthy, gosh you made her almost human...

Please I want more of this!

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Hmmm, looks like we got some differing philosophies being exposed in this update. Glad to see it isn't all camaraderie between these two assassins.

I like how serious Al suddenly felt. Normally he seems like a bit of a joker, in his own way. But now, he was different. It really touched him.

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Wonderful! So Seth-ish..mmmmm I really enjoyed this one...and the concluding sentence makes me think....and above all yearn for the next chapter.

I do like the conversation between Seth and the old man, in fact I like all conversations you write, they are so intriguing, jeez man I like your style!


MOOOOOOOOOORE Sethyas, please!


S.G.M

Good ole S.G.M

Fantastic end to the chapter. The cliffhanger left on this one makes me anxious to read what happens next.

Awesome, stuff BH. I like it a lot!

Why, thank you! Always a pleasure to have a new fan.

I'm trying my best to read and reply to everyone else's work as well. You do a great job with dialogue. And you write in 1st person, just like me!

I liked how the guy just stayed cool and all while Seth was freaking out all the time.

Speaking of which, I'm getting a bit worried. Seth freaking out during a conversation doesn't happen often. But when it happens, it means stuff is getting serious.