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Grits
“BOOTS!” I said to the barmaid of the Grey Mare.

That’s funny, normally Lissa would be excited about getting new shoes. But I guess if she was expecting to learn “Summon Rhano,” that would be disappointing. laugh.gif

I’m glad she made some friends in Chorrol, even though she has to leave already. Good idea to pay for the carriage this time. smile.gif


Acadian
“Don’t dignify her with a response. Earana is a nasty piece of work.” She said, dragging me into the mages guild.'
Uh oh. She is trouble.

“Fine. I need to make a start on going to Anvil anyway.”
Superb use of the 'F' word, Lissa! biggrin.gif

This was fun! A trip all the way to Chorrol to learn how to conjure some boots. Lol.

Sounds like we haven't heard the last of Earana? And back to Anvil now it seems?
TrisRed
Acadian: haha, I too felt Lissa's frustration when she was unable to learn anything to ACTUALLY summon. and yes, her use of the 'F' word was very well said by her wink.gif

Grits: haha! I think she would enjoy a 'summon Rhano' spell more than anything wink.gif

King Coin: yes, poor Lissa. Her journey hasn't been filled with peace; and now the mystery with Earana only thickens the lack of peace.

PREVIOUSLY: After making it to Chorrol Jessie and Lissa headed to the mages guild where Lissa met Dar-Ma and bumped into Earana. once inside the building, Jessie left Lissa to learn a spell in conjuration. The only spell Lissa could learn was 'Bound Boots'; of which she later vented her rage to such a lame spell to Emfrid in the grey mare. Later, Lissa is warned by Jessie to leave Chorrol as Earana is looking to kill her, believeing Lissa to be an assasin. When Lissa goes to leave she see's Earana; who does not attack but merely warns Lissa that her presence isnt welcome because of 'who she is'.

12. Chapter 5 ~ Reunions ~ Part 1

Sitting on the carriage to Anvil was tiresome to say the least. We had just ridden past Skingrad and were closing in ever closer to my hometown. The carriage was surprisingly fast; four black mares can do that.

I sat pondering about the whole situation with Earana. I wasn’t sure whether she was possessed or knew something about Leinahtan or whether she knew something else. Either way I knew that she was hiding something. Something that she wasn’t about to share any day now.

“But what did she mean by ‘it’s not what you’ve done, it’s who you are’?” I asked Rihanae.

“I am not too sure. Maybe it has something to do with your family?” he replied.

His theory seemed plausible, but I didn’t even think that she would know anybody from my family.

“I’m not sure. I have no family around that area. And besides, how would she know who my family are? It’s not like a walk around with a big sign saying ‘I'M LISSA CRISTENN, ASK ME HOW!”

I could hear Rihanae laughing.

“Don’t laugh. I’m being serious.” I said to him. It was highly inappropriate.

“I’m sorry.” He apologized, trying to calm his laughing down. I couldn’t help but giggle; it was infectious.

“Why are we laughing?” I giggled.

“I’m not… too… sure.” He laughed; he sounded as if he was struggling for breath; which seemed odd for a spirit.

The laughter really caught on now; to a point where the driver took notice.

“Are you okay?” said the dunmer driver. He looked confused.

“Yeah… I’m… haha… I’m fine. Thanks.” I said; trying to end my laughing fit. The driver turned his head back toward the road and continued his duties. My laughter slowly began to cease, but then I felt some sort of shadow loom over me. Reality suddenly came back to me at full force.

“Why is everyone trying to kill me?” I asked Rihanae.

“I don’t know. But it seems to have ceased.”

“Yeah. For a day. Woohoo.” I replied sarcastically.

“Thing’s will turn around soon. I’m certain.”

I smiled; whether he could see it or not I wasn’t sure. I decided to take the opportunity of his silence to take a quick nap.

“I’m gonna sleep for a bit, okay?”

“Sure, that’s fine. You deserve it.” said Rihanae. I put my legs on the seat and laid down on the carriage seat; with barely enough room to cause any comfort. After a couple of minutes I could feel my eyes slowly drifting of to slumber…

Leinahtan…

***

“Why if it isn’t my dear cousin Maelissa. I thought you’d gone to travel Tamriel!”

I was awoken by a familiar voice. I sat up and looked around; only to see my dearest cousin Clesa. I jumped off the carriage and hugged her.

“Clesa, It’s so good to see you!”

“Well, it’s good to see you too!” she said. We jumped on the spot whilst hugging in exciment; then realised what we were doing and stopped immediately.

“How is everyone? Mother? Maelona?”

“Well I haven’t seen your mother in a few weeks now, but maelona should be at home.”

I reacted to what she said about mother.

“What do you mean you haven’t seen mother? Where is she?”

Clesa laughed; she must have sensed the tone of panic in my voice.

“Don’t worry, she’s fine. She moved to Kvatch a while back, that’s all.”

A sigh of relief filled by shaky body.

I guess it’s a good thing. Still haven’t plucked up the courage to see her after leaving without a word…

“Oh, thank Dibella! You really had me panicking there!”

“Sorry. Yeah Oleta’s in Kvatch. Has been for a while.”

“And what about Tandilwen? Is she around? I promised I’d tell her of my travels.”

Clesa shook her head.

“No, she went to study at the university a while back.”

I felt slightly disappointed. Tandilwen was the only one of Clesa’s very few friends that I liked. She was so lovely. I can remember the first time we had a conversation which was just us two…

Five Years Ago…

I sat by the pond by the statue of Dibella. It wasn’t long after my fathers death. I sat on the pier just… thinking. I was a lot better than I had been before; but that didn’t seem to stop the tears.

I sat there throwing small rocks into the ponds when I heard a voice behind me.

“You know you might cause damage to the water if you keep throwing rocks at it.”

I turned to see the beautiful, raven haired bosmer; Tandilwen.

I laughed at her comment. He bright personality cherring me up ever so slightly.

“I’ll be sure to apologize later.” I joked. Tandilwen laughed and moved closer to me, sitting down beside me on the pier’s edge.

“How are you doing, little Lissa?” she asked. The sincerity in her voice was calming.

“I’m holding up.” I said; I turned my head to face her and smiled. “I’ve just gotta hold it together, you know?”

Tandilwen nodded. I could see in her eyes that she wanted to say something.

“What?” I said. I was worried that I sounded rude; but I didn’t get the offended vibe from Tandi.

“I know you must be feeling a lot of pain right now. Truly. If I lost my father I do not know how I would cope,” she grabbed my hand in comfort, “but you are ever so strong, Lissa, you must know that. You witnessed something no girl of your age should have to witness and your headstrong attitude is what is going to get you through this.”

She used her other hand to rotate my chin so I was looking directly at her.

“You’re a good girl, Lissa. You have friends and family who love you. It’s okay to feel like you want to be on your own sometimes.”

I nodded slightly; I could feel tears welling behind my eyes.

“It’s just…” I said; I wasn’t sure how to finish.

“Yes?” Tandi said, wiping away a tear.

“It’s just… I don’t know how to talk to mother about it; or Maelona. It’s like they blame ME for what happened…”

“You get that thought out of your head this instant. Please, do not think that. They are grieving; just like you. Everyone mourns a loss in different ways, Lissa, but I can guarantee that they do NOT blame you. Okay?”

I nodded my head and began to cry; properly cry. She pulled my head to her chest in comfort, shuching me as she stroked my hair.

“It’s okay. It’s okay…” I could hear her say. She treated me like I was her little sister or something. I guess that was just her personality; her heart warmer than a Bravillian sunset.

After a little while I began to calm down.

“Are you okay?” Tandi asked me. I nodded in reply, wiping away the rest of my tears.

“Lissa, if you ever find that you can’t talk to anybody else, I will be here for you, okay?”

I nodded my head. Tandi then suddenly rose to her feet and brushed herself off.

“You’re leaving?” I asked her.

“Yes, I have arranged to meet aunt Carahil and Traven at the Mages Guild to help file some spell scrolls.”

“Oh, I’m really sorry! I didn’t mean to hold you up.” I apologized; I felt selfish for some reason.

“Oh no, you didn’t. Really. But I do have to go now. I can’t be late!” she laughed. She knelt down beside me and put her hands on my shoulders.

“Seriously though, if you do need to speak with anyone who you feel won’t judge, I will always be here, okay?” she said, giving me a hug before standing up again and heading toward the harbour.

I smiled.

Thanks Tandilwen…

Present time…

“…You okay?” Clesa asked me. Thinking about my encounter with Tandi must have left me staring blankly at her.

“Yes, I’m fine! Sorry.” I replied embarrassed.

“Come with me.” Clesa said before walking toward her house; I followed her.

***

“So, tell me all about your travels!” Said Clesa, gently sipping her tea.

Oh no, not again.

“You know, did some exploring, dungeon diving, ate some food, slept, did some more exploring.” I said.

“Ah, the usual then?” she joked.

I laughed at sipped my tea. Clesa’s house was lovely and very homey; But it smelt a bit; horses wernt the freshest of animals.

“So… is Rhano still in town?” I said; I had to touch on that subject sooner or later.

“Yeah, he is a full time member of the Fighters Guild. I think he is second in command after his dad.”

I was glad that he was still in town; at least the butterflies in my stomach seemed to suggest I was. I decided to change the subject by changing the topic to Rhano’s dad.

“And how is Azzan?”

“He’s okay, I think. Him and Ernest go for the odd drink at the inn every now and then.”

“And how is Ernest?” I asked her, taking another sip of tea.

“He’s… got his health.”

I noticed the slight look of despair in her eyes.

“Whats wrong?” I asked her.

Clesa shook of what she was thinking about; or rather she tried to.

“It’s nothing.”

“Look, I’m 19; not 9. Are you having fights?”

“No, no, no. Nothing like that. It’s just…” she said. I could see in her eyes that she was trying to resist telling me. I gave her a very demanding look and it wasn’t long before she caved in. “…okay. It’s just we haven’t made love in over months and I feel it’s beginning to affect our relationship in a dire way.”

“Yeowch, that’s a long time. But hey, be lucky. I haven’t even done it yet.”

We laughed. It was true; I was waiting till marriage, just like daddy raised me.

“Well two years ago we started trying for a baby with no success and Ernest assumed their was something wrong with him, so…”

“He’s lost the urge?”

Clesa spit out a bit of tea after my unexpected and blunt remark.

“I guess! But…”

Before she could finish Ernest walked into the room; the silence was awkward, although I don’t think he picked up on it.

“Why hello Lissa!” He said. I stood up from my seat and wen’t over and hugged him.

“Hello Ernest! You’re lucky you caught me; I was just heading off.”

“Oh Lissa you don’t have to…” said Clesa; probably thinking I’d driven her away with the intercourse talk.

“No it’s fine. I need to show my face around town anyway.”

“Aw, okay; but pop by again soon okay?” said Ernest.

“I will, don’t worry.” I said, hugging him again; then whispering in his ear. “Don’t make her feel unloved just because you think you are a failure; okay? Show her how much you love her.”

I patted him on the chest and walked over to Clesa and gave her a hug.

“It was great seeing you, Lissa.”

“You to, Clesa. I hope thing’s get better for you.” I replied. I released her from my hug and winked at her then headed to the door and left.

Time to show my face I guess…

***

I walked through the gate; the fresh Anvil air filling my lungs. Nothing had changed; the buildings were still there, the tree in the centre was still standing tall and the chapel was as beautiful as ever. I just stood there for a few minutes relishing in the fact that I was finally home.

Suddenly I heard a very faint but familiar voice.

“How would you like to help get my husband out of hot water? No? I don't blame you.”

I followed the voice slowly; listening to it become louder and more clear as I headed in its direction.

Eventually I found the source sitting by the old tree; as beautiful as the she where she sat.

“MAELONA!”

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NOTE: Tandilwen is the creation of Lady Syl, who is featured in Journey of Truth.
mALX
Oooh, a crossover !!! I love crossovers !!! Great Write !!!
King Coin
QUOTE
“Don’t worry, she’s fine. She moved to Kvatch a while back, that’s all.”

Oh, Shi-!

The flashback was well done. I like Tandi. smile.gif

QUOTE
“Don’t make her feel unloved just because you think you are a failure; okay? Show her how much you love her.”

umm great pep talk laugh.gif

MAELONA!
Acadian
Great fun to read! Several things I like here.

Your idea of preceding your episodes with a 'Previously. . . ' brief review is most welcome.

'The carriage was surprisingly fast; four black mares can do that.'
Oh, indeed they can!

Good review of her situation, and banter with Rihanae during her ride home to Anvil. Nice job with the flashback of Tandilwen. I thought the scene you did with Lissa and Clessa, then Earnest was well done.

And it looks like a foreshadowey segue into a Siren's quest?
Ceidwad
Still working on this, but it seems to have improved a great deal from the first few episodes in your first draft. You have a nice talent for illustration and a good sense of humour. I liked the episode with Lissa doing the rodeo on Prior Maborel's horse and getting thrown off. That made me laugh out loud! Also, the dialogue between Lissa and her guardian spirit is handled well.

If I can be nitpicky on my first post in this thread, there are some areas of grammar you could work on, for example its and it's here:

I didn’t let her finish as I leapt on the only paint horse in the stable; which made it panic. It whinnied quite loudly and tried to knock me off by sudden jolts of it’s back legs.

Remember, we use "it's" when describing something: the apostrophe replaces the letter 'i' in the longer it is.

Examples: It's beautiful out today.
It's too hot.

We use "its" when "it" 'owns' something.

For example: Its long, thick fur ('it' being maybe an animal which 'owns' the fur)
Its back legs (the horse 'owns' the legs)
Grits
“Don’t worry, she’s fine. She moved to Kvatch a while back, that’s all.”

Uh oh.

How nice to see the lovely Tandilwen in Lissa’s story! smile.gif

“I will, don’t worry.” I said, hugging him again; then whispering in his ear. “Don’t make her feel unloved just because you think you are a failure; okay? Show her how much you love her.”

ohmy.gif Well, I guess now he knows that she knows! I wonder how Ernest reacted to marital advice from a nineteen year old! Lissa’s heart is in the right place! laugh.gif
TrisRed
Grits: i'm glad you enjoyed the crossover! and i'm also glad that you enjoyed Lissa's 'sensitive' apprach to marriage counselling. tongue.gif

Ceidwed: Thank you for your notes; they were very helpful smile.gif

Acadian: thank you for your comments smile.gif i'm glad you find the 'Previously' sections useful smile.gif

King Coin: I'm pleased you enjoyed the flashback; Lady Syl has done a very good job with Tandilwen's character and it was a a privilage to be allowed to use her smile.gif

Malx: haha, i agree; crossovers are a joy to read AND write smile.gif

PREVIOUSLY: Lissa made it to Anvil and bumped into her cousin, Clesa, who told her about problem's she was having with her husband; which resulted in Lissa trying to help in a very 'Lissa' way. She then goes into the actual town a spots a familiar face...

13. Chapter 5 ~ Reunions ~ Part 2


Maelona sat on the bench looking at me after I called her name; greeting me with a great smile.

“LISSA!” she screamed with joy before standing and sprinting towards me; leaping on my tired body with a hug.

“When did you get back? Why are you back?” she asked.

“Bored of me already are you?” I joked; she laughed.

“Of course not, come here!” she said; hugging me again. We remained hugging for a good few seconds. It was so good seeing her again. She released her grip slowly and looked at my neck where the necklace she bought me hung loosely.

“You still wear it?” she asked me; she sounded happy.

“Of course I do! I never took it off. Not once.” I informed her. “Not even to bathe. Now that’s commitment.”

Maelona laughed; I saw tears fall from her eyes. I hoped they were happy tears.

“Oh, I’ve missed you so much! You always know how to make me laugh!” she said and then she grabbed my hand. “Please come with me. I’ll make us something to eat!”

She began to lead me up the road toward our house; at least I assumed that was where she was taking me. I didn’t know whether Maelona even lived in the hose where we grew up.

“Do you live in the family house or…”

“Yes, Gogan and I live there. I had the opportunity to sell it but I just couldn’t break apart from it.”

Something inside me felt lighter; I couldn’t imagine the house I grew up in belonging to someone else. We continued to walk before ending up inside said house. Maelona sat me down at the kitchen table whilst she fussed about the room looking for something in the cupboards.

“I wish you had let me know somehow that you were coming. I haven’t got anything in.” she complained; light heartedly of course.

“Sorry. It wasn’t really planned.” I said; my mood began to darken slowly.

“Oh really? Care to share?” she asked; still fussing about with the cupboards. I really didn’t feel like telling her; not at that point anyway, so I changed the subject.

“What was all that about outside?” I asked.

“What do you mean?” she replied.

“Outside. Just now. You asked that woman to help you get Gogan out of trouble or something?”

Her facial expression changed; as if I had discovered a dire secret about her.

“Oh, that was nothing. Really.” She said; I wasn’t convinced.

“it didn’t sound like nothing. It sounded like Gogan is in a real heap of trouble.”

“Lissa, really. It’s nothing.”

“If you don’t tell me I’m only going to ask around town.”

“Is that a threat I hear coming from your lips, Lissa?” she joked.

“No; it’s blackmail.” I replied.

Maelona laughed; ceasing her cupboard rummaging. She turned too me; her eyes unsure.

“It’s Gogan. Okay? He was mugged by a gang of thieves.”

Okay. Shocked.

“What? That’s serious Maelona.” I told her. “Why haven’t the guards done anything?”

She had that look again; the look as if I’d found something out.

“Be-be… because they… because they don’t, um… they don’t believe it.”

He stuttering was suspicious, but I put it all down to nerves. It’s not everyday that you admit to your little sister that you feel your pride is melting away.

“Well that’s stupid. The guards are idiots. Can I help?”

She looked at me with a serious look.

“Look, I understand that you want to help but Gogan and I need to deal with this on our own.”

“But you asked a-”

“Lissa! No more questions. Leave it alone. Please.” She yelled. I was surprised to say the least. There was something she wasn’t telling me; but I did as she asked and let it go.

“Sorry.” I said. She looked at me and after a couple of seconds her facial expression turned apologetic. She walked over from the cupboards and hugged me.

“No, I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have yelled like that. I’m just… embarrassed.”

“You don’t need to be. It’s not your fault he was mugged.”

She ceased the hugging and walked back over to the cupboards. I wanted to ask her about mother but something inside me urged me not to; and for a change it wasn’t Rihanae.

Speaking of. You’re awfully quiet.

“It’s your time to reunite with your loved ones. It would be rude to intrude.”

I could feel my heart melt slowly. That was the kindest thing he’d done for me.

Thank you.

I fought the urge and just asked Maelona a question I hoped she could answer.

“How’s mother?”

“She’s okay. She moved to Kvatch a while back…”

“Yeah I know. Clesa told me.”

“That Maeclesa sometimes doesn’t know when to stop…”

“No, I asked her.” I said. Maelona and Clesa were always complaining about each other; but deep down they were more like sisters.

“Oh. Well after you left; here,” she handed me a mug of tea, “anyway, after you left she quit the guild.”

“What? Why?”

“She felt useless. She thought she had driven you away and she felt she didn’t belong.”

“That’s garbage.”

“Well, that’s how she felt. She quit the guild, sold everything belonging to dad…”

Not everything…

“… and joined the chapel as chapel healer in Kvatch.”

I can't believe I did that to her...

“Well should I go up and…”

Maelona interrupted me.

“Not right now. I advise you to stay in town for a while. I’ll go up with you in a few weeks.”

“Why?” I asked her; confused.

“Because she was extremely distraught when you left; I mean really. Word will get to her that you're back and it’ll be better for her to wait for your arrival rather than surprise her with it.”

I didn’t really understand what she meant but I pretended to. I decided that I’d wait until Maelona thought it appropriate.

Until then I’ll just sit and wait.

She took a few things out of the cupboard and placed them on the counter.

“Now, why don’t you go and see some people in town whilst I cook this? I need concentration.”

“You want to get rid of me? I love you to!” I joked.

“No of course not, it’s just I’m an awful cook and an excellent talker, and I can’t seem to do them together.”

I laughed; rising from my seat.

“Okay, fair enough. I have a friend I want to see anyway.”

“Ahh. A certain Redguard?”

I looked at her; playfully showing hatred towards her.

“I’m a lady. I don’t chase after men. They do the chasing!” I stated.

“I’m sure they do!” she laughed before asking me a question. “Do you still have your house key?”

Key…?

Suddenly I remembered the letter I had received in the Imperial City; the letter that was included with a key. I pulled the key from the letter out of my pocket and showed it to Maelona.

“Speaking of keys; do you recognise this?”

Maelona took the key from my hand before examining it.

“I can’t say that I do. Why?” she said. I took the key from her fingers and put it back in my pocket.

“Nothing. I’m off.” I said; disappointed for some reason.

“Okay, well be back in two hours, okay?” she said. I nodded and kissed her on the cheek before heading to the door. Suddenly she spoke again. “And Lissa?”

“Yeah, sis?”

“… I’m glad you’re back. I really did miss you.”

I felt my heart flutter a little. I was still so happy to see Maelona; but I replied with witty banter.

“Oh be quiet you soppy woman and make my food!”

Maelona laughed; I left the house as she did.

***

There he was; Rhano. He was sat by the statue of Dibella washing some clothes. He was topless, his muscles were gleaming in the sunlight; reflecting off the beads of water slipping down his physique.

I stood by Hasathil’s house whilst she was doing a spot of gardening. Hasathil was Tandilwen's sister; and was equally beautiful.

“Spying on Rhano I see?” she said.

“Not spying exactly more… observing.”

Hasathill laughed, “Well I don’t blame you; he is a very good looking man.”

“Yeah he is…”

I could see Rhano getting out of the water and putting on his ‘laundry day’ clothes which consists of a brown shirt and nasty looking bottom wear. Once he had dressed he turned and stared at the statue; and I took the opportunity to surprise him.

"Go get him." Hasathil urged me, winking at me. I smiled at her.

"Oh; I will!" I replied with a cheeky smile.

I got into sneak mode and slowly crept up behind him; tapping him on the shoulder. He turned to look at me, grinning as he saw me.

“LISSA!” I said with delight, hugging me with his strong, manly arms. I got a good look at his face. He looked a lot older than his 21 years, but I assumed that was down to stress; Fighters Guild style.

“How are you?” I asked him.

“I’m good, how are you?”

“I’m good also…”

Did that make sense?

He released me from his grip; still holding my shoulders with his hands. Still smiling. Still looking beautiful.

“When did you get back?” he asked me.

“Well I’ve been in Cyrodiil for a couple of weeks but I’ve only been in Anvil for an hour or so.”

“Good.” He said, smiling.

We both began to say something at the same time then fussed about who should speak first; but being a gentleman he allowed me to speak first.

“How’s your dad?” I asked.

“He’s great. He’s been promoted to head of the guild; the Anvil guild I mean, not the whole guild.”

“Yes, I know what you mean.” I laughed. He was so adorable.

He gestured toward the end of the pier. “Shall we sit?”

I nodded. We walked over to the end of the pier and sat on the end; looking intently into each others eyes.

“I’m glad you’re back.” He said. “I’ve missed you.”

He slowly held my hand; still smiling.

“I’ve missed you too.” I said.

“Did you ever get lonely?” He asked me; he sounded sympathetic.

“No, not really.” I tapped my necklace. “I had Mae with me the whole time.”

He smiled again; more eye contact ensued. The whole situation was so romantic.

“Do you want to go for a drink? Later I mean?”

Oh my god he is asking me out on a date! I’m so excited! Does this mean he wants to possible start a relationship or something with me? I hope he just doesn’t want to use me because I actually really like him, more than I’ve ever liked anyone before! But I don’t want to seem too eager. What should I say, how should I say it, how should my facial expression be! Okay. Here goes…

“Sure.” I replied.

“Great.” He said. I could tell that he wanted to stand up; he probably got all embarrassed about asking me out and wanted to leave.

“Could we just sit here for a while?”

He looked at me.

“Yeah, sure.”

He looked into my eyes again. The spark between us was slowly igniting. I could feel my body edging slowly towards his. Slowly our heads began to connect.

Our lips met for a kiss.
King Coin
Maelona's trying to take down that gang of females. She wasn't at all prepared for her sister to come along. I was about to call Lissa nosy (and she is) but in this situation anyone would be.

Oh boy Lissa you do not comprehend what you did to your mother just disappearing like that on her.

Well, I'm quite surprised that Rhano is still available after all this time... maybe he isn't really...
Acadian
So nice to be home in Anvil again!

Its rather scary knowing that Lissa's mother is in Kvatch. I wonder how that'll turn out?

'Oh my god he is asking me out on a date! I’m so excited! Does this mean he wants to possible start a relationship or something with me? I hope he just doesn’t want to use me because I actually really like him, more than I’ve ever liked anyone before! But I don’t want to seem too eager. What should I say, how should I say it, how should my facial expression be! Okay. Here goes…
“Sure.” I replied.'

This was priceless, how carefully and masterfully Lissa crafted her brilliant reply! biggrin.gif


TrisRed
Acadian: Lissa thinks to much and says very little half the time. She would rather seem like she doesn't think rather than make a fool of herself tongue.gif

King Coin: Lissa does enjoy poking her nose in other people's business, and seeing as Maelona is her sister Lissa feels she has the right to... how wrong was she! biggrin.gif

PREVIOUSLY: Lissa caught up with Maelona, who appeared to be having trouble with Gogan, her husband. After a good conversation Lissa went out to see who else she could find and saw Rhano. After a brief conversation she agreed to go out on a date with him... and they shared a kiss.



14. Chapter 5 ~ Reunions ~ Part 3



I stood in Maelona’s bedroom as she threw dresses from her wardrobe onto her bed, rifling through them. She was helping me prepare for my date with Rhano.

“Which of these do you prefer?” she asked me.

“I’m not to sure. They’re all lovely,” I lied, “how about the green?”

She picked the green dress up off the bed and held it against me; her facial expression suggested she thought differently to me.

“No, it doesn’t match your eyes.” She said, throwing it back on the bed, “Ah!”

She picked up a light brown one and held it against me.

“That is definitley in the maybe pile!” she said, throwing it over the chair. I was to say in the least suspicious about Maelona’s sudden determination to find me the perfect dress; so I decided to question her about her enthusiasm.

“Is there a particular reason you’re throwing all these dresses in my direction?”

She had a glint in her eye. “Well in, oh, a few months I won’t be able to fit into them so I need to put them to good use in the mean time.”

She gave me a cheeky smile.

SHES PREGNANT!

“Oh my gods, you’re pregnant? Why didn’t you say anything before!” I screamed; excited.

“Because you had just got back and I wanted it to be a surprise for later.”

I smiled and hugged her, squeezing her so tight I was worried I’d hurt my little niece or nephew.

“But I’m still not 100 percent sure yet, so don’t say anything to anyone. Please?”

I gestured my hand across my mouth in a zipping motion.

This is so exciting! AHHH!

***


“… and she told me not to tell anyone so you have to promise you won’t say anything!”

I sat with Rhano in the Counts Arms. We were sat at a table near the roaring fireplace drinking from a bottle of Surilie Brothers wine; my absolute favourite.

“Well I can promise you I won’t tell anyone.” Rhano said, smiling.

“Not even your dad?”

“Not even my dad.” He said, still smiling that ridiculously gorgeous smile he had. I leaned on the table seductively.

“So why exactly don’t you have a girlfriend?”

He suddenly became all shy and avoidy, but with an adorable edge.

“I don’t know really, I never thought about it.”

“Oh, come on! A good looking guy like you! I bet they’re all queuing round the city for you!”

“Who’s queuing? Arvena and Quill-weave? Have you noticed the lack of young women around town?”

We laughed. It was true; apart from Arquen who was long gone, I was the only young-ish woman in town.

“Why haven’t you left town, anyway? I thought someone as driven as you would have been out of here ages ago.”

He sighed, “Because I knew… no, nothing.”

“Go on, tell me!” I said. Playfully punching his arm. He gave me a reluctant look before eventually caving in.

“… because I knew that if you came back you wouldn’t find me if I was anywhere but here.”

I felt my whole body light up.

That is so romantic…

“Do you really mean that?” I asked him, a grin spread across my face. He reached for my hands stroked them whilst looking deep into my eyes; so deep I could see my reflection in them; my hair looked awful.

“I do. You mean the world to me, Lissa, ever since that day at the manor. I know we haven’t spent that much time together recently but I really do believe that… that you are the one.”

I could feel my heart flutter. I didn’t know what to say to that. I felt exactly the same but the words wouldn’t come. So instead of speaking I leaned in for a kiss. The most beautiful kiss we had ever had.

I was in love.

***


“Hey Carahil!” I said as I entered the mages guild. She stood at the counter opposite the main door reading a book.

Nothing changes then!

She reacted to my greeting and a smile spread across her face.

“Lissa, how wonderful to see you back!” she said, placing the book on the counter and coming over to embrace me in her arms. “How long have you been back for?”

“Only for a day. I came back yesterday morning.”

She was still smiling as she released me from her embrace.

“So how has everything been for you here?” I asked her.

“Things could be better. We are dealing with a rogue mage at the moment. It is very troubling.”

“Oh dear, well anything I can help with?”

“No, Lissa don’t worry, we have somebody on it.” She said before walking back over to the counter. I followed her and began to examine the books laying in small piles on the counter.

“How’s Orintur doing?” I asked. Orintur was Carahil's son. He was based in the Cheydinhal Guild.

“He is splendid, thank you for asking.” She said with a pleasing glee.

“And Arquen?”

That question was met only with an essence of unease.

“I haven’t seen her since around the time Ulfgar Fog-Eye’s daughter was murdered.”

Awkward silence. But of course, me being me, I couldn’t understand when the right time was to shut up.

“I still remember the day we all met up after she was killed…”

Five Years Ago


I was walking from my house to the mages guild. Mother has ordered me to help Carahil file some scrolls. it was utterly the most boring job anyone could ever have the non-pleasure of doing.

As I walked to the guild, moaning ad cussing under my breath, I heard the voice of my cousin, Clesa, calling after me.

“LISSA! I’m glad I caught you,” she said, running toward me from the main gate. “I was wondering if you wanted to go to the Arms with me for a spot of lunch?”

“I can’t,” I said with a miserable tone, “I have to go and file some scrolls.”

“Oh… well that’s okay, I’ll go with you. I’ve got nothing better to do!” she said as we walked toward the guild. I opened the guild door and I headed to the second floor library. When we made it to the library, we saw Carahil, Tandilwen and Hasathil conversing

“Hey, you all!” I greeted them. They all turned to look at me. I noticed a look on their face which suggested dark times were brewing.

“Oh, hello, Lissa,” said Carahil, “I assume you are here because your mother asked you to help file the new scrolls?”

“Well, it’s more like she told me to help,” I replied. “I ran into Clesa along the way, and she offered to join me.”

“The more the better,” said Carahil. “There is much to be done.”

“So, what were you talking about before we got here?” I asked “You all look so grim and serious!”

“We were talking about the murder outside the cathedral last night,” Hasathil replied, she looked quite nervous.

“Oh, you mean what happened to Ulfgar Fog-Eye’s daughter?” I said; I remembered Maelona being distressed about it. “It’s sad, isn’t it? She was always so kind, helping the beggars and stuff.”

“Poor Ulfgar… he’s had so much tragedy in such a short amount of time—first with his wife drowning, and now this… I’m not sure he’ll ever recover. I stopped by the lighthouse on my way to town this morning, to offer my condolences and give him a basket of baked goods. He looked so miserable. Now all he has left is that lighthouse to look after, and nothing more. It’s a shame to see such a brilliant man lose so much--all in one year, no less.” Said Carahil.

“I heard it was some kind of argument that led to the murder,” said Clesa. “But I find it hard to believe, because I just can’t see anyone arguing with Linnea. She was always so easy-going and gentle-natured—she never argued with anyone about anything.”

“It had to have been random,” said Tandilwen. “Which means anyone in Anvil could be in danger of being the killer’s next victim.”

“Oh, I hope they catch him soon,” said Hasathil, still rather nervous. “This is all so frightening!”

“Ha, I’m not afraid!” I lied “My dad will take care of that murderer, if he ever comes near my family. No one messes with the Cristenn’s and their kin!”

Whenever I was in doubt I always knew that my dad would protect me. I knew he would.

“Anyway, I’ll just…” I said; gesturing to the scrolls I was sent to file. Clesa walked over with me. The others continued to talk amongst themselves as I turned to whisper to Clesa.

“They will catch the killer, won’t they?” I asked; a slightly worried tone in my voice.

Clesa said nothing; the only thing she did was give me a reassuring smile. I wasn’t convinced.

Present Day


“Yes, that was a dreadful time.” Carahil said before changing the subject. “Lissa, I have a lot I need to be getting on with.”

I took the hint. My prying had annoyed her and I wasn’t surprised.

“Okay, I’ll… I’ll be off then.” I said with a smile. Carahil looked a little bit upset; I must have brought up a memory she wanted to forget.

***


“Lissa you need to go to Bravil. Now”

What? I asked Rihanae. Why didn’t you say anything before?

“Because you haven’t had your Guardian stone on your possession since your date with Rhano last week!”

Oh yeah…

I’d forgotten that I had taken my bracelet off, but I really didn’t want Rihanae prying over our lip locking.

You’re lucky Maelona didn’t find the bracelet! She probably would have sold it! I teased.

“That isn’t funny.”

I laughed as I sat by the fire in Maelona’s kitchen.

What’s the big emergency then?

“A descendant of mine in Bravil is in a spot of bother and I need you to help her.” Rihanae demanded; I resisted.

Forget it! I’ve only just got back!

“I understand that but I need you to do this for me. Please.”

No.

“Please.”

N-O spells ‘leave me alone’!

I thought it was completely unfair for Rihanae to be asking this of me. I had only just got back to anvil and wanted to spend some time with my family and friends. Was that too much to ask?

“Hey, sweetie!” Maelona said as she entered the house. I turned to see her.

“Hey, how was your day? Found anybody to help Gogan yet?”

She looked as if she didn’t hear me; ignoring me no doubt.

“So how’s the whole ‘are you or are you not pregnant’ thing going on.” I asked; changing the subject. She walked over and joined me sitting by the fire.

“I’m not too sure. I have a doctor coming over tomorrow to check me over; then I should know!”

I squealed with delight. It was very exciting.

“Lissa, you have to help out my descendant! NOW!”

NO!

Maelona must of noticed the look of distress that suddenly appeared on my face.

“Are you okay?”

“No, Rihanae is trying to get me to go to Bravil.”

“Who is Rihanae?” she asked, confused.

“I told you about my guardian spirit, remember?”

A look of realisation dawned on her face, “Oh yes, I remember. Well, why does he want you to go?”

“He says his descendant is in trouble and he wants me to help her.”

“Then you must!” Maelona insisted.

“I can’t leave! I’ve only just got here!”

“It’s okay, once it’s done you can come straight back; I’m not going anywhere.”

“But…” I protested before Maelona interrupted.

“Look, it is amazing that you are back, really, and I would like nothing more but for you to stay longer; but if someone desperately need’s your help you can’t just ignore it. You’re a Cristenn. Helping people out what we do!”

I looked at her; she had a sincere look in her delicate eyes. That was the thing about my sister; she always put other people’s needs before her own.

“Are you sure? I’ll be straight back!” I informed her.

“I know you will. Go, please.” She said as I stood up, “I’ll bake a few sweetcakes for when you get back.”

***


I entered the fighters guild; looking around frantically. Eventually I saw what I was looking for sat in the corner of the large room.

“Rhano, I need to speak to you!”

“What’s up?” He asked me, standing up.

“I have to go away for a couple of days.”

He looked confused, “Why?”

“It’s personal, but I just wanted you to know that I’ll be back in a couple of days. No more than a week.”

He came up close to me, “You’d better be.”

I smiled as we embraced in a kiss. I could feel the eyes of the guild members boring into us; so I pulled away.

“Um, yeah. So I’ll see you in a few days?”

Rhano smiled, “sure.”

I tried to part from him but I was too lost in his eyes.

“Right! I’ve got to go!” I said; tearing myself away from him. As I walked away I heard him shout after me.

“I love you.” He said. I stopped in my tracks and turned my head.

The words came naturally.

“I love you, too.”
Grits
I stood in Maelona’s bedroom as she threw dresses from her wardrobe onto her bed, rifling through them. She was helping me prepare for my date with Rhano.

I love this! I’m sure many females have a memory just like it, filling the air with a friend’s/cousin’s/sister’s clothes looking for the one thing that will make that important date perfect. smile.gif

“But I’m still not 100 percent sure yet, so don’t say anything to anyone. Please?”

I gestured my hand across my mouth in a zipping motion.


Yeah, right! And we didn’t have to wait long to see Lissa telling just one friend… laugh.gif

How fun to see the scene with Tandilwen from Lissa’s perspective!

Whoa, if Rhano shouts that he loves you in front of his fellow fighters guild members, he must really mean it! It cracked me up when Lissa evaluated her hairdo while she gazed lovingly into her man’s eyes. So, to Bravil!
Acadian
This was fun! You did a great job in the first scene with Rhano in the tavern. You very gently let us know that Lissa had spilled her guts to Rhano about Maelona being pregnant and I enjoyed both the actual dialogue and Lissa's internal dialogue.

Yup. I'll just slip this guardian stone off before Rhano and I start smooching. . . . Lol. And so Lissa and Rhano are in love!

And it's off to Bravil.

King Coin
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I gestured my hand across my mouth in a zipping motion.

Great, now the whole town knows.

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“He says his descendant is in trouble and he wants me to help her.”

“Then you must!” Maelona insisted.

Rihanae thanks you Maelona. Lissa is so stubborn!

Rhano just seems too good to be true for Lissa.
mALX
Sorry it took so long to get over here and read, this month has been unbearably hectic so far. Lissa's personality shines through everything she does, I get a huge kick out of how much personality she shows simply with her gestures - very easy to visualize her. You have a real knack for showing that in your writing! And Rhano ... WOO HOO !!! Awesome Write !!
TrisRed
mALX: I'm so thrilled that you are enjoying the journal! Your comments always brighten my day smile.gif

King Coin: Ahh, i think maybe Rhano is just what Lissa needs; but you never know wink.gif

Acadian: I am overjoyed that you enjoyed the scene in the tavern; i too thik it is sweet that Rhano and Lissa are in love. smile.gif

Grits: i'm glad you enjoyed the opening segment in the chapter with Maelona and the dresses! it's only fair she passes them on seeing as she may not fit in them soon tongue.gif

PREVIOUSLY: A week after her first date with Rhano and finding out Maelona is pregnant, Lissa is sent to Bravil by Rihanae to help one of his descendant's in trouble. After convincing from maelona she decideds to go; but not before stopping by the fighters guild to tell Rhano she loves him.

EDIT NOTE: After a couple of comments about the length I apologize to any new readers.



15. Chapter 6 ~ GOC: Origins ~ Part 1



After an uneventful two day hike I made it to the front gate of Bravil, the hovel of Cyrodiil, according to some folk. During my travels I made a brief stop in Skingrad and stayed the night in the Two Sister's Lodge; where I was certain the Orc innkeeper spat in my food. It is pretty unusual for salad to have a gooey texture. But that wasn't all. I also got cornered by an insane Bosmer who begged me to meet him behind the chapel at midnight; but I firmly told him I wasn't that kind of girl and walked away from him. I didn't know who he thought I was but I certainly wasn't the kind of girl who would be up for secret one on one sessions behind a holy temple. Other than that my very short stay in Skingrad was uneventful.

Looking back now I wish I went to see the Surile Brothers. Their wine is amazing.

When I left Skingrad in the morning I continued to Bravil. It took a while but apart from a few unchallenging wolf encounters I made it their without any hassle.

I myself quite liked Bravil. It had a lot of personality and didn't pretend it was something it wasn't. I used to come here with my mother to visit her friend, Kud-Ei, from the mages guild. But I wasn’t here to admire my surroundings; i was here to complete a personal mission for Rihanae.

"So you are definitely sure that she is here?"

"Yes, positive."

"And what's her name again?" I asked him. I remember it being more than three syllables; therefore I had no luck remembering it.

"Her name is Ardaline. She is the alchemist at the guild so she won't be hard to find."

"Ahh, well that's good then."

I spotted a guard and approached him for directions; my memory of the guild's location had vanished.

"Excuse me could you direct me to the mages guild."

"Certainly, now listen close. Wander through this gate and continue forward until you reach a point where turning right is the only option left. Then you must proceed onward and turn left, then another right until you see a building which is not the building you seek. And until you until you see the destination sought. Do you understand?"

No.

"...yes?"

"I'm glad to be of service. Have a wonderful day."

I nodded and went to open the gate.

Rihanae, did you understand any of that? I panicked

"I don't think so. Don’t worry, we shall find direction's elsewhere."

Sweet. If Rihanae didn't understand either I knew my lack of concentration wasn’t to blame.

I walked through the gates and into the city; welcomed by a foul smell, which was most likely the open sewer systems. I wasn't bothered by it though; I had met quite a lot of nasty smells on my travels. I looked around to see where my destination was. I spotted a woman walking around as if she had lost a Septim and found a paintbrush; or something a lot more clever then that.

I walked up to her and tapped her on the shoulder.

"Um, excuse me..."

She turned to face me; she had the most miserable looking expression on her face.

"I don't suppose you have seen my husband, have you?"

I was caught quite off guard by her question; I didn't even know who she was let alone her missing husband.

"Sorry, no, I don't."

Her face drooped into an even more miserable expression; which I didn't think was even possible.

"Oh, okay. Can I help you with something?" she asked her tone no brighter than her face.

"Yes I’m looking for the mages guild; I can't seem to remember where it is."

"I shall show you where it is. I have nothing better to do."

I didn't take offence, I only thanked her. It must have been rough on her having a missing husband, not knowing where he is. I tried to be polite by introducing myself, but the only conversation she had for me was simply her name 'Ursanne." She began to walk; leading me to the guild as I followed. We walked through the centre of the city; spotting the beautiful statue of a lady; I couldn't remember what it was called. All I could remember was that if you kissed her cheek you would have good luck granted upon you; which was pretty cool. Beyond the statue was the Chapel of Mara; which stood proudly, towering the slums. To the left of the Chapel was a large-ish building which I recognised straight away. The mages guild.

I walked in front of Ursanne to halt her as I knew where I was going from that point.

"Thank you so much for your help." i said as i closed in for a handshake of gratitude. "I hope your husband turned up."

She forced of a weak smile and nodded as a thank you before heading back to her original spot. I looked after her; I genuinely felt for her, but it wasn't any of my business. I was in Bravil to do a job.

I faced the guild, and headed toward the door.

Oh Rihanae, you'd better be grateful.

***


"Well if it isn't little Lissa Cristenn!"

Kud-Ei spotted me as I entered the guild. I smiled as the friendly Argonian approached me.

"Hello, Kud-Ei; how are you?"

"Oh, you know how it is!"

I nodded in agreement, despite the fact I knew nothing of what she was talking about. She continued speaking.

"So I hear you have been travelling? How has that been?"

"It was okay I guess..." I said; I could feel a story session coming on.

"Your mother seemed distressed after you left, though. But I suppose she has never been quite the same since dear Nathaniel passed away."

I nodded in agreement;

"It was a terrible loss for you and your kin. It reminds me of a time a good friend of mine lost his daughter to a freak storm. It was shocking..."

I giggled in my head; I’m not sure if the pun was intentional, but due to the sadness to her tone I was sure it wasn't.

"But my friend is doing better for himself now; he owns his own house in the imperial city..."

I smiled to keep pretence of interest. As much as I loved Kud-Ei; she could chew the ear off anybody.

"I'm actually here on business..." I eventually told her.

Kud-Ei laughed. "Ah, and there is me nattering on. What is it you seek?"

"It's more a question of who..."

Or is it whom? Hmm…

"It doesn’t matter. Ask about Ardaline."

Hush. I’m getting there.

"I'm looking for somebody called Ardaline, is she here?"

The Argonian shook her head.

"Not at this current moment. She has popped out for supplies; but if you care to wait she should be back shortly."

Great. All this way and she isn’t even here.

"But as Kud-Ei said, she should be back soon. Just stay here until she returns."

"Sure, I'll wait."

"Wonderful, do you care to join me for a spot of lunch while you wait?"

I was pretty hungry; but I didn't want to intrude.

"Are you sure? I don't want to be any trouble."

"Nonsense! You would be most welcome to join us."

Then how can I refuse?

"In that case I would be glad to join you." I smiled.

"Splendid. Follow me and we will find you something nice to eat." she smiled. She then led me to a large dining table in the bottom right corner of the guild. The table was covered in food; sweetcakes, vegetables, wine. Everything i loved was on there.

Okay, now I DEFINATLEY cant refuse!

***


Sat at the table were a female Breton and a male Altmer. As we approached the woman greeted me.

"Why, hello there! I haven’t seen you here before! My name is Delphine."

"Hey, I’m Lissa."

"Lissa here is Oleta's daughter." Kud-Ei said quite proudly. The Altmer looked up at me once he heard this.

"Ah, the one who abandoned her family to go gallivanting across Tamriel." He stood up and shook my hand. "Carandial. It is an honour."

He sounded genuine; but he was obviously being sarcastic. I looked at Kud-Ei and she shook her head as if to suggest I ignore him.

"Please, sit with me." Delphine demanded; and I did so. As I sat down Kud-Ei sat next to Carandial. We all began to put food on our plates. Kud-Ei and Carandial were talking amongst themselves. Delphine picked up a bowl of tomatoes.

"You simply must try one of these! They are beautiful!"

"Thanks." I said; smiling as I put one on my plate. Once our plates were full and we had started eating Kud-Ei turned her attention to general conversation.

"So, what do we have to share today?" Kud-Ei asked us.

"Well i think i have perfected the improved 'Enemies Explode' spell. It is marvellous!" Delphine said proudly as she ate the vegetables on her plate.

"Enemies explode?" I asked her; she nodded.

"Yes, it is a wonderful spell if I say so myself."

"It truly is." Kud-Ei added. "it is incredible how powerful a destruction spell one of my girls has created."

I giggled to myself in my head; the open talk of exploding people over lunch was hilarious.

"What level is your spell at?" I asked Delphine.

"It is strictly for higher levels. There would be trouble if it was left in the hands of a simple novice." Kud-Ei interrupted. It seemed like Kud-Ei was the tamer to Delphine’s wild side.

"And what is your personal achievement, Lissa?" Carandial asked; he had a belittling tone to his voice.

"Well I survived an avalanche in Skyrim if that counts? I almost drowned in the black marsh AND I have a psychopathic killer after me. Is that good?" I replied sarcastically; I could give it as well as I could take it.

I heard Rihanae laugh, "Oh, Lissa..."

"You got caught in an avalanche?" Delphine asked me with curiosity.

"Yeah; I’ve had this phobia of snow ever since. It was awful."

"Well it sounds terrible. Tell me, what do you do during the snowy months?" Kud-Ei asked me.

"Usually I just stay indoors."

"Ah, that is such a shame for such a... carefree adventurer as yourself..." Carandial commented. He was starting to annoy me; but I resisted to temptation to batter his pride with my cunning wit.

"Kud-Ei, tell Lissa about that time we went to Bruma; you'll find this funny!" Delphine insisted.

"Delphine, Lissa does not want to hear about that. It isn't at all interesting..."

Before we had a chance to begin that particular part of the conversation I heard the main door open followed by the voices of two women.

"Ah, it appears Ardaline has returned." Kud-Ei informed me. "Feel free to leave the table at any time, Lissa."

"It was wonderful to have you eat with us!" said Delphine rather enthusiastically.

I stood up and brushed myself off and smiled.

"Thank you. Everything was so delicious," i said to Kud-Ei, "But I can’t help feeling rude leaving when you haven’t finished eating..."

"Please, you came here to speak to Ardaline; if you were one of my girls it would be a different matter."

"Are you sure?"

"Yes, now go before I change my mind!" she joked. I smiled at her and the others before walking to the alchemy section of the guild hall. Whilst walking there I could hear Ardaline speaking to another elf; even thought I wasn't certain which was which.

"Are you certain we have enough mandrake root?" asked one elf.

"Yes, I am. Anymore and it would only be a waste." Replied the other.

When I was at my destination I saw an Altmer speaking to a young female Dunmer. I made my presence known.

"Um, excuse me... Ardaline?" I said to the beautiful Altmer. She was tall. I felt teeny weeny.

"Yes, I am she; and you are?" she smiled.

"Oh, sorry!" I said, reaching out to her inviting a handshake, which she accepted. "I'm Lissa; Lissa Cristenn..."

What do I tell her?

"The truth."

NO! She’ll think I’m crazy.

"Then you won't be in any new situation will you?" he joked.

In my head I laughed. I looked at Ardaline.

"I was sent by... by your ancestor. To help you."

As predicted, she looked at me as if I was crazy.

"You seem as if you speak some form of truth; however i do not trust your intentions." said the Dunmer.

"Anyanka!" scolded Ardaline before looking at me, "What do you mean, exactly?"

I knew what time it was.

Time to explain everything. No day would be complete without it.

***


"...and that's why I’m here."

They looked at me as I was insane; and I couldn't blame her.

"That is highly unbelievable, I must say-" said Anyanka.

"Actually, I believe her." Ardaline told her, to my surprise.

"You do?" I asked, confused.

"Yes; I’ve read about the guardian stones you speak of. I used to love things like that; the history and their origins." she returned to her potion making. "But unfortunately I’m afraid yours has let you down and you've had a wasted journey, as it appears that I am in no trouble."

"...Really?" I asked her; her sudden subject change proved otherwise.

"Yes, I am certain. Offer my thanks to Rihanae but truthfully, I do not require any form of assistance."

"But... Rihanae was sure that-" I began to say before getting interrupted.

"She has kindly told you that she has no need for your assistance. Now please, leave us alone." Anyanka said pretty bluntly. I did as she asked and began to walk away.

"Okay, sorry to bother you." I said to Ardaline; who replied with a smile. I turned and headed toward the main door.

"Lissa, where do you think you're going?"

You heard her; she's not in trouble. I think your spirit sixth sense mumbo jumbo failed you on this one.

"No, I sense anguish in her heart. You have to help her." Rihanae persisted.

But she doesn’t want my help.

"Just because she doesn’t want it doesn’t mean she doesn’t need it."

I stopped walking. If Rihanae was right and Ardaline was faking a calm exterior then i was at a loss for what to do.

"Your best bet would be to ask around. Maybe Kud-Ei knows something?"

Well what am I supposed to ask her? 'hey, i have a strange yet accurate feeling that Ardaline needs some form of desperate assistance... but do you know why?"

I heard Rihanae laugh before he spoke again, "No, just say you noticed something odd about Adeline’s behaviour and you want to know if something is wrong."

For a dead guy he was a genius. My next stop would be the dining area; assuming that’s where Kud-Ei would be. I walked over to the dining area and spotted a male Dunmer checking out Ardaline; but I thought nothing of it and continued; eventually seeing Kud-Ei and the others still sat in their seats.

"I'm sorry to interrupt but could I speak to you?" i asked Kud-Ei. She nodded and stood up from her seat.

"Of course," she looked at the others, "Excuse us."

Kud-Ei led me to the bottom of the staircase that ascended to the second floor.

"What is on your mind?" she asked me.

"Well... I noticed some strange behaviour from Ardaline and I was just wondering whether she was ok?" I asked. She had a look on her face which suggested that she was resisting telling me something.

"I'm sure she is fine..." she replied; she wasn't convincing at all.

"Please, I’m not stupid; I know something is up."

There was a silence where Kud-Ei contemplating whether to say anything or not, but eventually she did.

"Well... what I’m about to tell you you mustn’t share with anyone." she told me.

"Of course not." I assured her; I was an amazing secret keeper... apart from that ONE time i told Mother about what I caught Maelona and Gogan up to.

"Okay," she looked around to see if anyone was listening, "she has had her staff stolen."

Silence.

"Is that it?"

"No, it is a bit more complex then that, but I fear embarrassing the poor girl..."

"Oh come on, I won't tell anybody."

Kud-Ei looked at me with reluctance in her eyes; but eventually she gave in.

"Well, do you see that man stood watching her?" she said, pointing in the direction of the Dunmer i noticed looking at Ardaline. "His name is Varon Vamori. He has an... Infatuation with the poor girl; he wont leave her alone."

"Then why did he steal her staff?"

Kud-Ei shook her head, "I am unsure; probably just to get her attention."

"Well I’ll talk to him and get the staff back." i said to her.

"That is unnecessary; it is guild business."

Guild business? Whatever.

"Look, I’m going to talk to him about it whether I have your permission or not; even though having your permission would make the whole thing less complicated."

I looked into her eyes; i could tell that she could see the sincerity in mine.

"Okay, Lissa, do what you must. But I can't be a part of it; Ardaline put her trust in me." she said with an uncertain smile. I didn't want to have to put Kud-Ei in that position; but i had to help Ardaline.

I had Vallum in my sights and marched towards him; tapping him on the shoulder. He was still peering over at Ardaline.

"May I speak to you over here please, thanks." I said; grabbing his arm and dragging him to where Kud-Ei and I just spoke.

"What is this? Don’t touch me!" Vallum said, pulling his arm away from my grip. "What do you want?"

"I want Ardaline's staff back, thank you."

He performed a guilty laugh, "What, i don't have Ardaline's staff! How dare you, a perfect stranger, accuse me of such things?"

"Look, I’m being nice to you here; but i can get nasty. I can guarantee you won’t like me when I’m nasty." I said getting closer to him.

"You won’t get anything out of me, Redguard."

I wasn't getting anywhere, and i knew it. it was obvious that he wasn't going to tell me anything.

"Speak to him like a friend. act as if you care about him. That might work."

"... Ardaline is a fool not to find you remotely attractive. You’re gorgeous! It’s her loss."

"You- you think I’m attractive?" he said; his face lightening up slightly.

"... Sure."

"Oh, but why can't she see it then?" he moaned, turning his head to look at Ardaline again.

Ah! Now were getting somewhere!

"Because she can't see what i see; and I'm sure that taking her staff won’t make matters any better."

"No, it didn't..." He suddenly realised what he said, retracting back on his words. "Um, especially as people think I’m the culprit, when i of course didn't, um..."

"Please, I'm not trying to beguile you into a confession; i just want what’s best for both of you. I know you took it, you know you took it. What’s the point of trying to cover it up?"

He looked at me with a worn down look on his face.

"I was angry, do you understand? She wouldn't pay any attention to me and i snapped by taking her staff. You do not understand how deeply i regret my actions..."

Finally! It’s about time.

"Well done, Lissa! Now get the staff back."

Patience, please.

"It's all good. Just give me the staff and we will say no more about it; in fact, I’ll tell Ardaline that you found it. I’m sure she'll be appreciative then!"

Vallum scratched the back of his head; a tell-tale sign of a guilty conscience.

"See, the thing is... i... might have sold it."

"WHAT?" i said slightly enraged; all that effort and he didn’t even have the staff.

"I sold it a while back to a man called Soris Arenim."

I tried to exterior calm. All I wanted was to end this and keep Rihanae happy; but now it was turning into a full on nightmare.

"Well where does this man live?"

"He lives in the Imperial City. The Talos Plaza district."

Now I have to head all the way up to the city just to get a staff? Grr...

I looked at him; he could see in my eyes that i wasn't happy.

"Right, I’m going to go to the city to get the staff. You stay here."

"I can go with you if you like; i feel rather bad about what happened."

Out of everyone at that particular moment he was the one person i didn't want with me. He was a creep.

"No, i don't need assistance. I just need to leave. Now."

I headed to the guild door to begin my journey to the city. I really wasn't happy; i just wanted to get it over with so i could head back to anvil. Now I had involved my self in a wild goose chase. I didn't even stop to bid farewell to Kud-Ei, i was that irritated. I wasn't even sure why i had gotten involved; it's not like Rihanae could physically make me do anything for him. I left the guild hall and began to walk to the city gate before feeling somebody tapping my back. I turned to see Anyanka stood behind me with her hands on her hips. She looked angry.

"Why did i see you speaking with Varon? Are you plotting something against Ardaline? Confess!"

"Woah, calm down i wasn't doing anything of the sort. I was just trying to get her staff back."

She looked at me as if i had done something truly awful.

"How do you know about that? What had been said that is not of your business? Confess!"

I looked at her; she was pretty intimidating for such a small lady.

"Calm down, okay? Kud-Ei told me about it once i told her of my concerns about Ardaline."

I saw Anyanka raise an eyebrow, "How did you get Kud-Ei to reveal that information to you? Confess!"

"Stop saying confess, it's irritating."

"Hmm, i appear to have reached something deep inside you; a guilty soul perhaps?"

"No; an annoyed one."

We had a 'stare-off'; Our hands on our hips.

"What are you doing at this current moment?" Anyanka asked me.

"Speaking to you, i think." I replied sarcastically. Anyanka wasn't impressed.

"It appears that i do not find your form of wit at all humorous. Desist immediately."

I looked at her. For some reason i liked her. She was brave, confrontational and head strong; my kinda girl.

"You talk really strangely."

"I have had many people say that exact thing to me; and as a result i am unphased."

I laughed; she was funny to, even if she didn't mean to be.

"I'm going to the Imperial City, would you like to come?"

Anyanka looked at me with a look of suspicion. She was confused as to why i was offering some sort of friendship toward her.

"Why are you going there? What business do you have?"

"...I'll explain on the way. Are you coming?"

She thought for a minute before smiling, giving me an agreeing nod.

"I shall accompany you, only to keep an eye on you however."

I laughed again before walking toward the gate; with Anyanka following me with a hint of caution in her footing.

The journey was going to be interesting...


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Acadian
A lengthy episode that spanned much of Cyrodiil.

Prudent thinking on Lissa's part to pass up Glarthir's offer of a midnight rendezvous while in Skingrad.

"Of course not." I assured her; I was an amazing secret keeper... '
Oh Kud-Ei, if you only knew!

Lissa did a great job of handling Valium Vemereal . wink.gif

Anyanka was fun and interesting. She should make for an entertaining trip to the IC.
King Coin
I love the guard! He must get sick of giving directions so he made sure he gave them in the most complex manner he could think of.

QUOTE
"Ah, the one who abandoned her family to go gallivanting across Tamriel." He stood up and shook my hand. "Carandial. It is an honour."

rollinglaugh.gif

You know, with how insistent Rihanae was about getting down to Bravil I thought it would be more important than getting a staff back... And now it's all the way back up to the Imperial City. Lissa is going to be vastly irritated.

Anyanka? This should be interesting.
mALX
I have to agree with Acadian - a huge wall of text can sometimes be off-putting to readers with little time on their hands. Maybe if you broke it into sections to give the appearance of a break between text.

All that said, the write is fantastic! I was roaring laughing at Lissa's interpretation of Glathir's plans for her - you owe me a monitor and keyboard for that paragraph! ROFL !!!

Just so you know - if you break into the Surile Brothers house and sneak through, the only wine you will find them drinking is Tamika's, ROFL !!! They won't even drink their own product!

Lissa's inner dialogue is always my favorite parts of your story - her impressions of everything she comes in contact with are ALWAYS unique, interesting outlooks - and nearly 100% of the time hilariously worded !!! Loving this story, PLEASE keep it up !!!
TrisRed
First of all i would like to apologize for the length of the previous chapter; it was a one off, i promise tongue.gif

Acadian: Lissa has never been good at remembering names; just ask Jeffery wink.gif

King Coin: I do feel sorry for the guards a lot of the time; all those directions that they manage to get perfect every time they are asked! it's only fair that once in a while they get to have some fun wink.gif

mALX: I'm glad that you love Lissa so much! she does have a way with words; usually the wrong ones wink.gif

PREVIOUSLY: Lissa made it to Bravil and confronted Rihanae's descendant, Ardaline, about her situation; which she refused any knowledge of. Lissa eventually learnt that Ardaline had her staff stolen by Varon Vamori; a dunmer infatuated with her. Unfortunatly Varon sold the staff to a man in the Imperial City. Lissa heads to the city to fetch it back; but she is ambushed by Ardaline's very brash friend Anyanka, a dunmer. After a conversation about Lissa intentions, Anyank agrees to accompany Lissa in getting Ardaline's staff back.



16. Chapter 6 ~ GOC: Origins ~ Part 2



Anyanka and I walked up the Green Road. It was going to be a long journey to the Imperial City; but it most certainly wasn’t boring. I wasn't sure why I was so fond on Anyanka. She was rude, inconsiderate and as cold as ice; but that’s what made me so intrigued about her. Her no-nonsense attitude was a refreshing welcome for my tastes. It was nice to have a companion that wasn't sycophantic towards you; not like Jessie when we first met. Don't get me wrong, I adore Jessie now, but at first I found her highly irritating.

As we walked I turned to Anyanka to initiate a conversation.

"So... what's your story?" I asked her.

"I am unsure of what you mean." she said.

"I mean, like, your past? Anything interesting?"

She looked at me with a look of suspicion in her eyes.

"Why do you want to know? What business is it of yours?"

"It's not really, i just want to know. I’m just trying to get a conversation going, here."

Anyanka looked at me; still looking at me like I was up to something. Eventually she softened her expression and spoke to me.

"My parents reside in Cheydinhal. My father is the most famous artist in Cyrodiil."

"Wow, that's pretty cool." i said; pleased that she was speaking to me.

"I suppose it is, as you say, 'cool'. But when I was a child he used to lock himself in his study for hours on end. I hardly saw him."

"Well that sucks. What about your mother?"

"My mother is just your average housewife. We do not get on."

"Why's that?" I asked, a concerned frown on my face.

"She does not seem to appreciate my way of conversing. She thinks of me as rude and arrogant."

"I wouldn't say you were arrogant. You can't help it; you are who you are." I told her. I saw a little hint of a smile on her lips.

"But I am rude; at least that is how I come across. If I have a thought on my mind I like to share it. it isn’t nice keeping opinions to yourself."

"It is sometimes. Sometimes opinions should be kept on your mind. Feelings could get hurt."

"That isn't viable to me. If somebody tells me something I don’t like or acts in a particular way that i am not fond of, i will tell them."

I giggled, "I guess that is fair enough."

There was a small silence, before i raised another topic to keep the conversation flowing.

"So why did you leave home?"

She looked at me as if I had asked an unacceptable question; but again she softened her expression. I assumed she was naturally defensive; and I was eager to learn why.

"When I was 15 I decided that the life as an artist's daughter wasn't for me. Everyone expected me to follow in his footsteps; but I refused."

"Why?"

"Because artistry may have been in my blood, but it wasn't me. I wanted to proceed in life by accomplishing something I was in love with."

"And what was that? Alchemy?"

"Not only that; I had always been fascinated by the art of destruction."

I was slightly surprised, "Really?"

"Yes, why? Does that shock you?"

"A little bit. I thought you were just an eager alchemist."

"I am an eager alchemist, yes," she assured me, "but destruction magic has always been my passion. i love the feeling a shock spell brings to your fingertips as you ready to fire. It is incredible."

I was really interested to listen to Anyanka about her family and her past; which surprised me. Usually I would indivertibly switch off.

"So how did you get into the art of destruction, then?"

"It is fairly simple really. I took a pilgrimage to the imperial city to try to get a place in the university; only to learn that I had to obtain recommendations from Cyrodiil guild halls to earn a place."

"And how long did it take you to do that?"

"Almost half a year. I did a lot of tedious tasks; such as collecting an amulet and obliterating goblins. That was 5 years ago so I expect the recommendation tasks have changed now; become more rewarding."

"Probably." I shrugged; I had no clue, "what did you do once you got a place?"

"I studied for a number of years; learning a variety of spells in various fields. I am not yet a mater of destruction though; I plan to achieve that alone."

"Fair enough." I said and then changed the subject slightly. "What did you're parents say when you up and left?"

"I didn't tell them. I felt like they wouldn’t miss me."

"You should always tell them. I regret not telling my mother of my leaving."

A look of realisation sparked in her eyes; she the changed the subject.

"Speaking of your mother; I couldn't help but notice that you share the same last name as a teacher at the university?"

"Oleta?"

"That is her. She is a master and teacher of..."

I interrupted, "restoration, yeah. that's her."

"Well she is a very lovely lady. She taught me some minor restoration spells. She was not always around thought."

"Yeah, she didn't formally teach at the University. She was more of an honorary member of the place."

"But she still taught there?"

"Occasionally, yes, but it wasn't her official post."

"Where did she usually reside?"

"Well now she is in Kvatch-"

Anyanka interrupted me, "Kvatch is a wonderful city. The guild hall there is divine."

"Really? I've never been."

"Not even to visit your mother?"

I shook my head.

"Well, like i said, Kvatch is beautiful. The guild all is one of the best in Cyrodiil. The head of the guild hall is my uncle."

That explains the magicka in her blood.

"That's quite exciting."

She nodded and smiled.

"So is your mother teaching at the Kvatch guild hall?"

"I don't think so. I heard that she is the chapel healer there."

Anyanka once again turned the topic into a 'we love Kvatch!' session.

"The chapel is beautiful, I must say. Brother Martin is... he is simply amazing..."

I noticed her blushing.

"Oooh, I think somebody has a crush on somebody!"

"Don't be ridiculous!" she said, laughing nervously.

"You've gone all blushy!"

"This is most certainly embarrassing."

I laughed, "It's okay. You're allowed to find someone cute."

"I know, but not when he is older than you. I'll be a disgrace if anybody finds out!"

"Calm yourself, woman! My boyfriend is a bit older than me." I said; it was strange calling Rhano my boyfriend.

but i guess he is though...

"You have a boyfriend? Tell me about him!" Anyanka demanded with a girlish grace.

"Well he is amazing. He is the best kisser on Nirn, well I like to think he is even though he is the only person I have ever kissed."

Anyanka looked genuinely shocked. "YOU have only kissed one person?"

"Thanks. Are you trying to say something?" I joked. Anyanka laughed.

"Of course not! I’m only commenting on the fact that you are a beautiful girl and i thought you may have interacted with more than one boy in your past."

I didn't know how take that remark, but i thought it might have been a compliment.

"Thanks, I guess."

Anyanka’s face suddenly turned all panicky again.

"I don't know how my parents would react if they found out I had kissed somebody, that’s why I have not kissed anybody! i am terrified of the consequences I would no doubt endure!"

"Stop stressing out! Lets change the subject before your head explodes."

A pause and a serious look from Anyanka.

"Do you think it might?"

I laughed and hooked my arm onto hers, "Don't be stupid! I was only joking."

"Well you cannot be certain of these things! It is plausible."

"Known many people who have spontaneously combusted in the head compartment?"

"No," she laughed and then changed the subject, "tell me about your family? Where do you live?"

"Well I don't really live anywhere; I travel a lot, but my hometown is Anvil."

"Ah, such a wonderful place. The sunrise there is a treat for the eyes."

I nodded in agreement before continuing, "My sister, Maelona, lives in our old family house with her husband and my cousin..."

"Clesa?" she asked; remembering her from earlier.

"Yes."

"And what about your father?"

AH, the subject I like to talk about the least.

"Um, he died."

Her face turned quite solemn.

"Oh, I am sorry, I didn't mean to-"

"No, its okay, you were bound to ask."

There was another awkward silence before she, once again, changed the subject. "Are you planning on seeing your mother soon?"

I didn't know how to answer that question. I hadn't thought about it since Maelona and I talked about it when I first arrived.

"I don't know. I will do eventually, but at the moment i really don't know."

"I am the same. I have not seen my parents since my departure."

I looked at her, "Have you ever thought about going back?"

"No, not at this point in time."

"Why?" I asked her.

"Because I am a coward. I cannot bear to face them alone."

I understood what she meant. I too was too afraid to visit my mother due to the fear of her reaction to my presence.

I thought for a minute, before coming up with a compromise.

"Tell you what; after we get the staff and do everything wise we have to do how about we meet in Skingrad and we visit our parent together?"

"How do you mean?"

"I mean first we go to Kvatch together and see my mother, then we go to Cheydinhal together and see your parents together."

She looked at me and smiled, "Are you certain?"

"Yeah, of course I am! That’s what friends are for!"

A short pause for thought occurred and then Anyanka turned to me with an almighty grin.

"Then I am on board. It sounds like a marvellous idea."

"Great! Then it's settled. We will take the staff back to Ardaline, I’ll go to back to Anvil and tell Maelona where we are going then we meet in Skingrad and meet the parents!"

We smiled together. I could feel a positive vibe coming from Anyanka as we walked along the Green Road arm in arm.


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Acadian
It was fun to read the interaction between Lissa and Anyanka. I found it neat how Lissa mentioned that Jesse had at first irritated her, then proceeded to act just like Jesse with Anyanka! tongue.gif Often, friendships start out with a few bumps.

So, it looks like the girls already have an expedition planned after taking care of business with Ardaline and Vamorial. Sniff, sniff. . . do I smell turpentine? The long range scent perhaps of a missing artist?
King Coin
Well Jessi sure got Anyanka to open up. I think they will be great friends, especially if they are going to go through what I think they will together.
Grits
I like how Anyanka has a more formal way of speaking. It’s a nice contrast to Lissa. I love that Anyanka is a character that you created.

Kvatch then Cheydinhal, sounds like a plan!
mALX
All your characters are realistic and interesting - and like KC, I loved how you changed the dialogue up between Lissa and Anyanka so that each had their own distinct personality! Great Write !!
TrisRed
HELLO! smile.gif

I deeply apologize for my sudden absence, but i assure you that Lissa and I are back and ready to continue the journal. Thank you all for being patient smile.gif

Acadian: I'm glad that you noticed the role reverals with Lissa and Anyanka's friendship to Jessie and Lissa's. It was interesting to see a side of Lissa that was desperate to be liked smile.gif

King Coin: I'm glad that you like Lissa's skills to get Anyanka to open up. I'm sure that they will be great friends, too! (If Lissa doesn't irritate Anyanka too much!)

Grits: I'm glad that you enjoy Anyanka as an origional character. I hope you enjoy the contrast between her and Lissa!

mALX: Thank you for your comments! I'm so glad that you enjoy the characters personalities as much as i enjoy writing them smile.gif

PREVIOUSLY: On the journey to the IC Lissa and Anyanka get to know each other a little better. After bonding they decided that after their current mission at getting Ardaline's staff back they would endure their toughest mission yet... visiting their parents! Lissa in Kvatch and Anyanka in Cheydinhal.



17. Chapter 6 ~ GOC: Origins ~ Part 3



It had taken almost half a day for Anyanka and me to travel to the Imperial City; but I can guarantee you that the journey wasn’t dull. Anyanka made what would have possibly been a tedious journey for a tedious reason a LOT more enjoyable.

On the way to the city we stopped off at the Wawnet Inn, but only for a minute to say a quick hello to Nerussa as Anyanka made it quite clear that we had more important matters to attend to and socialising would have to wait.

[i]Rude, but true.


I’d almost forgotten how amazing the view across the bridge to the Imperial City was whilst walking along it, even though this time I was walking to the Imperial City rather than away from it. The feeling you got when the city got closer with each step, the sounds of the city becoming louder and clearer with each stride, was incredibly immense.

I never thought I would be going back to the city as soon as I did due to the fact that I was worried that the guards would find out that Jessie and I had killed the Breton man, even though we had been assured that whoever did it was in the clear. Even still I couldn’t help but shake the feeling that my actions would have consequences, despite the fact that I didn’t make the killing blow. I hated the fact that Leinahtan would selfishly take over the bodies and souls of innocent people to do his bidding. These people could have had lives, family; and he was just more than willing to end that almost instantaneously.

The moment Anyanka and I had entered the Imperial City by the Talos Plaza district I stopped in my tracks. I had always loved the feeling of returning to a place I loved after being away for so long. I took the opportunity to take in my surroundings, looking around to see the people of the city wandering around with their everyday lives. The city air quite dank and musty as I inhaled it deeply into my lungs. I closed my eyes to focus on the sounds of the city; concentrating hard to listen to the-

“Lissa? What you are doing is highly unusual and obscure. I ask that you stop before some one begins to notice.”

I opened my eyes and turned my head to look at Anyanka. She had a slightly disturbed look on her face. I couldn’t for the life of me imagine why.

“Sorry, kind of a habit of mine.” I said with a smile. Anyanka looked at me, a confused look in her eye.

“Strange.” Anyanka replied. She began to walk toward the door to the Elven Garden District. I enjoyed one last moment of reminiscence before following her.

As we walked toward the door to the Elven Gardens we stopped. In the distance I noticed something. Someone was looking directly at me, waving frantically to catch my attention. When my attention was caught the person began to walk closer towards us. It was a Redguard, a female Redguard. Her hair was short and red.

Probably dyed.

As she approached us Anyanka turned to me.

“Who is this person? I am unsettled by her cheeriness. Tell her to go away.”

I shushed her and put on a fake smile as the Redguard finally reached us. She looked familiar, but I couldn’t quite work out who she was; but it was obvious that she knew me.

“Well if it isn’t little Lissa Cristenn!”

I looked at the woman; still oblivious to who she was. Stupidly I opened my mouth to say something in response…

“By the nine! I can’t believe it’s… you?” I replied. The woman laughed.

“Don’t worry; I’m not surprised you don’t recognise me. You haven’t seen me in years,” She assured me. “But it’s me, Angelie? Rohssan’s daughter?”

Suddenly I was filled with excitement.

Oh dear, how could I have forgotten Angelie?

Angelie spoke again.

“The last time I saw you, you were only small! Look how you’ve grown!”

I smiled. Angelie had always been one of my favourite cousin’s growing up. She was a lot older than me, twenty years at least, but she always treated me like an adult. I was horrified that I didn’t recognise her sooner.

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Angelie had invited Anyanka and I into her home for some tea. We sat on the couch, Anyanka looking disgruntled and unimpressed. All she wanted to do was complete the mission; all I wasted to do was have a catch up and a gossip.

Angelie came out if the kitchen with a pot of water ready to put on the fire to boil.

“So how have things been with you?” She asked me. I hoped she hadn’t heard that I went away for a couple of years. I was too tired for story time.

Well she has been living in Hammerfell for the past ten years. Chances are she wouldn’t have heard…

“I hear you went exploring for a while? How was that? Tell me everything!” She continued.

Great.

Maybe you should write the tales of your journey and hand them out to everyone that ask’s? You’d be a millionare.” Rihanae said, attempting sarcasm, but failing miserably.

Hush, you!

I looked at Angelie, ready to tell her the story of my travels; before Anyanka stepped in instead.

“Lissa doesn’t have time to waste talking about her travels. Wait until a less busy time for her.”

“Good old Anyanka. Straight to the point.” Rihanae said. He was right, but for the wrong reasons. Anyanka could be incredibly rude sometimes, but I guess that was her charm.

“I see,” Angelie said, putting the pot on the fire and sitting down. “So Lissa… did you get my present?”

I looked at her, then Anyanka, then back at Angelie.

“Present?” I said, confused.

Angelie nodded her head, “Yes, I had it delivered to you last time you were in the city.”

“The key?” Rihanae pointed out.

Yes, I got that.

I pulled the key from my pocket and showed it to Angelie. She smiled.

“Yes! So you did get it! I’m relieved; I thought that delivery man would have lost it!”

But Simplicia gave it to me?

“Mail… man?” I asked. I was worried that Angelie got confused. She didn't seem all together there.

“Well I instructed the mailman to give it to someone else to deliver it to you.”

I was confused, the whole thing made absolutely no sense. Why didn’t she just give it to me herself? And why the cryptic messages? I decided to hold back asking those questions to ask the most important one.

“Erm… what is the key for?”

Angelie had a look on her face as if she was searching her brain for the answer, but she shook her head.

“I don’t know, all I know is that it belongs to your mother.”

Another twist. Hoorah.

“My mother’s key? Why do you have it?”

“She gave it to my mother when you were away. She said it was important.”

“So then why was it in your possession?” Anyanka asked her.

“I happened to stumble across it in Mothers bedroom the last time you came to the city. I felt like I was drawn to it. And for some reason I knew I had to give it to you.”

“But why all the mysterious letter mumbo jumbo? Why not just simply give it to me?”

“… Hm… I don’t know.” Angelie shrugged.

I was slightly angered and Angelie’s lack of assistance. I decided to ask her something that she had a better chance of knowing the answer to.

“So… how do you know it was my mothers?”

Angelie had that look on her face again, the look that suggested she was trying to remember something, but again she shook her head.

“I don’t know. I just …do.”

Angelie looked dead certain that she was telling the truth, which was even MORE confusing. I looked at Anyanka; she was as confused as I was. So many question’s filled my head, and those piled on top of all the other questions caused my head to be just about ready to explode.

Rihanae, explain?

I have no answers, Lissa. All I can say is that you trust her.”

Whilst I was pondering answers in my confuzzled little brain, Angelie had gone to check on the tea and Anyanka took the key out of my hand. She examined it closely, before a spark of realisation appeared on her face.

“Lissa, do you see this?”

I leaned over to look at what Anyanka was pointing at. A small emblem on the base of the key. I recognised it, but I was unsure of what it represented.

“What is it?” I asked her. I could tell by her expression, a sort of exited look with a hint of utter glee, that she knew what the emblem was.

“It is the emblem of the Arcane University.”

FINALLY! An answer!

I was thrilled that after all this mystery and craziness, we were finally going somewhere. But I still had a question on my mind.

“But what kind of key is it? A door key?”

Anyanka thought intensly, but came up with nothing.

“I don’t know… but I suggest we go and find out.”

I was surprised that Anyanka had suggested this. All day long Anyanka had been all ‘HURRY UP, MISSION TIME! GO, GO, GO!’.

Maybe she was intrigued by the mystery surrounding the key and wanted answers just for the thrill of it.

Or maybe, JUST maybe… she actually cares.


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Acadian
Nice job managing the four way conversation among Lissa, Anyanka, Angelie and Rihanae.

So, a diversion to the Arcane University?
TrisRed
Acadian: I'm glad you enjoyed the four way conversation between the characters, i'm so pleased that you're still reading! smile.gif

PREVIOUSLY: Lissa and Anyanka make it to the IC and bump into Lissa's cousin, Angelie. Whilst chatting Lissa learns that is was Angelie who sent Lissa the key and the letter the last time she was in the city; and she also discovers the key belongs to her mother and that it's an Arcane University key.



18. Chapter 6 ~ The GOC: Origins ~ Part 4



"Reminus, we need your assistance." Anyanka ordered.

Anyanka and I entered the university after bidding an unfortunately premature farewell to Angelie; and the last minute decision to put our current mission on hold.

I didn’t even get to finish my tea...

"Yes Anyanka, what can I help you with?" Reminus looked at me and smiled. "I do not believe we have met."

"No, you have not, but that is unimportant. Look, this is Oleta Cristenn's daughter and we were wondering if you recognised this..." Anyanka said as i pulled the key out of my pocket. Reminus took it from my hand and examined it and handed it back to me.

"Yes, this is a key we use for personal storage chests."

"Is my mothers still here?" I asked him.

"I am most certain; but you may need to ask around to find it's location for I am unsure."

Rats

"That is no good, we must be told now for we have to go back to bravil as soon as possible."

Reminus laughed.

"Same old Anyanka. Okay, I’ll do something for you. You two wait here for a few minutes and i will ask Traven if he knows of it's whereabouts, okay?"

I smiled in thanks; but Anyanka seemed less than appreciative.

"Why must you waste time? Do hurry."

Reminus was still laughing as he walked to a sort of teleport pad at the edge of the room, disappearing in a colourful light. I turned to Anyanka.

"Why was he laughing when you were so rude to him?"

"I wasn't being rude, I assure you. I was being friendly."

"Who was being friendly?"

I heard a familiar voice pipe up from the entrance where Anyanka and I arrived from.

"JESSIE!" i screamed in delight as i ran towards her for a hug.

"It's good to see you, Lissa!" she replied as we bounced around during our embrace; much like I did with Maelona during our reunion.

"What are you doing here? Did you get into the university already?" I asked her as we stopped hugging but still smiled.

"No, not yet. I just stopped in the city on my way to Skingrad and I spotted you in the Talos Plaza heading this way so I thought I’d surprise you!"

"Well you succeeded!" I said as I grabbed her for a hug again. We both laughed with happiness before Jessie ceased to look at Anyanka.

"Who's your friend?"

"OH! Sorry. Jessie; Anyanka. Anyanka;jessie." i introduced them as they shook hands. "Anyanka is a graduate here."

"Really? How is it?" Jessie asked Anyanka.

"I shall not lie to you it is a truly amazing experience. You will enjoy it very much when you finalise your verification."

Jessie looked at me as if to say 'what?', but I replied by shaking my head slightly. After an awkward moment Jessie changed the subject.

"Anyway, why are you two here?"

"Well we are in the city to get a stolen staff..."

"Lissa; that is none of her concern!" Anyanka hissed.

"Oh, lighten up frosty." i joked before returning to what I was saying. "But we're in the university because I found out what that key was for!"

"Oh really?" Jessie said, intrigued.

"Yes, it appears it belonged to her mother. We are in the process of locating the chest where it fits." Anyanka informed her.

"Intriguing; mind if i find out with you? I've got nothing on."

"SURE!" I said.

***


After about half an hour of pointless gossip and boy talk Reminus finally came back; and with good news.

"It appears the chest is in the basement of the mages quarters. I will retrieve it for you in a moment."

"Can’t we just go ourselves?" I asked. He laughed as if I had told a really funny joke. Us girls just looked at each other; confused.

"You cannot just go wandering into the university; you are not a student here!"

Jessie and I looked at Anyanka expectantly.

"I see that you expect me to go and get the chest. But I refuse. Reminus is sending people on it and as I simply do not want to, I won’t be offering my assistance."

I looked at Jessie, "at least she was honest."

Reminus walked through a door into the university grounds; presumably to get the chest.

"What do you expect to find, Lissa?" Rihanae asked me.

I don't know. It had to be something worth saving if mother practically gave the key a personal bodyguard.

"Could it be dangerous? You must be cautious."

Knowing mother it would be the scroll for a spell she is working on. stop worrying.

"I can't help it."

Well, try.

I sat with the girls anxiously awaiting Reminus's return. Rihanae had made a good point. I had no idea what this chest would contain; but it had to be something important. I was scared to find out; but excited at the same time.

"I notice a look of concern on your face, Lissa. Do not worry. I value you as a friend and i am certain that you are strong enough to face anything to come out of the chest; should it be negative."

"You think of me as a friend?" I said; the sentiment was wonderful.

"Correct."

"What about me?" Jessie asked; hope in her smile.

Anyanka looked at her with an examining look before answering, "I hardly know you; so know. But that doesn't mean you mean nothing to me."

I looked at Jessie, "That's as good as you're going to get for now."

I continued to talk to the girls when in mid conversation I heard a voice.

"Excuse me, I was wondering if you knew where I could find a rambunctious adventurer?"

I turned my head to see a very familiar face stood before me; it was Tandilwen.

"Tandi? Is that you?" i asked; i stood up and hugged her, excited. She didn’t look any different; still as beautiful as ever.

"It most certainly is! how have you been?" she asked me; we ceased the hugging and we sat down; Jessie budging up slightly to give Tandilwen room.

"I've been great! How are you? How are things here?" I asked.

"It's very fulfilling to be here; if not hard work." she said with a smile.

"I bet," I suddenly remembered about the girls, "Oh, I’m sorry introductions. Tandilwen, this is Jessie and Anyanka, my friends."

"Pleased to meet you!" Tandi said, shaking their hands before turning back to me, "So how was your adventure? Saved the world yet?"

I laughed, "No, I haven’t, hopefully soon though!" We both laughed together. Jessie stood up and took Anyanka into a corner with her; no doubt to give Tandilwen and I some privacy, which I appreciated.

"So what happened? have you gotten tired of Tamriel's beauty already?"

"No, nothing like that..."

I explained about Falvor’s premonition and about Leinahtan.

"That is horrible! Why would somebody be after you?" she said, shocked. I didn't know how to answer her question, so I closed and changed the subject.

"I dont know really, and right now i don't care. All i want is to get that chest."

"Chest?" Tandi asked; i remembered that I didn’t tell her about it; all these reunions and i had forgotten who I had told who what.

"OH! Well my cousin found this key from my mother and gave it to me. Apparently it opens a chest mother left here. Reminus is off to get it now."

"Oh, Lissa; every the detective."

I laughed; I’d forgotten how funny Tandilwen was.

"So what are you doing right now?" I asked her.

"Actually, i came here to find Reminus but he is obviously not here."

"Ah; his lack of attendance must have given it away."

"Indeed."

We laughed together. Anyanka looked over at us.

"I expect to learn of what it is you find so funny!" She shouted over to us.

"But telling someone what we are gossiping about them is no fun!" I teased. Anyanka jokingly scowled, then continued talking to Jessie; I could see from there smiles that they were getting along. Tandi and I continued our conversation.

"How is Clesa? and Maelona?" she asked me.

"Well Clesa is involuntarily abstinent and Maelona is pregnant."

A mixture of shock and happiness covered her face; hopefully about Maelona and not Clesa, as that would we strange.

"Really?"

I nodded, "Yup, once isn't getting any and the other is getting too much!"

She playfully slapped my hand, "Don't be so vulgar!"

We laughed together; but the laughter was halted when Reminus re-entered the room. He was followed by two apprentices holding a fairly large, brown chest. They walked over and placed it by my feet before scurrying out of the room and back to the courtyard.

"I think you will find that this is the chest you seek. Now please excuse me, for I have business to attend to."

He turned to leave but Tandilwen spoke up to stop him.

"Actually i needed to speak with you!" Tandilwen said; rising to her feet and then turning to me. "Wait here, I’ll be back once I’ve spoken with him."

"Okay; speak soon." Tandi smiled and walked over to Reminus; they then left through the main door.

"Thank you!" I shouted after him.

Jessie and Anyanka then came back over and sat with me.

"Did you have a good catch up?" Jessie asked me.

I nodded; looking at the chest. I knew what i next move had to be; but i wasn't sure whether or not to make it.

"Are you going to open it?" Jessie asked me. I just sat there, frozen with worry.

"Are you okay?" Anyanka asked me.

I didn't know what had happened. I was so scared about what could be in the box that I was in a very, very, very minor catatonic state. Jessie put her hand on my knee.

"Would you like me to open it?" she asked me. Some form of relief filled my body and i nodded; handing her the key.

She cautiously put the key in the lock and turned it. She opened the chest and we were met by the smell of musky old papers.

Is that it?

"Well even I find that disappointing!"

I began to rummage through the papers; the girls helping me. There was nothing of interest in their at all; a few spells, notes from mothers research but nothing worthwhile."

"Why did mother make such a big deal over this junk?" I asked Jessie.

"Well maybe it wasn't junk to her. Maybe it was important."

Even still, I felt a huge rush of disappointment and even anger fuel my body.

Such a waste of time. I wish I didn't even-

"Lissa..."

I turned to see Anyanka holding a piece of paper. She had a deeply concerned look on her face.

"What is that?" I asked her. She handed me the piece of paper and all three of us looked at it.

It was a small drawing of Mother and father. They looked very smart and confidant, but then I noticed something; something horrifying.

"Who is that boy?" Jessie asked me. in the drawing dad was carrying a boy, a redguard who looked a lot like him. He must have been about 4 years old. I turned the picture around to see writing.

It said 'The Cristenn family: Oleta Cristenn, Nathaniel Cristenn...'

Then I read the last part out loud.

"... and Leinahtan Cristenn..."


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Grits
17. Chapter 6 ~ GOC: Origins ~ Part 3

One thing about her rude friend is that when she says something nice, Lissa will be able to believe it.

More mysteries surround the key. Good thing Anyanka could come up with a place to start unraveling them. To the University!


18. Chapter 6 ~ The GOC: Origins ~ Part 4

"Reminus, we need your assistance." Anyanka ordered.

Is this Raminus Polus, Master-Wizard of the Mages Guild and possibly the most hilariously named Oblivion NPC? Wow, Anyanka is bold! If not, never mind.


It said 'The Cristenn family: Oleta Cristenn, Nathaniel Cristenn...'

Then I read the last part out loud.

"... and Leinahtan Cristenn..."


ohmy.gif Lissa’s brother?!
Acadian
What a chilling twist at the end that leads to more questions for Lissa. smile.gif
TrisRed
Acadian: Poor Lissa has more question's thrown at her than most. She should really note them down to keep track wink.gif

Grits: Haha, yes I meant Raminus, I always write Reminus for some reason. haha. But back to Anyanka, she is extremly bold and confident; maybe that will be her downfall one day. Though i hope not. Editing Reminus to Raminus wink.gif

PREVIOUSLY: Once in the university and a reuinin with Jessie, Lissa and Anyanka learn that Oleta's key opens her private storag hest from the university, ad inside the chest Lissa finds a picture that reveals that she has a long lost brother; Leinahtan Cristenn.



19. Chapter 6 ~ GOC: Origins ~ Part 5



After retrieving Ardaline's staff from Soris Aluminum, Jessie, Anyanka and I went back to Bravil almost as soon as I made the discovery.

I honestly did'nt know what to think, or do. So many questions filled my confused little head; Why didn't they tell me why had a brother? Did Maelona know about him? Why was he trying to kill me?

What did I do? Nothing! I think...

I was ready to confront mother about Leinahtan; but for some reason I felt hesitant to do so. It was strange.

Part of me wanted to storm over to Kvatch to have it out woth the woman who had lied to me my whole life; but another part of me was too scared to learn the truth.

So i decided to focus on the current task at hand; returning the staff we spent so long to retrieve to it's rightful owner.

***


The girls and I walked through Bravil, heding towards the guild hall. I knew that the girls were walking on egg shells around me... well not so much Anyanka, who kept slapping me harshly on the cheek me to get me out of my non-existant hysteria. Apparently a moment of silence means an emotional breakdown.

I don't think she's ever been around people much. Either that or I've just found the reason she has hardly any friends.

We entered the guild hall and immediatly headed towards Ardaline. Anyanka, who had the staff, ran over to her friend and greeted her with a hug. Jessie walked over to speak with Anyanka and Ardaline. I sat on the bench on the other side of the wall where Kud-Ei could usually be found. She wasn't there. The one time really needed an older figure to talk to and no-one was there. No-one was anywhere. It was almost midnight, after all.

I hated feeling miserable; not only miserable but so confused that not even the Arch-Mage would be able to know what to.

Great. Now I can't even make witty puns. Hoorah.

Then I felt it; a tear, not just my eyes welling up but an ACTUAL tear. I hadn't cried since my dad's death; not properly anyway. It was weird

"You okay, Liss?"

I turned my head and saw Jessie stood in the archway by the bench. I smiled and nodded, then cried hysterically again. Immediatly Jessie sat beside me on the bench, putting her arm around me in comfort.

"It's just all so screwed up!" I wailed.

"I know, Lissa. I'm confused, too."

I looked at her, an untintentional atmosphere of anger emerging from me.

"What on Nirn do YOU have to be confused about? You don't know ANYTHING Jessie! ANYTHING!"

I wailed again. I knew that Jessie thought nothing of my outburst and she didn't stop her embrace. I was grateful.

"I'm sorry, Jessie. It's just-"

"Really, don't explain. you don't have to. The only thing I ask is that you let out all the pain, okay? Crying is good! It gets the negative vibes out, so it's a definate must, okay?"

I looked at Jessie and laughed a little. She was right.

Good old Jessie...

***


You've been awfully quiet? Got anything for me? I asked Rihanae, with no reply.

The one time I really needed answers from him and he bails.

Despite my bitter rage and my GS's absence, I'd managed to calm myself down, with Jessie's help, from my little episode earlier. I was now stood with the girls and Ardaline in the potion making alchemy room, or whatever it's called; a forced smile on my face.

"... also Lissa i'd like to thank you. I apoligize for being so resistant to talk about my situation with Varon, but i am eternally grateful that you retrieved my staff. Anyanka told me the exciting, yet highy unacceptable story of it's retrieval." Ardaline said.

I looked at Anyanka, confused; she had a large grin spread on her face.

Confused. Anyanka told us she simply asked for the staff back. What for the love of mudcrabs did she do?

I decided not to ask, I really didn't want to know; despite the fact that I really did.

"Ardaline, where I am thrilled to see you smile again, I'm afraid that Lissa and I must be off, so this visit will have to be put on hod untill a later date." Anyanka bluntly informed her.

I looked at her. She was confusing me even more than I was already confused, and now I was really confused.

"Anyanka, honey, umm... what?" I said to her. She looked at me with a dissapointed expression on her face.

"We are going on a journey to see our parents, remember?" Her tone suddenly turned dissapointed. "However, I fear you have forgotten. Is this true?"

Of course it is! I don't want to see my mother! Hello? Emotional wreck here!

"Of course I haven't forgotten. I just had a blank moment is all. you know me! haha." I backtracked. Jessie looked at me.

"You're... going on a journey?" She asked, a slightly sad tone to her voice.

I looked into her eyes. She'd already missed so much. I wasn't prepared to leave her out again; she was my rock.

"... Would you like to come?" I asked

Jessie's face lit up.

"YES! Maybe I can get some reccomendations done at the same time. Although it depends where we're going. Two birds, and that!"

"Two birds? What?"

"It's an expression."

"I don't understand."

"Two birds with one stone?"

"... What?"

A moment of complete silence befell us. A silence which got me thinking. Maybe Anyanka reminding me of the journey was the god's way of literally forcing me to confront my mother.

It was terrifying to think that she had answers; which made no sense as answers are usually my favorite thing to look for. But I knew that it was now or never; and with the girls with me, I knew i'd be okay, and if ever I wasn't okay, it didn't matter. I had their suport, and that makes everything worthwhile.

At least, that's what I hoped.

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Grits
I knew that the girls we're walking on egg around me... well not so much Anyanka, who kept slapping me harshly on the cheek me to get me out of my non-existant hysteria.

blink.gif Anyanka can be a difficult friend.

"I know, Lissa. I'm confused, too."

This made me smile. As Lissa says, good old Jessie. I’m glad she’s going along, I think Lissa will need the support of her friends.

TrisRed
AUTHOR NOTE:

Hello all! I'm taking some time off writing to concentrate on getting up to date with the other amazing stories on this site, so i thought i'd share a few screenshots with you now i've managed to get screenies from my computor. More will be added over time.

I'll be back with the journal once i've gotten up to date with everything smile.gif

I'm also working on a mod to incorporate Anyanka and Jessie into my game, that way not only will Lissa's world be more fun for her, but the screenies of the girls together should be amazing smile.gif

I want to thank my readers for their patience smile.gif

SCREENSHOTS

Anyanka and Ardaline

Lissa (and Aelwin Merowald) by the IC

12/10/11 SCREENSHOTS

Vain? ME?! No...

DRESSES!!!

Mae sisterhood stay strong I

Mae sisterhood stay strong II

BELOW ARE SCREENSHOTS WHICH COULD BE SEEN AS SPOILERS FOR THE JOURNAL:

Spoiler I

Spoiler II

Spoiler III
Acadian
What a fun and light tone you give to this! So the staff is returned, Rihanae is of no real help here, Lissa is scared and very confused. And it’s off to see her mother. Lissa is right - it’s good that her two friends are going with her! I love how you so effectively paint the stark differences among the three amigas.

Can’t wait to see if Lissa’s mother can shed any light on the mystery of Leinahtan. ohmy.gif

Thank you for the wonderful screenshots! Lissa is so pretty! smile.gif

Oh, I think your plans to do some catching up are great. Reading other stories can help us all learn to enrichen our own stories by seeing fine examples of varying styles. It can also help to garner and maintain support for your own fine story.
TrisRed
Acadian: Thank you for your patience! I am still working through catching up, but I thought I would give everyone an update on Lissa's journal for being so patient smile.gif

Grits: Haha, yes, I don't think Annie QUITE understands correct social mannerisms yet tongue.gif

PREVIOUSLY: Lissa and the gang return the staff to Ardaline. After a minor reunion they decide to start their personal mission to visit the parents; with Jessie tagging along for the journey.



20. Chapter 7 ~ We're off to see Oleta! ~ Part 1



After spending the night at the Guild hall, Anyanka, Jessie and I said our goodbyes to our Bravilian buddies the next morning and headed for our first destination; Kvatch.

We knew that we wouldn't be back in Bravil for quite some time, which was a shame as I was only just getting used to the smell. The city may have been charming, but when a girls got a mission to complete, priorities must be made.

"Do we not have to travel to Anvil first to inform your sister of our plans?" Anyanka asked me as we headed across the bridge leading from Bravil's north gate. I pondered for a moment.

"She IS expecting me back home," I replied, a spark of relisation hit me. "That said she doesn't know that I've completed Rihanae's mission. For all she knows I'm still working on that."

"You're going to lie? To your own sister?" Jessie said, shocked.

"Not lie... just not tell her the whole truth. Anyway I'm not even going back to Anvil TO lie to her, am I?"

Jessie looked at me; she clearly hadn't thought about that.

"Lissa, I have some information you might find useful" Rihanae popped into conversation; much to my delight; not that i'd let hi know it, of course.

Where have YOU been then? Vacation with your spirit buddies?

"Lissa, please, this is serious."

Is it as serious as getting into wrestling match with a storm atronach? If not, my attention span may be a little less than none.

The silence suggested he clearly didn't understand my example; but if i'm honest, neither did I, but at least
I sounded mildly intellegent.

"Lissa, it's about your brother."

My heart stopped.

Don't call him that. Don't you EVER call him that.

"Listen to me, Lissa-" He tried to continue, but I intterupted him.

No, YOU listen. The only person I wan't answers from right now is Mother; no-one else. I don't need my head more confused and achey, okay? Whatever you have to say is really not important; not right now anyway.

My mental outburst was met with a silence, followed by a reluctant submission from my spirit guide.

"Okay..."

Okay?

"Okay."

Good.

"Don't you find it strange how the orange road isn't even orange?" Jessie said, changing my mindset completley. I was highly grateful.

"Very interesting observation, Jessie." Anyanka replied. I couln't tell whether she was being sarcastic or not.

"But the green road is green, isn't it? bizarre."

I looked at Jessie and spoke to her; a slightly mocking tone to my voice.

"And did you notice that the city of Anvil Isn't actually an 'Anvil'? Talk about weird!"

Jessie looked at me and smiled, scowling at me for making fun of her, before Anyanka spoke up.

"Jessie, I noticed something odd about your question. You question why the Orange Road isn't orange; but what about the Black Road? Or the Gold Road?"

"Annie, we don't need to confuse her anymore, do we?" I told her.

Indeed, judging by her face, Annie had almost certainly confused her; which I thought was rather hilarious.

“I’ve never been to Kvatch before.” Jessie confessed.

“Me either. I’ve always wondered what it’s…” I replied.

“I have!” Anyanka interrupted.

"Yes, darling. We know." I looked at her and patted her on the shoulder; her excitement was unnessecary, and strangely out of character.

We continued to walk, talking and gossiping about mindless dribble. Anyanka felt the need to tell us about her love for yarn, which was odd.

***


After about half a days travelling we made it to an inn called: ‘The Inn of Ill Omen.”

“Sounds inviting.” I remarked as we apprached to door.

“Don’t let the name put you off. The inn is more than comfortable, I assure you.” Anyanka told us. I don’t think she realised I was being sarcastic.

We entered the Inn. The words dark and slightly unnerving came to mind; but again that was probably due to my opinion on the name of the delightful place. Anyanka and Jessie went to sit at a table, leaving me to order the food and drinks.

“Well hello there young lady!” greeted the Nord innkeeper. “My name is Manheim Maulhound. What can I get for you? It’s nice to see a new customer for a change!”

“Well that was a cheerful introduction!” I smiled as I sat down. “My name is Lissa and I would like some bread, some cheese, some wine and direction to more cheery innkeepers like your fine self!”

Manheim laughed as he explored his cupboards, producing the things I had ordered.

“Don’t let the name of this place fool you! I can be a delightful person!”

“I noticed.” I replied; now getting slightly creeped out. “So I take it business is bad? Or do you get that excited over everyone who walks in.”

“Well yes, business could be better, but my day has been made all the more better for seeing such a beautiful Redguard as yourself!”

I smiled awkwardly as I saw his eyes examine my body. I paid the innkeeper and placed the food and drinks onto a tray, carrying them VERY carefully over to our table, constantly aware that Manheim was staring at me. I placed the tray on our table and sat down.

“Okay, is that innkeeper staring at me?” I asked the girls.

“It’s more of a gawp.” Jessie replied. I looked at her.

“Thanks. I feel better now.” I said, sarcastically.

Whilst we were tucking into our stale and less than fresh dinner, we were aproached by an old Redguard woman.

“You’re new. What brings you girls here?” She asked us. Anyanka was the one to reply.

“That is no business of yours. Please leave us to our food.”

“ANNIE!” I scolded. I turned to the Redguard with a smile. “Sorry about her. This is the first time she’s been out of her cage in a long time!”

I felt Anyanka kicking my shin from under the table.

“That’s quite alright. My name is Minerva. What’s yours?”

“Well I’m Lissa.” I replied.

“I’m Jessie,” Jessie started, then begain to introduce Anyanka. “And this is…”

“Annie, I know.” Minerva interrupted.

Jessie looked at me, amazed. She’d obviously forgotten that I’d said Annie’s name not a minute earlier.

Oh Jessie. Just a few arrows short of a quiver, arne’t you?

“Well put.”

Thank you. I try.

“I noticed that Manheim seem’s to be transfixed by you?” Minerva informed me. I smiled awkwardly.

“Oh… really I hadn’t noticed…”

“But you asked us if he was…” Anyanka started. Now it was my turn to kick her in the shin.

“Don’t be threatened by him. We don’t get a lot of customers, let alone beautiful women, come here.”

“Really? Then why wasn’t he staring at me?” Jessie asked.

“Because, like I said, we don’t get a lot of beautiful women come in here.”

I saw Jessie’s face drop. I went to say something to Minerva about hurting poor Jessie’s feelings, but she started speaking first.

“Well it was nice to meet you girls, but I must be off. I have important work to do.”

“Oh really, what is it that you do?” I asked.

“Nothing. Why do you ask?” She replied.

“Oh… it’s just. Never mind.”

Minerva walked away and stood by the entrance. As soon as she left I turned to the girls.

“Okay, can we go now? This place is freaking me out.”

Anyanka nodded and stood with me.

“Aww, but I havent finished my cheese wheel…HEY!” Jessie protested as Anyanka grabbed her arm and forced her out of her seat. We walked as fast as we could to the entrance; Jessie still munching on her cheese wheel.

“Just keep smiling and pretend to be in deep conversation.” I instructed.

“Conversation about what?” Anyanka asked.

“I don’t know… just laugh.”

We did so. All three of us laughed uncontrollably as we reached the final few steps to the front door; our pace quickening as we reached the exit. I opened the wooden door and we scurried out; lauging genuinly this time at what we had done.

It’s always a good thing having a laugh with your girlfriends; however creepy the situation you’re in may be.


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mALX
The whole section with Manheim and Minerva had me in hysterics, lol. Great Write !!
Tábrasa
Hello Rihanae!

I've only managed to catch the last few posts of Lissa's journal so far (I will be sure to catch up soon!) but all I can say is well done!

You write Lissa with such a precise lingo that it makes it very easy for me as a reader to connect with her. Your chapters always leave me wanting more. Also, I have to compliment your ability to draw emotion through what you write. There are some part which felt like crying when Lissa was crying, feeling anger when Lissa felt angry etc.

All I can say is well done and I can't wait to read more!

Amazing!
TrisRed
Hey there everyone.

I just thought I'd say hello and tell everyone that I'm back.

I had fallen pretty seriously ill over the past couple of months and have been bed ridden for a long time, but I'm back now and will be returning to Lissa's story, as well as reading all of yours!

I hope you are all well!

P.S I also wrote this message in the coffee shop... before realising it would have made sense to write it here. Haha


mALX


Bless your heart! I hope you are feeling better now, and Welcome Back !!
TrisRed
Thank you mALX; I've missed you!

Yes, I am on the mend, but I am doing alot better. I've missed everyone on her just as much as I've missed my dear Lissa!

At the moment I am reading through all of your stories and editing Lissa's, then I will start on writing the next part of her story smile.gif
Grits
I'm glad you're back, Rihanae! Looking forward to more Lissa. smile.gif
TrisRed
Thank you Grits!

I can't wait to read what Jerric has been up to recently smile.gif
Acadian
I’m so glad you are doing better, Rihanae. Warmest wishes as you continue to mend.

I’m also very excited that you plan on bringing Lissa, our dear Redguard Achress, back to us. Can’t wait! smile.gif
TrisRed
Hello everyone!

After my last update regarding the story I had another attack with my illness. I have a mild heart contition which unfortunatly gave me a stroke, and I had another attack in feburary.

BUT I'm am all better now and better than ever!

Now I'm not ready to post again at the moment, but I have finished writing Lissa's first journal on a internet-less computer so once I manage to transfer it, hopefully by the end of the week, there will be more Lissa smile.gif

Thank you all so much for your patience and I'm so excited to be back! This time for good smile.gif
Darkness Eternal
I did not see this story before! Wow! And I am so sorry to hear about the heart condition, I truly am. I am glad to see that you are well and doing just fine. I hope everything continues to go well with you in the coming times! Good to know you are better than before.

Oh and nice to meet you, sort of.
TrisRed
Thank you DE!

My story kinda got buried over the months. I managed to find it on page three of the Fan Fiction section smile.gif

Yeah, I won't worry anyone but I'm absoloutly fine, just had a bit of a touch-and-go moment, but I'm super now smile.gif

DE if you would like me to PM you a summary of Lissa's story so far I don't mind, unless you wan't to read it all?

And nice to meet you to smile.gif

Can't wait to read your stories smile.gif
Darkness Eternal
No problem. I would rather read it all. If you want to send me a summary, you may. But it sort of takes away the true feel of the story and Lissa's personality. I'll read it.
mALX
QUOTE(Rihanae @ May 30 2012, 11:01 AM) *

Hello everyone!

After my last update regarding the story I had another attack with my illness. I have a mild heart contition which unfortunatly gave me a stroke, and I had another attack in feburary.

BUT I'm am all better now and better than ever!

Now I'm not ready to post again at the moment, but I have finished writing Lissa's first journal on a internet-less computer so once I manage to transfer it, hopefully by the end of the week, there will be more Lissa smile.gif

Thank you all so much for your patience and I'm so excited to be back! This time for good smile.gif



GAAAAH! I'm so sorry to hear you were so ill !!!! URK! What a relief that you came out of all that well, bless your heart !!! wub.gif
Acadian
Aww, bless your heart, Rihanae. I'm so glad you are doing better now and very much look forward to more Lissa! happy.gif
Grits
I'm glad you're back, Rihanae! smile.gif
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