OMG!!! Ehhh....well I'll better.... DO something then...

Argh cliffie!! Please, more? And if your relying on minque to update, then please beg her.

Excellent stories black hand. Loved it all

Ewww I know!!! I should...I will...soon,

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Iiiyaaa! Darling Seth is back! AND managed to stay alive despite the ghastly contraption! yay....that creature Pene can be very useful...mmmm I can se that.

Wonderful to see an update on my favvvo story

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Is that a promise?


And those words come from me??

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First up - great to see this continuing. And nice to see the screenshots too, Sethyas is one intimidating looking dude! Well, so he should...

But, I digress. I read the update. Then I reread the last few updates before it. Then I entered the timewarp.

The year? 2006. I've spent the last few hours starting from the very beginning again and just reached Kogoruhn. And by the way, how fast did you used to write? I'd forgotten that! Will spend the next few days catching up on it all, so it's all fresh in my mind once again. Hard life I tell ya

What he said about the continuance of this. I like Sethyas and am glad to see this is still going. It appears I didn't comment after the last part, but I was reading I assure you.

I like the puzzle element you bring forward in it, it makes the clockwork city more than it was in game.

And good screenies!

Handsome, handsome! Mmmmm Sethyas looks soooo good in that outfit! And he's still alive, that please me, ehh very much indeed!

Good thing he has Pene though...

Oh my now I want to re-read a lot about Seth, need to and will absolutely love it....guess why!

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Sethyas- with pictures! Woo-Hoo! Sorry- couldn't restrain myself- nor did I wish to.

You convey quite effectively the frustrations and atmosphere of the Clockwork City. And that last screenshot is the best cliff-hanger I have ever seen... (wanders off mumbling enviously).

S.G.M.

YIKES! What Treydog just said...Evil, thy name is Blackie! Leaving us with a cliffie like THAT!!!!

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE please!

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Great stuff. The screenshots look fantastic, well timed with the jumping one.

And then Sotha Sil, one of my favourite bits of that game. And the slow realisation of what's happened. You caught both well.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Yay! She's come for him! Or what? Can't wait for chapter 5!!! Great screenies btw, it enhances the whole thing...

S.G.M Blackie!!!

Incredible descriptive passages throughout- enhanced by the lovely screenshots. You capture Seth's growing doubts and weariness perfectly, along with Pene's attitude.

The Clockwork City is grueling, frightening, bewildering... And you get all of that in, while still moving toward the final discovery.

And now- Alma is home- so to speak.