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Wow, a deeply moving start to this chapter. While Setsuna's death is saddening, everything can't work out, but at least Sethyas still lives. You've moved me Black Hand *tear*

*sob* I hoped it wouldn't have to end this way. Now what? Maybe if Sethyas 'finds' (as in, Caius makes sure there is one) a connection between the Dark Brotherhood and Dagoth Ur, he might feel like going down the Nerevarine path.

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This sounds like the end of a chapter. It ends the assassinwar and hints at new adventures to unfold. Please keep going.

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Brillient, This story is amazing , sad to here about his sisters death but at the end it was either him or her cant wait for the next update

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Ah, a Nerevarine story. It's always interesting to see how different fan fic characters act in the MQ. I'd love to see the assassin approach to becoming Nerevarine.

Black Hand, the Post Machine, has stricken gold again! Now it's time to see how skeptical Sethyas thinks of this. Makes good sense to me if he was; very believable reaction.

Can't wait to see how he deals with this.

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I'm gonna take a wild guess and say....... YES!

Hehe, it's good to know the Main Quest plotline sometimes! Though you could totally prove me wrong if you wanted to...

Ohwell, I'm eager to see Sethyas reasoning for his potential choice.

Oh, absolutely. Think about the loot! Tombs are always filled with loot!

Um, okay. Maybe not everyone gets thrilled at the thought of some looting.

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Damn! That was a lot of loot! Next time I'm at that burial carvern, I gonna search it more thoroughly...

Lucky Sethyas... already has a quarter of a glass armour set. Solid work as usual!

Ah, the good old treasurehunting spirit. Bring on the loot. Oh yeah!

How about covering glass armour in a dark cloth?

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Funny thing with me is. I always collected loot but I never sold it. I just dumped it at whatever was my current base of operations. So money problems were very real for me.

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Hey, I remember that cavern. I unfortunately never passed the Dremora though. My Redguard was only level 8 at the time. But I shall return and my vengeance shall be sweet! (And rewarding. Oh loot, come here darling! )

Ahh very good.....and accurate! I actually "lived" through that part in the game once more.....excellent writing!

It took me forever to find that crypt in Ibar-Dad!! I thought I had to levitate by some of the ruins within the cave. I then noticed the alternate path in the swimming area... grr that area was annoying! But all the goodies was worth it.

I also noticed that you're giving me free advertising! That's so nice of you! I'm totally flattered.

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Another inspirational update. I loved how you expressed Sethyas feelings at the first words the Wise Woman says then the potential chance he could be the Nerevarine right after ruining his relief. I wonder what his answer to his self asked question will be? I have a hankering it'll be a yes.

Can't wait to see the thought process for his decision.

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I wouldn't want to be the Nerevarine (or the Blades) either if I was getting diseases and such. I bet those dreams are going to change his mind...

Nice bit of emotion and action. Gotta love the sucker punch with the dagger.

wonderful updates, so intriguing and interesting......a true must-read!

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An excellent rendition of curing corprus. It looks like Sethyas is starting to believe... Just accept it all ready Sethyas!!!

Hmm, the inflitration of the Temple prisons is going to be right up Sethyas' alley. It's going to be thrilling to read!

Uhhhh......what a wonderful description of the encounter with corprus....and Divayth Fyr!!! oh my....that was by far one of the very best descriptions of that event I´ve seen!

ujaa.....continue please!

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Very introspective moments in this update. I love Caius words for Sethyas; simple, yet powerful and with meaning. Sethyas is surely becoming the Nerevarine, cept I don't think the Temple would like him killing their Ordinators. Sometimes they deserve it though

I wonder what's going to happen next?

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It looks like the mysteries are being unravelled in this update. Much discovering on Sethyas part happened. I'm eager to see how he'll handle the cave full of False Incarnates.

Yes yes....me too! He seems to be an intelligent and wise charachter.....oh aye I´m waiting!

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Well what can I say, it takes two to tango. Hopefully he keeps his wits about him and avoids meeting the Ash Vampire lurking underneath there, or be very prepared.

Another excellent update Black, I can't wait to see Sethyas approach to infiltrating Kogorhun.

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Ah, Kogoruhn. That place gave me the creeps. I needed every little boost I could get to pound down Uthol. Not to mention I got lost a couple of time. In the end, it was great fun and a good experience.

Soul trapping Uthol was genius! I never thought of doing that, despite hearing that the Ash Vampires were immortal basically. I simply figured, "I'm the Nerevarine! If I kill something it stays dead!"

I don't mind the length at all, it actually read quite fast, a sign of excellent writing

I also never knew about the Dagoths having talking options such as the one you stated.

I also never knew about the talking options, despite sneaking around a lot with the amulet of shadows. I guess I was too focussed on sneak attacks. (Critical damage with Chrysamere rocks! )

And about the reviving, my opinion was: ,,Yeah, go ahead and come back. If I took you out this time, I'll take you out next time. Besides, I'm not coming back. I'm going straight for your daddy and split him in two. "

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Sweet, I can't wait to see that.

I bet if I tried to soul trap each of the Ash Vampires, one of them would get caught in Azura's Star and then I would be like "Noooooo!!" because it's so useful for enchanters, and recharging stuff.

And no, I wasn't kidding

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*Big sigh of relief* Woah, you had me nervous there, Black. You really built up the suspense when Sethyas went to grab the ring. Then you make it comical. Nice stuff

So now we truely know Sethyas is the Nerevarine. Hopefully he'll do a good job at it. I wonder how he'll react to the discussions with the Failed Incarnates....

As Mallet said. That was one good bit back there. Very enjoyable. I wonder how he'll respond to the ghosts of the failed incarnates. They want to load him down with loot after all.

PS: The Moon-and-Star ring is one of the crappiest I've seen. Sorry, but its enchantment isn't all that hot.

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Epical. That's all I have to say. I don't even care if it isn't a word!

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