Ahhh....wonderful! You really put a lot of emotions into this.......and you describe the adventures leading forward in an almost tender way..

A masterpiece.......

You convey emotion very well in this update. You can feel the weight put onto his shoulders. And it's heavy

I look forward to seeing how he deals with the Great Houses and the other Ashlanders. Though it is funny that they're called Ashlanders, since only half of the 4 tribes are found in the Ashlands...

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Oh boy, Crassius, what a nutjob he was. One of the more interesting characters in Morrowind I'd have to say. I definitely felt a bit uncomfortable when he asked me to strip to support me as a Councillor....


Wonderful update yet again, Black. I wonder what's bothering Eno though...

Ahh you do a wonderful work with the dialogue, well known to us, yet full of twists and additions.....truly an awesome update!

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Uh oh! Sethyas is having lady problems! Those can be the worse ones too.

That'll probably not be good to have on his mind when he's supposed to assassinate a couple of Dunmer who are possibly even more sneaky than Sethyas! Not to mention dealing with Orvas himself.

Oooo the stress and suspense!

Agh, now that is why I'm a loner. Who can understand women? (Well, I suppose that women understand women but let's not bother with the details here.)

Hmm, if there are people who are more sneaky than Sethyas, there is one hell of a good solution. Direct assault with heavy weapons and magicka. No one expects that from an assassin. Besides, the plantation could use some redecoration. Don't underestimate the power of angry Atronachs.

Oh nooo.....poor Sethyas!..On the other hand Ilmeni´s reaction is understandable....Nevertheless if Mr Velar plays his cards in a clever way....we might see a happy ending here....or?????

Wonderful update!

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Wow, this update was quite thrilling! I actually feared for Sethyas life!

I was wondering what scroll that possibly could've been. Personally, I thought it was going to be a restorative scroll, like one that would enhance strength and heal you. But the Summon Golden Saint Scroll was VERY satisfactory

It also interesting that you choose the method where you actually convinced Dren to be on your side, rather than incriminating him. I forsee interesting events just because of that. I can't wait to see if you do anything with that.

First, save the world though

PS - I do believe I get to start page 4

Wooot, Golden Saint ot the rescue! The converting Dren to your side was interesting. I've tried that myself but always failed. Somehow, this oversized Claymore would always end up in Dren's neck. I wonder how.

Dren sounds like an ally you shouldn't trust. Be on your guard at all times. Also, don't take any sleeping pills. Trust me, they're not healthy.

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Holy Muffin Blackie! This latest update was one of the finest I´ve read here on the boards! Your description of the conversation between Athyn Sarethi and Sethyas was wonderful. Yes I know I´m pretty fond of Redorans in general and Serjo Sarethi in particular, but still! I´m very impressed.....very...

Can´t wait to read about what will happen next!

I sense that this chapter is drawing to a close from the last few updates. And it's doing so wonderfully, I whole-heartedly agree with minque about the conversation between Sethyas and Sarethi. It will be interesting to see the thought process behind Sethyas eventual choice.

I'm definitely looking forward to the next update(s)!

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Hehe..you see I´m a woman and a talkative one as well.....so I appreciate a good conversation when I see one! But of course your assassination was very well described! I just wanted to point out something else

So when´s the next update? Can´t wait!

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Ahhhh......lots of emotions......*sob* Truly a wonderful description of Sethyas coming to the rescue of young Varvur. Continue please.....it´s just so great!

I think Sethyas will fit in just nice in the great House Redoran!

Wow, I wish you could do that in the game (giving the ring to Varvur), I wouldn't have to slaughter a bunch of guards that way. I think last time I only had to kill one at least.

Anyways, this update is great like every one you do Black. This one contained a wonderful display of emotion that really fit the situation. It was written beautifully. Continue whenever you please.

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man Black Hand, I guess you just taught me how heros had to do grunt work before they could be heros.

Grunt work SUCKS!!!

Wow, just reading about all that work makes me feel tired. I liked how you did both of Drulan's missions at once; much more believable in my opinion. It seems the Redorans, and the Imperial Legion really like to sent you running all over the place. The Fighter's Guild does too if I remember correctly, stinking Vas...

PS - I got the message so I'll stick around. More commenting for me yay!

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Lovely! I particularly like the interference that Sethyas encounter...two loyalties, that is indeed hard, but sofar our hero has handled it just wonderful. I´m sure he´ll continue doing it......

Hehe, I guess I took off a little too soon, but I'll comment now

Hopefully Sethyas won't become too conflicted between the two factions he resides in. So far, he has been lucky. The Oath Ceremony worked really well as well. Something different is always nice to read.

I wait to see what's next for Sethyas in anticipation.

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