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The Metal Mallet
Ahhh l'amour, how sweet it always appears.

Congrats on reaching the second chapter of a epic in-the-making.
DarkHunter
Heh heh heh a little love? tongue.gif Not good for an assassin biggrin.gif
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DarkHunter
Oooh! Having odd dreams now are we? This should be fun... biggrin.gif
The Metal Mallet
I predict some interesting things are going to happen. I can't wait!

Though this new dream of Sethyas has me worried. Hopefully nothing too bad happens...
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The Metal Mallet
Let the assassinations begin!

I'm liking the way you're keeping the stealth element to the writs. I know in the game, you could simply hack n' slash the person up and simply use the writ as a safety percaution. I enjoy this way better, my assassinish to me.

Can't wait to see this side mission...
jack cloudy
Ah, he is a clever assassin. smile.gif I'm sure he'll be alright.
DarkHunter
Wait! His drink normally glows like that! biggrin.gif Not!
Lord Revan


wow a story with an assasin that has morals..... and a bloody good one too. laugh.gif
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jack cloudy
Hmm, I just notice. Just why is Caius living right next to all the bad guys in town? (Vorar Helas and this Balyn.)

Nice update again and I bet that every assassin is jealous of that ring.
sins_to_dark
I read the first chapter and now the second one and i really am impressed by this story your a very creative writter and reading this makes me want to play Morrowind again but gave it to my friend since i ave Oblivion smile.gif looking forward to the next update
Lord Revan

Ah the Ring of Khajiit, my Oblivion character has that, but I got it from Marida (princess of life)
The Metal Mallet
Solid stuff. As usual.

I wondering if the Dark Brotherhood is going to become a problem? I also can't wait for the next ingenious assassination! Keep em coming!
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jack cloudy
Well, the life of an assassin is hard. As hard as a Daedric wall. It was nice to see that he showed some respect for his target. smile.gif
The Metal Mallet
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Someone never played the special duties! They are a HUGE....hmm....no I won't spoil anything. You'll have to keep reading. tongue.gif


Hey hey hey! Maybe I was just playing dumb. I was just curious if they were going to be brought up in a new way.

Anyways, I enjoyed this post just like all the others. Thoroughly powerful characterization and nice, unique assassinations. Can't wait for the next one!
sins_to_dark
This keeps getting better and better, really enjoying this story keep up the good work smile.gif
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jack cloudy
Heh, lovely idea. The disguise and the writ. I do think he shouldn't have left the Fur hat behind. It could be usefull again sometime. Then again, the Fighter's guild stores these in the equipment chests, I wonder why?
,,We're the tough fighters from the fighters guild. Why are you laughing? What, I'm wearing a fur hat instead of a helmet? Well uh....just go away." laugh.gif
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The Metal Mallet
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Grabbing my Writ from his lifeless hands, I pulled off the Colovian fur helm and placed it on his head, sometimes you respect your marks, and sometimes you take pleasure in killing another arrogant honoured user that annoys you.


That is a great line right there. It's good to know that Sethyas has grudges against certain types of class.

Another amusing assassination with the fur helm used to disrespect the corpse. Brilliant work!
treydog
Great updates! I also loved the business with the Colavian "dunce cap"- it is hard to take anyone who wears one of those seriously. Excellent atmosphere and nice development of the character. Never played a Morag Tong character, so this is all new to me. Keep up the good work.
minque
QUOTE(treydog @ Jul 9 2006, 11:46 PM) *

Great updates! I also loved the business with the Colavian "dunce cap"- it is hard to take anyone who wears one of those seriously. Excellent atmosphere and nice development of the character. Never played a Morag Tong character, so this is all new to me. Keep up the good work.

Yes.....I agree with the dachshund! Intriguing and amusing.....keep it coming!
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The Metal Mallet
This recent update has been a very enjoyable read with a nice comic ending.

Sethyas is becoming a very dangerous fellow if he knows attacks that contain five different elements of pain, ouch! I'm pretty sure I don't want to get on his bad side.

Can't wait to see what Sethyas does next!

Lord Revan
High Elfs beware Seth has a signature move that would own you all!!! laugh.gif
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The Metal Mallet
Mmm mmm mmm delicious update! Very nice descriptions of the assassin technique, there's almost a "Batman Begins" type feeling to it with the fear instigating being used as an advantage.

It's nice to see someone use cunning to defeat their enemies/targets.

I too, hope those Telvanni aren't battlemages, I pity Sethyas if that is so.
Lord Revan

You know MM during a mages guild quest in Oblivion I witnessed two battlemages get owned by an imperial watchman for assault and murder. laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif
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The Metal Mallet
Wow, I would've never suspected Sethyas would use a reflect spell to defeat the two Telvanni. Simply put, genius! I also like his conptemplations afterwards. it's good to know that he understands the meaning of an assassin.

Really enjoying this fic so far.
Lord Revan



ok 'make love' where did that come from??? but the rest was fine black hand
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Kiln
I liked the reference with "A Game at Dinner" that you gave during a part of that last bit but the link didn't come out right. smile.gif

Anyways I think I missed the last update so I'm gonna read it as well. goodjob.gif
The Metal Mallet
Post machine indeed! Your pace is maddening!

All of them were consistantly strong as well (even the "sappy" one). There has to be posts like that sometimes, it shows that they're still people. I've been really enjoying reading this and can't for the next batch of posts.

Digging the assassinations!
Lord Revan
cunning, you've made a great character out of Sethyas





PS: I wonder when he'll remember his little sister? wink.gif
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sins_to_dark
ive been away for a week and im glad to see this story is still as amazing as ever keep up the good work looking forward to the next update smile.gif Great work
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The Metal Mallet
A fantastic update with a neat little message, I liked that you explained why the creatures attack the necromancer. I had my ideas on why but I think that explanation was necessary. Good Job!

Oh yes, and this:
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I was willing to imbibe, opening the window a crack to relieve myself, I gave little thought to the sanitary conditions outside. But the rain would wash it away anyway.


Made me think of Family Guy:

*window closes in front of Quagmire*

Quagmire: Hello hospital? Yea it's Quagmire. It's stuck in the window this time...

Hehe, fun stuff!
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The Metal Mallet
Great work with this update. I was laughing out loud reading the urination part. Quite ingenius if you ask me. Also this growing involvement with the Dark Brotherhood is getting me anxious. I can't wait for the cresendo!
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