My sketch/drawing of Rycarin

I suck at doing lighting effects. Gah.

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Cheerio.

It's pretty good for a 30 min, sketch,

his arms are a bit thick and are too short though. Also the armpit it too high up -.-

His face is a bit too wide, but goodjob.

Looks pretty good for a 30-minute sketch!

The only thing that bothered me (I'm not an expert; bear with me) would be his shoulders/armpit area. One side looks more... pinched(?) than the other or something. Is he hunching the shoulders up? Also, I think he needs more of a neck.

Besides that, it's pretty good.

I'll echo the others on the arm's issue, they look too short and such. The Right ear also looks a bit wonky, but besides that its pretty good.

well its better then what I could do in thirty minutes

It's better than I could do in 5 lifetimes....

Unless your drawing was a stick figure. Then I could totally draw better than you.