Hey everyone, well I just got into writing scripts! And I have to say it's a lot diffrent than writing a story I've read scripts from my favourite movies and sutdied them and I read a tutorial on "Script writing" by the BBC but anyways here's a part of the draft I'm writing.

FADE IN:

INT. CLASSROOM - WIDE - DAY

Jonas sprints through the hallway, his shoes squeak as he heeds to a stop. Jonas bursts through a door into an empty room.



A man in a two piece suit turns around from a chalkboard in the back of the room; he adjusts his glasses and looks at the teenage boy.



He shakes the chalk off his hands and walks toward Jonas



CUT TO:

INT. PRINCIPAL”S OFFICE – DAY

Jonas sits in a chair, in the waiting room outside of the principal’s office. He twiddles with his fingers nervously, scratches his shaggy hair, begins to break a sweat.

A buzzer goes off.


Jonas gets up, takes a deep breath and slowly opens the door; awaiting his doom.



Now if anyone is familiar in writing scripts, did I do anything wrong; advice? Thanks

I'm pretty familiar with scripting in some points. Is this going to be made into a play or something by you? BTW I didn't see any errors, but I just skimmed over it.

Not a play but maybe a short film

Will it be action packed with needless oneliners and zombies?

Of course, of course Well I guess there's nothing wrong with that little bit? Now I'm off to write all of it