Full Version: Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin - Solstheim
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The forum wandering insomniac wakes to the treat of another post, wonderful.
It was all great, no surprise but having been around since before the dinosaurs I've heard a lot of different ways to "say" what Pene was trying to say but that's a new one. Awesome, I believe the next time I find a need to share that particular sentiment, if that should happen, I will borrow this line. And of course I will make sure that whoever I might be saying it to knows that I am quoting a daedra, just to make it interesting.
Thanks BH, a nice smile to take back to that infernal bed that seems to be fighting me like Athynae fights Athlain. Good night, yea right, for you I hope anyway.
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Well, I think you've weakened me." she said slowly.
"Thanks?" I replied.
"Thanks?" I replied.
It was all great, no surprise but having been around since before the dinosaurs I've heard a lot of different ways to "say" what Pene was trying to say but that's a new one. Awesome, I believe the next time I find a need to share that particular sentiment, if that should happen, I will borrow this line. And of course I will make sure that whoever I might be saying it to knows that I am quoting a daedra, just to make it interesting.
Thanks BH, a nice smile to take back to that infernal bed that seems to be fighting me like Athynae fights Athlain. Good night, yea right, for you I hope anyway.
Fairly dues...Excellently done...
For some reason, my head feels like wool this morning...I did, nevertheless, thoroughly enjoy that...
Brilliant matey...
I second the Athynae's quote...Beautifully done that...And I know exactly what she meant (I meant Pene but Athynae too
)...Truly brilliant mate...
For some reason, my head feels like wool this morning...I did, nevertheless, thoroughly enjoy that...
Brilliant matey...
I second the Athynae's quote...Beautifully done that...And I know exactly what she meant (I meant Pene but Athynae too
)...Truly brilliant mate...
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I recalled that I had rejected certain advances the night before,
That could complicate things...
Pene becoming more human is a good touch. Having an emotionless psycopath as a support character isn't ideal but an ex-emotionless pstcopath... You've done it smoothly too, I suppose I had noticed, but only sort of until you point it out.
Their interaction is fun to read too. Good stuff.
I love how the common ground between mortals and Daedra is a source of friction for Seth and Pene. I wouldn’t expect him to forge an uncomplicated relationship.
I enjoyed Seth’s explanation that the Daedra and Aedra were once more alike. My very limited understanding is that it was their choices that separated them, not their source. Of course, I could be completely wrong about what Seth was saying.
I think you've weakened me. What a very Daedric way of putting it!
I enjoyed Seth’s explanation that the Daedra and Aedra were once more alike. My very limited understanding is that it was their choices that separated them, not their source. Of course, I could be completely wrong about what Seth was saying.
I think you've weakened me. What a very Daedric way of putting it!
Hmmm odd I'd say! Both Athynae and McBadgere claims to know "exactly" what Pene meant by telling Seth he weakened her....I'm not so sure though! But that's me (being around that darn assassin for quite some time has made me suspicious )
Very well described interaction between S and P though! they are like old mates...hehe
I like Seth is feeling more like his old self, that is admirable considering what he's been through!
I say to you BH what i said to the Dachshund:
may I have some more, Sir?
)Very well described interaction between S and P though! they are like old mates...hehe
I like Seth is feeling more like his old self, that is admirable considering what he's been through!
I say to you BH what i said to the Dachshund:
may I have some more, Sir?
I believe- whether he desires them or no- complications are going to be arriving in Seth's life. For example:
And of course the passage that caps the piece and that others have rightly quoted.
Another I would point out as having significance to me is this:
Here we begin to understand just why it is that Seth keeps a "vicious Daedra" around. Not even the (former) Grandmaster of the Morag Tong likes to be alone- all the time.
Wonderful as always.
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"It's...comforting...in this mortal form." She said chewing on a bit of scrib jerky.
And of course the passage that caps the piece and that others have rightly quoted.
Another I would point out as having significance to me is this:
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This running away from it all...its new to me too. So, I guess we'll just try our best to keep each other company and in check. At least we don't have to go it alone I suppose." I offered meekly.
Here we begin to understand just why it is that Seth keeps a "vicious Daedra" around. Not even the (former) Grandmaster of the Morag Tong likes to be alone- all the time.
Wonderful as always.
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I do wonder how he's going to feel when he looks back from the sea at the land that has been his life. Just ponderings...
I am not sure if this was meant to be funny but I found myself laughing, and as my 12 yr old has said, "Ya think?"
A very nice segment to set him up to be off for ... what comes next. I do hope he enjoys the challenges of the isle.
Ready for more...
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Especially not one who has as much anonymous influence as yourself.”
I am not sure if this was meant to be funny but I found myself laughing, and as my 12 yr old has said, "Ya think?"
A very nice segment to set him up to be off for ... what comes next. I do hope he enjoys the challenges of the isle.
Ready for more...
Yup! What Athynae just said!....And nice! Seth is cooking, I remember I had him clean the house in some of my chapters! Yeah yeah....being skilled around the house is a good thing.
Now the last sentence worries me a bit, what does he mean by "everything"? There are things that cannot be left behind because they stick to you, like glue...so????
Anyway this is gonna be very interesting...because I have my thoughts about my favorite assassin....and his knack for...ehhh things?
Yeah yeah....being skilled around the house is a good thing.Now the last sentence worries me a bit, what does he mean by "everything"? There are things that cannot be left behind because they stick to you, like glue...so????
Anyway this is gonna be very interesting...because I have my thoughts about my favorite assassin....and his knack for...ehhh things?
I like what you did with Ponius. He came across as bright and clearly knew something odd was happening but with a 'recommendation' from the duke he wasn't going to press Seth over it. I imagine most people who would choose to live on Solstheim are running from something anyway, I'm sure Seth will fit right in...
Good part, I look forward to the continuation.
Good part, I look forward to the continuation.
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I recalled that I had rejected certain advances the night before, and realized that as different as the daedra were to mortals; certain things were universal. Like emotions.
...The truth is...before I met you. I didn't know what being alone truly felt like. It was the needs for the weak. Well, I think you've weakened me." she said slowly.
Quoted both of the above for the deep insights you flawlessly and subtly wove through that section - masterful job on that !!
the Imperial Cult would never turn away a soul in need. Especially not one who has as much anonymous influence as yourself.” He said, indicating that he was no fool, and that my clothes did not fool him.
Really great line, and one that has to let Seth know that to hide from his past totally - he'd have to do better than just assume a new role. I don't see someone of Seth's brilliance holing up long in an Imperial Fort without either taking it over or flattening it to the ground, lol. Awesome Write !!
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I recalled that I had rejected certain advances the night before, and realized that as different as the daedra were to mortals; certain things were universal. Like emotions.
...The truth is...before I met you. I didn't know what being alone truly felt like. It was the needs for the weak. Well, I think you've weakened me." she said slowly.
Quoted both of the above for the deep insights you flawlessly and subtly wove through that section - masterful job on that !!
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the Imperial Cult would never turn away a soul in need. Especially not one who has as much anonymous influence as yourself.” He said, indicating that he was no fool, and that my clothes did not fool him.
Really great line, and one that has to let Seth know that to hide from his past totally - he'd have to do better than just assume a new role. I don't see someone of Seth's brilliance holing up long in an Imperial Fort without either taking it over or flattening it to the ground, lol. Awesome Write !!
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Most excellent matey...
Dunno, I've only been reading his adventure for a short while, but I just can't see this somehow...Until recently-Rich, boss-man building a cabin?...Made me laugh that did...
Looking forward to seeing where this goes...
Nice one!... ...
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If however, you’re the type that doesn’t mind rolling up his sleeves and pitching in, you may find some pride in a cabin built by your own two hands
Dunno, I've only been reading his adventure for a short while, but I just can't see this somehow...Until recently-Rich, boss-man building a cabin?...Made me laugh that did...
Looking forward to seeing where this goes...
Nice one!...
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Most excellent matey...
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If however, you’re the type that doesn’t mind rolling up his sleeves and pitching in, you may find some pride in a cabin built by your own two hands
Dunno, I've only been reading his adventure for a short while, but I just can't see this somehow...Until recently-Rich, boss-man building a cabin?...Made me laugh that did...
Looking forward to seeing where this goes...
Nice one!...
...I agree, I didn't see him taking that option either. He has to find somewhere to hide that he can use his genius mind and move about. I wish he'd go to Cyrodiil !!!! But he won't/can't, Selene and Treydog/Athlain are still in Morrowind.
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Nope, you're right, I didn't know... ...
And I stand corrected, enlightened and in awe, once more, of your work... ...
*Bows down*...
Nice one for the other bit too!!... ...
...And I stand corrected, enlightened and in awe, once more, of your work...
...*Bows down*...
Nice one for the other bit too!!...
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Blimey...Lady appearing-in-everyone-else's-stories Athynae is here too?! 
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Excellent chapter though...
Athynae's cool...
Both of them... ...
Loved it...I laughed at this...
That was just funny...
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Top chapter!!...Loved it!!...
Nice one!!!...
*Applauds*...
...Excellent chapter though...
Athynae's cool...
Both of them...
...Loved it...I laughed at this...
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...I got it two day at my birthday cele sela pardy...
That was just funny...
...Top chapter!!...Loved it!!...
Nice one!!!...
*Applauds*...
Nice touch. The interlude to see what he's left behind works, especially because it is very much Athynea with the different writing style (and indeed writer).
Very enjoyable, I wonder if she is to become a regular feature...
Very enjoyable, I wonder if she is to become a regular feature...
Ooh, a crossover Athynae !! Awesome Write !! You have very thoroughly become immersed in Athynae's personality, we can recognize it anywhere without the name every being written !! Wonderful surprise !! (I wonder if she'll see the stain?)
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I figured that the Company was the kind of people who appreciated initiative, so I took it upon myself to find a fatcat Imperial. How hard could it be?
Made me snicker there.
The “domestic bliss” interlude, with Seth cooking was a wonderful touch. Although he claims it was because he doubted the quality- and the company… I wonder if he was also motivated by a need to feel CONNECTED to something simple and comforting. Like preparing one’s own food.
Simply loved the whole scene with Ponius- and will content myself with that, rather than quoting it all.
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Now it was time to return to Pene and leave everything behind.
I wonder how easy that will turn out to be?
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But I had heard Mother crying a couple times, which was not normal, and Father was drinking more than one snifter of Cyrodillic Brandy in the evening after dinner.
And THAT is “showing- not telling.”
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The dark figure that slid in and out of my life like a piece of parchment under the door and always seeming to arrive just in time to catch me before I did something that would cause problems of some sort, or just after.
Simply LOVE the imagery there.
And of course- 3 guesses as to the true identity of “The Princess of Trouble”.
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I would like to think that I was as invisible as Uncle Seth but that was not possible; he could disappear faster
than a dust mote. I did fairly well though; I could sneak up on anyone except Mother and Uncle Seth, but Mother cheated and Uncle Seth, well he was Uncle Seth.
than a dust mote. I did fairly well though; I could sneak up on anyone except Mother and Uncle Seth, but Mother cheated and Uncle Seth, well he was Uncle Seth.
How wonderful is the sense of Athynae that that passage gives us.
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You do not need to know and do not go snooping to find the answers.” And so I didn’t- well, usually- well, sometimes- um, nevermind.
As does THAT one!
Simply marvelous- all of it.
Thank you first to Black Hand for allowing me the opportunity to share in this, Seth's wonderful tale. His was one of the first I read when Trey prodded me into the forum and I like the story even more now than I did then.
@Trey- I'll talk to you later sir!!!
@McB- I am so glad you have joined this community, your story is wonderful and your comments are classic. Thank you for reading Athynae's antics...wherever they lead.
@mALX- Your support from the beginning has been undaunted and so, so appreciated
@Olen- Don't quite know what to say to you without sounding totally cheesey so I will simply say THANK YOU SO MUCH for reading and sharing your thoughts, they are ALWAYS appreciated.
And one last thing, each of you made a comment about "knowing" it was Athynae, THAT was the coolest!!! If I have captured her so completely that even in alternate universes she is the same, that is a WOW for sure. THANKS TO ALL OF YOU!!! I am elated to be a part of this wonderful community.
@Trey- I'll talk to you later sir!!!
@McB- I am so glad you have joined this community, your story is wonderful and your comments are classic. Thank you for reading Athynae's antics...wherever they lead.
@mALX- Your support from the beginning has been undaunted and so, so appreciated
@Olen- Don't quite know what to say to you without sounding totally cheesey so I will simply say THANK YOU SO MUCH for reading and sharing your thoughts, they are ALWAYS appreciated.
And one last thing, each of you made a comment about "knowing" it was Athynae, THAT was the coolest!!! If I have captured her so completely that even in alternate universes she is the same, that is a WOW for sure. THANKS TO ALL OF YOU!!! I am elated to be a part of this wonderful community.
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Seth's vagueness as to why he chose not to say his "good-byes" is interesting- I suspect he is not certain himself.
And the tie-in to the interlude is perfect... as one mystery- the indentity of the hooded "woman" is revealed.
Had to quote the whole thing- because it is just so perfect and had me laughing and happy to have set my tea aside.
And then- throughout the piece, there is the atmosphere. The fog that covers the area around Khuul- reflecting the existential fog in which Seth finds himself. And, even as he hopes to use the cover of that fog to his advantage, it also obscures his own vision. Or maybe- sometimes- a fog is just weather.
And the tie-in to the interlude is perfect... as one mystery- the indentity of the hooded "woman" is revealed.
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I stopped for a moment, rubbing the bridge of my nose. "You're just not used to...different personalities...he is joking Pene. Intentionally stating nonsense for laughter, with the intention of causing ease with people." I explained.
Pene looked at me oddly for a moment. "I see. So you mortals intentionally spout nonsense at one another to build social bridges?" She asked.
"It's not quite as insane when you actually develop a sense of humor." I said slightly frustrated.
"It's a 'sense' for nonsense?" Pene said mystified, following me as I boarded the ship.
Pene looked at me oddly for a moment. "I see. So you mortals intentionally spout nonsense at one another to build social bridges?" She asked.
"It's not quite as insane when you actually develop a sense of humor." I said slightly frustrated.
"It's a 'sense' for nonsense?" Pene said mystified, following me as I boarded the ship.
Had to quote the whole thing- because it is just so perfect and had me laughing and happy to have set my tea aside.
And then- throughout the piece, there is the atmosphere. The fog that covers the area around Khuul- reflecting the existential fog in which Seth finds himself. And, even as he hopes to use the cover of that fog to his advantage, it also obscures his own vision. Or maybe- sometimes- a fog is just weather.
It is odd being in the position I am now in, there are logical human reactions to the writing, which are always leaning toward the "wonderful" but there is also and emotional response to the writing now, more than before. The idea that this is Athynae's reality, and Seth's, it is just a sad proposition any way you look at it.
Deep sigh, one tear and another wonderful write Blackie.
Deep sigh, one tear and another wonderful write Blackie.
QUOTE(Black Hand @ Jan 21 2012, 02:41 PM)
@mALX The Stain is in the Apartment in Vivec, not in Bal Isra.
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Sorry about that, I haven't played Morrowind yet
** Will have to come back and read when I get some free time this weekend.
Fair dues...Nice little chapter here...
The Khajiit made me laugh for some reason...
Maybe because I just watched a documentary about Monty Python..."We've got lumps of it...Round the back..."... ...
Dunno... ...
Excellent as ever...
Nice one!!...
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The Khajiit made me laugh for some reason...
Maybe because I just watched a documentary about Monty Python..."We've got lumps of it...Round the back..."...
...Dunno...
...Excellent as ever...
Nice one!!...
*Applauds*...
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You really captured S'virr from the game in this piece. I liked your inclusion of his classic line.
Pene continues to be an interesting counter character and provides entertainment.
I liked this line, its funny but foarly insightful too.
Pene continues to be an interesting counter character and provides entertainment.
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"I see. So you mortals intentionally spout nonsense at one another to build social bridges?"
I liked this line, its funny but foarly insightful too.
Seth trying to explain humor to Pene was my favorite part of this chapter! That great detail added a nice touch of immersion into Pene's character for me, like her actions as a raven did. You have a marked ability to slide the tiniest actions and reactions into scenes that totally make them come to life - I'm envious !!! Awesome write !!
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Ooooh, pretty pictures...*Slack jawed*...
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Nice one!!!... ...
Like journey pices do I...Yes!...
OOF!!!...Oh, that's just deep right there that is... ...
And...
Typo aside, that's both funny and poingnant right there...*Bows down*...
Beautiful and masterful writing...
Nice one!!... ...
*Applauds heartily*...
...Nice one!!!...
...Like journey pices do I...Yes!...
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As a ship skiffs across changeless tides that ever change
OOF!!!...Oh, that's just deep right there that is...
...And...
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Than again, my life had certainly seemed to end up in the bucket outside
Typo aside, that's both funny and poingnant right there...*Bows down*...
Beautiful and masterful writing...
Nice one!!...
...*Applauds heartily*...
I liked the look into Seth's thought process as he slips from the past into the future.
This line I liked particularly well, but that we could all see life that way.
So, what's next for Seth, this is going to be very interesting....
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So perhaps it was my voyage in life that had taken the turn for the worse and not necessarily me.
This line I liked particularly well, but that we could all see life that way.
So, what's next for Seth, this is going to be very interesting....
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"I thought you didn't want to be found?" She asked.
"I don't. That doesn't mean I won't need to be found." I offered.
"I don't. That doesn't mean I won't need to be found." I offered.
Right, good, at least if someone DID need to find you, AND they were smart enough, it might be possible.
I truly loved your reasoning for choosing the name, classic.
And now the fun begins, wonder what kind of trouble he's going to get into now.
Careful of the beasties Seth, they sneak up on you.
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"Oh...I'm sorry, I'm a little out of sorts at the moment..."
Yes, I know what you mean...
...Cool...
...Another excellent installment...With many brilliant things...
*Applauds*...
Nice one!!...
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The last time I had my life forcibly changed, I had arrived by boat as well. Why not again? At least this time I was heading in a direction that I had chosen.
Love the parallel to the Morrowind opening- and the difference too.
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Pene looked at him for a moment, than at me. "Interesting. He wanted something from you." She commented.
"I think it's simply something he wants, and the dashed hope that I wasn't the person who had it."
"I think it's simply something he wants, and the dashed hope that I wasn't the person who had it."
And that is ONE reason Seth has survived so long.
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"Well, he was rather...unpleasant." Pene remarked.
Yes- well. Obviously I have my own reasons for my feelings about Carnius. But- he seems to me a man in desperate need of being punched in the face- repeatedly.
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Venim does however. It was the name of an old enemy, it's a name I would never use. So if someone is looking hard enough, they'll know it's me."
"O--kay." Pene said, truly confused. "I thought you didn't want to be found?" She asked.
"I don't. That doesn't mean I won't need to be found." I offered.
"O--kay." Pene said, truly confused. "I thought you didn't want to be found?" She asked.
"I don't. That doesn't mean I won't need to be found." I offered.
And another vote for simply loving all that is behind that bit of convoluted thought- and that it actually boggles Pene…
Ooh, pictures! 
I enjoyed Seth’s thoughts on the ship. Pene continues to be an excellent companion. Seth’s explanations to her often answer questions in my mind.
Since most of Morrowind is still a fog to me (I keep getting lost/stuck/sidetracked/killed), it’s fun to watch Seth discover a place that is new to him.
I enjoyed Seth’s thoughts on the ship. Pene continues to be an excellent companion. Seth’s explanations to her often answer questions in my mind.
Since most of Morrowind is still a fog to me (I keep getting lost/stuck/sidetracked/killed), it’s fun to watch Seth discover a place that is new to him.
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Sounds like Seth is already feeling positive about the transition.
I cackled at this one, that's our Seth.
YES there are! Big, ugly, furry, sharp teeth beaties, believe me Thyna knows all about them.
I know with Seth he might have said this, and anywhere else it's true, but he's smart enough that he won't put all his stock in the "idea". Stay safe, the beasties here ain't normal.
I am glad he likes Falco. And I glad he seems to have a positive first impression of his new surroundings.
Good addition to the edition...MORE PLEASE.
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"I am...I have no idea where we're going; other than that I should be able to get you wherever 'there' is safely." I said.
I cackled at this one, that's our Seth.
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Not too mention things that would likely want to eat us are in there, and likely territorial. Also do what I say, when I say it. If I say stop, you stop and don't make a noise.
YES there are! Big, ugly, furry, sharp teeth beaties, believe me Thyna knows all about them.
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"They aren't a threat. You only defend yourself with these creatures, even then, you only have too kill one, and the rest disperse and typically will shy from Men and Mer afterwards. It's all about maintaining a balance, they keep the prey population in check, we keep to our farms and domesticated animals....usually."
I know with Seth he might have said this, and anywhere else it's true, but he's smart enough that he won't put all his stock in the "idea". Stay safe, the beasties here ain't normal.
I am glad he likes Falco. And I glad he seems to have a positive first impression of his new surroundings.
Good addition to the edition...MORE PLEASE.
Solshteim=werewolves.
I will be following this story with great interest. I do not hold much knowledge of Morag Tong compared to the Dark Brotherhood, but I will be following this story with great interest.
I will be following this story with great interest. I do not hold much knowledge of Morag Tong compared to the Dark Brotherhood, but I will be following this story with great interest.
Oh-ho-hooo yes!!...
Don't know where there is, but I'll get you there safe...
Excellent!!... ...
Lahved it from start to finish...
The pretty wee pictures are a treat!... ...
Most excellent!...
Nice one!!..
*Applauds heartily*...
Don't know where there is, but I'll get you there safe...
Excellent!!...
...Lahved it from start to finish...
The pretty wee pictures are a treat!...
...Most excellent!...
Nice one!!..
*Applauds heartily*...
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I just didn't know too much about the local dangers. However, as I'd said before, if it bleeds, I could kill it.
Always a helpful skill on Solstheim.
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Not too mention things that would likely want to eat us are in there, and likely territorial.
Here now- it was only the ONE time- and that was an ACCIDENT… . Oh, wait. Nevermind.
LOVE the screenie of Seth- sorry- DRALAS, in full stalk mode.
And I also appreciate the fact that you have made the wolves behave realistically (at least for now)- instead of with homicidal lunacy. The last of which is understandable, since in the vanilla game, there are NO prey animals on Solstheim- except for horkers- and.. well, people.
And hooray for Falco!
Hmm I think I know which side Seth- Dralas will take then.
A good three parts, his taking a new name as a good touch and makes sense. Such a thing might have been a dramatic moment, it shows how out of sorts he is that he hadn't preplanned. Though his choice makes perfect sense.
Carnius is another I liked, you seem to be portraying him more as incompetent, or at least lazy. I'll be interested to see if he sharpens up a bit when he realises how good Seth is at various things.
His fitting into the new landscape should be fun.
A good three parts, his taking a new name as a good touch and makes sense. Such a thing might have been a dramatic moment, it shows how out of sorts he is that he hadn't preplanned. Though his choice makes perfect sense.
Carnius is another I liked, you seem to be portraying him more as incompetent, or at least lazy. I'll be interested to see if he sharpens up a bit when he realises how good Seth is at various things.
His fitting into the new landscape should be fun.
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It's impossible....I just can't ....I mean post-machine is on again and I have just missed to comment on three installments! gah, am I p***sed of with myself!
I understand that Seth-Dralas is getting himself at home on Solstheim, hmm for better or for worse. Now I can well imagine him getting things going at Raven Rock, he surely is skilled enough..but there is a "but" right? is this what he wants to, really? he is fleeing from his past, but the past has a habit of catching up so....????
Love the dry humor of Seth ....really love it!
I understand that Seth-Dralas is getting himself at home on Solstheim, hmm for better or for worse. Now I can well imagine him getting things going at Raven Rock, he surely is skilled enough..but there is a "but" right? is this what he wants to, really? he is fleeing from his past, but the past has a habit of catching up so....????
Love the dry humor of Seth ....really love it!
Just a feeling but I think Dralas and Falco will become strong allies against the unpopular Carnius. Nice thought that there is someone on the island that will do whatever needs to be done to keep things straight.
It is nice to see him settling in. These peaceful conversations will be short lived so finding his "path" as soon as possible is a good idea.
Good write, so look forward to more.
It is nice to see him settling in. These peaceful conversations will be short lived so finding his "path" as soon as possible is a good idea.
Good write, so look forward to more.
Niiiice... ...
Nice quiet scene building...
I do likes me ebony...My fave armour on the games...
Brilliant chapter, really enjoyed it...
Nice one!!... ...
*Applauds heartily*...
...Nice quiet scene building...
I do likes me ebony...My fave armour on the games...
Brilliant chapter, really enjoyed it...
Nice one!!...
...*Applauds heartily*...
Good part.
I like the little observations of character you make. His not knowing what to say and Pene being totally out of her depth were nice touches. Orf course I suspect they won;t have been the only ones. You have Falco as an interesting man. I doubt him and Seth will immediatly get along but I suspect they will given time. How far Seth trusts him, and the consequences of that, on the other hand...
As ever I look forward to more.
I like the little observations of character you make. His not knowing what to say and Pene being totally out of her depth were nice touches. Orf course I suspect they won;t have been the only ones. You have Falco as an interesting man. I doubt him and Seth will immediatly get along but I suspect they will given time. How far Seth trusts him, and the consequences of that, on the other hand...
As ever I look forward to more.
Dralas is a sexy name. And Pene is a funny one. Yet both seemed to be anti-social when it comes to talking to Falco. And Falco was always such a nice guy. Carnius is a *insert rude word here*. I wonder how their relationship is going to pan out in the story.
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"Yes?" he said sharply to me, as though every second I stood there cost him another twenty septims.
I rummaged through my bag in silent annoyance, costing him another hundred septims. Finally producing a letter intended for the Factor of Raven Rock.
ROFL !!! Loved that !!
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I stopped for a moment, and thought out loud. "Dralas is a common enough Dunmeri name. It doesn't stand out. Venim does however. It was the name of an old enemy, it's a name I would never use. So if someone is looking hard enough, they'll know it's me."
"O--kay." Pene said, truly confused. "I thought you didn't want to be found?" She asked.
"I don't. That doesn't mean I won't need to be found." I offered.
In a truly grandiose moment, Pene was speechless.
Pene steals the show several times throughout this story, this is one example - Loved this !!
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yet in a sort of chaotic harmony.
This was perfection.
Awesome Write, and sorry it took so long to catch up !!
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