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Remko
Dear readers, I posted this in the unnamed forum but since you were so kind to invite me here, I thought I'd "grace" you with my drivel. Without further adue, I present you the adventures of Rales Sarethi.

Part I Homecoming

Chapter 1: Seyda Neen.

Day 1

Over thirty-five years ago, I think I was about nineteen, maybe twenty, I got pulled from my bunk in the cell in Imperial City and was told I was to be deported to Vvardenfell immediately. First by carriage and then by boat.
Gods, even up to this day I resent carriage rides, they’re bumpy, dusty and tiresome, I prefer a horseback ride anyday.

The seajourney is pretty much a blur in my recollection, the gentle relaxing motion of the boat made me drift into a careless and refreshing slumber.
I briefly opened my eyes at times the sea was exceptionally rough and I remember a gentle yet compelling voice speaking to me. Can’t remember the words though, just the sound of the voice that stuck with me.

I woke up when a fellow Dunmer, one donning a huge scar across his face, told me we had arrived and that I needed to get off the boat. He called himself Jiub and asked what my name was. I politely answered my name was Rales. I didn’t bother telling him my last name, after all, he hadn’t told his either.
I never saw the guy again after I disembarked. A shame really, he was kind of like-able.

A grumpy Redguard legionnaire ordered me to report in at the Census and Excise office outside. Like I had a choice. On the boardwalk towards the offices, an Imperial officer asked me several random questions, like my race. Like he couldn’t see for himself. Sjeezzz…. I had to refrain myself from rolling my eyes and possibly insulting or upsetting the guy. Instead, I acted like the good Dunmer they wanted me to be, I played along and answered his questions.

After I had satisfied his curiosity he ordered me to report in at the office for my release form. ‘Release form? I was going to be released?’
I could hardly believe my pointy ears at that time. Let me tell you; looking back on what they had me go through, sometimes I wished they had left me to rot in prison. With a straight face I walked towards the rickety wooden structure that was the consensus and excise office. I couldn’t be showing surprise about my release, what if they had made a mistake and changed their mind?

Quickly I proceeded into the building. An elderly Imperial was sitting behind a desk, going through piles and piles of documents. Pre-occupied as he seemed to be, he hadn’t noticed me yet or maybe he was just ignoring me. Perhaps it had been my body-odour? Figuring that was hardly my fault, they were the ones that had plucked me from my cell, dropped me on a boat and had me report into an office without the chance to clean myself up. I shrugged and softly cleared my throat to get his attention, I didn’t want to startle the old man lest he would die from a heart-attack. Knowing my luck, they’d probably blame me and I’d be back where I started, in jail.

The following conversation with the old git almost felt like a job-interview. Socusius Ergalla, the census and excise officer, asked me all sorts of questions; like my starsign, my skills and whatnot. I didn’t have a clue what they wanted with the info but since it was hardly a secret, I just answered them while the Imperial wrote it all down on some sort of form. After the interview, Socusius told me to take my release form (that’s what the form turned out to be) to Selles Gravius where I’d receive orders. I was almost speechless - almost. ‘Orders? Whatfor?’ I remember exclaiming. He just shrugged. Apparantly he hadn’t a clue either. Well, that made two of us so I went to Gravius, hoping he would tell me more.

Halfway to Selles Gravius I got distracted by a hallway behind a sturdy looking wooden door that led to some sort of a basement where I found a variety of items. Some silverware, some bottles containing local booze, an iron dagger and a bag to put in the items I had “found”.
Ofcourse, only then I realised I still had to see that Gravius guy. He would notice me carrying a bag, suspiciously tingling with all sorts of gear a newly released prisoner shouldn’t have yet. I put the bag next to the table where I had found the dagger, checked my release form was still in my pocket and went to see Selles Gravius.

Gravius wasn’t much of a talker and looked like a formidable warrior. In fact; it made me wonder what in Sheogorath’s name he was doing here in this lousy office. When I asked him while handing him the form he almost bit off my head saying it was none of my busines and unpatiently snatched the release form from my hands. He glimpsed me over for a while with one eyebrow raised and ordered me to wait for a moment while he looked up some documents I was going to need. A few moments later he handed me a letter, some gold I quickly pocketed and a mysterious package for a certain Caius Cosades in Balmora, who-ever that may be. I figured I’d find out soon enough and didn’t ask any more questions.

Having been through that, - what I still consider a bureaucratical ordeal - as I went to retrieve my bag, I suddenly remembered there was a rainbarrel outside I hadn’t looked into. I had little gold and a dagger but no water, no food, no nothing so anything I could find would be useful and most of all; for free.
Turned out it only contained a ring with some engraving. Unfortunately I couldn’t make out what it was saying so I put it in my pocket, again wandered through the offices with an air like nothing was out of the ordinary, fetched the bag and made my way into Seyda Neen.
I was my own man again. I was free to go where I wanted.

***

My first steps outside were, well, quite frankly, disappointing. You’d expect a town with the main docks into Vvardenfell would be a big, prospering town. Suffice to say it wasn’t.
As a matter of fact, it was just the opposite. Most of the houses were run-down, shabby shacks, trading was limited to one tradinghouse and a swamp surrounded it so flies swarmed the town.
I won’t even mention the smell.

Still, I was in Morrowind, I could finally look up relatives I knew to still live here. My mother had told me plenty of stories of her and her cousin Athyn playing together. I couldn’t remember which town though, but from what I’ve been taught, the Sarethi family is well-known and shouldn’t be too hard to track down.

My sense of pride prevented me running off to find them right away, I could hardly arrive wearing nothing but the raggedy clothes, looking like a bum. I wanted to make a name for myself first. I wanted them to be proud to hail back a long-lost relative
For now, my pride would have to wait, I had more pressing matters, like finding somewhere to stay the night.

While looking around and - metaphorically speaking - sniffing up the atmosphere a Woodelf came upto me grinning child-like. The chap introduced himself as Fargoth and extended his hand which I grabbed. From moment one I knew I was going to like this friendly little fellow. Turned out he had been bullied and his family heirloom, a ring, had been taken from him. He told me it was magical and allowed the wearer to heal himself.

‘Would it have engraving, like this?’ I remember asking him while pulling the ring I had found in the barrel outside the office from my pocket and held it in front of his nose. Fargoth frantically shook his head and told me that was the one.
I was happy to give it back to him. Trinkets are easier to find than good friends and the gods know I could use some friends being a stranger in a strange land.
Singing happily he wandered off but not before he told me he was going to tell his friend Arrille a kind Darkelf had returned his ring to him and how happy he was to have it back.
I simply smiled.

My rumbling stomach made me aware that I needed to find something to eat as well. After some asking around I soon found out Arrille’s establishment was the only tradehouse around. If I wanted to survive any trip outside of town, I needed some sort of protection, I needed armour and a weapon and some supplies so I headed off to Arrille’s.

Politely the High Elf, Arille, greeted me and was quick to realize I must have been the stranger that had given Fargoth his ring back. He confirmed what I suspected, Fargoth was slightly retarded, he had the mind of a child and was almost chronically happy.

I removed the items from the bag I wanted to sell and displayed them on the counter in front of Arrille. We came to an agreement, he would gladly take all the items from my hands and I would buy the chitin cuirass, pauldrons and gauntlets, some food, a couple of useful spells and some scrolls. Even with those purchases I had more gold in my pocket than when I had entered the tradehouse. I had kept the dagger.
Then it hit me, I still didn’t have a real weapon, the iron dagger I had kept was hardly any more use than as a butterknife.
In the excitement I had forgotten to buy a real weapon. I double backed into Arrille’s and bought a chitin bow and some arrows.
Now I was set to face whatever was coming to me in the wild, or at least, that’s what I thought at that time.

I nibbled on a Kwama egg on a loaf of bread and adressed some inhabitants. Some locals mentioned Ergalla Socucius was looking for a missing tax collector, Processus Vitellius.
I wasn’t really feeling like heading back into the Census and Excise office, I had just left the damn thing, I decided to do some looking around myself. How hard would it be to find an Imperial tax collector?

Since it is always a good idea getting at least an idea where someone missing could hang out, I asked around for him. Ofcourse, blabbermouth Fargoth had heard rumours the Dunmer in the watchtower, Thavere Vedrano, was the only being able to stomach him. Apparantly, the guy was somewhat obnoxious. It was a start so I headed off to the lighthouse when in the corner of my eye I caught a glimpse of something shiny – a weapon perhaps? – in a hollow stump. It cost me a pair of wet feet and trousers getting the item from the stump but it was well worth it. The enchanted axe would get me quite some gold, I never cared for axes, they are too heavy and too encumbring, so I intended on selling it but it would have to wait until I solved this mystery.
Acadian
Yes, the light, conversational and informal style of Rales! How wonderful! I'm pleased that you are starting anew here and hope you will take your time that we may savor Rales and his adventures. biggrin.gif
Fiach
ah a story in good old Morrowind ^^

I'm going to have to keep an eye on Rales he seems like an intresting character cool.gif
Zalphon
I love the description. Excellent work, Ral--Remko.
Remko
@Fiach: glad you like it!
@Zalphon, so this is where you buggered off to? wink.gif Good to see you again m8!

Don't want to spam but I guess I can post another part. biggrin.gif


Thavere was really pleasant to talk with. She had a quick understanding and told me Processus had confided in her telling the other day he had an argument with one of the locals; Foryn Gilnith. The guards had been able to interfere between the two in time or it might have ended up really ugly.
According to her they had argued about Foryn claiming Processus increased the taxes so he could skim some of it into his pockets without his superiors noticing. Obviously Processus Vitellius had denied the outrageous claims. I wisely kept my mouth shut about how I thought about such an “outrageous claim”. I had lived most of my, sofar, short life between Imperials and as such knew money was usually a big drive for them. Of course, there was the chance of him being different. Yeah right. And maybe minotaurs would fly.

I continued asking her if it was likely he had made other enemies or maybe he had just moved on into the next town. She smartly commented that in his line of work it was impossible to avoid making enemies so that was very likely. He wouldn’t have moved on to another place, she was sure he would’ve mentioned it.
I politely thanked her for her time and for the drink and continued my search outside.

If it had been a local and, judging by the name, a Dunmer he almost got into a fight with, it wasn’t unlikely for Processus to have run into an “accident” that would’ve got him killed – Dunmer are reknowned for being short-tempered, especially if it concerns an “Outlander” - so I started looking around the area if I could come up with his body or at least some sort of trace of where he had vanished to.

As I was wandering around in the area of Seyda Neen, I picked countless samples of the local flora. Never thinking about the consequences I dropped all the ingredients in the bag I was hauling around. When I was a child I’ve always found it very exciting seeing my mother brew mysteriously and curiously smelling concoctions so naturally I had to dabble with alchemy as well. Not that I had any experience with that before but I’ll get back on that later.

The gathering of plants almost made me lose track of what I initially set out to do – find the missing tax officer. After trotting around for hours through swamps I still hadn’t managed to turn up any trace of him and was starting to doubt I ever would when I heard a scream that nearly turned my blood to icicles. Certainly, this meant some menacing predator had sniffed me out and would make dinner out of me. I drew my bow, prepared an arrow – I was going to protect my precious hide with whatever means - and frantically started looking around for cover or for whatever had made the sound, when suddenly the scream ended with a resounding thud several passes behind me.

A Bosmer had fallen from the sky, trying to revive him proved pointless – blood was dripping from his nostrils and ears – I understood the poor bugger had died on impact.
Using the axe as a shovel I dug him a grave, took some of his gear, he wouldn’t be needing it anymore anyway, and rather unceremonally – what did you expect? I didn’t even know the guy – dropped him in the hole and closed it. At least predators and other vile creatures wouldn’t get to him.

It seemed miracles come in pairs. Not only acquired I a really nice robe, the bloodstains would wash away soon enough, a useful enchanted sword and some convenient and some not so convenient scrolls – thanks to the fallen Bosmer Tarhiel. I learned from the journal I found on him that was his name, as well as that he had been experimenting with what he called scrolls of Icarian Flight – I also found the body of the missing tax officer nearby.
He hadn’t been dead that long yet, the body wasn’t really stiff yet and most of his fingers were still attached. Some had been gnawed off by, well I didn’t really know and I didn’t really wanted to stay to find out either.

What I did find out was that he had most definitely been killed. He had been stabbed in the back several times and, I assume to make sure he was really dead, his throat was slit as well. The body had been dragged to this spot, the distinct lack of blood was evidence he hadn’t died where he laid. The trail led towards Seyda Neen, it would appear a local had indeed murdered Vitellius.

Searching the body led nowhere. No evidence, nothing. I followed the only thing I could do; the trail and find out where it ended. Dissapointingly, the trail ended not far from where I had found the victim’s body. I had no other choice, I was going to have to talk to every single inhabitant and find out what they know. Disappointed, I headed back into town to clean myself up.
Zalphon
I feel like I'm there right with Rales. smile.gif
haute ecole rider
Welcome, Remko! I'm happy to see you here as well!

Though I have read Memories before, it is enjoyable to read it again from the beginning. His good nature truly shines from the first chapter, as well as his sensible practicality. It's a combination I find very appealing!
mALX
Yeah !!! Rales and Zerina !!!!!!
SubRosa
Yay for Rales! Almost everyone is over here now, it seems.
Destri Melarg
The best thing about revisiting all these stories from the beginning is the chance to reintroduce ourselves to some of our favorite characters. Rales stands out in that respect. haute hit the nail right on the head when she spoke of the combination of good nature and practicality. Add a kind of unrefined likability to the mix and it is easy to understand why he is such a popular character.
Winter Wolf
I am very excited about the chance to walk the wilderness of Morrowind with Rales. Yippee!!
It is awesome that you are bringing this over here in its entirety.

I have only played the first one-third of Morrowind myself. Reading your story brought back a rush of memories. Cool!!

The conversational style you use works very well and suits the character perfectly.
I was very pleased to see him steal everything he could at the census office. My character did the same!!

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his throat was slid as well.

Should that be - slit as well?
Remko
Arille’s trading house was not just a place to buy and sell, for some gold he also rented out rooms. I had dinner at Arille’s and rented a room for the night.
As it was still quite early I spend the remainder of the evening exploring some more of the area around Seyda Neen. I remember being horrified when a rock I momentarily sat on to catch my breath grew a pair of vicious pincers, legs and a head.
The foul creature pinched my left thigh, I cut off its legs and pincers. Fair deal I’d say.

The meat I scraped out of its shell - the dagger came in handy, I was glad I had kept it - was brown and felt slimey to the touch.
Still, if I was to survive in the wild I figured I’d best stop being too picky and decided to taste it. I’m glad I did, it tasted wonderful! It would be no problem for me to live on crabmeat for several days. I was in the area anyway so I practised my bow- and sword skills on any crab I encountered with extreme prejudice and stocked up on crabmeat.

Day 2

The next morning I had breakfast and set out to do what I had started the previous day; find the tax collector’s murderer. I had a lead but thought it wise to investigate some more before blaming anyone. I wanted to make sure I was going to confront the correct person.
Everyone said the same thing; all the locals pointed towards Foryn Gilnith. Some had even witnessed the quarrel between Foryn and Processus. There was no one else I could ask, I had asked every single inhabitant, except one. Foryn himself.
I gathered all my courage and headed to Foryn’s shack and knocked. I didn’t get an answer so he was either asleep or out.

Foryn didn’t have many friends, when I inquired on his likely where-abouts no-one knew.
There was the option of breaking into his shack and look for evidence. I was sure the local guards wouldn’t approve. Unless, they didn’t know or see. I needed to slip into the shack while the guards weren’t looking and I was certain the owner wasn’t home.
Then, I had an idea. I needed a distraction.

‘How would you like to earn some gold?’ I asked Fargoth. He scratched his head and said he would be glad to help a friend.
‘What do you want me to do?’
‘I need you to raise hell just after dark.’ His face told me he hadn’t a clue what I meant with that. Suppressing a sigh I explained it as I would to a child.
‘Look, just start shouting and make the guards come your way. I don’t know, maybe act as like you were just robbed.’
A sparkle of understanding appeared in his mischievous eyes and a smug grin curled his lips.
‘Don’t worry, even the guards in Vivec will hear me,’ he assured me.
‘That will do just fine.’

That night, Seyda Neen was in an uproar. True to his word, Fargoth started his act just after dark. The guards were quick to respond and all converged to the panic point, giving me the opportune moment to slip into Foryn’s shack. And if he turned out to be home, I would act drunk and had accidently stumbled into the wrong house.
It was a bit thin; if Foryn knew I didn’t even have a house, he would see through it right away. I just hoped luck was on my side and that he hadn’t returned yet and entered the shack.

Lady luck was on my side, Foryn wasn’t at home. Quickly, not wasting any time, I rummaged through his cupboard, the crates, through anything that could hide evidence.
All I found in a corner underneath some clothes was a dagger with traces of blood on it and a bloody rag.
‘Why go through the problem of wiping the blade clean and then leave the rag next to the blade?’ I surmised. ‘Doesn’t make sense.’ It almost looked like he was being framed. And then there was the possibility Foryn was just really sloppy, dumb or both.

Truth is; I just didn’t know what to think anymore. On one hand, he was the likely suspect. There had been witnesses to Foryn and Processus nearly getting in a fist-fight. On the other hand; there was the conveniently placed evidence in his shack. Too conveniently.

I made sure everything was like I found it, except the evidence, I took that with me.
Then, Foryn entered. He wasn’t happy to see me in his shack and told me to get out.
I did as I planned, I acted drunk and mumbled the lousy excuse I had thought of before but then realized the predicament I had gotten myself into.
‘What if it was his dagger?’ I thought. If it was, he would soon miss it and know right away it had been me who had taken it. All in all, I felt I had made a mess out of it the whole situation.

I left the shack and thought what I should do next. Should I confront Foryn with the evidence, risking accusing an innocent man?
I decided to come clean with Foryn, I went back into his shack and explained the situation.

He didn’t even deny the accusations. Instead; he bragged about how he had stabbed that thieving Imperial son of a Mudcrab. When I asked him what he meant with that he said the same Thavere had told me; he believed Processus had raised the taxes so he could take some for himself. I shook my head and said that wasn’t a reason to kill him.
‘So you’re on their side? Then you’re my enemy,’ he roared. Before I could even defend myself, he attacked me. With his bare fists. I tried to convince him to give himself up, there was no need to get killed over it, he just got angrier and angrier. I had no choice but to defend myself and cut him down. It was either him or me. What was he thinking? Attacking someone armoured and armed with a sword? I guess my previous assessment was right; Foryn was stupid and sloppy.

Anyway; after the short, really, really short, “fight” I found plenty evidence on his body.
I found a ring Thavere had described as being Processus’, a taxrecord and tow hundred Drakes. Combined with the dagger and the bloody rag, there could be no doubt; Foryn had killed Processus and had made it look like he was plainly robbed.

Ergalla wasn’t happy with the news but was relieved the mystery had been solved and rewarded me with five hundred drakes. I was dumbstruck. Five hundred drakes, that was more gold I had ever seen in one place and now, I was carrying it. I felt really good about myself and decided to spend some. I headed to Arrille’s, had a king’s meal, bought some more supplies and a mortar and pestle he had for sale. Finally I could do something with the samples I had gathered the previous day. The problem was, I hadn’t a clue where to start. I needed a place where I could practise undisturbed. Then it hit me; I could use Foryn’s shack. At least for a while.

I cleared out all of Foryn’s stuff and dug another grave. It all reminded on his foolish actions and mine resulting in having to end his life. It didn’t really help to wipe the guilty feeling but at least I had some space to store my own goods I had acquired. For a while, I just laid in the hammock contemplating what I should do next but mostly doing nothing at all.
Few hours later I got off my lazy butt and tried out my newest acquisition, the mortar and pestle.
I dug up all the samples, which were all clogged together, seperated the most identifiable from the mess and started grinding them into a pulp. Did I say identifiable? What I meant was: the ingredients that weren’t completely un-identifiable. Not that I had idea what those were anymore but that hardly spoiled the fun.
After some mashing and grinding I did what I saw my mother do all those years ago, I added water to the brown, goowy substance, poured it into an empty bottle and drank it.

edit: a crab is hardly a honoured user
mALX
This is where I first started loving Rales story !!
Olen
Ah you've discovered the joy's of chorrol's rude word filter chaging words to random other ones. smile.gif

I like this piece, your style is very fresh and readable and the character quite likeable. It moves well and has lots of personality. Saying that I would like to see a little more characterisation, it's there in his actions but I don't feel like I really know him. Though maybe that's me being impatient seeing as you are doing a good job of it through his actions (which is difficult).

Nice piece.
Remko
Thank you for the comments. Nice to see my work's being appreciated. Having said that, here's another.
@Olen:I'd like to think Rales' character will show through more and more as the story progresses.
The rude word filter had me change a part I wasn't happy with at all. The word I used wasn't just a word but a common proverb that now lacks punch..... ah well.


The moment the awful tasting, lumpy liquid passed my throat, I knew it had been a huge mistake. Besides tasting awful it affected me beyond anything I ever thought possible. I felt weak in my knees, felt hot and cold at the same time and wanted to retch up what I had in my stomach. I stumbled outside, emptied my stomach in the swamp, managed to haul my sorry backside back inside and curled up for days only reaching out to have a drink of water. That was the only thing I managed to keep inside.

The good thing about the debacle was that I had some time to think about how stupid I had been. Apparently, there was more to alchemy than just throwing some random ingredient together and mashing it to a pulp. If I didn’t want to kill myself with whatever next poison I’d contrive, I was going to need help.



Day 4

Two days later, I emerged the shack a wiser and very pale-looking Dunmer. The poison I had willingly drank had left me drained and weakened. Fargoth commented I didn’t look too well.
I snapped at him that I bloody well knew and that he should leave me alone. In hindsight I really felt bad biting the poor fellow’s head off and promised myself I’d make it up with him when I felt like myself again.
Arrille was worried too. I explained him what happened. He had the courtesy not to laugh at me although his lips were twitching. I could tell he was holding it back and would probably break out in laughter as soon as I’d leave. I couldn’t care less, I was starving yet still feeling quite miserable. I bought some light food and a large pitcher with crystal-clear water and went upstairs to have a quiet breakfast.

A chance to make it up with Fargoth came faster than I thought. A huge Nord who introduced himself as Hrisskar wanted me to persuade Fargoth into revealing his secret hiding spot. He promised me I could keep a third of whatever turned up.
I told him I’d consider it. Between you and me; that was a blatant lie, the dumb Nord fell for it however.
I never told Fargoth about the scheme, in my opinion the simpleton didn’t need to know people were out to steal his gold.
Someone once told me: what one doesn’t know doesn’t hurt one. That was certainly the case here.

The next few days I ventured out farther than before, further exploring the bittercoast region and decided to have a look at the cave slighty north of town, past the stiltstrider port. The locals had told me it was a smuggler’s cave and someone should put at an end to the illegal practises there. After having been the bane of all the mudcrabs in the area I figured I had enough practice to face more serious competition. Feeling exceptionally brave that day I entered the cave, Addamasartus.
I should’ve brought a torch…

‘Die N’wah!’ That was hardly a friendly greeting if I ever heard one. I readied my sword and prepared for the worst.
A single Dunmer woman attacked me. She didn’t close in, the cowardly wench was shooting arrows at me. Before I knew what going on an arrow lodged itself into my upperleg. I broke off the arrow’s shaft., causing me to howl in pain and moved in as quick as I could with my sore leg.
I think my opponent hadn’t thought I was going to be so determined because as soon as I closed the gap she hardly defended herself and I struck her down with relative ease. Luckily she had a potion on her, conveniently labeled as a healing potion, as well as a some lock-picks, a probe and some arrows.
I wasn’t sure what else I would encounter so I kept the potion for later.

The cave contained two more smugglers, I managed to sneak up on the first and ended his smuggling career with a single arrow in his throat. Ofcourse, that spoiled the surprise for his comrade. Soon, spells were singing by at an alarming rate, barely missing me.
I returned the favour by shooting some arrows in his general direction. I was in luck, I could hear him yelping when one my arrows struck goal and for a few brief moments the spells ceased allowing me to close the gap on him and finish him off with having to take only one shockblast to the chest. It took me a while to shrug off the spasm-inducing spell but the loot I found in the cave had been worth the spasms and the arrow to the leg.

A shockspell to the chest wasn’t the biggest shock I had to face that day.
Underneath a boardwalk I found the door the key I found on the spellcaster’s body fitted to. What I saw there almost made me gag. Three very skinny Khajiiti resided in a far too small pen were, obviously, forced to live in their own filth. The moment I limped into the slave-pen all of them shied away and held their arms above their head to shield themselves. I could see why. All had fresh crusts of blood in their dirty fur, indicating they had been severely mistreated. It almost brought a tear to my eyes.
I had known slavery still existed in Morrowind but this was inhumane.
Unlocking the slavebracers from the, now most grateful and not so scared anymore, cats I solemnly vowed to free any slave I’d encounter. I didn’t care one bit slavery wasn’t illegal, this had to stop.

On the way back to Seyda Neen, I downed the healing potion. I couldn’t stand the burning pain the arrow-head, still lodged in my leg, caused anymore. The greenish concoction was bitter to the taste but it tasted a lot better than the vile liquid I had brewed. Better yet; the pain dissipated and miraculously the arrow-head, with a short piece of shaft still attached, popped out. A small scar was the only indication of the arrow that had been there. I sighed in relieve
Winter Wolf
I like the style of Rales. He commits manslaughter then spends the next two days living in the shack. So much for fleeing the scene!!

Looks like he also needs a shovel. With the amount of bodies he is leaving around Seyda Neen there will not be many left soon. tongue.gif

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spells were singing by at an alarming rate

I smiled at that.

A fun and very enjoyable read. smile.gif
haute ecole rider
Wonderful to re-read this again.

The bit about the alchemy was just as funny this time around as it was the first time I read it! He he!
Zalphon
Amazing work, Sare--Rale--Remko! I got it right! smile.gif
mALX
I am so glad you are bringing Rales here, and I can't wait till you catch it up !!!!!! I am dying to hear about Zerina at the Tourney (or will you cover that? ARGH !!!)
Destri Melarg
All praise must be due to Azura because whether it's drinking poison or rushing into the midst of a smuggler's den, it is a wonder that Rales survives his leap before you look attitude.
SubRosa
I am finally getting the time to start reading more. Rales is such fun to catch up on! Little things like this:

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I could hardly believe my pointy ears at that time.


really make him come alive.


Edit:

Okay, I finally caught up. It is so much fun to go back to the start and get reacquainted with Rales again.

This is so Rales!
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I remember being horrified when a rock I momentarily sat on to catch my breath grew a pair of vicious pincers, legs and a head.
The foul creature pinched my left thigh, I cut off its legs and pincers. Fair deal I’d say.


Important safety tip below!
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Apparantly, there was more to alchemy than just throwing some random ingredient together and mashing it to a pulp.
Oh, and that is spelled "Apparently"


This is a good piece of writing here:
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I snapped at him that I bloody well knew and that he should leave me alone. In hindsight I really felt bad biting the poor fellow’s head off and promised myself I’d make it up with him when I felt like myself again.

The reason I say that is because it shows Rales is not perfect. Instead he is a real person, loses his temper sometimes, and snaps at people when he should not.
Remko
Arrille was far from amused when I dropped the goods I had taken from the crates in the smuggler’s cave on his counter. He said he wasn’t buying the moon-sugar from me and that I needed to get rid of the substance before he’d do business with me. Ah, so that’s what the strange satchels were. I had heard of moon-sugar but had no idea what it looked like. I shrugged, put all the goods back in my bag, bid Arrille a good night with a smile and returned to the shack. I was tired anyway, selling the goods could wait to the next day.
I stuffed a Kwama egg and some bread in large chucks in my mouth, flushed it away with some water and went to bed early.


Day 5

The sun hadn’t even come up when I awoke. Surprisingly enough, Arrille was awake as well. I sold him all my redundant goods, had a hearty breakfast and headed out into the wild. I didn’t plan on returning for days.
I was traveling light, I had brought my sword, the bow and arrow, some food, a sleeping bag and some dry clothes.

The following days I spent exploring most of the bittercoast region. Halfway the first day I noticed a beautifully crafted stone arch over a sturdy wooden door into a mountain.
A sign told me it was the Samarys ancestral tomb. There’s a first time for everything and this was the first ancestral tomb I had ever seen. Or been into for that matter. Praying to the ancestors to forgive me for what I was about to do, I opened the door and entered the tomb.

To be honest, the place gave me the creeps. More than once I considered turning around and head back home but every time I crushed those instincts asking myself where my sense of adventure had gone. Surely, I wasn’t a coward?

My sense of adventure got me into trouble as soon as I opened the door that had been trapped. Again, I was punished for my lack of attention. I noticed the trap too late and ended up with another scar.

As I proceeded farther into the tomb, something straight from a nightmare screeched and attacked. A collection of bare, white bones wrapped in a rag floated towards me with obvious malicious intent. The first spell hit me when I was still frozen in fear. Ever sat too close to a campfire? Well, this spell felt like I was sitting in a campfire. My entire skin burned. The good thing about it was that it brought me back to my senses and started hacking at the bones with my sword.
A few well-placed slashes and the bones scattered throughout the entire room. Actually quite amusing, if only the damn thing hadn’t hurt me so much.

The whole tomb was infested with bony things. I was a bit more careful throughout the rest of the tomb. The first bony - that’s what I was calling them - had taught me an expensive lesson. First; carefully look out for enemies and only then barge into a room. It saved my hide several times with taking out the other bonies in the tomb.
I had something to show for when I emerged the tomb dusty, tired and bleeding from more than one gash, though.
In a chest next to what appeared to be an ash-pit, the remainder of what I presumed were the ashes of the departed Samarys ancestors, I had found a really expensive looking ring.
It felt a bit like theft taking it but, then again, they shouldn’t have left such a nice trinket for anyone to take. Or perhaps that was the reason why the bonies were there, as guard? Nah…..
Shaking the guilt, I slid the ring around my right index-finger and marvelled on how good it looked.

Besides looking good, the ring was enchanted with a powerful spell as well. As soon as I put the ring around my finger, I could feel a positive tingle throughout my entire body.
I wasn’t sure but I felt more determined and more focused, like everything would be easier to achieve and comprehend.

The rest of the days of my exploration trip were hardly noteworthy. I went through some more caves, where I encountered bandits, smugglers, slaves and slavers, bonies and other undead things, bagging me some potions, weaponry, scrolls, food and had gained extensive experience using my weapons.
Having exhausted my arrows, most of my useful food, not having any more dry clothes and a soaking sleeping bag from the rain the last night outside, I headed back to Seyda Neen, back home.


Chapter 2: Blades

Day 9

I woke up, feeling well-rested in the safe confines of Foryn’s shack. It had felt exceptionally good sleeping in something more resembling a bed rather than the cold hard ground I had slept on the previous days.
When I put foot outside, it was raining, turning the soil in Seyda Neen to greasy mud, another downside of being situated amongst swamps I presumed. I ploughed through the mud to Arrille’s with the intent of selling the goods I had found on my trip the last few days. I’m sure there never had been anyone in this run-down town having more gold in his pocket than I did that day after selling it all.

Grinning contendedly I encountered a sad looking Imperial, called Vodunius Nuccius. I had seen him a few days ago, thinking nothing of it but he was still looking miserable. Something had to be wrong.
When I asked him he said he was sick and tired of this lousy town. He had had enough of this wretched province and wanted to go home but he couldn’t because he had squandered his money on a ring sold to him but now he was stuck with what he called a cursed ring.

His plan had been to earn some gold on what he thought to be a profitable deal but it turned out he had been scammed. Yes, the ring would enhance your stamina but the Redguard trader hadn’t mentioned it would also drain your life. No-one wanted to buy the ring so now he couldn’t afford the trip back to Cyrodiil anymore. He couldn’t remember the trader’s name unfortunately.

I felt bad for the poor Imperial. So I offered to buy the ring from him, I had plenty of gold and was sure I had a use for the ring. If only to dump it in the nearest swamp, which I, obviously, didn’t do but I did consider it. If only for a short while.
His face beamed when he finally got rid of the cursed ring, I handed him his gold and wished him a good trip back home.
‘Thank you, friend! I will never forget it,’ he shouted over his shoulder while running towards the docks. That was the last I ever saw of him. I hope he got home safe.
I rested throughout that day and prepared my trip for the following one.

Day 10

I got up early, I had packed my belongings I thought I was going to need before I had gone to bed, grabbed a quick bite and headed off to the stiltstrider-port north of town.
The rain of the previous day had dispersed, a watery sun was coming up. The surrounding swamps were shrouded in a dense, low-hanging, eery mist. Dew was trapped on the spiders’ webs between the trees, making it look like a ghostly veil. I remember just standing there for a while, in awe of the beautiful scenery.

The stiltstrider driver greeted me with a warm smile, she had been a friend of Vodunius and had heard of how I had helped him.
‘Where would you like to go?’ she asked. ‘I’ll make you a special price.’
‘To Balmora please.’ I replied with a smile.

The trip was calm, I found riding a stiltstrider really relaxing although somewhat icky, considering you were seated in the hollowed-out body of a huge bug.
I didn’t even start to fathom how the driver got the bug to go where she wanted.
All I could tell, she was pulling some sort of strings. I found out much later those strings were in fact the animal’s nerves.

The town of Balmora was gorgeous. In my eyes, it could measure up to the Imperial City. It even had a tower. Taking it all in, the first few hours I spend wandering through town gawking at everything, like a tourist. To be honest, I got lost but that doesn’t really matter if you have no particular place to go.
What was strange was that everywhere I looked crates, urns and baskets were standing outside. Even stranger was that nobody minded them and I could take from them whatever I wanted.

The first crate I opened, I did cautiously. There was a guard, entirely covered in an armour made from a material I had never seen before. To me, it looked like an insect’s exoskeleton and made the guard look very formidable. Not someone I’d fancy getting into a fight with.
I opened the lid, the guard said nothing. Slowly I put my hand in the crate, still the guard didn’t react.

It would appear the crates were no-one’s because when I took all the goods from the crate, nobody objected. Not even the guard, two steps away from me.
I shrugged and emptied all the containers I could find from useful goods.
By the time I was finished, it was getting dark and my bag was bulging with everything I had gathered. Even some gold coins. Now, who in his right mind would leave gold for the proverbial dogs?
Wandering around some more I eventually returned to where I had entered Balmora, the trader’s district nearby the stiltstrider.

I sold most goods I had found in the crates to Ra’Virr, a friendly Khajiit trader.
He tried to sell me a Daedric weapon but when I pointed out they weren’t Daedric but plain weapons carrying an enchantment, he quickly acknowledged I was right.
Still, I could see they would be very useful. I didn’t know much, but I knew swords.
Unfortunately, they were far beyond anything I could afford so I stuck with the blade I had found on Tarhiel’s body and continued my search for a place to sleep.

There was the option of taking the stiltstrider back to Seyda Neen but that meant I would arrive deep in the night. I aimed to spend the night here, in Balmora.
A local Nord woman pointed me towards a place to stay the night, called the Eight Plates. She told me not to expect too much but according to her the food was allright and the beds soft and as a bonus, not really expensive either.
Just what I was looking for.



haute ecole rider
Good work!

Rales's musings about the crates and urns highlights one of the most ridiculous things I ever saw in Oblivion (obviously in Morrowind, too) - the amount of perfectly good stuff left in "unowned" containers, even gold! Yours for the taking! Sheesh!

I admit it makes survival easier when I can collect repair hammers, lockpicks and gold coins every few days. Food too, if my character actually got hungry. biggrin.gif
mALX
Yeah Rales! Now hurry up and go meet Zerina !!!!! Lol.
Zalphon
I felt there, Rales...Sarethi...No it's Remko, right?
Remko
@Zalphon. Hehe, you're right, Rales is an extension of my very own personality. Even the names Rales isn't something I grabbed from thin air. Rales Sarethi is the exact same amount of letters as my own full name. Although I only figured out last week that Rales is also a nasty physical condition....
mALX I'll increase the size of the posts to get there faster, ok? wink.gif
Hauteecole Rider: That's something I couldn't resist taking the piss out of smile.gif Just like the very first sentence of day 5. I am glad they adressed the 24/7 openess of shops in Morrowind. Although it is convenient smile.gif I guess the convenience store was actually invented in Vvardenfell. biggrin.gif

Day 11

The next morning I decided it was a good day to search out Caius Cosades and get rid of whatever it was Selles Gravius had given me to deliver at Caius.
After asking around, I found out his house was in the poorest district of town, the north-eastern part.

Not knowing what to expect, I knocked on what was apparantly Caius’ house and waited for a reply. An elderly voice said I could come in. I was greeted by a balding Imperial man, only wearing trousers. Something smelled familiar in his messy house but I couldn’t put my finger on it. Untill I started looking around that was. I saw familiar satchels, empty bottles and a pipe underneath his bed. The man was a Skooma addict!

‘You have a package for me I presume?’ he asked me.
‘Possibly,’ I responded. ‘After you tell me how you knew that.’
He smiled mysteriously and said it was his job to know.
This didn’t sound like a in-coherent addict at all. There was something in his eyes, something sharp that made me think maybe his addiction was a cover. But for what?
Since the old man already knew I decided it wouldn’t do harm handing him the package - after all, it was destined to him anyway.

Caius briefly went through the contents of the package – I couldn’t see what it was – he looked me over a bit and asked me if I was ready to accept orders from him. Again, orders. Thinking that nothing is for free, not even a prison realease, and that I didn’t have a job yet, I might as well accept. It sounded exhilarating as well.

‘Good,’ he said and then proceeded to swear me into what he called the Blades - the secret Imperial intelligence agency. So that’s what the cover was for. The man in front of me was his Imperial Majesty’s spy-master.
‘Intelligence? Then what am I doing here?’ I joked.
He frowned but didn’t answer.
Instead, he told me to practice my skills, buy some weapons and training or buy a pair of shoes for all he cared, handed me two hundred Drakes and said I should return when I felt up to the mission at hand.
Caius also taught me a secret hand-signal with which fellow Blades could recognise each other.
‘Oh, and get a job, you’ll need some sort of cover. I’d advise you to join a guild,’ he pointed out just before I left.

***

Joining the Fighter’s Guild didn’t really appeal to me. If it was anything like in Cyrodiil – and why wouldn’t it? - it would be just a glorified name for a bunch of mercenaries. A place with swords for hire and where every life was counted in gold - as in how much would anyone pay to end someone else’s life.
I needed – no, wanted – something more glorious, something honourable. I wanted to make a difference. I wanted to help people, not simply smyth them with a piece of iron with a pointy end.

Next to the fighter’s guild was the guild of mages. It occurred to me that if I wanted help with my alchemy, this would be the place to find it.
Ranis Athrys, the head of the Balmora guild, told me to talk to Ajira I I wanted to be instructed in the art of alchemy.
I could find her downstairs, all I had to do was follow my nose towards the foul odour.
I wasn’t sure whether she was referring to Ajira or to her potions.

Ajira was more than willing to help an aspiring alchemist out. For a fee obviously.
I doubt she would’ve been as helpful if she had known what she got herself into.
She was shocked when she asked me to give her the ingredients I had collected so we could start with lesson one. She shoved all my ingredients into a bin underneath her desk saying the ingredients were useless. All of the properties of the ingredients had been corrupted by throwing them together. Made sense if you thought about it – which I hadn’t.

She took some fresh ingredients from a drawer in her desk. I could see she had each ingredient in separate small pots, neatly labeled with name and properties.
Ofcourse she had me pay for the ingedients. The next thing she did was hand me bundle of small satchels. Seeing my puzzled face she said they were to store collected ingedients while out in the wild. ‘Or would you prefer to carry a desk with you,’ she asked with a semi-serious face.
She had me pay for the satchels as well. It was a small price to pay to prevent another disaster that had happened on my first alchemy try.

The next thing was to learn the properties of plants available in Vvardenfell.
When I asked Ajira how she knew and kept them apart, she pulled a huge book from a cupboard behind her with all plants, other ingredients and its major properties. For now, I was allowed to use the book to find plants with similar properties that would together create a certain effect. But if I wanted to become an efficient alchemist, it would be advisable memorising the most important ones.
‘Do you have the necessary apparatuses?’
Proudly I dug up the mortar and pestle from my bag and put it on the desk in front of me.
‘Where’s the rest?’
‘The…. rest?’ I hadn’t a clue what she meant.
‘Yes, the rest. Calcinator, alembic and retort.’
‘I- I don’t have those.’
More expenses, my gold was drying up fast. Anyway, after buying the additional required apparatuses we continued. Of course only then Ajira said I didn’t really need the additional tools but they would help making better and stronger potions.

The Khajiit alchemist had me starting with preparing a basic potion with only the mortar and pestle. The use of other tools would be adressed in the next lessons.
She told me to find the ingredients to make a relatively simple potion that would restore fatigue and gave me some useful pointers to help me out. It didn’t take me long to seek out the necessary ingredients in the book: a Kwama egg and a loaf of bread. There are plenty more but those are amongst the ones most common. Making the potion however, was a different matter altogether. It took me ages to get it right. I added too much water, not enough water, cooked it too hot or too cold. Too much of this or not enough of that. I was really starting to lose my temper when finally I got it right. I had made a useful potion, one I wasn’t afraid of drinking without poisoning myself.

Eating the ingedients would have the same effect but would be far less effective than with a concentrated potion, she said. But would taste far better. We had quite some laughs over the afternoon. I always enjoyed the company of the Cat-folk. They are uncomplicated, usually friendly and have a wonderful sense of humour. Many of my child-time friends had been Khajiit. I guess that’s why I was so shocked in Addamasartus.

At the end of the day, my alchemy skill had increased greatly. I knew (well, in theory) how to make the most practical potions and already had memorised the main properties of some of the most common ingredients. Ajira told me most ingredients have more than one effect but only the more skilled alchemist knew which those were, how to recognise them and that I should forget about experimenting with those for a while, unless I had a serious deathwish. She also warned me that I had been lucky that I hadn’t killed myself with the poison I had made in Seyda Neen. It could have been far worse than the effects I had encountered.

Chapter 3: Rings

Day 12

Straying through the, now almost empty, streets of Balmora I was growing restless.
Caius had said I should find a job at a guild. I had already decided the fighter’s guild wasn’t what I wanted. I considered the guild of mages but I sincerely doubted I was mages guild material. Sure, I enjoyed dabbling with alchemy, especially now I - more or less - knew what I was doing but spending hours and hours researching a spell didn’t sound very exciting.

No, if I truly wanted to make a difference and help people, I needed to find something else. Since I had put myself on the, in my eyes, noble path of freeing slaves I thought I’d join the legion. I knew for a fact that in Cyrodiil, where I had grown up, the people frowned upon slavery and as such, as its defender, so did the Imperial Legion.
The Moonmoth Legion, south-east of Balmora didn’t need anymore recruits but the Legion’s commander, Radd Hard-Heart, mentioned the Gnisis Deathshead Legion might be looking for recruits.

Gnisis wasn’t really around the corner. It would be a several day walk or half a day with the stiltstrider. I decided on half-way. I took the stiltstrider to Ald-Ruhn and proceeded by foot to Gnisis after asking some directions. I wanted to see my birth-land, what better way than crossing it on foot?

It was on the third day of my journey that I came across a crying Breton lady.
She explained her ring had slipped from her finger into the small pond nearby when she was taking a drink from the sweet, clear water. When I asked her why she couldn’t retrieve it herself she told me she was a dancer and needed to get to Gnisis and couldn’t afford getting her hair wet. It had taken her hours to get it just right. I could see why, she looked absolutely stunning. I prayed she didn’t notice I was staring.

‘Lady,’ I said confidently, ‘don’t cry, I’ll find your ring.’
I stripped myself from my armour and clothes to my loincloth and dove into the pond. Even with the clearness of the water, it took me nearly two hours finding her ring.
Triumphant, I surfaced holding out the ring only to have an arrow swooshing by, just missing my left ear.
As fast as I could, I moved away from the pond towards the pile with my weapons and clothing while keeping my head down.

Synette, the Breton dancer screamed that she wanted the fancy ring on my finger and said if I didn’t hand it over her friend would put some holes in me and take it from my lifeless body. I shook my head and told her she couldn’t have it. I had almost reached my weapons, slowly I moved my hand behind me to reach out for my sword. Cleverly I managed to keep the dancer between me and where I suspected the hidden archer to be.

Out of seemingly nowhere, Synette pulled a dagger and jabbed at me. I managed to avoid the blade by letting myself fall backwards and grabbed my sword and bag at the same time. I was well aware I was unarmoured, if I wanted to get out of this alive I would have to be clever. I knew if I’d face the two women at the same time with only a sword, they’d have me for breakfast.

I scrambled back on my feet and ran to a cave I had passed about half an hour before I encountered the lovely Breton and her mysterious friend. Even though she had lunged at me with a deadly weapon, I still thought she was pretty and I didn’t really want to end her and her friend’s life. Surely, there would be another way that didn’t result in either having to hand over my ring or with me or them ending up dead?

Luckily for me, the ladies had lost my track and I was safe for a while. Ruffling through my bag I dug up a pair of invisibility potions I had found a few days ago. Knowing the inherent problems with invisibility, Ajira had explained any action would cancel the effect immediately, I exited the cave after having rested for a while and headed back to my armour. I just hoped the effect would last long enough to reach my armour and the rest of my weapons unseen.

My plan worked. I managed to reach my stuff, quickly grabbed it all, drank the second potion and ran back to where I had hidden before so I could put on my armour in safety.
Armed and ready and quite frankly; rather pissed off, I figured it was time for a talk with a pair of misguided girls.

Unfortunately for her, Synette was prettier than she was clever. She attacked me, again. With me being fully armoured. ‘It’s not too late,’ I warned her. ‘Put down your cutlery and I will put down mine.’ Her uncertainty was reflected in her beautiful eyes and they kept darting off to a place behind me. Towards the hidden archer’s position I assumed.

There wasn’t an arrow stuck in my back yet, meaning maybe the fight could be diverted. I heard a clang of a weapon being dropped behind me. Focusing my attention to the Breton in front of me I saw tears welling up in her eyes while she dropped her weapon as well. I lowered my sword.
‘If you want, I can escort you back to civilisation,’ I offered.
She said that wouldn’t be necessary, the girls were capable of taking care of themselves.
I gave Synette her ring back and wished the girls all the best.
‘Look me up if you are ever in Gnisis.’
‘I will,’ I responded and continued my path to fort Darius.
SubRosa
Rales is also Laser...

It has been a lot of fun re-reading the beginning of Rales. He is such a fun character. There are so many "Hey, I do that too!" moments I come across while reading. Like rooting through all of the barrels and crates for loot.

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The trip was calm, I found riding a stiltstrider really relaxing although somewhat icky, considering you were seated in the hollowed-out body of a huge bug.
I didn’t even start to fathom how the driver got the bug to go where she wanted.
All I could tell, she was pulling some sort of strings. I found out much later those strings were in fact the animal’s nerves.

ewwwww!


I loved this:
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I could find her downstairs, all I had to do was follow my nose towards the foul odour.
I wasn’t sure whether she was referring to Ajira or to her potions.

rollinglaugh.gif

nits:
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Ofcourse only then Ajira said I didn’t really need the additional tools but they would help making better and stronger potions.

Looks like a Cliffracer ate the space between Of course.

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Put down your cutlary and I will put down mine.

That is cutlery.
haute ecole rider
I enjoyed the alchemy lesson. I had to laugh at the way Rales's gold was trickling away from him during the lesson! Just like college - the tuition's only the start! Then you gotta pay room & board, buy books, get your own lab safety gear, etc, etc! He he!

Olen
Good stuff. I like the informal fun style. You really catch morrowind to, the sense of exploration and alienness of some things. Nice and smoothly written too.

apparatuses - I found this a bit odd, it is strictly correct so perhaps it's just my accent but I've allways used apparatus as an uncountable noun. Just jarred me a bit really.

Nice stuff, I'm interested to see how joining the legion goes.
Zalphon
You're scaring the other writers, Rales... You're making us feel inferior!
Destri Melarg
I love the way you are able to move the story forward, from Balmora to Gnisis in less than two paragraphs. Even the Mages Guild is hard pressed to transport people that quickly. I also like the touch of the hand signal that Blades use to recognize each other.

And this:
QUOTE(Remko @ Mar 22 2010, 11:18 AM) *

Even though she had lunged at me with a deadly weapon, I still thought she was pretty. . .

is what we all love about Rales.
Remko
QUOTE(Olen @ Mar 22 2010, 09:40 PM) *

Good stuff. I like the informal fun style. You really catch morrowind to, the sense of exploration and alienness of some things. Nice and smoothly written too.

apparatuses - I found this a bit odd, it is strictly correct so perhaps it's just my accent but I've allways used apparatus as an uncountable noun. Just jarred me a bit really.

Nice stuff, I'm interested to see how joining the legion goes.

Thanks you for the praise! I wanted to write a fan-fic that MW fans immediately recognised. I think I've succeeded in that.

AFAIK apparatuses is correct. Saw it spelled like that on the UESP too. Perhaps the "-es" is silent that's why you never noticed wink.gif


Chapter 4: Legionnaire

Day 17

Two days after my run-in with the ladies at the pond, I arrived in Gnisis and proceeded to the fort. The “fort” was hardly more than a wall into a mountain with some beds and a storage room and it was utterly devoid of soldiers and activity.
I was in the wrong place. I wandered through Gnisis and noticed soldiers entering and exiting a large building. Thinking that must be the barracks, I entered the building and started asking around.
The Legion’s commander, General Darius was to be found in the Madach tradehouse, in the center of town, an Orc legionnaire told me.

I left the barracks and headed off to the tradehouse. The place was bristling with people. I made some short inquiries by just mentioning his name:’Darius?’
‘Downstairs and straight ahead,’ the proprietor told me.

Politely I introduced myself to an Imperial clad in gold-coloured armour, his stature and armour were indication enough to me this would be the Legion’s commander, and stated I wanted to join the legion.
‘Do you think you have what it takes to represent and uphold the honour of the Empire,’ he asked me.
‘Yes sir,’ I firmly answered.
‘Well then, recruit. Report in with Optio Bologra for your uniform and return to me for orders.’
I saluted as I had seen the Legion do in Cyrodiil, wheeled around on my heels and marched to the barracks for my uniform.

‘So, you’re back,’ the same Orc I had spoken to earlier, rumbled in their typical way.
I nodded and said the General had ordered me to get my uniform from Optio Bologra.
‘That would be me, drillmaster Optio Bologra,’ Optio said and handed me an Imperial ring-mail cuirass.
‘Now, get out of here. Report with the General.’
‘Yes drillmaster!’

‘Why are you not in your uniform?’ the General roared.
“I.. I euh..,’ I stumbled over my words. ‘I haven’t got around to it, General Sir,’ was the honest answer.
‘I’ll let it slip this time because you are a new recruit, but from now on you will wear your uniform at all times, understood recruit?’
‘Yes. Sir!’
As quick as I could I changed my light Chitin cuirass for the mail cuirass.
‘Now, are you ready for orders?’

Another yessir later I was briefed upon my mission.
I was to retrieve a land deed from a Dunmer woman who had lost her husband in the local eggmine.
The Legion needed the Zabdas land deed for an additional dock so the town could finally reached by ships and that I shouldn’t take “no” for an answer.
I could see it being useful to the Empire but I couldn’t help but thinking bullying a widow out of her land didn’t seem honourable at all. Had I made a mistake joining the Legion?
I put my prejudice aside and decided to investigate on it first before expressing my opinion.

Widow Zabdas’ house was just west out of town. It didn’t take me long to reach the location.
The area was lovely, it was nearby a river and the surrounding pastures were green and lush. Several Guars were grazing happily on the fields.
The calmness of the area was highly in contrast to my state of mind. I really wasn’t happy with my mission. I swallowed a lump in my throat and knocked on the door.
‘Go away,’ was what I got.
‘Muthsera Zabdas, I wish to speak to you concerning your husband.’
‘Will it take long?’
‘No, not really.’
‘Well, allright then. Come in.’

She opened the door, offered me a seat and asked me to state my purpose for being here.
I explained the Legion had send me and that they wished to acquire her land. The Legion would provide her another place to live. I didn’t know if they would but if there was some decency left, they would, I was sure. Ofcourse I didn’t tell her the General hadn’t mentioned an alternative house at all. There and then, I made up my mind that if the Legion wouldn’t, I’d take care of that myself.

‘First, the Legion murders my husband and then desires my land as well?’ She was furious.
‘Murdered?’ I murmered. The General hadn’t mentioned anything about a murder. ‘What do you mean?’
‘Yes, murdered,’ she yelled. ‘My husband was one of the most experienced miners around. I don’t believe for a second he had an unfortunate accident as that foul beast says. I will never, ever, relinquish my land,’ she spat.
I had obviously overstayed my welcome. I got up, greeted her politely and walked back to the tradehouse with a heavy heart. I was torn between my duty towards the Legion and my own personal feeling of right and wrong. How was I going to explain this to the General?

The General turned out to be a lot more understanding than I could have ever hoped.
When I briefed him with what widow Zabdas had told me, Darius ordered me to investigate the miner’s death and complimented me on being discrete. He could see a bright future for me with the Legion, he concluded and dismissed me.
I can’t express how relieved I was. There was honour in the Legion after all!
The best place to start the investigation would be the eggmine, east of town.
Again, I was investigating a murder.

A short walk later I encountered a Dunmer guard outside the eggmine who said no-one was allowed to enter. When I told the guard I was here on Darius’ orders he unlocked the gate.
‘Just be careful, the Kwama queen has contracted a Blight-disease.’
At that time I had no idea what a Blight-disease was but I knew diseases so I took his advice to heart and thanked him for his warning.
I investigated the entire upper level of the mine and asked the workers what they knew or had seen. None of the workers knew anything and had seen just as much. I suspected one or two to be lying but I couldn’t prove it. There was nothing else to do for me but investigate further.

Had I known Kwama warriors were that territorial, I would’ve been more careful.
As soon as I set foot through the door into the lower level, lightning forks seared passed me, barely missing me. There were too many for me to handle so I raced past them. A bit farther, an Orc legionnaire barked at me to get out of this place and that I had ten seconds to do so. He was leaning leisurely on an axe the size of a small child and muscles, thick as boatropes, were flexing under his green skin. I muttered some excuse I can’t even remember and ran towards a door, leading even further down. Facing this Orc in battle would be my downfall, I was certain.

The moment I stepped through that door, I froze. An apparition, nearly transparant, floated above an underground river. I readied my sword and prepared for battle.
Slowly, the ghostly figure floated towards me but not in a threatening way at all.
From experience, I knew ghosts never came close, they kept their distance and flung nasty spells to you. This one didn’t. Instead, he started talking.

‘Have no fear, I won’t harm you. Listen to my tale and do as you will afterwards.’
I nodded briefly in agreement and the ghost continued:’My name is ….Zabdas, I was a miner here untill ill fate came upon me. A quarrel with a guard was my downfall.
The murderer’s axe is still lying with my broken body, proof that I was struck down innocently. Retrieve this axe, and let justice prevail so my weary soul can finally find peace.’ Upon his last words, the apparition moved to the side and pointed towards the underground river. I followed his lead an peered into the river. Underneath the surface I could see a corpse and an axe. Sofar, the ghost had spoken the truth.

It was too deep to dive into with my armour on, the weight would surely drag me drown and I’d die a horrible death.
To prevent such a gruesome fate, I undressed and left all my gear on the embankment and dove in to retrieve the axe. While I was under, I checked the corpse for proof as well. I didn’t find much although in the victim’s midsection an axe-wide wide gaping wound was a sign he had been struck down with an axe. Judging the depth of the wound, he had been struck hard. I suspected the poor fellow had died instantly.
The words the widow Zabdas had spoken arose violently.
‘As that foul beast says,’ she had concluded her rant. Had she meant the Orc in the other room?

Having found the proof I needed I scurried back to the tradehouse, past the ill-tempered Orc and the even worse tempered Kwama warriors.
‘This is Lugrub gro-Ogdum’s axe allright.’ The corners of Darius’ mouth turned downwards in a sad grimace.
‘How could he have betrayed the Legion? He is one of my finest,’ he murmured in a melancholic monologue.
Lifting his head he said:’Recruit, you will have to execute the traitor but do try to find out why he has betrayed his duty first.’
‘Yes Sir!’ I saluted and marched out his office without displaying any of my doubts about the mission I had received. How was I, a lowly recruit, going to defeat a highly revered legionnaire and one of the Legion’s finest warriors? Once more I had doubts about my choice joining the Legion. I needed to think this all through. In my own time. Hoping it wouldn’t be considered desertion, I left Madach tradehouse and Gnisis. I had enough of orders for a while.
mALX
Remko...will you be bringing your Oblivion story over here too?
Zalphon
Excellent descriptions, Rales.
SubRosa
Rales joins the Legion! One thing I thought was lacking in Oblivion was that you could not join the legion there.

nits:
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the weight would surely drag me drown and I’d die a horriful death.

I think you are looking for the word horrible here.

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I didn’t find much although in the victim’s midsection a gaping clevege was a sign he had been struck down with an axe, and judging the depth of the wound, he had been struck hard.

I do not think you want the word cleavage here. In English it typically means the valley between a woman's breasts. You probably want something more like rent, or hole.
It is also a very long sentence. You might consider breaking it into two sentences, like this:
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I did not find much, although in the victim’s midsection a gaping rent was a sign he had been struck down with an axe. Judging the depth of the wound, he had been struck hard.
Remko
SubRosaI never realised the word cleavage is never associatiated with weapons. Strange that some weapons are called cleaver.. blink.gif Thanks!
@mALX1 Yeah, I guess I can do that. Yay, finally a reason to start working on that again as well. biggrin.gif

Chapter 5: Feathers

Day 28

I wandered for days and days in a row. I didn’t record much of what happened, I had sunk far into dark thoughts and self-pity.
One event brought me back to reality. I stumbled into some cave, tired, hungry and wet. Nearby the entrance I sat myself down, went through my inventory, sharpened my weapons, repaired dings where necessary, mended my armour and slept for a while. My dream was haunted by visions of dead people, screaming Mer and a huge Orc trying to bash in my skull.
I woke up in a sweat because of a rumbling sound from deeper within the cave. I snuck farther into the dark hole to find out what it was that had awoken me.

I reached a ledge with a ladder into a pit. In the pit several bodies were strewn around some sort of green blob with arms and legs. The blob didn’t try scaling the ladders so I assumed it was too heavy, too big or both. Shocked, I realized how unnerving that assumption was. If this thing understood it was too heavy for the ladders, it also meant it was sentient, intelligent. I would have to take care not underestimating it.
Not really fancying taking this monster on up close I started with shooting lots and lots of arrows at it from a safe distance. It didn’t even notice the pinpricks.

When I unleashed all the spells I had on my repertoire on it, I only managed to anger the hideous thing and draw its attention to its assailant, yours truly. If this would take any longer I feared it might find a way out of the pit somehow. In a desperate attempt to get rid of the creature, I scaled down the ladder, slowly approached it and with all the strength I could muster hit it with my sword. Its thick, scaly skin deflected my sword easily. Spinning around it swung its hammer-sized fists in my direction. I managed to dodge the first one but was too slow to dodge a swing with its other fist. It hit me straight on the head, sending a spur of pain through my entire body. I could swear from that day I was about an inch shorter than before. It certainly felt that way.
There was no way I was going to be able to defeat this creature, I turned and ran.

The creature tried to follow me but somehow it managed to get itself stuck between the walls of the pit, the ladder and some crates - it wasn’t that intelligent after all - I got away from it safely and even had time to grab some of the goods the former occupants, the ones lying dead all around, had left behind. I also found some sort of meat I had never encountered before. It smelled strangely familiar, even though I had never seen meat with that specific colour before. I shrugged, took a satchel from my bag to preserve it and put the satchel with the meat into my bag. Maybe an experienced alchemist would recognise it.

After the encounter with that monster I had seen enough caves for a while. I headed north-east and explored the coastal area. I was made painfully aware my skills weren’t up to scratch. I lived on what I could find or hunt, slept in caves when it was raining and in the open field when it was dry. The following weeks, more times than I’d like to recall, I barely escaped a grisly death by the hands of creatures, bandits and by something conjured up in Oblivion and dropped into Vvardenfell.
Venturing deep into the ash-regions of Vvardenfell I heard a wailing sound but couldn’t pinpoint its origin. ‘Not another Bosmer,’ I amused myself by imagining the strangest of scenarios just to keep my mind from wandering into melancholy again.

Something resembling a bat, only bigger, smellier, equipped with a tail ending in a sharp end and a ferocious beak, had its mind set on having Dunmer for dinner. Its dinner was cold steel rather than warm Dunmer, the creature looked a lot tougher than it actually was. A stab and a slash had it falling to the ground. I plucked its tailfeathers and stuck it in my hair as a trophy. There was no-one as witness to how silly that must have looked. It was just one of those things to keep me occupied in the lonely wastelands called the Ash-region.

Deafeating a single one wasn’t the problem. I soon found out where there was one, there usually were more. A lot more. Finally, I had some target practice.
Swordplay had always been one of my strong points. Having been brought-up as a Redoran, I was trained with a longsword ever since I had been strong enough to carry one. Before that, I had been playing with a wooden sword.
That day, as I was cooking the flying rat’s meat above a fire, I just wished I had a better sword. The enchanted blade I had found was starting to loose its effectiveness, fighting that green blob made me painfully - literally - aware of that fact.

The weeks wandering around aimlessly, I had the chance and plenty of time to practise my marksman skill. Compared to my sword-fighting it was rather pitiful. I wasted arrow after arrow but after days of practicing, missing and retrieving arrows and running from enemies I couldn't even hope to defeat yet, slowly I was starting to hit my targets.
The flying horrors were soon dropping like flies – untill I ran out of arrows that was, and I was starting to look like a bird myself, with all the flying rats’ tailfeathers in my hair.
For their sake, I hope they reproduce fast, otherwise I wouldn't me surprise me if I had managed to wipe out the entire pests' population thoughout those weeks.

Day 40

There is always a huge down-side to wandering aimlessly through a land you have no or hardly any geographical knowledge about - you are bound to get lost. Well, so was I.
I had no idea where I was or where I was going. It was time to set myself a goal again, I needed better gear. Weeks ago, someone, I can’t remember her name, warned me about wandering into Daedric ruins. Unfriendly worshippers and even more unpleasantly tempered monsters usually occupied the ruins was the bottom-line of the warning. I threw the advice in the wind as soon as I came across a ruin of the sorts I had never seen. Towers with points, jagged edges of broken walls, apparantly aeons ago, and, as I was warned, crawling with creatures so terrible I almost ran.
The urge to find a better weapon got the better of me.
Curse my sense of adventure!

I got far more than I bargained for. Before I even got the chance to enter the shrine, I was assaulted by creatures I used to run away from as fast as I could. A waist high creature with what looked like a collar came running in at an alarming speed. I raised my shield and braced for impact.
I reaped the fruits of the exercise and the weeks of fighting enemy after enemy and managed to keep standing behind my shield. Frantically the creature tried to bludgeon my shield aside in an effort getting to me. Remembering what the master of arms had taught me, I used the creature’s mindless ferocity and strength against it. I prepared my sword and let the shield slip a little, just enough for the creature to break through and impale itself on my sword because of its own speed. Unfortunately, it was also more than the already battered old shield could take. After the fight it was beyond repair and I abandoned it.
The path into the shrine was clear.

Inside, I tried a different approach. Instead of barging in, banners raised, I snuck in, using the shadows to hide my presence. Before the residing worshippers were even aware of me, two Dunmer were lying mortally wounded on the ground, an arrow to the throat is just as effective against spellcasters as a silence spell.
The third was alarmed before I got a clean shot, I stepped on a loose rock revealing my location. These things usually happened when I tried to sneak up on someone, that’s why I usually never bothered.

Drawing my sword I ran at him howling a battle cry. Mid-air my attack ceased. A glow was emmitting from the Sorcerer’s hand, paralyzing me.
There was nothing I could do, I had no cure. I had to wait for the effect to wear off.
Several agonizing seconds passed as the sorceror cast spells at me.
Suddenly, my hands were free and I finished the attack ending with my sword lodged in the Dark Elf’s chest.
Still I hadn’t found a decent sword. Weren’t these ruins supposed to be swarming with Daedra wielding the best weapons?

Disappointed with my findings in the ruin so far, I grabbed the best next thing. On a bowl near a shrine of a really ugly guy’s statue I found some valuable gems.
Imagine my surprise when out of nowhere a warrior emerged wearing a black and red armour from hell and swinging the scariest looking sword I had ever seen. That’s what I was looking for. The only thing I had to do was kill its current owner.

What a battle that was. This guy knew what he was doing. Upon my standard attack - a overhead chop as a distraction, a quick sidestep and a slash to the midsection - he did the exact correct thing. He dodged the chop rather than blocking it so he was ready for the slash to his midsection. Most, lesser, swordfighters were caught off guard by this attack and were usually cut down with the slash. I remember grinning maniacally. This was what the master of arms had trained me for throughout my entire youth.

We blocked each others’ every attempt getting the upper hand in the battle. This was no fight, this was a dance, as deadly as a hidden viper and I never felt more alive than ever. The first miss-step would mean defeat and certain death for either of us.
I almost ended the fight with a quick lunge straight to his gut, just before my sword hit him, he ducked and rolled to the side, recoiled and brought up his sword diagonally across my chest. If I would have been impatient and immediately had stepped in not recognizing the trap, the thrust would’ve cut me in half. I could feel the air displacement from the blade on my face as it flashed by.

This was the opening I had waited on, I grabbed the iron dagger from between my belt with my free hand and rammed it between the creases of his armour, into his armpit. The Daedra dropped his sword and fell to his knees. I ended the dance cutting of his head with his own sword in a single swipe. I’d call that poetic justice.
mALX
I love that - poetic justice, lol. and YEAH! I love your Oblivion story too !!!!!!!!!
Remko
Several hours later, I continued my search through the shrine. I figured I might as well sweep the entire thing while I was there anyway. The containers in the shrine turned up quite a collection of enchanted trinkets, ingredients, some books that taught me some nice tricks and a pile of gold.
I just had the fight of my life and ended up with a huge treasure. What more could I want?

A Dunmer, clad in an armour blacker than the darkest of nights saw me before I saw him.
His hands lit up in a ominous glow and I faced a monster, devoid of skin and with bones protruding through its flesh. Worse yet, the fleshy beast threw spells at me.
I could feel the strength seeping from my already fatigued body. If I didn’t defeat it or its caster soon, I wouldn’t be able to move at all.
Digging into my own arsenal of scrolls I had collected, I cast a spell to temporarily increase my strength and cut down the monster. My new ebony blade came in handy, it cut through tissue and bones like it wasn’t even there.
The severed parts of the creature disappeared in a puff of smoke clearing the way for me to the conjurer.

The expression on his face flashed between fear and rage. Before he could gather himself and conjure up another of those awful beasts, I physically attacked him, forcing him to have to defend himself with steel. I smiled. After having crossed swords with the Dremora Lord, this was going to be a breeze. I don’t think he realised I was playing with him. My sword grazed his cheek, leaving a bloody trail; I jumped out of the way when he tried to hit me with his axe; kicked his legs from underneath him when he was too static and slammed my elbow into his nose when he did close in.

The far superior reach of my longsword was too much for him. Once more he tried to summon something but before he even had the chance I slashed at his hands which prevented him finishing the spell.
Deciding I had enough practice with my new sword, I dove underneath one of his slow desperate swipes and thrust my blade upward, through his chin and base of his skull and added his armour and his black and red Daedric axe to my collection.

Returning to the main level of the shrine, my eye caught a door I had previously missed. Carefully - the painful memory of the trapped door in the ancestral tomb was still somewhat fresh – I disarmed the trap and unlocked it.
Behind the door was a Redguard woman – Malexa - tied with rope. After having cut her free she told me she had been captured by cultist for some kind of heathen ritual. I ensured her the cultists wouldn’t be performing any kind of ritual soon. It took her a while to understand what I had meant. In fact; when we headed out of the shrine – I had promised her to return her to her husband, Sason, she had been travelling with – she suddenly burst out in laughter when she saw the first bloody corpse. Only there she understood what I had meant.
‘Suits them right,’ she hollered. ‘Are they all dead?’
I nodded, bringing a smile to her face.

Having a companion for a while was a nice change. Malexa turned out to be a member of the great house of Redoran. She even knew my cousin, Athyn, and that I could find him in Ald'ruhn. I wasn’t planning on visiting him yet – I wasn’t ready for that – but it was nice to know in advance. During the journey to re-unite the couple we talked about lots of small things. Some things I already knew but there was a lot I didn’t know. She told me of politics, religion and whatnot. She wouldn’t stop yapping, I didn’t mind at all.

I was highly interested when Malexa told me about the Tribunal. Of course, I had heard of the famous Three, it was part of the Redoran upbringing, but I had no idea they had been mortal before they ascended to god-hood. In return; I told her about my adventures and why I was wearing the feathers in my hair - I had forgotten about those - which amused her to no end.

Day 42

We found her husband the next morning after having spent the night underneath a high placed rock-ledge so we were safe from predators prowling the area. I loaned her my sleeping bag to keep herself warm. It nearly took an hour before my teeth stopped chattering with the cold after we woke up. She insisted on leaving right away. She didn’t want to waste time making a fire and having breakfast before setting off. I knew better than to argue with a lady, besides, she knew where to go.

Seeing the happy couple together again was heart-warming, yet, it also reminded me of how lonely I actually had been the last few weeks. I hadn’t seen a familiar soul ever since I had left Seyda Neen.
The swamp town was a dump, true, but it was the closest to what I could call home.
I longed for a friendly, familiar face.
Olen
Good update. I like this story, I think I said it last time but I'll say it again: this story is morrowind. It's more than just the setting and characters which bring bit of gameplay and the world to mind, the whole mindset and the pace and the descriptions are spot on and put me in mind of the game.

If I were to suggest anything I'd say a little more characterisation might be benificial, but that's just my taste (and me looking for something to say) as there's certainly a character there.

I might have to go and play Morrowind again when I have time.
SubRosa
You are right about the word "cleave" and its other forms: cloven, cleft, cleaving. They all mean to cut something in half. It is only specifically "cleavage" that refers to women's breasts. It is a reference to the cleft between a woman's breasts.

Like Olen, reading Rales makes me want to fire up Morrowind and play it. You write so true to the game, that I constantly find myself saying "I do that too!". I have probably said that before, but I think it bears repeating.

I really liked this line:
Its dinner was cold steel rather than warm Dunmer

This is so Rales:
On a bowl near a shrine of a really ugly guy’s statue
smile.gif



nits:
We blocked eachothers’
Looks like one of those Cliffracers ate the space between each other's.

Destri Melarg
Wow, every time I open this thread it seems that you have posted two new chapters! Excuse me while I check these two out. . .

QUOTE
Venturing deep into the ash-regions of Vvardenfell I heard a wailing sound but couldn’t pinpoint its origin. ‘Not another Bosmer,’ I amused myself by imagining the strangest of scenarios just to keep my mind from wandering into melancholy again.

biggrin.gif Hilarious!

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We blocked each others’ every attempt getting the upper hand in the battle. This was no fight, this was a dance, as deadly as a hidden viper and I never felt more alive than ever. The first miss-step would mean defeat and certain death for either of us.
I almost ended the fight with a quick lunge straight to his gut, just before my sword hit him, he ducked and rolled to the side, recoiled and brought up his sword diagonally across my chest. If I would have been impatient and immediately had stepped in not recognizing the trap, the thrust would’ve cut me in half. I could feel the air displacement from the blade on my face as it flashed by.

This was the opening I had waited on, I grabbed the iron dagger from between my belt with my free hand and rammed it between the creases of his armour, into his armpit. The Daedra dropped his sword and fell to his knees. I ended the dance cutting of his head with his own sword in a single swipe. I’d call that poetic justice.

What a battle! Action-packed and well described.

Destri Melarg
Wow, every time I open this thread it seems that you have posted two new chapters! Excuse me while I check these two out. . .

QUOTE
Venturing deep into the ash-regions of Vvardenfell I heard a wailing sound but couldn’t pinpoint its origin. ‘Not another Bosmer,’ I amused myself by imagining the strangest of scenarios just to keep my mind from wandering into melancholy again.

biggrin.gif Hilarious!

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We blocked each others’ every attempt getting the upper hand in the battle. This was no fight, this was a dance, as deadly as a hidden viper and I never felt more alive than ever. The first miss-step would mean defeat and certain death for either of us.
I almost ended the fight with a quick lunge straight to his gut, just before my sword hit him, he ducked and rolled to the side, recoiled and brought up his sword diagonally across my chest. If I would have been impatient and immediately had stepped in not recognizing the trap, the thrust would’ve cut me in half. I could feel the air displacement from the blade on my face as it flashed by.

This was the opening I had waited on, I grabbed the iron dagger from between my belt with my free hand and rammed it between the creases of his armour, into his armpit. The Daedra dropped his sword and fell to his knees. I ended the dance cutting of his head with his own sword in a single swipe. I’d call that poetic justice.

What a battle! Action-packed and well described.

Remko
DestrYou loved it that much you felt it necessary to repeat yourself? wink.gif If that isn't a compliment, I don't know what is laugh.gif


Chapter 6: Alchemist

Sason and Malexa were heading to the town Ald Veloth. Since I had decided to go home, I offered to trot along.
Walking all the way back to the south from all the way up north was not my idea of fun. From Ald Veloth it was only a short jump to Gnisis and from there I could go anywhere easily enough by stiltstrider.

The Redguard couple was more than happy to have me as company. With me around, they were sure to arrive safely. Sason offered to carry some of my gear. After the raid on the Daedric shrine, I could barely carry it all out so the offer was more than welcome. Swapping the mail cuirass for the ebony one I took from the dead Elf helped a bit as well.

By the Nine, that thing was heavy. I was sure I’d never get used to the weight of heavy armour. It uncomfortably pressed on my shoulders and neck, rubbing the dust and sand, swept up by the perennial winds, between the armour and my neck and shoulders. I had a dustrash in no-time. I wasn’t sure what was worse; carrying the damn thing or wearing it.

Once arrived in Ald Veloth, Sason and Malexa asked me if I’d stay the night, it was the least they could do. I politely declined, I was too eager to head back south.
Promising them to visit them if I’d ever be in the area again, I said my goodbye and left for Gnisis.

Several hours later, in the dead of night I arrived and immediately took the stiltstrider to Ald'ruhn, Balmora and last stop, Seyda Neen.
Well rested I arrived the next day in the early morning. Starving but with a bounce in my step I went to Arrille to have breakfast.

The moment I stepped through the door, the Elf’s eyes lit up. ‘I see you’ve been doing well for yourself?’
‘You could say that,’ I replied with a smile.
‘Yeah, I can tell.’ He glanced me up and down. ‘Where did you get that fancy armour from?’
‘Long story. I’ll tell you all about it, but how about some breakfast first?’

He knew exactly what I liked. In no time at all I was enjoying a pair of well-deserved fried eggs, freshly baked bread and a steaming cup of tea while telling Arrille all about my adventures up north.
Fargoth had also grabbed a seat, of course he had heard of my return and was listening to my tales while his eyes were glowing with anticipation like that of a child. I might have exxagarated some stories to amuse him.

Several hours later, I dumped most of the gear I had collected in the shack I inhabited, including the ebony cuirass. What a relief to take it off! If I’d be able to sell it, my fortune would have been made but Arrille said I could forget about that. No one in Vvardenfell had that amount of gold.
However; he had just heard a tale from a trader, who had come by recently, about the strangest thing he had ever seen in Caldera. According to the travelling merchant, in the town Caldera there was a scamp trader who might be able to give a good price for it.
I just had to see that for myself. In my travels I had encountered lots of scamps but those were hardly intelligent enough to recognise a superior warrior, let alone to do business and talk with you.



Day 46

With all my adventures and raiding of tombs, caves and shrines I acquired quite a fortune. Money itself is no good to anyone; you can’t eat or drink it. You can invest it however.
Which was exactly what I did. After having spent some days doing nothing at all in Seyda Neen, I took the stiltstrider back to Balmora and went to see Ajira for some more alchemy education and tricks.

Ajira was impressed with how quick I absorbed her teachings. Telling me once was enough; soon I had a good understanding of what apparatus had which function and how to make most of the ingredients I used to make a certain potion.
By the end of the day there was not much more she could teach me; lots of practice and experiments were what made a good alchemist, she said.

I knew exactly which potion to make; if there was anything I had learned, it was that it’s nearly impossible to cast a spell or swing a sword true when your tongue is on your knees.
I gathered ingedients to make potions to reduce the effect fatigue had. It was a fairly simple potion but I soon found out I could make stronger potions with longer duration by choosing ingedients that had more concentrated properties.

Choosing such ingedients proved to be risky though. I got it wrong on several occasions and made potions that had detrimental and sometimes even deadly effects next to the effect I wanted to create and had to dispose of several, quite valuable, potions. I couldn’t risk having them lying around lest someone found them. I collected them in a watertight casket and sank the casket into the deep end of the Sea of Ghosts eventually.

After a few days I had perfected the process and was able to make potions that allowed me to run for hours and still be able to cast a spell and be effective in combat without the necessity to rest first..
It wasn’t hard to see such potions would come in handy for everyone, not just adventurers like me. I traded several with Ajira for ingredients to make new potions and sell them off to anyone who’d buy them.

Most I sold under the price I was offered for them, making it interesting for the trader to buy a lot of them and sell them again for a decent price so they could restock with me soon. It didn’t take me long to acquire a decent fortune this way.
SubRosa
Am I the only one who keeps thinking that Arille is female? The name sounds feminine to me.

The soldier's eternal lament:
I wasn’t sure what was worse; carrying the damn thing or wearing it.

It is neat to look back and see where Rales began acquiring his skills as an alchemist. It is something to contrast him now with the Rales I know from the future.


nits:

This too, is so Rales (and so male!)
I might have exaggarated some stories to amuse him.
however, that is spelled exaggerated.


What a relieve to take it off!
that is relief in this context.
Remko
@SubRosa Thanks, I always struggle with exxagerate. In fact, I changed it before posting because I thought I had it wrong the 1st time... guess not laugh.gif Arrille's voice is male so I am pretty sure it's a he.
mALX
Sorry, I barely had time to get on here this week. I will be catching up (hopefully, lol) <3
Remko
That's okay, you've read it before anyway biggrin.gif


Day 50:

Caldera was fairly easy to get to. For a small sum of gold a Guild guide in the Mages Guild would teleport someone from one guild to the other instantly. I wished they had warned me about the weird feeling you’d get once arrived at the destination. The first few seconds after arrival I couldn’t tell what was up, down, left or right. Fortunately, the feeling soon dissipated.
The local mages had heard of the scamp trader, I could find him just around the corner in the Ghorak manor. I thanked them for the info, sold some potions to the Caldera Mages Guild alchemist and went to find Creeper, the scamp trader.

The travelling merchant Arrille had told me about hadn’t lied. On the second floor in the Ghorak manor there really was a scamp trader. I made a deal with him; I’d sell him convenient potions far beneath the commercial price and he would make sure they got sold so he could buy some from me on a regular basis. He said he usually needed a week to get his goods sold. The gold I made on selling my potions over several weeks far exceeded the value of the ebony cuirass so I kept it as decoration.

Back in Balmora I made the same deal with Nalcarya, the proprietor of the White Heaven alchemist shop. With my current fortune I couldn’t help but snickering in how wealthy I had thought myself with the missing taxman’s reward. It was dwarfed by what I had in my pockets after my successful trade-runs.

Most of it went on training sessions. I was adequate with a long-sword, fairly accurate with a bow and all the running around in the Ashlands had left me with a good stamina so needed no training in those disciplines.

Like a sponge soaking up knowledge I looked up trainers to teach me the arts of the other weapons and heavier armour than my favourite - light armour. Better weapons would carve through the light armour - like the Chitin one I usually wore - like a hot knife through butter. I had seen it happen several times with my own ebony blade. Fighting with it was both exhilarating and terrifying at the same time. The blade didn’t as much as kill as mutilate my enemies in the worst possible ways.
I cringed every time at the sound of the blade slicing through armour, tissue and bones. It made me feel more like a butcher than a sword-fighter and dreaded the thought of what would happen if I ever failed to block an enemy wielding one as well.
I had to make sure I was stronger, meaner and better equipped than my opponents.



Day 55

Several days of constant training hardened me. Skills I had never bothered with, were getting more familiar to me. I even learned to endure the weight and restricted movement of my limbs in heavy and medium armour although they would never be as comfortable as the light armour I preferred.
But then again; what good is being comfortable when you’re dead?
A Nord trainer had tried to convince me into using an axe rather than a “puny” long-sword. According to him an axe was a real man’s weapon and the toothpick I was swinging was for little girls.
I politely declined but did take him up on his offer learning me some basic skills in it.
After all; you can never know when it could come in handy.

I will never be a great axe-fighter. It’s perfectly understandable huge Nords are able to handle them but for a relatively small guy like me it’s just not convenient swinging a weapon heavier and almost taller than you are.
However; handling those encumbersome weapons for days did put some muscle on my scrawny figure. This first few days all I got was a terrible muscle ache in my arms, shoulders and back. I regretted and cursed the very day I was born every night I couldn’t get asleep because of my sore and bruised body. No matter how I turned and rolled in my bed, there was always a aching part that kept me from drowsing off.

The following nights the nightmares I was having recently got gradually worse.
Most I can’t recollect but the name “Nerevarine” lingered. It felt as though it was referring to me, as if I was supposed to be him. Some books I had read not long ago mentioned the name Lord Nerevar Indoril. I wondered if it had anything do with my dreams. It was time to go back to Caius; I considered myself ready for what-ever he wanted me to do. Maybe he had an answer to who that Nerevarine character was and what the hell it had to do with me.

mALX
I love the paragraph you devoted to his aching muscles - how real is that !!!
haute ecole rider
I've been sitting back and enjoying re-reading the Rales story again.

But now I feel inclined to pop up and say I agree with Rales about fighting with a war-axe. Better left to big tall guys like Nords and Altmer. I prefer using a weapon I can at least pick up one handed! Without throwing my back out! That part tickled my funny.
SubRosa
It’s perfectly understandable huge Nords are able to handle them but for a relatively small guy like me it’s just not convenient swinging a weapon heavier and almost taller than you are.

Now we know Rales is not an anime character. In anime, it is not a real weapon unless it is larger than the wielder!
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