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jack cloudy
Ah, a story in good old Morrowind. I like your start and your character.
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DarkHunter
laugh.gif The Blades... it's been too long... *Runs off to play Morrowind*
minque
Good start here.....looks very promising. Donīt we all love the starting sequences of Morrowind?
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Don't we all love teh starting sequencesof Morrowind?


I do, but I can't stop playing Oblivion laugh.gif
jack cloudy
yeah, I love Caius. He's a classic, without a shirt and a whole lump of skooma in his body. smile.gif
The Metal Mallet
Now I wish I didn't lend my friend Morrowind. I had a really nice Nord Warrior going. But he just so happened to like making potions as well. I think it fits.
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DarkHunter
Woot! *goes a little jump* So... Wait since when did Melder .... oh never mind it makes it easier for you tongue.gif
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DarkHunter
Paying with Gems? wow...

I think you should hunt Ordinators .. oh wait... nevermind.
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The Metal Mallet
It looks like things are moving along quite nicely. Keep up the good stuff!
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jack cloudy
Yeah, I also hate Battlemages. They're so annoying. I hate them with only one exception, my own character. biggrin.gif
DarkHunter
I still hated mages... even my own character.
treydog
I really enjoy the creative touches you have added to make the familiar story new again. Please continue the good work.
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jack cloudy
Great scene all the way to the interogation. Good old Snowy is intimidating at first but if you have prepared yourself, he'll fall like a Scrib. smile.gif
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DarkHunter
Hrmmmm... Tricky Tricky. But shall his luck continue?
jack cloudy
Wow, he actually managed to catch Crito off-guard. Well I must say that a Wakizashi through the neck is more elegant and less dirty than throwing a Dwemer cog in his face like my character did. Heh, this story has a funny sense of humor. I like it. smile.gif
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treydog
I really like the attention to detail with things like the encounter with Snowy- seem to recall he killed a fair few of my early characters til I learned not to walk right up to him...

This installment gives us some nice insights into Sethyas character and way of thinking- very nice.
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The Metal Mallet
The quest continues I see.

I like the subtle things you add in, normally I didn't care about the Sleepers, but it's interesting to include them and give them a victimized character to them. I really liked that.

Keep up with the good stuff, ya hear?
jack cloudy
Ah, his worries for his sister are admirable. Now let's hope she's fine. As for now, he'd better get ready for the 'favour'. It will be a bit bonechilling. biggrin.gif

Yeah, I also like the thing with the Sleepers. I always kept my distance but never truly bothered to get involved. I did feel sorry for killing those that attacked me though. They were practically harmless yet still they insisted on fighting me. sad.gif
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The Metal Mallet
I really enjoyed the subtle bits of humor in this post with the "stereotypical" witch ingredients, and the battlemages quip. You're a post machine right now. I was like that at first, but I have trouble staying on Word for long periods of time, I get a little antsy writing.

Anyways, I'm eagerly anticipating Sethyas run in with the undead, muhahaha!
jack cloudy
Wha, there are actually Silver arrows in Balmora? Hmm, I guess I should actually go to the shops for a change instead of relying on the good old pillage and plunder.

I liked your dealings with the mage guild. Now deal with the tomb, please. smile.gif
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The Metal Mallet
Wow, another post today? This is madness! Especially when each post is consistantly good!

Really liked that fact, that Sethyas thought the Bonewalker was too overwhelming to fight. Good thing this wasn't in Oblivion era, or else he might have something chasing him until he got to the Silt Strider.

For all I know, I can't wait to see what else you write today tongue.gif
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The Metal Mallet
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lol, thanks too all, especially Metal Mallet, and Jack Cloudy


Well it's the least I can do when the material is great! I'm a big advocate of the Fan Fiction section for this forum and all the writers have great styles. Just reading all them help me with my writing, at least it well, I do notice some things I need to work on with my current fic. This site has killed countless boring hours at my work, so I'm very greatful for it.

Yet again, your post is filled with humor, and great dialogue. I can't wait to see if Sethyas will join the Mages Guild. I definately miss my Morrowind game right now from reading this. My friend is borrowing it, but I don't think he's playing it! So I'm going to start bugging him!

I wonder when the Morag Tong will get involved as well, I'm really looking forward to that.
minque
Oh dear....I must join the fan-club of this story! ītis great you know! Well depicted charachters and a very good flow.....

I hope Iīll be able to keep up with it but you post so frequent that itīs amazing.....

Anyway itīs a very good story and Iīm looking forward to read more!
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jack cloudy
The Postmachine strikes again! Lots of stuff, detailed and great. Hold on a sec. *starts rummaging around in various chests in my big mushroom.*
Ah, here it is. I hereby present you with the "planty award for prolific composition." I once got it from Mplantinga. It's yours now cause you update like crazy. Enjoy it.

Back to the story, I really like your dealings with the mage guild. And Ajira is sweet, isn't she? I just love Khajiit.
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I hereby present you with the "planty award for prolific composition."


Yea, Black definately deserves that award. Another good, consistant couple of posts.

I really liked the emotions displayed by Sethyas, particularly in his conversation with Caius. There's a real human quality to it. Or Merish I guess in this case... biggrin.gif
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The Metal Mallet
Dun Dun Dun!!!

It looks like Sethyas is becoming quite popular amongst the secret societies of Morrowind. I'm looking forward to Sethyas' thought process in finding the hidden guild base.
jack cloudy
I know where it is but I'm not revealing the secret. Actually, I just ran in by accident and decided to join up while I was in the neighbourhood. laugh.gif

Lovely update again. I like the whole riddle.
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McBadgere
Reet...That's just brilliant that is...

I'm on post 16...Seth's just been given a book to deliver...

Nice one...It is actually nice to see Seth's beginnings, considering where I started reading, he was at the top of his game and then giving it all up... biggrin.gif ...

Your style's well there, and yes, it's not as polished as it is now, but this is 6 years ago...You were...Er...I only clocked the year on yer profile so 25?...This is brilliant stuff...

Plus, so far there's only been a couple of replies to yer posts...That's some persistance there...Unless it was also being posted somewhere else where more was said... tongue.gif ...But the work that's gone in, for little or no recognition - compared with the love-fest you get now - is really impressive...

Athynae's right, I am going to have to go through this when I can...Brilliant stuff...Now I don't have to buy Morrowind after all... biggrin.gif ...

I award the official Nice One and Applause...

Nice One!!!... biggrin.gif ...

*Applauds heartily*...

PS...D'you think it's too late to mention the typos?... huh.gif ...Yeah, thought so... biggrin.gif ...
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