Gothren was running as fast as he could - but the guards were quickly catchng up with him.He was quickly trying to find a place to hide , so he ran into a nearby shack.Gothren hid inside a barrel , he heard the door crash open.'He's somewhare in here!' one of the guards shouted. realizing that he couldn't get away from this one , he quickly stood up - and before the guards could do anything threw the necklace that he stole at one of the guards.He started to run , but one of the guards grabbed his wrist and broke it.Gothren punched the guard in the head, with little effect. The guard then punched Gothren hard in the side of the head, knocking him out.


When he woke up , he found himself in a boat. Whare a darkelf met him - with one eye missing. He didnt want to think how that happened. "You awake?" The Dark Elf asked. "ugh." Gothren replied. When the guard came he told him to follow , Gothren thought of escape , but he quickly changed his mind thinking of what happened last time.When he went up the trap door a redguard told him to hurry up. Gothren ran off the boat, not wanting to stay on any longer. When he met a guard on the dock he gave him some information about him.he went inside the building in front of him. "Oh yes we've been expecting you" the old man said, " now there are many ways to do this but the choice is yours." Gothren decided just to give him the info about himself.Now he only had to talk to one other person who told him about 'duties', but Gothren didnt pay much attention.


When he went outside the door he looked in a barrel and found a ring. "hmm it seems like this is my lucky day..." Gothren muttered. he ran outside and saw some people walking around "maybe I can sell this stupid ring" Gothren said to himself. He walked over to the nearest person..who said his name was Fargoth. Just as he was going to try to sell the ring to him ,He snatched the ring from him and yelled "look my ring!! oh thank you! You are my bestest friend!" Gothren did'nt care much about him as his 'bestest' friend, so he went off to a little island just off the shore.he found a corpse there waiting for him loaded with Septims "Maybe this IS my lucky day after all..." Gothren said to himself.and he ran over back to the store and bought a bow and a bunch of arrows, along with a iron long sword.

Good to see another writer starting up

It is good to see a knew writer... I remeber when I was a new rider... anyways gothboy I think you should put a bit more detail into your story... you know like describe the character a bit... and his surroundings... if you know what I mean...