First Chapter of Arygon in Morrowind

I streched out, feeling quite happy that I was alive considering what I had done the day before. I glanced into the Iron shield I have been using as a mirror for the last while and saw that my Breton face had a new scar from the fighting, I hadn't noticed until now which probably showed that I was quite fully drawn into the fighting. The other bandits in the cave yelled out obcenities to agravate me as I had taken the entire loot. Oh well, I don't really care what they think. For myself though I'm going to go get some well earned flin. Especially since I was the one to rob th Imperial Caravan.

I sneaked into town dodging from shadow to shadow until I came to a familiar sign. Grey Haze, my usual bar to drink at, I entered the door and was greeted not by Ariana, my usual Breton Bartendress, but by an Imperial! He was quite grumpy but when I asked him where Ariana was he laughed something about her being caught with Moor Sugar. I slipped out the door and wandered the Bazaar for a while until I came across an odd little shop that's sign read, Green Dragon's Artifacts. I opened the door and stepped in, as I did that a Redguard storekeeper yelled out "Never open my door it's not to be opened!" Surprised by his statement about doors I fell sideways into something spindly and it fell breaking into pieces that stood upright in little cones and cylinders. The storekepper yelled " Guards! Guards!" and hit me with the door trapping me there until the Imperial Guards grabbed me and pulled me through the street to Fort BlackHorn.

Upon arriving at the Fort the guards took my weapons and tossed them into a growing pile on the floor, along with the 1250 septims from the Caravan, and my Chitin armour. Next they pulled me into a room with some Imperial Captian
he asked "Do you know what you did to be here?" I quickly replied "I don't."
for a witty remark, or maybe he didn't like me, he hit me the chest with a club.
He proceded in telling me exatly what I had done. It seems that the odd little instrament was a Dwemer artifact from Morrowind. After explaining that he had the guards drag me across the ground to a prison cell that was all by itself with a decent view of the lake. I sat there wondering how much time I would have to spend in prison. My thoughts were rudely interupted by the Captian coming in through the door "Seems that you have some powerful friend's thief."
I asked what he was talking about and was awnsered with a grunt. I met the General who chattered on about some letter, then said to me "Thanks to a letter from the Emporer, you don't get executed, as i planned, but sent off to Morrowind."

Morrowind? Hearing those words all those years ago I had thought my life was nearly wrecked. I wondered if I would have had a better life if my Parents didn't die in a rebellion. It didn't really matter though, I was put on a ship, and for the first time in two days I got some sleep. Unfortunatly, my sleep wasn't pleasant as I had a dream about a long red-ash field that was dead then bloomed and the sun and moon swirled through Dusk and Dawn. " Wake up you were dreaming" came a voice through the fog. I awoke to see a Dark Elf standing in front of me. "whats your name?" He asked, I replied "Arygon, and your name is?"
He never got to awnser as a Guard dressed in Furs and some chainmail steped into the tiny hold we had used as a cell. "Come with me." Was all the guard said
as he turned and walked back out, I followed. When we arrived at the hatch to the deck he remarked " Get up on deck, and lets keep this as civil as possible." I stepped through into the morning sun, and my new life.

so what do you think good start?

it's not a good start....it's an exellent start...it's quite good, you describe the characters a little, thats always nice...but I reccomend you to start a new line when someone talks, just an advice though...

As for the story itself, it's good, exiting, and we get an urge to read more...update soon please.

I did see soem grammar issues, but that is not that big a deal. If you wishes, I'm sure there is someone who can help you edit a bit on your grammar, before you post an update...heck, you can PM each update to me if you wishes...I read over it, correct the small grammar issues, and then I'll seend it fully edited back to you...ready to post, but only if you wish..

It's good anywho, and it's one I'll continue reading..., enjoy your stay here at chorrol.com

I'm going to be posting Chapter 2 soon... Yay!
I've beaten Morrowind as Arygon once but I'm going through again as Arygon to write this story

Wow, stories are shooting out of nowhere all over the place. This is a good one and I'll be waiting for chapter 2.

Ahh another one I´ve missed so far! But this is a good one..really it is (they are you know, the stories here!) Keep it up!