Doomed4Eternity
Nov 19 2005, 11:47 AM
"Flying High Above My Window"
By Joshua Finch "Doomed-4-Eternity"
Creatures Fly high above my window,
Cliff racers fly higher than the mountains,
Soaring high above the clouds,
Pwang, Pwang,
I struck them down,
Pwang, Pwang,
I will celebrate, I shall hire a clown,
Pwang, Pwang,
They are now extinct,
Pwang, Pwang,
That clowns feet really stink!
Now i can fly high above my window,
I can now fly higher than the Mountains,
And now, i can soar higher than the clouds,
Pwang, Pwang,
Saw a flying Dwemer ship,
Pwang, Pwang,
I licked my lip,
Pwang, Pwang,
There may be good loot,
Pwang, Pwang,
However there could be more soot,
Pwang, Pwang,
I went abroad,
Pwang, Pwang,
I found a room, on my own accord,
Pwang, Pwang,
I went across the plank,
Pwang, Pwang,
My life suddenly shrank,
Pwang, Pwang,
I jumped off!
Pwang, Pwang,
I saw Freddie Flintoff!
Pwang, Pwang,
I used my my Alteration,
Pwang, Pwang,
I found my spells of Levitation!
My life went by,
A tear fell off my eye,
I also went with it,
Before i fell into my PE kit!
I thought our library needed some more songs so heres my first of a few!
(If yoiur wondering who Josh is thats me!)
NEED SOME EDITING AND CRITIZISM THX
vaanic~one
Nov 19 2005, 07:14 PM
Er, okay, the references to PE kit and Freddie Flintoff do not fit in the TES universe.
Doomed4Eternity
Nov 21 2005, 04:24 PM
QUOTE(vaanic~one @ Nov 19 2005, 06:14 PM)
Er, okay, the references to PE kit and Freddie Flintoff do not fit in the TES universe.
yer sry that was my bad humour in that!
any different ideas n that then?
Stargazey
Nov 21 2005, 11:07 PM
Is there any chance that you could start ONE topic for all of your writings, and let people view them there?
A topic for every story is getting a bit spammy.
Star
Doomed4Eternity
Nov 22 2005, 01:53 PM
QUOTE(Stargazey @ Nov 21 2005, 10:07 PM)
Is there any chance that you could start ONE topic for all of your writings, and let people view them there?
A topic for every story is getting a bit spammy.
Star
ok sry
Doomed4Eternity
Nov 26 2005, 06:44 PM
so any ideas or is this ready to go?
minque
Nov 26 2005, 07:00 PM
QUOTE(Doomed4Eternity @ Nov 26 2005, 06:44 PM)
so any ideas or is this ready to go?
To go where exactly????
Doomed4Eternity
Nov 26 2005, 07:02 PM
QUOTE(minque @ Nov 26 2005, 06:00 PM)
To go where exactly????

o like ready for your team editing,
minque
Nov 26 2005, 07:06 PM
I suggest you ask Mr Gazey for his opinion! He´s in the staff!
Doomed4Eternity
Jan 5 2006, 03:53 PM
QUOTE(minque @ Nov 26 2005, 06:06 PM)
I suggest you ask Mr Gazey for his opinion! He´s in the staff!
ok!
Dantrag
Jan 6 2006, 09:41 PM
Except for the things that Vaanic one said, it's great!
Doomed4Eternity
Jan 7 2006, 01:04 PM
QUOTE(Dantrag @ Jan 6 2006, 08:41 PM)
Except for the things that Vaanic one said, it's great!
thx!!! ill work on it!