I started to write a story about R'laph and his third 'adventure'. You all will say: "what the hell? He never wrote a second story about him."
True, I am planning to also write a second story but for now, I was earlier with the third to start with.

I need some help with my inspiration, I'm totaly yammed.

* means that something has to be written between those 2 points.
FAT letters mean that it is scripted but not written out fully.


A kid story
Written by: NEO256

Head character = R’laph
Wife = Zirasy
Oldest daughter = Syo’na
Youngest daughter = Niseba
Oldest son = Mi'Dora

Introduction

Man I tell you: I love life.
I couldn’t wish for more, I have a lovely and beautiful wife, I have 3 adorable daughters and 2 sons to be proud off. My marriage is just perfect, I am my own boss as I work on my own ranch and I can see my family as much as I like while working on my own ranch.
I learn my sons and daughters to ride a horse and how to take care of them. I hope at least one of them lives up to take over the ranch when my time here ends.
You know I like most about summer time? All of it! Taking the family out for picnic, laying around in the sun, reading and writing my stories in the shadow of the trees on my ranch and swimming the nearby river. I wish my past was would be as colourful as my present.
My name is R’laph. You may all know me from the last adventure where I was still a slave.
Some time has past since I have written that story.
I want to tell about the biggest fear I have faced since my return to freedom…

Chapter 1

It was lovely hot summer day, it was almost 2 o’clock and I was learning my oldest son how to let a horse obey your orders. Then my oldest daughter came to tell me she couldn’t find Niseba my youngest daughter. I wasn’t surprised. She was very adventures and wandered of regularly. Still I had a weird feeling in my stomach that something was wrong. I told her and my sons to get a horse and help look for her. We searched for 3 hours coming back to the ranch every half a hour to monitor progress. We didn’t find her. Eventually my oldest son found a trace where a struggle had been going on and one pink tie Niseba always worn on her ears. This really alarmed me.
I feared someone kidnapped her. I told my youngest son to go back and watch over the ranch. I took my daughter who is really skilled in healing spells and my son who is very smart, strong and good with a sword. I carried my whip with me the moment we set of to try to cought up with the kidnappers. I normally didn’t carry my whip while riding the horse, but I forgot to take it of after trimming a horse.

“Dad? Do you know why someone would kidnap Niseba? If it where for ransom they would at least have left a note.” Mi’Dora said.
“I don’t agree completely, they could drop it of later…”
“But dad, that is a big risk. They could be followed. Only really stupid kidnappers would do something like that.” He convinced me.
I had to agree he had a point there. “Maybe your right.” My mind also marveld at the possibilities. A slight fear that they would maybe do the same to her as people did with myself.
“I hope she is alright.” My daughter said concerned. They where very close, almost always played together, at least... when not looking for trouble that is.

It would be hard to follow there path. The only geus we had that they woud avoid any kind of settlement that could tip of there location.
At some point my son said. “Father over there!”
My heart raise while I tried to find out what he saw. “What is it son?”
“A farmer on the the field. Maybe he saw something.”
Not quite what I expected but he was right to be excited. The land of the farmer is enclosed by 2 mountains. If they where traveling this direction this farmer could certainly have seen them.
We rode to the khajiit farmer, sure to not stamp his crops and nodded polite when we all randomly greeted him. “Good day.”
“Good day.” Said the farmer happy. “Where can I help you with?”
I started of pretty slow to think up with the right words. “Well we are in a bit of a trouble. My daughter disappeared and...”
“...and we have reason to believe she is kidnapped.” My son completed fast interrupting my sentence. I could not blame him, he also loves Niseba and I could see his fair will to get her back home.
Determined to not be interrupted again I continued faster. “We would like to know if you have seen any particular individuals or even better a small girl traveling by here?”
The farmer didn't think long to answer pointing the direction that led further. “Yes I indeed have saw 2 in cloak clothed horse riders traveling with something big wrapped in a white sheet on one of the horses. They left in that direction.”
“My thanks is great.” I thanked the farmer. “Make hast, maybe we can overtake them soon.”
I just wanted to take off, then I remembered a important question I forgot to ask, but my son was first to ask. “How long ago?”
“I think about 2 hours.” The farmer said.
As soon as the last word was out my son rode off fast. “Thanks!” My son said already a fair distant away.
Darn, I thought. I spored my horse to go faster and overtook him. “Don't get careless Mi'Dora. If you wear out your horse, we have to leave you behind!” I said a little angry. I got frustrated a little because of this whole situation and the fear of losing my daughter.
Mi'Dora went a little slower and took a short guilty look at me. “Sorry... I just...”
“Never mind, sorry I yelled at you. I'm getting a little excited as well.” I said and returned a comforting smile. I didn't want him to feel bad because he got angry with those bastards that thought of just taking Niseba like that.

We rode on for a couple of hours hoping for a trace that could lead us to the kidnappers.

*

The son gots wounded and R’laph gets called names like: old man, weakling, loser by the kidnappers. With his will to save his daughter, R’laph launches a final attack. He tackles one attacker with his whip and hit him on the head before he hits the ground.
The other kidnapper wanted to kill Niseba but R’laph hit his sword and whips him hard and plenty. Then he smacks his head so hard in a tree that he dies immediately.

Niseba is glad to see her father again and is not at all afraid any more.

After Niseba is saved the son praises R’laph for his brave and powerful performance. They are in return to there farm as they see some riders on the road. It is Fineas en Feodora. They have a short talk about what happened and Feodora asks immediately to take them to the dead kidnappers.
When they arrive Feodora instantly recognizes the person she was looking for. R’laph is afraid that he killed someone important to her. She says she couldn’t care less but she finds it a pitty she could not have killed him herself.
When R’laph asked why she would liked to kill him she didn’t want to answer. Fineas asks her if he should tell R’laph something. She nodes he can. Fineas tells R’laph that this dunmer set her up. They return to the farm, busily talking about everything that happened since there last visit. Mainly that they killed off a lot of people in this organisation but that they were still in search for the last 2.
When they are back at the ranch they have a drink and get invited to stay another day. But they decline for now, they want to get back to the child they have in care because they wanted to hunt down these criminals.

Let me know what you think of this story.

Heey.....nice to see you are writing again....I like it so far, so I´d appreciate it if you continued it. It has a good plot so.......go for it...m´kay?

Don't worry I am motivated enough but I'm stuck. I don't know how this chase would turn out? I wan't it to take longer then just 2 days to get her back.

why of course! you may include various challenges and events before the girl is recovered....yay it looks interesting...